Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Dear Heart (Tony36)
Perseverance is the key do not let failure stand in your way. Every try is...
April 12th, 2025 07:54 - the killing of a conifer (Mourgana of the Fey)
The vary wording and metaphors in this write make it most intriguing and...
April 12th, 2025 07:52 - half open half closed eyes (Xqw)
We equate life with eyes open and death with closed eyes very nicely...
April 12th, 2025 07:10 - cute hedgehog (Jim56)
Delightful, a wonderful look at nature and her children.
April 12th, 2025 05:49 - Daredevil: Born Again (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Poems, videos, or shows must be total and all action now days or are...
April 12th, 2025 04:42 - Eloquence (Libellule)
A fave for the flow and meter in this poem it flows off the tongue like...
April 12th, 2025 04:39 - Echos (Teardrop)
Hidden is the word that comes to mind. Feelings of timidity and possibly...
April 12th, 2025 04:37 - Come Get Some (DREEK0)
A poem of challenge and a feeling of defiance. Nicely worded.
April 12th, 2025 04:35 - A BED WITH TWO BLANKETS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
It is the metaphor and careful imaging that gets the fave in this poem it...
April 12th, 2025 04:33 - celestial threads (Arqios)
Beautiful images here my friend, nicely woven into a tapestry of celestial...
April 12th, 2025 04:25 - Adventures of Mary and Harry (3) (Poetic Licence)
Poor Mary she never seems to catch a break. A fun read set in rhyme loved...
April 12th, 2025 04:22 - Absence (FallingAwake2)
This poem sends a message of rapidly distancing and falling out of grasp....
April 12th, 2025 04:19 - doggy style fun... (Dimpy)
Erotic, sexual, sensual, seductive it pulses with pleasure.
April 12th, 2025 04:16 - The Deer (MKS)
Very well written this poem has good rhyme and very nice meter as well as...
April 12th, 2025 04:14 - Secluded (Cendrine Marrouat)
Here a picture is painted in words. Well done.
April 12th, 2025 04:11 - Where The Willows Grow (MDStone)
A wistful longing fills the heart with this poem\'s reading. Nostalgic...
April 12th, 2025 04:10 - Gratitude For Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful Andy. Very nicely penned this poem weaves its words with care...
April 12th, 2025 04:04 - In These Verses... (Rrodriguez)
A beautiful poem of love and admiration. Nicely worded
April 11th, 2025 19:23 - The boy in the bus (Amethyste)
Sexual drive in this poem drives an urge primal. Nicely said
April 11th, 2025 18:17 - Lost in the Mud (Thomas W Case)
Disheartened and dark this poetically describes the end of many dreams....
April 11th, 2025 18:15 - A Living Heart on a Merciful Palm by Sam Kirsanoff (Ksey_Gan)
A sad and paradoxical story told in this poem of care for one another....
April 11th, 2025 18:13 - The Podcaster\'s Prayer (Alex Arnot)
Most creative and well played. Loved it
April 11th, 2025 16:49 - Tropical easterlies (Spilleronsheet)
Great wording in this loved how butterflies came after anxieties were...
April 11th, 2025 14:42 - Taking the long view (Hzugman)
I love the idea and humor in this short piece
April 11th, 2025 14:40 - Looking Ahead of Time (Dyslexic.gun)
Obsessed is a difficult place to be. A most interesting poem and nicely...
April 11th, 2025 14:39 - Storm Ports (Kurt Philip Behm)
Lovely and so is language that gives us these feelings
April 11th, 2025 12:44 - bite (Gray0328)
Gray I loved the metaphor in this poem and the last stanza was my favorite...
April 11th, 2025 12:43 - Scared on where to begin (Jennybee89)
A poem of decision. New beginnings happen every day. Throw fear to the...
April 11th, 2025 12:41 - Great Is The Lord (Orchidee)
Another great song of tribute my friend
April 11th, 2025 12:36 - Unbound by time (Kaz)
Most beautifully worded and poetic
April 11th, 2025 10:23 - The Calm (RSM0812)
This poem takes us through the storm to the calm on the other side. Very...
April 11th, 2025 09:25 - Made Manifest (E.J. Waling)
Words nicely compiled in this poem that takes us on a journey to knowledge...
April 11th, 2025 09:23 - I am Cursed (Anthony Hanible)
A curse, a spell, Voodoo, witchcraft what ever it seems that more than the...
April 11th, 2025 09:21 - Journey of a dream (Pukur)
There is no view that satisfies as much as turning around on one\'s climb...
April 11th, 2025 09:19 - The 40th Anniversary Of The New Coke (Randyjohnson71)
How easily we become accustomed to the old. The original formula marketed...
April 11th, 2025 09:16 - The Missiles and its People (Gaurav Gurung)
War, Famine and Pestilence the three big killers that act indiscriminately...
April 11th, 2025 09:13 - Big boys don\'t cry (Tony36)
A most modern view indeed. Yes men have always cried on the inside but not...
April 11th, 2025 09:08 - Cold heart (Spilleronsheet)
In few words the image is painted and comes to life. Well done
April 11th, 2025 09:02 - Oh Snap (Tristan Robert Lange)
Anxiety one of the biggest killers, raise blood pressure, alters sugar...
April 11th, 2025 08:58 - Lost words (Lorenz)
So much symbolism lies in this poem full of metaphor. It is a light in its...
April 11th, 2025 06:14 - Hymn for the hooved (Mourgana of the Fey)
A beautiful work this poem uses vivid and identifiable imagery to paint a...
April 11th, 2025 06:05 - Shaking feeling (Maplespal)
A traumatic loss is most difficult to overcome and putting the feelings on...
April 11th, 2025 05:57 - The biggest fight yet. (Hey!)
What a nice message of what friendship is. I enjoyed the rhyme punctuated...
April 11th, 2025 05:54 - sunshine happiness (Jim56)
Such a lovely poem Jim full of sunshine and brightness to lift a rainy day...
April 11th, 2025 05:50 - wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku (Xqw)
Actions speak louder than words and as poets we use words which would be...
April 11th, 2025 05:48 - Ripples in Rhyme (Libellule)
A wonderful poem set in great rhyme and meter with such a smooth flow. It...
April 11th, 2025 05:43 - Violin Strings (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Used to play the violin as a child and it is a devil of an instrument with...
April 11th, 2025 04:27 - To The Executioner, To Time (Abdullah123)
This poem is so classical in form and style I love it and it speaks to me...
April 11th, 2025 04:22 - be brave... (NafisaSB)
I remember dancing in the rain when I was younger now I just walk quickly...
April 11th, 2025 04:20 - THE OLD NORTH CEMETERY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Haunting and well depicted in images the meter with short lines was rapid...
April 11th, 2025 04:17 - Children Have Rights. (Poetic Licence)
A most noble write Tobani one that I can sense you feel strongly about....
April 11th, 2025 04:11 - Anton Ego (Arqios)
A wonderful metaphor that made me hungry. Poems like food vary in their...
April 11th, 2025 04:06 - Solar Suppression (Mutley Ravishes)
Now this was a fun read that takes one along on a journey with your...
April 11th, 2025 04:01 - I\'m sorry (Vividvoid14)
Sad this poem speaks from the perspective of one with love unrequited....
April 11th, 2025 03:59 - Silent Screams (Haleyalexis)
Well written and compelling this poem speaks to me of hidden things that...
April 11th, 2025 03:56 - 4/10/25 (Wren)
The onset of a panic attack? It sounds so much like it. A vivid and...
April 11th, 2025 03:52 - an actor by any other name (Queer-with-a-pen)
Such a refreshingly original poem in the change of scene stanza to stanza,...
April 11th, 2025 03:50 - Unicorn Choir. (Goldfinch60)
Magic mushrooms a little psilocybin to spice up the night. Love mushrooms...
April 11th, 2025 03:44 - Such A Wicked Game (Sunshine777)
Deeply philosophical this poem explores the meaning of life. Well written
April 10th, 2025 19:03 - Was There Time (Lewisgale mental hospital)
A poem to ponder over. Thought provoking. Very nice
April 10th, 2025 19:02 - I have lived a hundred different lives - (Amy Michelle Mosier)
Very nice a life well lived that despite problems and errors even regrets...
April 10th, 2025 17:50 - Jasmine (Amethyste)
A good poem marked by anthropomorphism that makes the bloom tender and...
April 10th, 2025 17:44 - Tonight (Alex PB)
Sensuous and an invitation for a sexual encounter. Well written
April 10th, 2025 17:42 - My Man (Tony Grannell)
Now that is what I call love and that is what I call a beautiful poem so...
April 10th, 2025 16:22 - Prism of light (Kaz)
A very nice message. The analogy of breaking light into a spectrum of...
April 10th, 2025 16:14 - You grew old, while I was busy growing up. (Pie)
A great poem of finding oneself and one\'s goals but loosing the one that...
April 10th, 2025 16:12 - Electric touch (Nicole Pritchard)
You describe very well the sensations of infatuation,, passion, and...
April 10th, 2025 16:10 - What are you thinking? (Maplespal)
A poem of drifting thoughts falling through a sifter. Well stated and...
April 10th, 2025 13:53 - Hold on to Humanity (JBentley)
A noble poem with a noble message that we are far from reaching. As long...
April 10th, 2025 13:19 - Desire By the Orange Tree (A Boy With Roses)
Does anyone really know anyone? The poem poses the question (If you knew...
April 10th, 2025 12:15 - Sympathies (Coracaodacripta)
A poem of protest this is powerful in its message. Nicely worded it speaks...
April 10th, 2025 12:13 - To the Russian soldier in 2025 by Vladimir Tsiniker (Ksey_Gan)
Wars are fought on money and that money goes to certain people. Wars are...
April 10th, 2025 12:05 - Muscle Car (Tristan Robert Lange)
My brother was into that type of car making his own funny-car with...
April 10th, 2025 10:57 - Glasses and Lashes (A piece of luggage)
A most interesting poem that speaks of a relationship. Very nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 10:12 - Summertime (Lorenz)
A poem of seasons. Within this poem a metaphor as well. Nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 10:08 - Rising Sun (Shahla Latifi)
A poem of sadness that takes one back and recalls a relative. Nicely
April 10th, 2025 10:06 - You problem (Pineapple_pizza018)
There are many like this. Well written
April 10th, 2025 10:02 - So Deceiving the Crown (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt)
A word of warning that power is not to be trusted but has ulterior motives...
April 10th, 2025 09:59 - They\'re Waiting For Me To (Anthony Hanible)
A dark view of problem solving that many have considered and some have...
April 10th, 2025 09:22 - He pulls the trigger (Tony36)
April 10th, 2025 09:03 - He pulls the trigger (Tony36)
Dark very dark and with a message that alienated we do not survive. Most...
April 10th, 2025 09:03 - Darkened Ink (Libellule)
Dark but light this poem speaks of Carpe diem. Well written and with good...
April 10th, 2025 08:31 - Driving Dangerously (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A great message in this poem. Drink don\'t drive, drive don\'t drink. Too...
April 10th, 2025 08:27 - Succumb (Midnight Lasagna)
Highly metaphoric this poem uses alliteration to strengthen its meter and...
April 10th, 2025 07:25 - My Love Taps with the Moon (RSM0812)
Nicely written this piece carries a longing and desire for the moon and...
April 10th, 2025 07:21 - Your gaze (Reynaldo Casison)
Wonderful words in this poem beyond the trite expressions of love it opens...
April 10th, 2025 05:31 - chamelion (Jim56)
A lovely write Jim. My son once had a Jaguar chameleon that changed color...
April 10th, 2025 05:29 - My imagination (Nicolerobinson)
The use of an AAAA rhyme scheme in this poem makes it seem obsessive...
April 10th, 2025 04:33 - Once upon a dark moon (Mourgana of the Fey)
The use of variegated alliteration in this poem pulls the reader along....
April 10th, 2025 04:31 - RAIN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The staggered, irregular, near rhyme with the meter in this poem simulated...
April 10th, 2025 04:27 - all alone... (Dimpy)
A rather somber and wistful poem of love. It seems to linger in the...
April 10th, 2025 04:24 - Muscle Memories (Mutley Ravishes)
Loved this imagery that although incongruent with reason fits reality. We...
April 10th, 2025 04:22 - Turning the pages (Pukur)
I too used to collect my books in a special place now I keep them in my...
April 10th, 2025 04:18 - the weight of \"g\" (Gray0328)
Some great lines in this poem \'Gray. Love the thought as well...
April 10th, 2025 04:16 - Kindness and Compassion Are Free. (Poetic Licence)
I would joke about this but the poem demands respect it is such a...
April 10th, 2025 04:03 - d a n c e (Arqios)
Good job of keeping rhyme to the meaning in such short lines. Very nice...
April 10th, 2025 04:01 - Universal Life. (Goldfinch60)
I so agree that there is life out there and life that we may have no...
April 10th, 2025 03:58 - Lonely (Thoughtless)
Seductively short a fun read. Lovely
April 10th, 2025 03:55 - In shimmering light (Kaz)
Short but powerfully stated this poem is an image but also I feel a...
April 10th, 2025 03:51 - A Study in Muddled Colours (Cheeky Missy)
Another set of fun reads. Flowers, food, fox three f\'s a great read Chic
April 10th, 2025 03:50
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