Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- lifelight (Sheta)
Full of images, visual, auditory, and tactile it sparkles with life. Very...
August 1st, 2024 05:17 - Distance (Sami mulaj)
Be that homeland geographical, emotional, interpersonal they are all...
August 1st, 2024 05:15 - Waves (Shadowbones)
Love the rapid short format of this poem. It speaks as it runs.
August 1st, 2024 05:13 - A trout tale.... (Orchidee)
You keep this up you are going to have to post that picture. A fun read my...
August 1st, 2024 04:47 - Songs Of My Youth (Goldfinch60)
Familiar songs, familiar times. A most fun read Gold. Thanks for the...
August 1st, 2024 04:44 - Four Children (Dan Williams)
To have that insight when that young is remarkable. Nicely composed it...
August 1st, 2024 04:40 - ~> It Was, A Female Fly (Thad Wilk)
Most fun to read. The length was right, the timing was good and the...
August 1st, 2024 04:33 - Present wedded bliss ain\'t no touchstone... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A farmer\'s almanac for planting or sowing wild oats. Most interesting
August 1st, 2024 04:28 - The Machine Returns (Tristan Robert Lange)
The Machine, the man, big brother yes I feel the angst and dread circling...
July 31st, 2024 16:37 - As a mortal man of threescore and five years... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
And so a Trump card is played as another Bides his time. A most...
July 31st, 2024 16:34 - A Life Frequently I Envision. (I.J.)
Questions never answered because they were never asked. The unknown works...
July 31st, 2024 16:29 - JAZZ IS LIFE (live) (Bobby O)
You mentioned several well know names that I love. I love jaz, not all...
July 31st, 2024 16:26 - Jim and Charity’s Wedding 2 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A serial full of love and intrigue. I\'ll check in for the next episode.
July 31st, 2024 16:23 - WE ARE ONE (Magzzbaby)
Poignant, deep and a sense of self awareness and understanding. I hear no...
July 31st, 2024 16:19 - Perfect Integration (Cassie58)
A beautiful Haiku. My favorite Haikus are about nature and this is one.
July 31st, 2024 16:05 - Sound Bites 7-30-2024 (Kurt Philip Behm)
A full series of great shorts that each ignite thoughtfulness and...
July 31st, 2024 12:09 - Returning the Key (Gray0328)
Intriguing and well rhymed this poem has an old flavor to it but a modern...
July 31st, 2024 12:05 - unjust injustice (NinjaGirl)
The saddest of injustices is that against the innocent and few are more...
July 31st, 2024 12:03 - In the Hush of Summer\'s Fading Light (Mr. Poetic 243)
Well written rhyme and the flow of this pome pulls one onward. A fun...
July 31st, 2024 12:01 - Sorrow (MendedFences27)
Just like when all the wood is burned all that is left is ashes. Sad...
July 31st, 2024 11:59 - While The Good Shepherds Grieve (ADarkerMind)
A delicious display of images like pieces from a puzzle
July 31st, 2024 11:57 - It\'s a Date (Thoughtless)
A fun read. Nicely written.
July 31st, 2024 11:56 - Journal Entry 03 (The Great Kateri)
Wonderful thought and message. Short and to the point.
July 31st, 2024 11:54 - A letter home (Kenny O\'Donnell)
A message that could apply for any war. Nicely written.
July 31st, 2024 11:53 - ~> A Troglodyte Named Zog! (Thad Wilk)
Try try again and so technology got its start. Fun read
July 31st, 2024 11:51 - Grey (Char777)
Sad and gray in its confusion clouds of melancholy nicely written
July 31st, 2024 11:49 - Ballad of The Lost (SacredSoul)
Nicely written it leaves a mournful feeling. well done
July 31st, 2024 11:47 - Position In Life (Mark The Phenomenon)
Good advice nicely done
July 31st, 2024 11:45 - Swinging Bridge (Tony36)
I\'ve walked that bridge before. A nice write with great imagery
July 31st, 2024 11:44 - Roses and Tulips (Rosita De Rose)
A poem displaying resolution nicely done
July 31st, 2024 11:42 - homeless (Jim56)
True indeed a poem that needs attention and has to be sead and read.
July 31st, 2024 06:32 - An Arguments End, Together, and Stay Within Me (Maplespal)
A most interesting compilation. Nicely stated.
July 31st, 2024 06:29 - How to (2781)
A call to God and for people to seek him
July 31st, 2024 06:25 - The Southport Tragedy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Government devils and those who put them there. A good write.
July 31st, 2024 06:23 - NATURE OR NURTURE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Well said, understood although in symbols it speaks loudly.
July 31st, 2024 06:22 - What I Know (Iyeah)
An opening of the soul to one that one feels secure with. A very nice...
July 31st, 2024 06:19 - Presence Prosperity (Orchidee)
Another great hymn marching forth with the aid of the Lord whether before...
July 31st, 2024 06:17 - Rubicon Prophecy (Beatrix M)
Sounds like I have met this person before. Some people just stand out. A...
July 31st, 2024 06:15 - A Battle With Irony (Teddy.15)
Sounds like a great vacation but not from the neighbors. No matter how far...
July 31st, 2024 06:11 - Veil of Words (EmotionsOnwhitepaper)
A story of longing for closeness and confusion over words not said. A most...
July 31st, 2024 06:06 - My Words, My Love, My Promise (Cocamedo)
A loving pledge put to rhyme and very nicely done.
July 31st, 2024 06:03 - In the Furnace (Mutley Ravishes)
Existence is the key
when you face eternity
Short and to the point with...
July 31st, 2024 06:01 - Pink Bruises (Satishverma)
Thought provoking and is sticks in the brain like an arrow.
July 31st, 2024 05:59 - xavina (Sheta)
Fantastic fantasy in this poem short but well worded and written.
July 31st, 2024 05:58 - Just a Few Thoughts on Getting Even (Neville)
I\'ve culled a lot of things in my life even poems but never thought about...
July 31st, 2024 05:37 - Heat Exhaustion. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing better than a cold beer on a hot day. Cools and relaxes. Have on...
July 31st, 2024 05:25 - Crossing The Ocean, Reaching Beyond (Young Fella)
I sense metaphor here. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 20:06 - Yours truly embarks on wild goose chase after elusive pot of gold (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Some great lines in this poem. Nicely written.
July 30th, 2024 20:00 - Walks (Miss_Dreamer)
\"only one more step and I can finally stop walking\" A line to think...
July 30th, 2024 19:58 - Keep on swinging (Hzugman)
A great motivational statement in this piece. Nicely said.
July 30th, 2024 19:55 - It\'s In Me (13LaurenD)
A good deal of self reflection in this piece. Well written
July 30th, 2024 19:54 - soak (Sixthwrites)
Symbolism runs through this piece coloring its story. Nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:52 - Cocoa Mist (Emptypot)
Vivid images that at times float and at others lay on the floor. Nicely...
July 30th, 2024 19:50 - Killing The Albatross (Petrichor of Love)
A story filled with imagery nicely written.
July 30th, 2024 19:48 - I waana scream my heart out (Shanzah)
In need of reassurance to balance the insecurity and uncertainty. Nicely...
July 30th, 2024 19:46 - Chester (PreciousGurl)
Sad and inspiring empathy for the puppy. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 19:43 - Haunting Words (Kurt Philip Behm)
\"His memories
a warden
in a prison
alone\"
A wonderful line in a poem...
July 30th, 2024 19:41 - The Biggest Lie (Gray0328)
Some great lines here with a view of life as difficult at best and...
July 30th, 2024 19:36 - Don\'t even like Oranges (Thoughtless)
Good format for the subject. Short and a bit enigmatic. nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:34 - Why do I miss you? (The Great Kateri)
A young view of love with expectations, hopes, and dreams. Nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:32 - knight (DeadRose)
Self reflective and a sense of openness that exposes the internal nicely...
July 30th, 2024 19:30 - I Remember (DREEK0)
Questions about questions in a world without answers. Philosophical in...
July 30th, 2024 19:28 - Blue Atonement (Sydney Zane)
Highly metaphoric with many vivid images
July 30th, 2024 19:26 - Poets are like stars (Sami mulaj)
\"can the universe be touched?\"
A great line and gives one pause. Loved...
July 30th, 2024 19:23 - The sweet side of love (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Nicely worded this poem has several good lines.
July 30th, 2024 19:22 - Not Fair (NinjaGirl)
Well expressed what many feel. Live is not fair, that is a human concept...
July 30th, 2024 19:20 - The Mystery of a Woman (MendedFences27)
A noir style poem in black and white. Loved those old movies. Well written
July 30th, 2024 19:18 - ~> READ MY LIPS! - Form Monotetra (Thad Wilk)
Cute and having pets in the past I have seen some of this. Loved the play...
July 30th, 2024 19:16 - Reacting to change (Shadowbones)
Life and universal truth enigmatic at best a most interesting write
July 30th, 2024 19:14 - Friends Forever (PaperFlowerFields)
Quite the discourse and interchange I liked the format that kept straight...
July 30th, 2024 19:11 - Walk on the Beach (Tony36)
The beach can be hypnotic and loved the reference to troubles coming and...
July 30th, 2024 08:20 - Who Do I Turn To? (Iyeah)
A very nice message with great wording. Well done
July 30th, 2024 08:17 - Conversing With Blake (Cassie58)
Great lines here
\"like ink blots on yellowed parchment
crows in...
July 30th, 2024 07:28 - Who am I? (Hzugman)
Nicely done.
July 30th, 2024 07:21 - ~> Palmer The Snake Charmer ~> ( Limericks ) (Thad Wilk)
Always loved limericks and this was another good one.
July 30th, 2024 07:19 - Winter Dreams (Markashley1961)
Nicely said in vivid images producing feelings of nostalgia and a longing...
July 30th, 2024 06:44 - Songs of Melancholy (Mya)
A bunch of great similes and a message that is good to hear. Nicely said
July 30th, 2024 06:43 - AN END TO IT (Twizzle48)
Well said there is nothing to fear but fear itself. Just do it.
July 30th, 2024 06:41 - lonely people (Jim56)
We are social animals and need others around us. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 06:39 - A Genuine Fake (Tom Dylan)
It reminds me or the guy that tried to sell me my father\'s stolen watch....
July 30th, 2024 06:37 - Live (Kering.karim)
A question of going on or bailing out. Sometimes cutting ones losses is...
July 30th, 2024 06:33 - My Favourite Colour Is Blue (Teddy.15)
In the US the term yellow means cowardly, also yellow ribbons were used as...
July 30th, 2024 06:31 - Beautiful Thing, Be My Companion, and With You (Maplespal)
In a couple of your poems now you have taken this method of incorporating...
July 30th, 2024 06:28 - So what (2781)
A poem of faith and belief. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 06:23 - Wanderer\'s Dream (Dev Parth)
Beautiful imagery throughout this piece and the metaphor is well stated....
July 30th, 2024 06:21 - Books (Goldfinch60)
Gold you have addressed a modern chink in the armor of society. Books are...
July 30th, 2024 06:19 - Wild and Ready (Tristan Robert Lange)
A call to action this poem invokes paradoxical lines to emphasize why...
July 30th, 2024 06:16 - Safety Sure (Orchidee)
Another nice hymn Orchi. Always nice to feel like someone has your back.
July 30th, 2024 06:14 - The Weatherman (Dan Williams)
Ah yes the weatherman modern day fortune teller. Loved the poem and its...
July 30th, 2024 06:12 - Guilty But Free as A Bird (Neville)
Neville here master of words I bow to your ability to paint a work of art...
July 30th, 2024 06:09 - I\'m Your Starlight (Santajah Douglass)
A beautiful offer of love and companionship set in the backing of new...
July 30th, 2024 06:01 - If You Deem One Worthy Of Such Reprieve (Sydney Zane)
Written in a most classical style reminiscent of ancient Greek poetry but...
July 30th, 2024 05:58 - When the Light Came (Thomas W Case)
Great images here spoken straight out of the mouth of truth and the common...
July 30th, 2024 05:55 - My play (Manslick)
I think you dodged them well done
July 29th, 2024 18:15 - \"Everything happens for a reason\" Yeah, right. (NinjaGirl)
So that you would no longer be nine and so you could become eleven. This...
July 29th, 2024 18:10 - A Torn Heart (Mompu)
This is a common feeling amongst people and it seems that you can not find...
July 29th, 2024 18:09 - THIS IS NOT A DREAM (Gloria Denise)
The dissonance between one who cares and another who doesn\'t is a...
July 29th, 2024 18:06 - Longing (Angela)
A tale well penned with wonderful rhyme that reads smoothly and tells its...
July 29th, 2024 15:51 - Knowing vs Not Knowing (_jyotsna27)
Deeply philosophical it speaks to the unknown through the known. Well done
July 29th, 2024 15:39 - shell of this home (Anemoia)
Sad and powerful in its images and words. We all leave home at some point....
July 29th, 2024 15:37
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