Comments on community poems by sylviasearcher
- DELPHIAN DAYS (Michael Edwards)
This is an amazing piece of writing.
It was like when ever I tried to...
February 28th, 2019 02:51 - Incrementally Speaking (Neville)
What number are you on now? Lol
February 27th, 2019 11:06 - Reconfigure it out (Neville)
Semantics eh?
February 26th, 2019 05:35 - Reconfigure it out (Neville)
It looks like an arrow, have you been hunting again Neville?
February 26th, 2019 05:31 - Bring Along a Lantern (Neville)
I like how you intertwined the darkness with a sense of hope.
For me...
February 25th, 2019 08:03 - Little White Lies (Neville)
Or the other way around lol
February 25th, 2019 02:10 - Together Parted (Neville)
Like a stroll in a pretty meadow.
It made me think of Spring.
The...
February 23rd, 2019 10:04 - The Outcast (Sylviasearcher)
You are definitely not pathetic. I certainly didn’t mean that.
It’s...
February 22nd, 2019 09:51 - A Certain Point of Beauty (Neville)
Reminded me of the moments when I sometimes manage to write a beautiful...
February 22nd, 2019 04:43 - Ink spots and paper snowballs (Andrew Charles Forrest)
You have captured the purpose of my prose.
February 22nd, 2019 03:55 - Heathen (Neville)
I had to come back to this one after letting it linger in my senses.
It...
February 22nd, 2019 03:17 - The Sea Captain (ColorsToSpare)
Of the tragedy of love. I love the ocean and it’s power and it added to...
February 22nd, 2019 03:03 - Acta Non Verba... Speaks Volumes (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I think you took me to the twilight zone, but I can’t be sure?
February 22nd, 2019 03:01 - The Outlaw West (Edthepoet)
An outlaws version of events might never be known
February 22nd, 2019 02:57 - confusion (Lainacarson98)
I like you use of imagery from nature, especially the weeping willow, made...
February 22nd, 2019 02:54 - If I had To Be HOnest (月の愛)
I believed in soul mates once. This poem is full of love for yours.
February 22nd, 2019 02:53 - The Theologian (SerenWise)
This was beautiful. Searching.
February 22nd, 2019 02:50 - TICK TOCK GOES THE CLOCK (Blackhawkwings)
A sad story of time passing relentlessly and on and on without noticing....
February 22nd, 2019 02:48 - Gently (AJ)
It read like mindfulness
As I laid in silence and watched the world.
February 22nd, 2019 02:45 - LOFTY LOSER (MaddieJ)
When you think you have found it and then you realise it wasn’t what you...
February 22nd, 2019 02:43 - Ice Cream Shop (W c)
Made me want an ice cream peanut butter milkshake, or a 99.
February 22nd, 2019 02:40 - Swift Descent (Satishverma)
In nature we find Truth and Beauty.
February 22nd, 2019 02:39 - Contentment. (Goldfinch60)
Made me feel hopeful that the scarey bends may be conquered.
February 22nd, 2019 02:37 - MORE 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards)
Oh I have to confess how I secretly love making flat pack furniture!...
February 22nd, 2019 02:36 - He is very much human (ShanikiSmith)
Ahh vampire love. I never watched it but makes me think I should...
February 22nd, 2019 02:33 - walking (Jon Nakapalau)
Love the different ways of reading this.
And know the feeling both ways...
February 22nd, 2019 02:32 - My word (Dakota)
Flowed really well.
Bold.
February 22nd, 2019 02:29 - Ghosts and Dreams (Mattjg98)
Dark piece. I loved it.
February 22nd, 2019 02:27 - The Lonely Sunflower (SerenWise)
I like how you use the seasons to represent change and loss but end with...
February 21st, 2019 02:25 - Blink of an eye (Poetic Dan)
A reality I just cannot drift
I felt this piece and so did my car and...
February 20th, 2019 11:06 - Nothing (John Prophet)
Or something always existed?
February 20th, 2019 09:02 - Some Sort Of Dipity (Andrew Charles Forrest)
left me with a warm feeling ⭐️
February 20th, 2019 06:12 - i cant feel anymore (Laurenroe)
I think you captured your feeling or unfeeling really well.
Writing is...
February 20th, 2019 05:52 - What Do You Drive (Neville)
I think it all went wrong at ‘hey babe’ lol.
Need to work on your...
February 20th, 2019 04:10 - Library (Dovestoneboy)
Oh please don\'t leave her
\'In the place of no sounds
Among the...
February 20th, 2019 02:26 - Shield Maiden (Neville)
This piece intrigued me.
I was left a little uncertain about how the...
February 19th, 2019 06:09 - Making Poetry (SerenWise)
Exsquisitely written 🌟
February 19th, 2019 02:57 - Away With Words (Neville)
Aphasia?
Voicelessness?
Emptiness?
Apathy?
Powerlessness?
Oh so...
February 18th, 2019 02:56 - i think of you every time i have a night terror (Abora)
This piece made me feel a familiar pain, if it existed at all.
Good...
February 18th, 2019 02:11 - Heavy Vinyl (Syd)
Beautifully written
February 17th, 2019 07:31 - Embu (Neville)
It felt moving 🌬
February 17th, 2019 04:03 - The Color of Words (Daydreaming)
I enjoyed reading your colourful words 😊
February 16th, 2019 11:02 - Missing You (H. Ray Davis)
A very tender write 💜
February 16th, 2019 08:33 - A Handful of Ghosts (Neville)
I sometimes
Wonder
If I share
My bed
With more than
A...
February 16th, 2019 08:29 - Nothing (Dovestoneboy)
Favourite read in a while.
Beautiful imagery.
A haunting transience
February 16th, 2019 04:12 - When I am Far (Neville)
There is something quite tender about this one.
February 15th, 2019 09:07 - Birthday Valentine. (Goldfinch60)
How kind I also have a special little man in my life who was born on the...
February 15th, 2019 02:49 - Sans Sustenance (Neville)
Oh I do indeed yearn for this
February 14th, 2019 09:12 - VALENTINE\'S DAY 14TH FEBRUARY (FineB)
Loneliness is my dearest friend 😪
Kindness can make such a...
February 14th, 2019 09:10 - The School Bully (Sylviasearcher)
Perhaps that’s the thing evading me.
February 14th, 2019 08:57 - The School Bully (Sylviasearcher)
https://www.cypcs.org.uk/ufiles/No-Safe-Place.pdf
February 14th, 2019 04:34 - Darkness into Light. (Goldfinch60)
Glad you reconnected with your inner light 🌟
February 8th, 2019 03:08 - Firefly (BLACKGOLDKING)
I hadn\'t thought of a firefly like this.
I\'m not sure they do live in...
February 7th, 2019 11:14 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
🌟
February 7th, 2019 09:34 - Moving but she just can\'t move (AJ)
What a gem of a poem.
Great metaphor.
How many of us are lost or asleep...
February 7th, 2019 06:19 - Ego (Chocolate)
Emotive write
February 7th, 2019 05:26 - Sweet Blasphemy (SerenWise)
Beautifully composed
February 7th, 2019 02:57 - Letting the darkness out (Poetic Dan)
That\'s what I always tell myself.
This moment will pass.
Hold on...
February 6th, 2019 11:50 - Words (Lorna)
What a warm hello🌟
February 6th, 2019 02:35 - Sand (Dovestoneboy)
Beautiful, gentle, connected
Love the imagery and metaphor
February 6th, 2019 02:34 - Many thoughts kept and lost (Poetic Dan)
Hey Dan, I think it did flow indeed as one. The thoughts like a journey of...
February 6th, 2019 02:29 - Adieu (NordicFrost)
A powerful journey through hope and death of hope. Well that’s where it...
February 5th, 2019 02:27 - The End (Lorna)
Simply beautiful
February 4th, 2019 07:58 - Splintered Twin Flames (Whisperingquill)
Hypnotic
February 1st, 2019 10:24 - Itch (Jabberwocky)
Cleverly written.
Do we ever really know?
February 1st, 2019 08:00 - TONIGHT. (Fay Slimm.)
I always feel more at one with the world after reading your...
February 1st, 2019 07:59 - The Act (The Writings)
I enjoyed this piece and definately feel there are moments when I have met...
February 1st, 2019 07:48 - A seat beneath the apple tree (Caleb.A)
Intriguing post some different interpretations for me.
Eating the...
February 1st, 2019 07:07 - Blink (Neville)
I really like this one neville.
The notion of blinking (opening and...
February 1st, 2019 02:37 - The Raging Wind (BLACKGOLDKING)
Back and forth
Resembling the endless flow of beauty and...
January 31st, 2019 15:24 - Poets question everything but their own art (Allysnewworld)
And what is a poet and would I know one if I saw it?
Perhaps it is just...
January 31st, 2019 15:17 - Old Age Phonephobia? (Goldfinch60)
My mum is 62 and on her phone more than me! They had to keep waving that...
January 31st, 2019 07:45 - I am not a poet (B-LAH-que)
This one is amazing.
The flow, the pauses and jagged edges of self doubt....
January 31st, 2019 07:40 - The whir of the unsaid (Sylviasearcher)
Who knows?!
January 31st, 2019 04:45 - My World (Echo Seeker)
Do you want some company?
Poignant piece 💜
January 31st, 2019 04:08 - No one (B-LAH-que)
Oooh,
January 31st, 2019 03:04 - Countless Indiscretions (Neville)
I made my mind up. Don\'t ask though.
It flowed like you were trying to...
January 31st, 2019 02:35 - NO GOLD TO GLISTEN (Michael Edwards)
So many layers to this.
I was drawn to the title as I was writing about...
January 30th, 2019 04:11 - Blue Rose (Halcyon)
Beautiful poem 💙
January 29th, 2019 02:16 - Self Reflection (Jal)
I hope that writing this provided some catharsis.
I could feel a push and...
January 28th, 2019 07:18 - I’m Shit (A__pott)
I think this is raw and some may find it difficult to read. These feelings...
January 28th, 2019 07:02 - The sunshine days (Aa Harvey)
If only it were so simple.
What a warm and loving and hopeful poem.
I do...
January 28th, 2019 06:56 - i wish you the best (Asrealastheycome)
Sounds hopeful
January 28th, 2019 06:52 - Pruning her Sun (Whisperingquill)
Hot stuff!
January 28th, 2019 06:49 - Be (Michael Edwards)
Great poem to cast away the dark. Doesn\'t look like lisa is ready for the...
January 28th, 2019 06:43 - When They Took Away the Tumour (Neville)
Heartfelt 💜
January 28th, 2019 04:12 - What We Got (Neville)
Thought provoking.
At first I read this like a person comparing himself...
January 28th, 2019 04:08 - Might She by Chance be a Witch (Neville)
She sounds special.
What a beautiful bewitching poem.
It had me spell...
January 28th, 2019 04:01 - The Angel and the Rat (Stormer551)
I think real angels cherish rats and worms and nurture the lotus flower...
January 27th, 2019 05:23 - Avvolto nella pennellata del destino (Whisperingquill)
Obviously I could only understand the translation and I imagine something...
January 25th, 2019 06:51 - Waiting For The Guest (DesertWords)
Intriguing
January 25th, 2019 06:47 - NURTURE. (Fay Slimm.)
I like how you look at nature in a deeper thought provoking way.
So...
January 25th, 2019 05:50 - Mirislavka (Neville)
You have some wonderful memories, all I have is my imagination...
January 25th, 2019 04:28 - appen (Markashley1961)
Is this to do with jack the ripper or have I totally misread it?
At...
January 25th, 2019 03:53 - A good mood? (Canticle)
I think you capture something here about the fight between light and dark...
January 25th, 2019 03:02 - Way Back To Indolence (Satishverma)
What a beautiful piece. I was reminded the other day of Keats\'s ode on...
January 25th, 2019 02:39 - Ink talk (Down the rabbithole)
Keep writing 😌
January 24th, 2019 08:54 - Waiting for Cancer (Neville)
Sometimes people get oh do very tired of waiting for something greater...
January 24th, 2019 08:05 - EVOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
😌🌈
January 24th, 2019 04:16 - Pragmatic Reflection (Asrealastheycome)
I think I have spent too long adjusting my demeanour... I\'m ready for a...
January 24th, 2019 04:13
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