Comments on community poems by sylviasearcher
- Whale Whispering (Neville)
I am glad you are more than happy.
You are welcome.
December 18th, 2018 06:15 - Whale Whispering (Neville)
Captures the almighty beauty and power of things we cannot grasp nor...
December 18th, 2018 05:59 - \"I Lost\"- Poem (Merissa)
But you seized the power of word to stand up and say... I\'m not done yet?...
December 14th, 2018 11:02 - The Company of Angels (Neville)
Kind of other worldly. Dreamy. I like it. It\'s well put together
December 13th, 2018 15:05 - Blank Pages (Neville)
Unwritten yet known
Treasures evading capture
Sensed by me alone
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December 11th, 2018 07:08 - A Very Special Day (Neville)
Hope you have a special birthday! π
December 10th, 2018 07:16 - Afterwards (Neville)
The last two lines are very powerful
December 9th, 2018 02:54 - The Beginning (Hidden)
Hello whispered goodbye
And life was done
Nothing left but the...
December 7th, 2018 09:12 - A Travelling Man (Neville)
I think I know a girl just like that, except the baking bread...
December 7th, 2018 08:54 - Appetite for Words (Neville)
I think I have this relentless appetite for words...
December 7th, 2018 08:47 - The Mask of Fantasy (M.D. Burns)
A really powerful piece touching on the everday complexities of existence...
December 7th, 2018 07:20 - Avalon Forest (TrystanBehm)
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I loved this.
It reminded me of a story I think I posted...
December 7th, 2018 07:14 - What Do I Want From You (Neville)
The repetition works well to create a sense of longing. Though I don\'t...
December 7th, 2018 07:12 - Blind Justice (TrystanBehm)
I am the master of imbalance...
Dizzy.
A thought provoking poem. As...
December 6th, 2018 11:04 - THE PERFECT CUP OF COFFEE (Michael Edwards)
Iβm glad Iβm a tea drinker. They donβt try to mess with tea!
December 6th, 2018 09:17 - The rise and fall of life\'s notes (π€s.zaynab.kamoonpuriπ·π¦π½)
An uplifting piece encouraging growth.
Ibekndered why you chose to have...
December 6th, 2018 07:59 - No Pillow Required (Neville)
My senses found it very satisfying
December 6th, 2018 04:32 - No Pillow Required (Neville)
Good
December 6th, 2018 04:07 - empty bones (Abora)
So beautifully melancholic, it was like a warm drink which numbed my...
December 6th, 2018 02:49 - Life Is A Puzzle (Asrealastheycome)
I think I believed in magic too long.
Thanks for sharing the love and...
December 5th, 2018 03:03 - Cova (Neville)
I think I like this one a lot
December 5th, 2018 02:59 - The Wager (Noeyrocks)
I knew they were in cahoots!
December 4th, 2018 10:26 - States of Ignored (AJ)
I was unable to ignore this poem.
I loved it.
So many states of...
December 4th, 2018 08:19 - A Little Indiscretion (Neville)
Interesting?
I\'m not convinced of how the words will remain \'long after...
December 4th, 2018 02:26 - Long Shadows (Neville)
It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have...
December 3rd, 2018 06:33 - Long Shadows (Neville)
It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have...
December 3rd, 2018 06:33 - Autumn (Neville)
O the season of mists and mellow fruitfulness! I always thought her a liar...
December 3rd, 2018 02:34 - The Master of My Pain (Lostinthisworld)
I think perhaps we can only own ourselves?
December 3rd, 2018 01:55 - Ode to my Unrequited Soulmate (Sylviasearcher)
Thanks for getting to the end...
It is one of those endless ones!
November 30th, 2018 11:44 - A Taste of Nothing (Neville)
It reminded me of someone
November 30th, 2018 10:46 - The Theater Mask (Whoweare)
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November 30th, 2018 08:34 - NATURE\'S LEGACY (Michael Edwards)
An awesome poem Michael.
November 30th, 2018 08:32 - The Long Drop (Neville)
Fear is king?
Peace one day will win
November 30th, 2018 08:30 - YIELDING. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful π
November 30th, 2018 08:29 - Rope to rope (Frederick Samson)
This place has always evaded me....
November 29th, 2018 08:54 - Does it seem as if Iβm dreaminβ ? (Frederick Samson)
Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading and I almost felt it echoing some of...
November 22nd, 2018 08:10 - Eviscerated (TrystanBehm)
I felt quite intrigued by this one.
Like I was walking into a room that...
November 16th, 2018 09:25 - Journey (Lonely poet)
I think I have walked this journey too.
Where it all began, alone with...
November 13th, 2018 07:56 - Bamboo shoots (Aa Harvey)
I really loved the dreamy imagery you created in this one.
I have just...
November 13th, 2018 07:50 - A soul we think we know (Bootsiewhite)
Thanks for sharing. Your poem resonated with me because I wonder a lot...
November 13th, 2018 03:53 - FORGOTTEN (Michael Edwards)
I love the imagery you create with this piece.
My empathetic thoughts...
November 13th, 2018 03:01 - The Digital World (Asrealastheycome)
I like to think I\'m a rebel because the only Facebook profile I have is...
November 13th, 2018 02:48 - fallen angel (Haiwee)
I like the image you create. Lots of inner conflict.
November 12th, 2018 06:00 - Bring Spring To the World (Lorna)
Aww I think the fusion expired. I love your verse.. glad you shared π
November 3rd, 2018 17:25 - The Existence (Aa Harvey)
I Was trying to find some words to express what a powerful piece this was...
November 2nd, 2018 07:51 - The Beaver Moon (November) (Lorna)
A beautiful scene created here π
November 2nd, 2018 02:42 - Intro to a Forgiven past (Forgiven past)
To me forwards to our future we must forgive ourselves our past, not dwell...
October 31st, 2018 03:29 - The Dying Light (Brookelynn)
I really enjoyed this piece... With words like that inside you can never...
October 30th, 2018 09:13 - Own The Sky (Xlayla55x)
I need some of that sky
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October 26th, 2018 10:48 - Wandering (John Prophet)
I\'m always wandering and wondering.
October 26th, 2018 07:53 - Turned (Poetic Dan)
Short but powerful. The idea of a battle and a blessing resonates with me....
October 26th, 2018 04:12 - KEEPING WATCH. (Fay Slimm.)
A poem filled with tenderness
October 26th, 2018 03:13 - FLY TIPPING (Michael Edwards)
Somehow you made me think of an elephant scratching his head on his way to...
October 26th, 2018 01:46 - Living from my soul (Poetic Dan)
I often wonder if feeling deeoly, strongly, intensely is a blessing or a...
October 26th, 2018 01:08 - VILLAGE BY THE LAKE ~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I am trying to write about Venice at the moment but have never been so it...
October 25th, 2018 10:35 - SUNRISE : SUNSET : AUCKLAND : ANGELA : Rhyming 644 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sounds like a beautiful site. A perfect view to share with someone you...
October 24th, 2018 06:20 - Old mixing with new (Poetic Dan)
It was like you were painting a canvas with a sense of freedom
October 24th, 2018 04:58 - sleep dreams (Magic Maker)
I like the dichotomies in your poem. Clear pictures/nothing I am...
October 24th, 2018 01:44 - sleep dreams (Magic Maker)
I like the dichotomies in your poem. Clear pictures/nothing I am...
October 24th, 2018 01:42 - BIG FEET (Michael Edwards)
Made me smile. As I do have big feet for a small lady. But I never much...
October 24th, 2018 01:36 - Haunted House (W c)
Very seasonal! Our house is not decorated this year and I am feeling the...
October 24th, 2018 01:34 - Cage , trappped (Singingbird)
This worked well. The absence of punctuation heightened that anxious...
October 23rd, 2018 10:03 - Holding On (Simple-Man87)
Everyone\'s twinkle deserves to glisten. But it\'s hard when there is such...
October 23rd, 2018 07:35 - Stones (Omnimax47)
I have a bot of a fascination with pebbles so I liked this poem... I wrote...
October 23rd, 2018 07:08 - FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE (Michael Edwards)
The opening was such a contrast from the image of the title.
Such a...
October 23rd, 2018 07:06 - Want or Are. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for sharing this thought. It makes me think about the few times I...
October 23rd, 2018 06:47 - INTER-SPUN. (Fay Slimm.)
I so want to go for gold fay. It sounds like what we all need to believe
October 23rd, 2018 06:35 - Through the Looking Glass (LIGHT WARRIOR)
The idea of the looking glass resonates with me. And the why don\'t people...
October 22nd, 2018 08:56 - The morning after (H. Ray Davis)
What a lovely morning after feeling.
I don\'t think I have ever had an...
October 22nd, 2018 06:18 - The Demon Within (Omnimax47)
I love this demon poem π€
October 19th, 2018 08:55 - Slow Crash (Livi9388)
Great poem.
October 17th, 2018 09:22 - FUCK YOU (Olivergreenwood20)
Oh this hurt.
October 16th, 2018 07:16 - Smile (WL Schuett)
It may have just been the tea and oranges but it reminded me of the song...
October 12th, 2018 08:47 - Is Anyone There? (DesertWords)
I heard you!
Such a powerful poem. I love how you capture the beauty...
October 11th, 2018 01:37 - Impermanence (II) (ImpGratAdapt)
Oh no I genuinely liked it. Short and succinct but so much within 17...
October 11th, 2018 01:25 - Impermanence (II) (ImpGratAdapt)
Perfect
October 10th, 2018 02:07 - The Observer (Unobtrusive Sun)
You have a way of telling a story in prose.
A story of being. A story of...
October 8th, 2018 02:26 - Encroachment (Unobtrusive Sun)
What a powerful write.
The silent ringing of the conscience
The...
October 8th, 2018 02:25 - Hippos teachings (Poetic Dan)
I think I am trying to embrace my solitude.
If only I could find some...
October 4th, 2018 09:08 - treasure chest (LiterateLesbian)
A beautiful acknowledgement of a treasured person
October 4th, 2018 07:38 - Mind (Wokenote)
What a great sentiment to have
October 4th, 2018 07:15 - The Shadows Shadow (WL Schuett)
This piece really moved me.
October 4th, 2018 01:36 - Haunting Lights (Michael J. Schaeffer)
Well I wondered if you were personifying the storm or what else the storm...
October 3rd, 2018 01:34 - Haunting Lights (Michael J. Schaeffer)
What an intriguing poem.
I wonder what is she who is storm?
October 2nd, 2018 08:39 - Loneliness? (Goldfinch60)
You got me thinking about loneliness.
It is one of the greatest health...
October 2nd, 2018 08:09 - The Patient Sea and the Mighty Mountain (JWKP98)
Thank you. I think like the mountain it takes time to learn the power of...
September 30th, 2018 04:20 - One Tear Removed (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
Agree, what a wonderful talent you have
September 28th, 2018 09:52 - Where? (A__pott)
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September 28th, 2018 09:51 - Flowered By Rainbows. (Kevin browne)
Well I think this seems quite up there to me.
Each line fed into the next...
September 28th, 2018 06:59 - My Death Is Unseen (Omnimax47)
Very dark piece. I hope it is metaphorical. I know the feeling of dying...
September 28th, 2018 02:34 - A good morning with depression (Gogeta)
You have captured the silent suffering painfully well.
There is such...
September 25th, 2018 07:29 - So Much (Noah Malice)
You have captured the complexity of a broken heart so softly but with...
September 25th, 2018 07:26 - Insomnia (OrderFallingToChaos)
Or maybe all that does insomnia?
September 25th, 2018 07:22 - dew on a dead leaf (Jon Nakapalau)
Sad image, but when the leaf falls to the floor and becomes part of the...
September 25th, 2018 07:18 - Working Class Ponder (G84)
I think a wander in the forest sounds good to me.
What\'s the worst...
September 25th, 2018 07:14 - Lost Horizon (Omnimax47)
The trap is endless but cannot be unseen. I sometimes wonder if I would...
September 25th, 2018 07:12 - True and False (A__pott)
I enjoyed this, it flows well with gentle cynicism
September 24th, 2018 01:26 - Sometimes (Poetic Dan)
The necessity of light and dark π€
September 21st, 2018 08:59 - Water (Mirrorphen)
Don\'t worry mirrorphen, last I heard they don\'t add fluoride to the...
September 19th, 2018 02:29 - Happy Christmas...to a point (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Made my day...
96 days to go ππππ
September 19th, 2018 02:22
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