Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• She Lay In Her Bed (Bella Shepard) This may be a true story but also serves as a metaphor for the passage of...
  July 29th, 2024 15:35
• White Thursday (Davmor73) Some great lines in this poem with wonderful images and a message
  July 29th, 2024 15:32
• A Quiet Transformation (Prasun Goswami) Change the only thing that can be counted on. A good write about a...
  July 29th, 2024 15:29
• You\'ll never know (Hzugman) The best of advice and a good write.
  July 29th, 2024 13:36
• Friendliness equals self sustaining positive feedback fruit loop (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Enigmatic lines and words in metaphor and humor some with meaning others...
  July 29th, 2024 13:35
• She had already cried out...But no one listened (AmIAPoet-QuestionMark) A powerful message, dark and sad as a commentary on society. Nicely
  July 29th, 2024 13:32
• Are We Animals? (Mark The Phenomenon) Interesting questions that many ask. All depends on definitions and...
  July 29th, 2024 13:30
• Dreams sometimes (Amara Carys) Dream on in beautiful and peaceful slumber. A wonderful thought and a good...
  July 29th, 2024 13:26
• From Where It Came (ADarkerMind) Enigmatic full of imagery that hides and holds the keys to meaning. A...
  July 29th, 2024 13:24
• Painted Voices (Kurt Philip Behm) This work has a very pleasing feel as the surface to a very deep meaning....
  July 29th, 2024 13:21
• A Time to Walk (Paul W Conway) A great metaphor and very nicely worded.
  July 29th, 2024 13:19
• The Ghost of The Albatross (Petrichor of Love) A great title and a brilliant tie in to the last line in the poem....
  July 29th, 2024 13:18
• Capital Punishment (AuburnScribbler) Cleverly disguised in images with ambiguous meanings this carries a...
  July 29th, 2024 13:15
• Maybe that\'s why... (Antra.sharma_)
  July 29th, 2024 13:12
• Maybe that\'s why... (Antra.sharma_) A very personal account opening up oneself is the key to being a poet....
  July 29th, 2024 13:12
• Let me breathe (Kenny O\'Donnell) Wonderfully crafted this poem dips down into the well of emotion and...
  July 29th, 2024 13:10
• Cauliflower Ears (Gray0328) A story of badges earned in life and cleverly etched in flesh as well as...
  July 29th, 2024 13:07
• Astral Expedition (Nethra) A clever and wistful metaphor with a great message buried in it. Great...
  July 29th, 2024 13:04
• Still I Know (MendedFences27) Fixation on a love written nicely in verse well done
  July 29th, 2024 10:18
• What is poetry? (Saleh Ben Saleh) A very good definition and well worded in verse. Nicely done
  July 29th, 2024 10:17
• ~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks (Thad Wilk) A fun read but I think it was porky pig that had the pot belly.
  July 29th, 2024 10:15
• First love (Blossompayal) A wonderful description of first love and its pleasures. Nicely said
  July 29th, 2024 10:12
• My old age was told, stop! (Sami mulaj) I too felt this when I became a grandfather. If I could have had...
  July 29th, 2024 10:11
• moment of bliss (Sixthwrites) What a wonderful image and metaphor set so well and framed. Loved this...
  July 29th, 2024 10:08
• I Am Unique And Alone (Mohammad younus koul) So many search for so much. A beautiful opening of one\'s heart
  July 29th, 2024 10:07
• I Am Unique And Alone (Mohammad younus koul) So many search for so much. A beautiful opening of one\'s heart
  July 29th, 2024 10:07
• Futile Rearrangement of the Surface (Mutley Ravishes) Nothing more terrifying that the imagined. Nicely stated
  July 29th, 2024 10:05
• My people (2781) Armageddon you say? A powerful peace of death and destruction. Well...
  July 29th, 2024 10:04
• Carpe Diem ! (Mya) A great message that we all should take more to heart. Nicely worded in...
  July 29th, 2024 10:01
• Peace Love Rock and Roll (Tony36) Us hippies are growing old and rock and roll has made so many changes it...
  July 29th, 2024 10:00
• a nature thankyou (Jim56) I feel this poem it fits very well with my disposition. Loved it
  July 29th, 2024 09:57
• The Silent Echoes (Kheza) Everyone loves a fool no one loves the wise they are shunned and at times...
  July 29th, 2024 09:56
• ON A RAINY AND GLOOMY RAINY DAY A LOVE DECLARATION IN FRENCH (Swarovski20) Language does not need to be a barrier by a smile we communicate all that...
  July 29th, 2024 09:53
• Let us talk (Maplespal) Loved the rhyme but loved more the presentation of life as it is some call...
  July 29th, 2024 09:51
• Between Clouds (Neville) A poem that is beautifully kind against a cloudy setting. Nicely said...
  July 29th, 2024 09:48
• Fools Gold (DREEK0) Nicely done
  July 29th, 2024 09:46
• The Last Supper (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Alister a sex magic man Anton LeVey a Satanist all the way. A great write
  July 29th, 2024 09:45
• Prayers In Perils (Orchidee) Saved from the lion pit. Scary stuff Orchi. Nicely written though.
  July 29th, 2024 09:42
• Our God (EvenwheniLie) \" sin protected by bodies are but mere sacrifices for those who wish to...
  July 29th, 2024 09:39
• Distant (PaperFlowerFields) I hear two conflicting thoughts in this piece 1. that you are to blame for...
  July 29th, 2024 09:37
• Dark void (Natalie Heisey) This poem deserves more reads. Well rhymed and thoughtfully written and...
  July 29th, 2024 09:32
• What is your Someone (Gloria Denise) Looking for that perfect person that fits one\'s needs to be desired,...
  July 29th, 2024 09:28
• Waning Moon (Satishverma) Questions that make one stop and think and then move on to the next...
  July 29th, 2024 09:26
• The Bible Says Be Honest (Sunshine777) Nature has her own rules and she is a mother too. I can hear the anger in...
  July 29th, 2024 09:24
• Beauty (Angela) A most beautiful scene well painted in words with peaceful images evoking...
  July 29th, 2024 09:19
• even in the madness (Sheta) One finds their own peace amidst any circumstance. I used to sleep lunch...
  July 29th, 2024 09:16
• The Rooster in My Neighborhood (Rrodriguez) Colorful images painted in words. I feel that I have seen this guy before....
  July 29th, 2024 09:14
• Those Days (Thoughtless) Depressing left with the smell of diapers a brown smog and the smell of...
  July 29th, 2024 06:15
• video in the mail (Gary Edward Geraci) A good story that give the feel of unity broken and new replacing the old....
  July 29th, 2024 06:13
• And I\'ll Write About That Too (Teddy.15) I too like to write from all perspectives about all things and since...
  July 29th, 2024 05:29
• Second Chance. (Goldfinch60) Inspiring and so glad you made it through not only made it but with...
  July 29th, 2024 05:25
• The Whisper Tree (Dan Williams) Anthropomorphism at its finest in an engaging story with great flow....
  July 29th, 2024 05:19
• ~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable (Thad Wilk) A most fun read and well paced for the final hook.
  July 29th, 2024 05:06
• do it for me (Maplespal) The repetitive wording and rhyme in this poem gives it power to take the...
  July 28th, 2024 06:13
• SUICIDE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Finding peace for oneself at the expense of others feelings that are left...
  July 28th, 2024 06:11
• dogs can be a friend (Jim56) Have had dogs before and it seems that their love and loyalty exceeds that...
  July 28th, 2024 06:07
• Unique is mom (Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet) A wonderful tribute to a most important person. Nicely done
  July 28th, 2024 06:05
• I Would Do it But can You Say You Will Do The Same (Santajah Douglass) A poem reflecting the turmoil in the mind over possible rejection and loss...
  July 28th, 2024 06:04
• * Why not stars?* (Antra.sharma_) I see the moon as the main course and the stars as the seasoning. Both...
  July 28th, 2024 06:01
• Scriptures (2781) A fun read of prophesies of things to come. Nice
  July 28th, 2024 06:00
• Friends With Benefits (Neville) A proposal? At this age benefits are merger and coitus interruptus is...
  July 28th, 2024 05:57
• Whispers Of The Night (Dev Parth) Avery peaceful and calming poem that is a pleasure to read.
  July 28th, 2024 05:52
• Sea Will Drag Me (Satishverma) As always enigmatic and mind twisting words that one may place their own...
  July 28th, 2024 05:45
• Evidense (Mutley Ravishes) Wonderful we have only 5 some say 6 senses and this is limiting. Reach out...
  July 28th, 2024 05:44
• Courage Within Me (Mark The Phenomenon) A good message that all should personalize and take to heart
  July 28th, 2024 05:42
• () I enjoyed the ride leaving me back where I started. Nicely done
  July 28th, 2024 05:39
• The Sky Calls (Thomas W Case) A beautiful line: \"the sky calls time doesn\'t\"
  July 28th, 2024 05:19
• ~.> Little Miss Muffet ( Parody ) (Thad Wilk) A most fun read. He should have had a check of the DNA.
  July 28th, 2024 05:13
• What Else is A Metaphor (Neville) Love is cryptic even as an anagram and meta is for anything beyond. Never...
  July 28th, 2024 05:08
• One Side of Still (Dan Williams) Simply beautiful. A simple adjustment and anthropomorphic picturing...
  July 28th, 2024 05:01
• An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound- (ADarkerMind) So many songs drift in free association, bits and pieces of memories....
  July 28th, 2024 04:57
• Forgiveness Freedom (Orchidee) So glad we are not under that old testament burnt offerings thing, not...
  July 28th, 2024 04:52
• Sleep Always Calls (Thomas W Case) Lovely, some of the best ideas come from my muse Morpheus. Nicely done
  July 28th, 2024 04:48
• Christmas In July. (Goldfinch60) Since commerce makes about fifty percent of their take at Christmas time...
  July 28th, 2024 04:43
• Incoming Tones (DREEK0) Sensuous, even sexual this poem goes deeper, deeper. Most interesting.
  July 27th, 2024 20:47
• Determination of the snail (MA-Q) Wonderful imagery in this piece with some metaphor as well. Nicely done.
  July 27th, 2024 20:45
• Love Language (The Great Kateri) A wonderful message to be good to oneself. So nicely said.
  July 27th, 2024 20:43
• El Yunque Rainforest (Rrodriguez) Beautiful in its picturesque wording I felt a part of it. It seems that I...
  July 27th, 2024 20:41
• the space in between you and i (Gloria Denise) This was very well composed with good rhyme. Nicely done.
  July 27th, 2024 20:38
• Flawed Creator (John Prophet) Don\'t want AI for God. Don\'t even want it at all, servant, slave, or...
  July 27th, 2024 20:36
• WHSIPERS OF YESTERDAY (Mompu) Heart warming and a story well told. Very nice.
  July 27th, 2024 20:34
• Fugitives (Thoughtless) Something about this caught my mind like a loose fish hook and I was...
  July 27th, 2024 20:30
• Dusk hoover ring dawn ting task of badinage... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A vent in decent but well bent. Read it over enjoyed it.
  July 27th, 2024 20:28
• The world ih her eyes (Keren) Nicely done with a question never answered. Very nice.
  July 27th, 2024 20:21
• The Arabian Stallion (Saleh Ben Saleh) All things to all men. Well worded this piece runs smoothly beginning to...
  July 27th, 2024 20:16
• Leaving Tomorrow (Kurt Philip Behm) Deeply philosophical this piece in a short few words provokes the mind....
  July 27th, 2024 20:14
• Uteruses Stretch (Gray0328) Well described in verse the physical process of conception and birth. Well...
  July 27th, 2024 20:12
• Passage (Eugene S.) This bears resemblance to something epic. Nicely said.
  July 27th, 2024 20:10
• A Smile (MendedFences27) A smile is always welcome and can change one\'s attitude from gray to...
  July 27th, 2024 20:09
• Stranger become lover (Blossompayal) Cute and romantic. It seems a proclamation of love. Nicely done
  July 27th, 2024 20:07
• NIGHT SKY (Qurrathul Ain) Well painted in words this piece poses a question that provokes a bit of...
  July 27th, 2024 20:05
• ~> This is No Lie! (Mono-rhyme) (Thad Wilk) Unsightly I say. I wouldn\'t let a small thing like that upset the night....
  July 27th, 2024 20:02
• Feminine Rage (Aneenaelzabinod) Too bad that there is a need for feminine rage. Well written it expresses...
  July 27th, 2024 19:58
• A girl I used to know (Charlotte3) A declaration of strength nicely written giving credit to God.
  July 27th, 2024 19:56
• The line (Alan R) Most interesting. how to define the line. Nicely written.
  July 27th, 2024 19:54
• sensitive (Sixthwrites) Very nicely organized this write ends where it starts and covers the...
  July 27th, 2024 19:51
• Fire pit (Tony36) Been there done that. Sounds familiar.
  July 27th, 2024 19:46
• another day (Jim56) And so is the cycle of life. They seem to melt one into the next. Yet each...
  July 27th, 2024 06:40
• Destiny of Lovers (EmaHarlan) Great imagery throughout this piece. Nicely written it paints a picture in...
  July 27th, 2024 06:38
• 3 x part of a story - \"That Night\'s Dream\" (Maplespal) Hard hitting and powerful. These evoke emotion of the human story and are...
  July 27th, 2024 06:36