Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Shellf Life (MDStone)
Clever title and the poem itself is very nicely written with rhyme and...
April 10th, 2025 03:43 - socks (Lunarchloedip)
Cute and at the same time deeply empathetic. A great message and metaphor....
April 9th, 2025 19:53 - Let Me Pt. 2 (Alex PB)
Very sweet and tender. A love poem. Very nice
April 9th, 2025 19:52 - Icarus Wanted it All (Thomas W Case)
A wonderful myth that preaches a moral set forth in this poem. Very nice
April 9th, 2025 17:36 - How to become a Star (Somoine)
A most wonderful message in poetic form. Very nice
April 9th, 2025 15:10 - little me (Xqw)
Poetically written this tells its story. Very nice a fave
April 9th, 2025 15:08 - watchtower (NinjaGirl)
A psychological understanding cast in metaphor so well constructed. Line...
April 9th, 2025 15:05 - Femme Fatale (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
History of perfume? Fun read.
April 9th, 2025 13:19 - Prayer (Ksey_Gan)
Clever wording with rhyme.
April 9th, 2025 13:15 - The dreaded list (Hzugman)
Clever rhyme here. This fits the truth as we learn more we find out how...
April 9th, 2025 13:13 - keep some things to yourself (Gray0328)
Proper trust to proper individuals not all trust is equal. Very nice Gray
April 9th, 2025 11:43 - Wednesday Musing ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
Two good ones another set of great verses
April 9th, 2025 11:42 - Eggs over rice (Demar Desu)
Another good haiku well done my friend.
April 9th, 2025 11:40 - The world\'s greatest actress (Pineapple_pizza018)
A wonderful tribute well done
April 9th, 2025 11:39 - Nice (Badjanah)
Sad tone to this poem. Poetically said.
April 9th, 2025 11:34 - Fragile (Raye)
Deeply psychological this poem delves into the heart of emotions and...
April 9th, 2025 09:37 - Dread Day (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A dark poem that shows good rhyme and flow. We at times feel it near and...
April 9th, 2025 09:35 - Never Ending Rhyme (Sunshine777)
True love never fades although it may transform. A first person poem that...
April 9th, 2025 08:47 - The Gun Against My Head (Anthony Hanible)
Apparent suicide a crime that used to carry the death penalty. A dark...
April 9th, 2025 08:44 - Uroboros (Lorenz)
A most wonderful reflection on the unending circle. Love and life from...
April 9th, 2025 08:41 - The broken heart cafe (Tony36)
Oh not for eternity I hope. A sad poem of loss and pain that paints a dark...
April 9th, 2025 08:38 - Ritualize (Libellule)
For its wonderful rhyme a fave. The journey is felt in this poem and it...
April 9th, 2025 08:36 - Alone I think (Maplespal)
Nicely rhymed and composed this poem speaks with quiet loneliness and...
April 9th, 2025 08:33 - Golden Rose (RSM0812)
A poem with such a common subject yet so unique. It grows as the poem...
April 9th, 2025 08:31 - The Pecking (Tristan Robert Lange)
I remember my first typewriter a black Royal that persecuted me with typos...
April 9th, 2025 08:27 - ups and downs (Jim56)
Carpe diem my friend. A lovely write Jim
April 9th, 2025 05:08 - The Distance (Mottakeenur Rehman)
The very philosophy of this is poetic or maybe the poetic nature of these...
April 9th, 2025 05:07 - Jazz ballerina (Reynaldo Casison)
A very few lines that contain a myriad of images and meanings. In its...
April 9th, 2025 05:05 - Reckoning (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A sense of power is given off by this poem and with it a sense of...
April 9th, 2025 05:00 - ATTIC (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The mood is cast in a most haunting way where images are used to trigger...
April 9th, 2025 04:59 - Into The Spotlight. (Poetic Licence)
A great play on words and metaphor as well. You may have to be careful of...
April 9th, 2025 04:55 - windswept smiles (Arqios)
Full of forgotten images of youth and past days. I was most intrigued with...
April 9th, 2025 04:53 - Inversion (Mutley Ravishes)
Deep thoughts of an addicting nature where not only substances but...
April 9th, 2025 04:48 - A Hole - Pain Through The Brain (Mad Prophetess)
I love the line (I woke up in the mirror) this poem is full of surreal...
April 9th, 2025 04:43 - I want to break free (Poetaldo)
Abuse is not warranted for what ever reason. A strong poem of acceptance...
April 9th, 2025 04:41 - Nothing more, nothing less (Pukur)
A most powerful poem of loss that is not a loss and a separation that took...
April 9th, 2025 04:39 - i want to come... (Dimpy)
A most lovely poem of giving. I particularly liked the last stanza that...
April 9th, 2025 04:33 - Croquet Fever. (Goldfinch60)
A poem that calms like an old friend or a sunny Sunday afternoon. It feels...
April 9th, 2025 04:30 - the keening woman (Mourgana of the Fey)
Like sparks off a fire brief flashes glow and then extinguish into...
April 9th, 2025 04:22 - Normalcy (MDStone)
What a great question What is normalcy. Beautiful images in this poem that...
April 8th, 2025 20:55 - The Forge (E.J. Waling)
Indeed alchemy is a great analogy of science and technology. Well worded...
April 8th, 2025 20:50 - And No One Noticed The Drowning (Rawaneigh.99)
This poem has a sad tone of apology for who one is and a search for...
April 8th, 2025 19:27 - Beneath the surface (Nicole Pritchard)
A powerful statement of support and solidarity. Very nicely worded it...
April 8th, 2025 17:32 - To The One I Cannot Lose (Rosiii ;))
Fear of being left alone is powerfully expressed in this poem. Very poetic...
April 8th, 2025 16:38 - No way out (Jodie)
Tired of life\'s routine this poem speaks of wishing for a slower life....
April 8th, 2025 16:37 - Mr. Earls (MKS)
Clever word usage in this poem that twists the meaning and gives a fresh...
April 8th, 2025 16:35 - Read Carefully (Anthony Hanible)
Much violence fills these lines and where there is violence there is...
April 8th, 2025 16:29 - Let\'s Just Say It IS, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy)
The first two your foods stirred up an appetite tremendous, the last two...
April 8th, 2025 16:27 - Don\'t Do It (Alex PB)
Revelations of what a person is and still expectations. A poem that is...
April 8th, 2025 13:40 - Incident in a restaurant by Vlad Visotski (Ksey_Gan)
A poem that follows the form of a bar conversation with one that has one...
April 8th, 2025 13:38 - Look at it these ways (Hzugman)
Such good advice in poetic form lovely
April 8th, 2025 13:33 - A good life (Maplespal)
Every one has their definition of what the good life is. A good write
April 8th, 2025 12:59 - Toxic (Tkatie118)
Sex will entice any promise and exact any price. Promises of regret. A sad...
April 8th, 2025 12:57 - Rejoice.... (Orchidee)
Another poetic musical gem Orchi. A lovely write
April 8th, 2025 12:53 - Higher Powers (Kurt Philip Behm)
Clever and well worded gems of wisdom in this poem
April 8th, 2025 12:51 - the way You love me (Gray0328)
A wonderful line that love is to be given as water is freely without the...
April 8th, 2025 12:50 - Devil Is Already Dead (Sunshine777)
A poem that requires thought and pondering. Most interesting.
April 8th, 2025 10:57 - Clock (Catlover01)
Time distorts as we watch it and is either faster or slower depending upon...
April 8th, 2025 10:55 - Amicus ad aras (Poet\'s Dream)
A message nicely said.
April 8th, 2025 09:35 - Blind (Tristan Robert Lange)
Now this poem not only speaks in great metaphor but with a very clever...
April 8th, 2025 09:33 - Hope (Pineapple_pizza018)
I hear the emotion in this poem. It speaks with power.
April 8th, 2025 08:48 - Miles to go (_jyotsna27)
A write most all of us can identify with. Very nicely done
April 8th, 2025 08:16 - The Writer\'s Labyrinth ([email protected])
A poem that speaks for the writer and we have all felt what it expresses....
April 8th, 2025 07:37 - I\'m Sorry (Tony36)
A sad recognition or responsibility for past actions leaving a sense of...
April 8th, 2025 07:10 - For Andy McKay (Rest in Peace) (AuburnScribbler)
A beautiful tribute to an honored friend and person who brightened the way...
April 8th, 2025 07:08 - Rose (RSM0812)
A timeless metaphor here blooms fresh. So nicely crafted it like the rose...
April 8th, 2025 07:05 - A wild rose (Kaz)
This is lovely. Delicate and sweet like the scent of the flower.
April 8th, 2025 07:01 - Azalea (Gaurav Gurung)
Amazing lines woven into this beautiful poem. It has an Eastern feel as if...
April 8th, 2025 07:01 - Why Is Nine Upside Down? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Clever, this poem delves deep into the issue of codified education and the...
April 8th, 2025 06:26 - Liminal (Libellule)
Beautifully worded this poem has some marvelous lines and the metaphor is...
April 8th, 2025 06:23 - nautical compass (Mourgana of the Fey)
A snapshot of the beach. I have been there many times in reality and mind....
April 8th, 2025 06:21 - Fernando: temporary experience and emotions of a former colleague 2019-2021 (Swarovski20)
A work with a sudden beginning and sudden end that leaves me wondering...
April 8th, 2025 06:18 - Single Malt Scotch (Garth Rakumakoe)
A poem that feels so classic but is brought to the modern day. A...
April 8th, 2025 06:10 - WHILE I CRY (DEBIH MARTIN)
Passion or infatuation is often mistaken for love and as it melts it...
April 8th, 2025 05:12 - lovebird love (Jim56)
Such a wonderful picture you paint in this poem of love.
April 8th, 2025 05:09 - on a night... (Dimpy)
A poem that leaves feelings of hanging hopes and desires unfulfilled and a...
April 8th, 2025 05:07 - I do (Amethyste)
Erotic, sensuous, sexual all three in one short piece, not necessarily the...
April 8th, 2025 04:34 - MY BURNING TOWER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A metaphor here of a burning tower. A guide, a passion what ever the...
April 8th, 2025 04:32 - Without My True Love (Ajon4wheels)
Missing someone is a difficult thing. This poem does well in expressing...
April 8th, 2025 04:30 - A story of the servants who don\'t serve. (Blissed-secret)
A lesson given in parable form poetic and wise. Nicely done.
April 8th, 2025 04:28 - Fireflies waltz (Reynaldo Casison)
Romantic and beautiful in its wording this poem showers wonderful images...
April 8th, 2025 04:26 - A Thousand Years (Lewisgale mental hospital)
A poem that could be a song with chorus and all. Nicely worded
April 8th, 2025 04:23 - Burp (Boot)
The transient nature of relationships comes through in this poem. Very...
April 8th, 2025 04:21 - Tailspin (Baker)
The complexities of relationships in this poem and how we can not go back...
April 8th, 2025 04:18 - Passwords (Chris Duffy)
That is what humor is about, something that everyone can identify with....
April 8th, 2025 04:15 - Racing Thoughts (MDStone)
Racing thoughts well depicted in this poem well penned. Anxiety in action....
April 8th, 2025 04:11 - as she was walking out the door (Jon Nakapalau)
Well formed this poem was clever in shape to come to the final point in a...
April 8th, 2025 04:08 - On the Road To Insanity. (Poetic Licence)
Is it not more insane to tell a person that they are insane because they...
April 8th, 2025 04:06 - Vilvoorde: wash (Arqios)
With each reading the poem becomes less cryptic. Sheets in the wind...
April 8th, 2025 03:58 - Lessons Learned In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Words of truth and at times a truth we do not want to see or accept....
April 8th, 2025 03:46 - AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!! (Demar Desu)
The war cry of the common man. A fun read.
April 8th, 2025 03:41 - A Shadowy kiss (Pukur)
Quite the story in rhyme with a moral. Nicely done.
April 7th, 2025 20:12 - Kundagarten (Mutley Ravishes)
A poem that seems a magical chant, it seems that I have missed the key....
April 7th, 2025 19:31 - When I Figure That Out.... (Cheeky Missy)
Ah sonnets of weather, squirls and groundhogs a seasonal composition....
April 7th, 2025 19:02 - Kindness my Ass (Thomas W Case)
Very nice Thomas great write
April 7th, 2025 18:42 - Oh you smart-assed worms (Hzugman)
Clever I liked the humor. Very nice
April 7th, 2025 16:23 - shadows (Thoughtless)
A beautiful stanza of love. Here the imagination runs. Very nice
April 7th, 2025 16:22 - A mother like mine (Pineapple_pizza018)
A mother\'s love goes beyond poetry. A most lovely recognition of a...
April 7th, 2025 16:20 - How strange! (Hzugman)
How strangeness births itself and grows more comfortable as it sits in its...
April 7th, 2025 15:02 - Cold Love (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
How often we allow pride to keep us from expressing what we feel. A lovely...
April 7th, 2025 14:31
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