Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Memories We Shared (Tkatie118) A great pairing of the concept of time passing rapidly in conjunction with...
  August 3rd, 2024 06:20
• 6th poem for - “That Night’s Dream” - Last Breath (Maplespal) Very romantic in nature this poem gives a pledge of love to the last line.
  August 3rd, 2024 06:17
• The True Endgame (Young Fella) Loss can be earth shaking. Nicely written
  August 3rd, 2024 06:16
• LOVED (Shallom_M) This carries the foreboding thought that drenching himself in her smile...
  August 3rd, 2024 06:13
• Mulberry Paints (Framed Mirror) Classical in nature this poem carries its message to the grave for many....
  August 3rd, 2024 06:11
• Trusting Times - Part 2 (Orchidee) A soothing poem Orchi anjd the music was soothing as well. Nicely chosen
  August 3rd, 2024 06:07
• Attic (B-LAH-que) Intriguing and written in metaphor that required more readings. A great...
  August 3rd, 2024 06:05
• Breathing In Music. (Goldfinch60) Love the image of breathing music. Like air there is the pure and the...
  August 3rd, 2024 06:01
• Escape From Earth (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Fantasy occupies the mind much of the time. Love Sci-fi
  August 3rd, 2024 05:58
• One Without Frills Would Be Fine (Neville) And so it is with all the humble. Not particularly Christian but the...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:57
• Anymore (Birddie Jane) Powerfully written. Anyone that has had a relationship can find small bits...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:53
• Over Your Shoulder (Dan Williams) Love questioning poems that work their way toward an end. Nicely written.
  August 3rd, 2024 05:47
• Fractured (Tristan Robert Lange) Words are powerful and create images so vivid that they may as well be...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:45
• Tangled Up In You (Cocamedo) This piece is so nicely written with cute and fun memories that I feel...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:44
• A mother\'s grief (Juliette72) Powerful words put in a credible write that I initially took for a real...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:41
• beauty (Sheta) A truth most men don\'t discover until too late. Yes there is that side...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:37
• It Was Not Your Refusal (Satishverma) Again being spoken to through short stanzas of wisdom.
  August 3rd, 2024 05:36
• The House of my Mind (Thoughtless) The metaphor works well and is well employed. Great wording here.
  August 3rd, 2024 05:34
• my mind rebels at stagnation (DeadRose) Great wording in this poem. A topic common to many. Some create their own...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:33
• Thief of Love (Sami mulaj) Prometheus was the thief of fire but I heard there were several thieves ...
  August 2nd, 2024 20:32
• Celine, My Love (Mark The Phenomenon) Romantic and nicely written.
  August 2nd, 2024 20:29
• Paper Matter (RefugeInRain) Nice flow and rhyme to this poem. Liked it a lot.
  August 2nd, 2024 18:28
• Silhouette (Alan R) Short and concise it reads very poetically and causes some reflection....
  August 2nd, 2024 16:25
• Let them Wonder - in Kamala\'s own words (Raidoc) Clever and well put together with many facts and details included. Nicely...
  August 2nd, 2024 16:24
• Summer 24 (Annemarie) A beautiful dream and wish. Nicely written
  August 2nd, 2024 16:21
• TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE. (Akhilausman) Beautiful in its wording and thought nicely written
  August 2nd, 2024 16:17
• Searching (Mya) A great write to the life time objective of Einstein, and Hawking. Well...
  August 2nd, 2024 16:12
• A Proposal of Questions (Petrichor of Love) Romantic and so well worded in a classical style it reads so smoothly.
  August 2nd, 2024 16:10
• Holden and Harlow (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Short and hopefully so. Nicely said
  August 2nd, 2024 16:08
• The Death of the Albatross (Saleh Ben Saleh) People are a destructive species and we leave a great deal of trash. A...
  August 2nd, 2024 16:07
• Paradise Lost (Kurt Philip Behm) Loved this poem with a famous name. It takes Milton a little further down...
  August 2nd, 2024 16:05
• Forgiveness On Layaway (Gray0328) Wonderfully worded this poem has some great images and the meaning is...
  August 2nd, 2024 16:02
• Fading Into The Night (Rebellion_in_sanity) Haunting and at the same time soothing. This strange combination left a...
  August 2nd, 2024 15:57
• Here\'s another way to look at things (Hzugman) Great lines all adding up to an important message. Nicely done
  August 2nd, 2024 15:55
• `* Heroin *` (Thad Wilk) Loved the way this unfolded and the rhyme was nicely done to add great...
  August 2nd, 2024 15:54
• A Love Song (MendedFences27) I love unexpected endings. A nice write.
  August 2nd, 2024 15:53
• Beauty Of Love (Blossompayal) A nice pledge of love to another nicely written
  August 2nd, 2024 09:12
• (I can stay here) For a while. (Weep little lion girl) Here is a beautiful expression for a need for space and some great lines...
  August 2nd, 2024 09:10
• Watery Waters (Young Fella) Beautiful images and voiced value of another. Nicely written
  August 2nd, 2024 09:05
• Happy Birthday, Mom - Part XII (Randyjohnson71) A wonderful tribute to your mother nicely written.
  August 2nd, 2024 09:03
• Devoid of Truth (Iqra Khan) Several great lines here \"I wonder over her fate, Over concept of love...
  August 2nd, 2024 09:01
• Music (Tony36) Here here so says string theory in the vibration of its strings....
  August 2nd, 2024 08:58
• there for you (Jim56) A wonderful pledge of commitment in verse nicely done.
  August 2nd, 2024 05:53
• The Scars (Net) Metaphoric and vivid images as well in this piece. Nice and short as well.
  August 2nd, 2024 05:52
• 4th & 5th poems – “That Night’s Dream” – Lingering, and You Remain (Maplespal) Loss and reliving it through remembered images associated with the lost is...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:51
• Lake of Tears (Anabella151) Being ignored is one of the hardest things to endure. I hear the anguish...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:48
• Dark Arts (Framed Mirror) Messages in words to be heard sifted and sorted setting gossip aside....
  August 2nd, 2024 05:47
• WAR WITHIN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Sometimes the diametrically opposed are close to the same. A nice write...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:45
• A Pin Drop Moment (Teddy.15) I\'ll be all day thinking of this metaphor. Yes down, down, down finally...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:43
• Trusting Times - Part 1 (Orchidee) Nicely written again I can use the mercy.
  August 2nd, 2024 05:40
• Just Like Some Well Read Woman (Neville) The possibility for many meanings here. Today a well read woman is torn...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:31
• Cut Flowers (Thomas W Case) True words it is in death that new life comes and what is new ages. It is...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:23
• I blame you (Birddie Jane) Trapped is a good word. Each decision we make in this life traps us into a...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:21
• Pathway to More Pieces (Cocamedo) Particularly love the first stanza that applies to more than love. Neatly...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:16
• if i was a boy (Sheta) Cute we all have moments thinking how things would be different. Nicely...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:14
• Tonight the sky is stunning (MA-Q) Stunning images in this poem of death and life. The balance is evident and...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:13
• Athalia (Rosita De Rose) Beautiful!
  August 2nd, 2024 05:09
• Fire Game (Satishverma) Look outside oneself and you will find. Look inside oneself for wisdom
  August 2nd, 2024 05:08
• Liberate (RefugeInRain) Standing one\'s ground strongly stated in this poem. It is a statement of...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:06
• The Student? (Dan Williams) Here and gone even illusions can be missed. Loved the last line \"While...
  August 2nd, 2024 04:35
• Bad Day Survival. (Goldfinch60) One step at a time until looking back over our shoulder we can see the...
  August 2nd, 2024 04:29
• With Wings of Freedom (Rrodriguez) A nicely state call for freedom. Well done
  August 1st, 2024 19:25
• Why me?? (Hey!) A most fun read. Nicely stated,
  August 1st, 2024 19:23
• Don\'t Look Away (Shallom_M) Clearly stated and direct. A most interesting write.
  August 1st, 2024 19:22
• no excuses (NinjaGirl) A simple true statement that should be obvious. Nice to cut straight to...
  August 1st, 2024 19:21
• I\'m Selfish, I suppose. (Thoughtless) An expression of worth and most interestingly said.
  August 1st, 2024 18:25
• Memories (Sami mulaj) Beautifully worded and with intriguing thoughts. nicely done
  August 1st, 2024 18:23
• living extraordinarily (Lunarchloedip) A most interesting write. Keep writing.
  August 1st, 2024 16:12
• Alabaster Porcelain On A Ghost (Beatrix M) Haunting words of darkness.
  August 1st, 2024 16:10
• Liquid Courage (The Indignant Poetess) I can feel the anger in this piece. It is well written.
  August 1st, 2024 14:36
• The Albatross (Petrichor of Love) It has the sound of the classic era and reads well with good rhyme. nicely...
  August 1st, 2024 13:42
• Fading (Kenny O\'Donnell) Well rhymed and with good flow this poem reads easy and has a very...
  August 1st, 2024 13:37
• I Drink You In (PreciousGurl) Romantic and easy to read. Well done
  August 1st, 2024 12:03
• Consequence of Love (Teddy.15) We sacrifice ourselves for what we love and that is one of the meanings of...
  August 1st, 2024 10:56
• Hot Off the Press (MendedFences27) Thank you for giving me the news of the day and now I feel I won\'t have...
  August 1st, 2024 10:50
• Field of Ashes (John Lee) Well written and very poetic in its imagery. There are several great lines...
  August 1st, 2024 10:46
• The Jailer Within (Kurt Philip Behm) Another wonderful set of wisdom\'s sayings so well written in such a short...
  August 1st, 2024 10:42
• `*~ Each Day My Love - form Trijan Refrain (Thad Wilk) Romantic pledge full of great images very nicely written in verse.
  August 1st, 2024 09:28
• Soul is in the Ocean (Annemarie) A great metaphor with wonderful images. Nicely done.
  August 1st, 2024 09:26
• True Poets should be Proud (Saleh Ben Saleh) A wonderful and inspired message here. How many times some catch the...
  August 1st, 2024 07:48
• Dance of Ambiguity (Gray0328) A enlightened view of sexuality and in fact any differences that we hold...
  August 1st, 2024 07:44
• Mystery Tunnel (Tony36) We all face that tunnel every day and at every choice sometimes we take it...
  August 1st, 2024 07:41
• Middle feast (2781) Taking this from a different view I see man as bringing on his own defeat....
  August 1st, 2024 07:40
• On Hearing the Sea Gulls (Tom Dylan) Nostalgic in its feeling and yet upbeat. Wonderful memories of the past...
  August 1st, 2024 07:38
• people write poetry (Jim56) So true poetry is a great way to organize thoughts, learn to express...
  August 1st, 2024 05:56
• MY ADDICTION (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Addictions can be dangerous. A most interesting write.
  August 1st, 2024 05:54
• I\'m Watching (Maplespal) Kind of creepy and I was waiting for the punch line of it being an animal...
  August 1st, 2024 05:53
• Condemned To A Life of Tragedy (M.M.) Jaded is the word. And yes I too am such. It is hard not to be in a world...
  August 1st, 2024 05:51
• Just Me, Half a Love Song and An Idiopathic Itch (Neville) This seemed indeed a love song Neville. But then I think of all poems as a...
  August 1st, 2024 05:46
• CONFESSION (Akhilausman) Pain is evident in this write and it spills over into each line with the...
  August 1st, 2024 05:42
• A FUNNY FAREWELL (Angela) Things do not make us. A great write with a message that people need to...
  August 1st, 2024 05:39
• Parking Lot Thoughts (Cocamedo) Sweet and cute this poem makes use of great imagery to create its mood....
  August 1st, 2024 05:37
• Out Loud (Introverted Sage) A story replete with imagery. Very nice
  August 1st, 2024 05:35
• DREAM (Akhilausman) A feeling of loss in this poem that resounds with fear. Learning to swim...
  August 1st, 2024 05:32
• Morning\'s Embrace (Dev Parth) So bright and fresh it gives hope and puts a smile on the day. Wonderful
  August 1st, 2024 05:30
• Substrate2 (John Prophet) I get the feel of a poetic 0 1 poetic code a binomial system of rapid...
  August 1st, 2024 05:28
• An hour before a vintage midnight! (Framed Mirror) The bud of a flower can be beautiful in its youth but needs to bloom to...
  August 1st, 2024 05:25
• Chained Love (Satishverma) many messages sent in discreet stanzas some of questions. Each deserves...
  August 1st, 2024 05:23
• I admire the sway of the Caribbean Sea (Rrodriguez) Beautiful imagery in this descriptive piece. I have been there and it...
  August 1st, 2024 05:21
• Hoisted Into The Open (Sydney Zane) Most intriguing in its wording and rhyme. It feels mystical in its nature.
  August 1st, 2024 05:19