Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- If Anyone Enquires Just Tell Them... (Cheeky Missy)
The more you do the more is expected is the rule. Another fun read.
October 13th, 2024 15:45 - WIND OF FATE (Rebellion_in_sanity)
As a young person I had lucid dreams of flying and there was nothing...
October 13th, 2024 15:31 - Wandering (Maplespal)
A thought that occurs to many and yet, eccept in rare cases, one always...
October 13th, 2024 15:28 - Where Is My Love (Sunshine777)
The bond can be very strong and one does not feel right without the other....
October 13th, 2024 15:26 - ~> A Crappy Day At Work (Thad Wilk)
Loved the (sonnet?) not typical but fun none the less. I guess we have all...
October 13th, 2024 15:24 - Driving in the rain (Tony36)
Just like the rain hypnotizing I can hear the windshield wipers.
October 13th, 2024 15:19 - Stabbed by the Autumn Leaves (Thomas W Case)
The season is right for this write and it sets the feeling
October 13th, 2024 12:47 - winter scene (Jim56)
Remember those days and that cold. Nicely written Jim
October 13th, 2024 05:36 - 1066 Reunion (Orchidee)
I couldn\'t make it. Was in South America helping the Myans get ready to...
October 13th, 2024 05:35 - The Dark Follows (Mark The Phenomenon)
Not only good for this time of year but good advice any time. Nicely...
October 13th, 2024 05:21 - SHE SAYS (Qurrathul Ain)
A common need is for someone to understand us better than we do ourselves...
October 13th, 2024 05:06 - The Boy Sat On The Burning Deck. (Goldfinch60)
A fun read indeed Gold another smile put on my face for another Sunday I...
October 13th, 2024 05:02 - Spiraling Down part one (Dan Williams)
Every generation is the same, we all see things different but the same, it...
October 13th, 2024 04:59 - The Burden of Upgrades (Arqios)
Cryptic each stanza has its own depth and deep it goes. I initially was...
October 13th, 2024 04:50 - *- IF -* (Thad Wilk)
Romantic words that I\'m sure any woman would like to hear. Very nice
October 12th, 2024 19:24 - THE MASTER\'S GOLD (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Oppression by wealth is what we suffer today. Marx madhis plea but as you...
October 12th, 2024 13:57 - bluebird dream (Jim56)
Bird songs a beautiful chorus and melody. Nicely written Jim
October 12th, 2024 05:25 - Pants (Neville)
A good question Neville I think its part of the doesn\'t matter movement...
October 12th, 2024 05:23 - Harvest Thoughts (Orchidee)
Good to hear you again Orchi. Nicely done.
October 12th, 2024 05:19 - Whispers of Healing (Dev Parth)
A wonderful wish, prayer, desire and blessing. Nicely said
October 12th, 2024 05:17 - TAHAJJUD UNTIL FAJR (Qurrathul Ain)
Many believe in free agency many in destiny. Here one prays for something...
October 12th, 2024 05:14 - A Woman With A Heart (Sunshine777)
It is always good to know oneself. Nicely stated with confidence
October 12th, 2024 05:11 - Night Terrors (Thomas W Case)
Alienation expressed in stark terms of pain. I can feel the aloneness and...
October 12th, 2024 05:09 - On the Late Massacre In Appalachia (Cheeky Missy)
Remarkable the similarity in all. Very nicely done Cheeky
October 12th, 2024 05:06 - Our Intense Love Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
There is nothing like love when it is felt. It is a very great force....
October 12th, 2024 05:00 - ~> I Wish That My Lawn Was EMO! - form Jeffreys Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
I think it must have taken more effort to write this poem than to mow the...
October 12th, 2024 04:56 - Again and again… (Tallisman)
I loved how this poem leaves the reader to imagin the outcome of each step...
October 11th, 2024 14:15 - ~> Halloween\'s Just Around The ( CORONER ) (Thad Wilk)
No need for a mask on this task there are mosters galore behind each door...
October 11th, 2024 11:01 - NOW You\'ve Gone and Done It (Cheeky Missy)
Accept no substitutes indeed neither for poems or songs especially not...
October 11th, 2024 10:03 - Modification (John Prophet)
All true from political talk to the media. From advertising to social...
October 11th, 2024 08:07 - Where I you will find (Maplespal)
When one loves someone they are always near. A very nice write beautiful
October 11th, 2024 08:05 - meadow lark song (Jim56)
In my youth I remember the song of this bird that like my place of birth...
October 11th, 2024 08:03 - Growing old together (Tony36)
A great write especially for us old folks.
October 11th, 2024 08:01 - Rhyme Not Mine. (Doggerel Dave)
Ahh Dave leave it to you to bring a smile to this old man\'s face. This is...
October 11th, 2024 07:59 - FALL (Qurrathul Ain)
So many beautiful metaphors contained in this piece. Great images flow...
October 11th, 2024 07:53 - Eternal Journey (Rebellion_in_sanity)
You have captured in this poem manyof my feelings might I say beleifs and...
October 11th, 2024 07:48 - In Love With The Party Flag (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Too many follow the crowd. Too many look to be a hero without knowing what...
October 11th, 2024 07:36 - be-lightedly (Arqios)
Criptic this is a metaphor so applicable to many things from romance to...
October 11th, 2024 07:29 - Music Creation Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
What I find most intriguing is how modern composers borrow, beg or steal...
October 11th, 2024 05:46 - The Catch in A Love Song .. & Upon Turning the Other Cheek (Neville)
Two for one what a bargain. The first hit me as so typical of...
October 11th, 2024 05:41 - ~> Yosemite Sam I am! (Thad Wilk)
Got to fave this one for memories of childhood and how fun it was to read....
October 11th, 2024 05:29 - Roll Nonchalance Across Yer Tongue (Cheeky Missy)
A fun read of several thoughts.
October 10th, 2024 20:19 - the garbage man (Gray0328)
Recycling now days is the word. One man\'s trash is another man\'s
October 10th, 2024 20:07 - ~> Pick Your Painted Horse! (Thad Wilk)
So right life is a circle in more ways than one and at times provides us...
October 10th, 2024 20:04 - we all have to live (Jim56)
Experience of live and there is nothing that teaches better than first...
October 10th, 2024 20:01 - Fit For Purpose (Neville)
The blues of a rainy day accompanied by blues is my choice. Drinking can...
October 10th, 2024 19:59 - no longer spectral, Brontës shall remain (Arqios)
Etched in stone can still be altered by someone else and memories can be...
October 10th, 2024 19:52 - THUNDERING (Qurrathul Ain)
Deep meaning in this poem that requires reflection to see the light that...
October 10th, 2024 19:48 - This old barn (Tony36)
A lovely poem reminding me of childhood in my grandfather\'s barn.
October 10th, 2024 13:42 - Dream (MaxSmith)
Seductive, errotic, sensuous you\'re going to arrouse the crowd. Nicely...
October 10th, 2024 11:51 - Hello Again, It\'s Me (Cheeky Missy)
Twill upset you but this reminds me of Lewis Carrol, one of my favorite...
October 10th, 2024 07:35 - John and I (Teddy.15)
Well happy birthday and no John had Yoko Ono to figure out the finance. A...
October 10th, 2024 05:35 - No Such Light (Teddy.15)
This raven has been haunting you for some time now. Ghosts wroght upon the...
October 10th, 2024 05:32 - Earth\'s Birth Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
You accomplished your promise in several past responses and now you have...
October 10th, 2024 05:23 - A Little Girl (Sunshine777)
Sad story where the best steal is that that is tempered.
October 10th, 2024 05:18 - LET GO (Qurrathul Ain)
Never let go of dreams, that is where the road ends. Your poem speaks to...
October 9th, 2024 20:10 - -x- Look up -x- (MaxSmith)
Love the first line \"The absence of light blinding\" The essence of this...
October 9th, 2024 15:49 - ~> Lord Hear My Plea! (Thad Wilk)
From the words of Job to those of Jesus pleas to take away the cup but no,...
October 9th, 2024 11:01 - The Rider (Peet)
The flavor of the old west. Born and raised in the west it has appeal to...
October 9th, 2024 10:51 - Another Rain (Blessing Awoniyi)
I loved this poem full of rich tradition. Not so far from western beliefs...
October 9th, 2024 10:46 - Afraid (John Prophet)
I agree but this won\'t occur until we as a species value others more than...
October 9th, 2024 08:58 - Poetry is (Tony36)
I agree poetry is all those things. All that touches the heart is poetry
October 9th, 2024 08:54 - robin beauty (Jim56)
Love birds and am familiar with the robin since childhood. A pleasent poem...
October 9th, 2024 08:53 - Time To Grieve (Orchidee)
Glad you mentioned KP and Fido that\'s a good sign. You can\'t leave out...
October 9th, 2024 05:28 - Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self (Neville)
In our rush to get nowhere we miss the sensual pleasures of life. Taking...
October 9th, 2024 05:15 - A Rare Edition (Arqios)
A fun read and a great tribute to a great poet. Funny how as time passes...
October 9th, 2024 05:05 - The Steps Of Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Love your sonnets Andy and this one is a good one reflective of a life...
October 9th, 2024 04:46 - Things Fell Down (Dan Williams)
The feeling that I get from this poem is that neglect contributes to decay...
October 9th, 2024 04:43 - the invention of hell (Gray0328)
A powerful message sent clearly. Well said
October 8th, 2024 20:36 - In Service To ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
Once again an great message written concisely and nicely
October 8th, 2024 20:34 - ~> and the rain fell in torrents (free verse) (Thad Wilk)
Great analogy and a good message as well. Nicely done Thad
October 8th, 2024 20:32 - Writing (Tony36)
That is one way to do it Tony. With me usually the dam breaks and after...
October 8th, 2024 20:31 - A love letter to Palaiseau (Ladywithaquill)
A lovely poem of attachment to a place now embedded in the heart. Use of...
October 8th, 2024 16:01 - Star Gazing (MaxSmith)
A romantic, sensuous poem written with great imagery and an enticing entry...
October 8th, 2024 15:32 - Prayer And Peace (Orchidee)
October 8th, 2024 15:16 - Prayer And Peace (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi it is good not to be anxious
October 8th, 2024 15:16 - ( TSA ) ribald viscosity (Arqios)
Powerful words said with force. Lack of trust is hard to rebuild. The last...
October 8th, 2024 10:14 - Dance Of Question (Dev Parth)
Asking questions aids in understanding be it social, intellectual,...
October 8th, 2024 06:33 - Spiderlace (Dan Williams)
Some great images and lines here. Spiderweb of lace very impactful with...
October 8th, 2024 06:30 - autumn art (Jim56)
Well Jim you and I are on the same page (or should I say same leaf) today....
October 8th, 2024 06:27 - Just As Sunsets (Neville)
Very sensual as well as beautiful but melancholic with a sense of sadness...
October 8th, 2024 06:25 - I Know You Didn\'t Ask, but Here You Go (Cheeky Missy)
Brilliant!! I love the creative multiple possibilities of this read....
October 8th, 2024 06:21 - My Alice (Thomas W Case)
A great use of Alice through the looking glass images in this poem. Fun to...
October 8th, 2024 06:18 - The Lucky (Peet)
A rally call to all. Be as a child without prejudice and with energy and...
October 8th, 2024 06:15 - Tomorrow Will Come. (Goldfinch60)
Good advice my friend and if taken will lead to good days. Very nice Andy
October 8th, 2024 06:11 - ~. SPRING - (double Acrostic) (Thad Wilk)
Creative and inovative with good rhyme and consistent theme. Well done.
October 7th, 2024 19:30 - I am just a shadow (Markashley1961)
A poem of humility that there is far too little of now days. A poem of...
October 7th, 2024 07:13 - The Colorful Blood of Fall (A.H. Browning)
Brilliant! A most beautiful and heart felt write that takes the reader...
October 7th, 2024 05:00 - Benign Bridges (Neville)
Not a bad idea to throw them off the bridge. No wars are not worth...
October 7th, 2024 04:53 - Each New Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A most positive attitude to start the day and with a pleasent flow and...
October 7th, 2024 04:48 - Seeking Revenge (Dan Williams)
I believe in forgiveness for the good of the forgiver but all things have...
October 7th, 2024 04:45 - being an npc in their story (Arqios)
Now here my friend you have tapped into multiple meanings from not...
October 7th, 2024 04:40 - Mad Dog in America (Neville)
A true portrayal of American history and its expantion then deterioration...
October 6th, 2024 19:16 - Our Bitter End (Tristan Robert Lange)
The seasons of life contained in this poem. Nicely worded
October 6th, 2024 19:05 - unconditional love (Jim56)
Mother\'s are the first that come to mind but father\'s too can have this...
October 6th, 2024 18:54 - Forest (Tony36)
I\'m with you. I love spending time in nature. Well written
October 6th, 2024 18:52 - ~> Let\'s Fly Away (Thad Wilk)
Nicely done as a pledge of love.
October 6th, 2024 18:51 - by fiction of pen (Arqios)
Beautiful words my friend so poetic in form and word.
October 6th, 2024 18:40 - look out tomorrow (Arqios)
A serious situation that I certainly hope works out well. My best wishes...
October 6th, 2024 18:30 - Compassionate Concern (Orchidee)
Belief is a powerful thing and can accomplish things unimaginable.Nicely...
October 6th, 2024 05:46
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