Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Few cast the die (Muse of Calliope)
Lovely! a fave
July 20th, 2025 17:00 - A fable (Mourgana of the Fey)
Perhaps it does indeed. In this world of humans happiness seems but an...
July 20th, 2025 15:25 - Lost (Bella Shepard)
Would, could, should, might, wished, wanted words that never were...
July 20th, 2025 15:20 - Lost.. (David Prestigiacomo)
A poem of love and passion as well as wishes. Nicely done
July 20th, 2025 15:15 - Scars you chose not to see (Molly Delaney)
Anger runs through this poem. Anger toward others and self. Feelings of...
July 20th, 2025 13:20 - Don\'t fly (Sharvi)
As a desire so common to children and adults this poem seems a metaphor as...
July 20th, 2025 13:17 - The grief I could not set down (Samuel)
A tragedy carried onward as a weight in life. Sad this poem is a journey...
July 20th, 2025 13:15 - Twilight without end... (Sree)
The vacillation between sight and blindness between dark and light make...
July 20th, 2025 13:12 - Blessings Unused (Kurt Philip Behm)
The untaken road the choice not made the action never acted on time past...
July 20th, 2025 13:06 - Things I Had to Give Up to Survive (Malo J)
A tragic poem of sadness and hurt. It leaves a feeling of pain that needs...
July 20th, 2025 13:05 - The Fake Meeting (Ksey_Gan)
A poem of waiting for the other to react. Nicely done
July 20th, 2025 13:01 - Ghost (MatPie)
This poem sends feelings of pain and unanswered questions of loss and...
July 20th, 2025 12:59 - Baby Bird (Shahla Latifi)
Sadness and loss in this reflective poem. I sometimes wonder if we can...
July 20th, 2025 12:57 - Open Hands, Full Heart (GeekSusie)
A most beautiful message sent in such tender and light words where a gift...
July 20th, 2025 12:54 - Trepidation (Keeter C)
Well expressed the fear of falling basophobia akin to acrophobia many...
July 20th, 2025 12:52 - The woman of my dreams (Musdeenthoughts)
We all have images of what our love should be, look like, act like and yes...
July 20th, 2025 12:48 - And So It Goes (Eugene S.)
I hear not just passing memories and thoughts but also a train leading to...
July 20th, 2025 12:45 - Liberation (Fränz Müller)
A most interesting poem that speaks in reality but also in metaphor. What...
July 20th, 2025 12:42 - Untitled (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
A poem of feeling not understood and worse that others think that they...
July 20th, 2025 12:39 - Natures Crime (RSM0812)
Cryptic, a puzzle well written with a most interesting rhyme scheme it...
July 20th, 2025 12:35 - Generation X: Life As I Know It (2025) (Aurora Mizutani)
Clever, nicely written with good pacing and continuity it sends a positive...
July 20th, 2025 12:33 - TH CURSE (Saswati das)
There is no scarier demond that the one inside. I too take comfort in...
July 20th, 2025 12:31 - when autumn comes around (Jim56)
A beautiful picture painted here Jim. Very nicely done in good rhyme
July 20th, 2025 12:28 - Talking to them (Maplespal)
Loss can drive one to madness and although I talk to myself and nature it...
July 20th, 2025 12:27 - Tango in Durango (Tony Grannell)
Easily a song and I can hear the melody a happy and raucous one at that...
July 20th, 2025 12:14 - Go (Tony36)
I can feel this one from my past and its desire still calls to me. Very...
July 20th, 2025 12:09 - Epiclesis (Tristan Robert Lange)
To blend old form and format with new thought and images well done my...
July 20th, 2025 12:08 - weekend unleashed (Arqios)
(Dusk spills its pink confetti across corrugated tin, ) a great line...
July 20th, 2025 12:06 - Dispensations of Grace (ElizabethMoroz)
A modern poetic book of Revelations? Scepticism, Irony and disenchantment...
July 20th, 2025 12:00 - Clever Guest (Priya Tomar)
Magnificently worded, fine rhyme, good meter, nice flow. A brain teaser....
July 20th, 2025 11:55 - A Factotum\'s Call (Gray0328)
Intricate word weaving in this poem rhyme and meter melt into a blended...
July 20th, 2025 04:19 - UNSEEN TEARS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Sad, tragic, loss, pain, regret all these come to mind with this poem. A...
July 20th, 2025 04:17 - Broken Since Beginning (Shivansh)
Poetically beautiful, realistically tragic, emotionally painful. Very...
July 20th, 2025 04:14 - Motionless voyager (Lorenz)
(On the pier a white shadow
will wait ...
Marriage of sun and silence...
July 20th, 2025 04:11 - Unwept Goodbye (Haleyalexis)
Normally such topics I ignore but there are exceptions to every rule and...
July 20th, 2025 04:07 - Why should I read their books, (Devender Kumar)
A reality and a metaphor as well. Nicely stated the issue of...
July 20th, 2025 04:01 - The Reset (Sunflowersinrain)
A most interesting set of analogies in this poem. Nicely written
July 20th, 2025 03:59 - Ghost and Puppy (Vanna)
Now this one in metaphor has to be thought about to be understood and even...
July 20th, 2025 03:57 - The Echo Chamber (Samuel)
This poem is well written in narrative form. It tells the story clearly in...
July 20th, 2025 03:53 - Rather than talking to walls - (Amy Michelle Mosier)
This poem speaks to me with great word selection in a topic dear to my...
July 20th, 2025 03:49 - Is it funny? (Orchidee)
What is worse Orchi is when the people you thought were laughing at your...
July 20th, 2025 03:43 - Live For Today 2. (Goldfinch60)
A truism Andy nicely said and good advice as well
July 20th, 2025 03:38 - For Poetrys not enough (Kevin Hulme)
Doing is understanding. To know something you must live it. Well said
July 19th, 2025 18:41 - HER (Musdeenthoughts)
A pledge in a poem of love. Nicely written
July 19th, 2025 18:40 - 51: Monologue (Alex PB)
A poem about the beginning, ending and inbetween of relationships. It...
July 19th, 2025 18:39 - Decide (Sassy Lou)
Words in this poem, tell of a person where talk is cheap. It is hard to...
July 19th, 2025 18:35 - Distance (MatPie)
Astral projection comes to mind where the astral body travels through...
July 19th, 2025 16:11 - Night Haunting. (Baker)
A ghost story in a poem. Nicely written with dark shadows
July 19th, 2025 14:32 - To be Dylan\'s Voice / A Generation\'s Voice (Gaurav Gurung)
Indeed the voice of the century. Nobel winner in poetry it is his verse...
July 19th, 2025 13:20 - Rebirthed In Light (Kurt Philip Behm)
The message well sent with the mirror turned to the wall. Nicely done
July 19th, 2025 13:17 - Beginnings (Keeter C)
Sad but no one reads anymore, no one can spell, grammar is poor, why...
July 19th, 2025 13:15 - Lemme Get This Straight: I Hafta Live WHERE? (Cheeky Missy)
Wow! what a coincidence I was just watching a Katherine Hepburn film and...
July 19th, 2025 13:13 - Understood (Amethyste)
Ah such pleasure there is in that. Seldom experienced unfortunately. Well...
July 19th, 2025 11:52 - The Song of Russianт Ace-Pilots. after Alex Fatianoff (Ksey_Gan)
A whimsical and fun read that puts romance on the burner. Love is free and...
July 19th, 2025 11:04 - Use that brain cell or three (Orchidee)
Orchi a great write we have all suffered the plight. A poem too cryptic to...
July 19th, 2025 11:00 - I DON\'T WANT TO SAY GOODBYE (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
A poem of all the yesterdays. Nicely done as a tribute to the past. A...
July 19th, 2025 10:52 - I Got my Childhood Back (Malo J)
A poem of recognition that one can not return to the past nor can it be...
July 19th, 2025 09:21 - Abandoned Love.. (David Prestigiacomo)
A write of a wish that takes flesh and an illusion that becomes one\'s...
July 19th, 2025 09:18 - The House Nobody visits (Shivansh)
One must ask why. A poem that leaves the reader with as many questions as...
July 19th, 2025 09:15 - Smile (RSM0812)
A smile will carry you farther than a frown. A lovely write
July 19th, 2025 08:28 - Life has been a slow crucifixion (EvenwheniLie)
Rap like this poem rocks but with a dark and bumpy road. Well done
July 19th, 2025 08:25 - The void (Tony36)
A poem of the unknown, that vast and mysterious place where fear reigns...
July 19th, 2025 07:17 - Code (Fränz Müller)
Strong words in a powerful poem of past insult and pain. Well written
July 19th, 2025 07:15 - 3 Lopakhin\'s Reflection (Arqios)
Nostalgic and tender this poem speaks to the soul of the past and what it...
July 19th, 2025 06:45 - Guiding Light of Affection (JAINESH.D)
A most beautiful poem about different aspects of love and its giving...
July 19th, 2025 05:48 - robin in my garden (Jim56)
It is funny how over time animals mayu grow accustomed to our behaviors...
July 19th, 2025 05:46 - 3 texts (Maplespal)
The first one touched me particularly with a sense of tender longing. Most...
July 19th, 2025 05:44 - Pain Reliever (Anthony Hanible)
This poem in cryptic verse wends a winding road as is the road of love...
July 19th, 2025 05:42 - When Souls Forgot How Love Used To Breathe and Feel.... (Cirawrites01)
This poem addresses questions but leaves as many as it asks. Nicely
July 19th, 2025 05:40 - FOUNTAIN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Is anything real indeed. Great metaphor in this piece that speaks to the...
July 19th, 2025 05:35 - Man on a Barstool (Tony Grannell)
Tony this poem has a rambling feel as if it were a the life of one making...
July 19th, 2025 05:32 - I Miss The Grass (Brooke Snyder)
A most beautiful metaphor that carries throughout the poem. Well written...
July 19th, 2025 05:24 - Tears In The Crowds (ElizabethMoroz)
A poem of protest and the absurdities of the population. Too many people I...
July 19th, 2025 05:20 - The Bloom Spring Forgot (Priya Tomar)
Continued reassurances from nature over being what one is. A wonderful...
July 19th, 2025 05:14 - The Multitudes Necessary (Steve Goldenfort)
Cleverly worded in rather cryptic symbolism it weaves its message. Nicely...
July 19th, 2025 05:11 - AnalysisByQwen2.5Plus AI-Volume 3-BananaTrees-2Feb2025 (Soman Ragavan)
Very informative in that I live around bananas and have just planted...
July 19th, 2025 05:09 - It’s Aways Been This Way (Ladywithaquill)
I hear the resentment, the anger, the resolve at feelings of inequity in...
July 19th, 2025 04:45 - Goodnight thoughts (Brynlee)
Nicely worded it feels peaceful. Well done.
July 19th, 2025 04:34 - Whispers in the Fog – Tenerife, 1977 (Brian Otucho)
Poignant given past events. Haunting and sad the remembrance, a pome a...
July 19th, 2025 04:33 - Password Day. (Goldfinch60)
Very good Gold I would have done the same thing. Another fun read.
July 19th, 2025 04:26 - The Day No One Asked (Vanna)
A world that moves too fast to care where social distance is growing by...
July 19th, 2025 04:24 - Fishtown Kids (Joan Reese)
Tough times not noticed by the children that found it normal and even fun...
July 18th, 2025 20:35 - Over the Quiet Bridge (GeekSusie)
Very nicely worded this poem had good meter and flow as well. Very nice
July 18th, 2025 20:33 - If This Ever Ends (Ladywithaquill)
A poem that talks to a hope that someone that walked away from the...
July 18th, 2025 18:38 - Be my june (Nandu sri)
Some really good lines (Walk with me where rivers seem to dream,) very...
July 18th, 2025 17:02 - Never know (Sree)
It is most true that we really know nothing and although we think so you...
July 18th, 2025 16:58 - Mesmerized (Princesslove)
Good rhyme flows through this love poem. Nicely done
July 18th, 2025 16:53 - Red Passion (Mark The Phenomenon)
Clever and well written. Nicely done
July 18th, 2025 14:43 - Silk (Amethyste)
Beautiful, soft and smooth
July 18th, 2025 14:40 - Man, Fear No Strength -By Isaiah Ogedegbe (Isaiah Ogedegbe)
Some great lines in this write, some with wisdom and some with vitriol a...
July 18th, 2025 14:39 - Cry for help (Chitrangada)
A cry for help comes through strong in this poem. Know there is always...
July 18th, 2025 13:06 - I\'m not angry by Alexander Blokk (Ksey_Gan)
A poetically stated theme of infidelity kept secret by perpetrator and...
July 18th, 2025 12:58 - Colonel Marshmallow (Steve Goldenfort)
A well written and fun poem of a relationship between a dog and person.
July 18th, 2025 11:51 - Mindfully Eating (Malo J)
Logic and wisdom in a short story and poem. Nicely stated
July 18th, 2025 11:49 - Permission to thrive (Hzugman)
A deeply philosophical write that is so true. Wonderful and a fave
July 18th, 2025 11:43 - How they play (Baker)
A lovely poem of man\'s best friend, loyal protector and companion. Well...
July 18th, 2025 11:41 - City Girl Blues (Fränz Müller)
Dark and sad this poem speaks of loss and death. Very well written and a...
July 18th, 2025 11:39 - Fantasia (Kurt Philip Behm)
A mystery almost religious this poem speaks of a resurrection.
July 18th, 2025 11:37 - Unlearning Touch (Nami)
Love unrequited is a most difficult thing to deal with. A great write of...
July 18th, 2025 11:24 - Inexpressible (Muse of Calliope)
Clever rhyme and meter in this poem nicely done
July 18th, 2025 09:55
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