Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Hanging on Love (Pop64) \"they cup the moon within its hands, the wild night it tames.\" Great...
  September 28th, 2023 11:57
• FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O) So true Bobby self respect and self love come before love or respect for...
  September 28th, 2023 05:16
• Try this for size: (Doggerel Dave) Did she do something to Fido? My dog took a piece out of me when I was...
  September 27th, 2023 20:20
• Grave, Indeed (Pop64) A definite plea of desperation and urgency. Air is number one on the...
  September 27th, 2023 12:51
• Do Shut Up Sometimes... (Orchidee) I love rambling thoughts they inspire creativity but get little done. Slow...
  September 27th, 2023 05:34
• The Death of Great Music (Teddy.15) I often wonder if they were all to live longer along with Janis Joplin,...
  September 27th, 2023 05:19
• In the Wake of a Wish (Neville) A wonderful metaphor at many levels. Every once in a while such a metaphor...
  September 26th, 2023 05:03
• The First Rose. (Goldfinch60) So true Gold, a wonderful reframing of a feeling of loss to a feeling of...
  September 26th, 2023 04:11
• Washed Away (Teddy.15) I\'ve heard of lightning striking, whirlwind relationships and love going...
  September 25th, 2023 13:50
• of Wisdom #2 (L. B. Mek) There is always one, I know because I have been there. I was the one who...
  September 25th, 2023 05:46
• Such A Beautiful Game. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful point. Competition does not mean animosity but instead...
  September 24th, 2023 05:23
• Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave) Not sure what to say. It could change my life forever then I would have...
  September 24th, 2023 05:19
• Covenant Comfort (Orchidee) Forgiveness yes. God knows I need it. Good write Orchi
  September 23rd, 2023 07:00
• None Of Us Would Be Poets. (Teddy.15) Wonderful observations leading to an important question that like other...
  September 23rd, 2023 05:59
• Manifesto or Look Beyond the Name. (Doggerel Dave) I echo this Dave and feel myself a rebel against all conformity for...
  September 22nd, 2023 06:32
• Music To Normality. (Goldfinch60) Been there done that. And every time it has inspired me and I have never...
  September 22nd, 2023 04:48
• Life Is Like A Song (Teddy.15) Interesting thoughts that run through all of our minds from time to time....
  September 21st, 2023 11:41
• Yesterday Came (Pop64) Clever and a good message. Being open to opportunity and making the best...
  September 20th, 2023 12:20
• Three Palms (Doggerel Dave) Can identify with this on Dave. What was a palm covered field between me...
  September 20th, 2023 11:25
• Nature\'s Artwork. (Goldfinch60) Nature is grand. Wonderful words to remind us that there is such...
  September 20th, 2023 04:31
• Charlotte’s Fate (Teddy.15) Although I respect all life and feel it is bad luck to kill anything...
  September 19th, 2023 12:24
• Emotions Expressed (Orchidee) Wrath never helped me just got me into a lot of trouble. Try to think that...
  September 19th, 2023 08:55
• Broken Heart Fixed. (Goldfinch60) A nice write, a tribute to both women and a new hope. Always good to hear...
  September 19th, 2023 04:47
• Only One Thing Can Silence Me (Teddy.15) I echo that but I\'m not sure, a million what? Laughs, criticisms, irate...
  September 18th, 2023 17:13
• Of Mice And Pork Pies (Orchidee) Rubbish can be good You just read my poem. As to those pork pies why not...
  September 18th, 2023 08:13
• The Sea is a Mistress (Pop64) A wonderful poem litterally but in metaphor even grander. It speaks of...
  September 18th, 2023 06:51
• This Life And Next One (Serhat Doğan) A poem of what we all feel. Doubt, despite pain and misery we wish for...
  September 17th, 2023 11:48
• Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard) A wonderful memory and metaphor of how we look to the strength and comfort...
  September 17th, 2023 11:45
• Without Words (Teddy.15) Sad but so commonly true. Well expressed in words of softness and care.
  September 17th, 2023 08:09
• Our coping, Substitutions (L. B. Mek) Beyond anything else this poem carries a very important message. You are...
  September 15th, 2023 05:54
• The Death of Love (Teddy.15) This could be taken literally or figuratively in the sense of a broken...
  September 14th, 2023 17:34
• My Little Fantasy (Bella Shepard) Bella this is such a wonderful thought and piece of advice. We advise...
  September 14th, 2023 17:25
• Holy Dreamscape (Parisab) Thought provoking and enigmatic in its symbols. They may be taken several...
  September 14th, 2023 17:21
• My Domestication. (Doggerel Dave) A great story in verse Dave that I can relate to. Keeping the kitchen...
  September 12th, 2023 19:23
• An Ode To The Wedding Band (Teddy.15) Humorous but relatable which is what gives it its humor. Well said.
  September 12th, 2023 12:19
• Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb (Bobby O) The title led me down a false path until the ending where my thoughts had...
  September 11th, 2023 10:17
• Justice Judgement (Orchidee) Justice seems to have an old testament read to it. \"An eye for an eye\"...
  September 11th, 2023 10:07
• Thank You Dad. (Goldfinch60) In this I see mirrored my own father who taught me a love for music as...
  September 10th, 2023 07:15
• Our Issue In Life. (Goldfinch60) So many things in life that we know we would be getter off without but...
  September 10th, 2023 07:11
• When We Are One (Bella Shepard) I sadly agree Bella. What a wonderful world it would be, maybe some day if...
  September 9th, 2023 17:10
• Espionage (Doggerel Dave) This one caught me by surprise Dave. This poetic encoded message leaves me...
  September 9th, 2023 08:17
• In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15) A captivating memorial of a dark day that has directly or indirectly...
  September 9th, 2023 08:07
• Ode to the Poet (Pop64) Well written, rhymed and with a great message.
  September 8th, 2023 11:19
• SOS (L. B. Mek) A most wonderful message of brotherhood and unity. The format was most...
  September 8th, 2023 07:19
• of Uncertain, vigil’s (L. B. Mek) Many good lines my friend \"Time’s, muddying tracks have since...
  September 8th, 2023 07:06
• The Touron (Bella Shepard) Bella I love the term it fits. This reminds me of a trip I made to...
  September 7th, 2023 15:39
• Abject terror (Sorenbarrett) Sorry my friend didn\'t mean to startle just entertain. Thanks so much for...
  September 7th, 2023 15:18
• Lacrime (Teddy.15) So true, each one as different as the print of the eye. Proof that short...
  September 7th, 2023 14:59
• Reviving Refreshments (Orchidee) Such certainty is to be envied and helps all to build a positive attitude...
  September 7th, 2023 14:56
• Wise Words (Orchidee) I loved this one Orchi too bad that there are so many fools that don\'t...
  September 6th, 2023 11:16
• Invention of Laughter (Teddy.15) Liked the picture and the poem, short but to the point. My time machine is...
  September 6th, 2023 11:10
• Find Myself (Bella Shepard) Such a beautiful thought and message in so few words. Becoming comfortable...
  September 4th, 2023 12:26
• Gospel Graces (Orchidee) Good write Orchi. I love mysteries but haven\'t the grace to understand...
  September 4th, 2023 11:06
• Musical smoke (Sorenbarrett) Thanks for the read Orchi appreciate the effort to put out the flame but...
  September 4th, 2023 11:03
• Unprecedented (Doggerel Dave) Does it really matter what\'s causing it? I\'m with you, when there is a...
  September 4th, 2023 06:14
• Voilà ! here I am, here We be (L. B. Mek) A vividly real existential depiction. I felt I was looking through that...
  September 4th, 2023 06:02
• Empty Sky (Teddy.15) At first read I took this literally but then upon reflection I saw that it...
  September 3rd, 2023 05:45
• Danger From Deceit (Orchidee) Treachery or deceit is a terrible thing that steals the peace of this...
  September 1st, 2023 06:04
• Seasons Of Love. (Goldfinch60) So true Gold everything has a beginning and end and there can not be one...
  September 1st, 2023 05:59
• A common miracle (L. B. Mek) The format of this piece is wonderful. \"dimming shine ...
  September 1st, 2023 05:54
• Love (Poetry). (Doggerel Dave) Roses are red violets are blue... I used to write stuff like that but...
  August 31st, 2023 22:39
• Persevering Pleas (Orchidee) Good write Orchi just a few typos, first line second stanza \"yoru\"...
  August 30th, 2023 10:24
• Reflections (Sorenbarrett) Yea Madam Butterfly for one. Thanks Orchi for the read.
  August 28th, 2023 10:31
• Musical Language. (Goldfinch60) Music changes moods and sometimes lives. It is liquid emotion that when...
  August 27th, 2023 05:37
• \"Oh no - not your operation!\" (Doggerel Dave) I\'m glad that this is now in your past. Operations are nothing to look...
  August 27th, 2023 05:33
• Trumpet Triumph (Orchidee) Alleluia ! Trumpets are kind of loud, I always thought that, that is why...
  August 26th, 2023 16:46
• Providing Presence (Orchidee) I like to think of a supreme being that is merciful. It would help a lot...
  August 24th, 2023 15:38
• Lost In Love (Bella Shepard) At least you were not so blind as to not see the sign. Short but such good...
  August 24th, 2023 11:14
• We Experience Life (Bella Shepard) Good advice to a population that is near sighted, closed minded and deaf...
  August 24th, 2023 11:12
• The Passenger (Doggerel Dave) Twice as old as her dad... then that\'s like grand dad, right? We can only...
  August 24th, 2023 07:34
• Where it all began (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Dave I appreciate the review and kind words
  August 24th, 2023 07:32
• I Have A Dream 2. (Goldfinch60) If we only put the same effort into this that we do into technology,...
  August 24th, 2023 05:08
• Loving Leadings (Orchidee) God made me to grow weaker as I grow older as a guarantee of humility....
  August 22nd, 2023 09:39
• A parent\'s burden (Sorenbarrett) If the chain is long enough you can still bowl with the ball and you...
  August 22nd, 2023 09:37
• Penicillium Notatum (Bella Shepard) Dear Bella I have an allergy to some unknown weed that blooms each year it...
  August 20th, 2023 14:44
• Reply to A. E. Housman (Jarcher54) I am so glad that you decided to share this one. It reads so well and...
  August 20th, 2023 12:43
• The Small Space (Jarcher54) The metaphors here are amazing. So grounded on the surface but deep upon...
  August 18th, 2023 00:00
• Can We Live Happily. (Goldfinch60) Yes I have noticed that those who have less tend to give more. A great...
  August 17th, 2023 23:33
• Blessed to Share (Bobby O) Giving is what is most missed in today\'s world. A beautiful thought and...
  August 17th, 2023 23:31
• Fear Silence Not (Neville) Great lines Neville \"For it is long empty like discarded worm casts\"...
  August 17th, 2023 23:21
• “Heigh-ho, Heigh-ho it’s Off to Work We Go…” (Doggerel Dave) I think I have worked there before. Whether physical safety or emotional...
  August 17th, 2023 23:14
• Binding Pages (Teddy.15) So short but true. There must be an opposition in all things. There can be...
  August 17th, 2023 23:08
• Sétana (Bigguy) This poem seems very Celtic in nature hound of Cullan pup of Dael. Found...
  August 17th, 2023 12:29
• Wholesome Wisdom (Orchidee) I liked this one. \"I remember All creatures of our God and king from...
  August 17th, 2023 09:44
• Short-Circuit (Teddy.15) A great write about a subject that makes me a bit nervous. I\'m not sure...
  August 16th, 2023 07:21
• JAZZ IS LIFE (Bobby O) You\'ve mentioned most of the biggies. a nice tribute to a very enjoyable...
  August 16th, 2023 07:16
• While Out Busy Partying (Neville) You sure it wasn\'t her sister? I think I know her. An amusing enjoyable...
  August 16th, 2023 07:10
• Need To Be Right. (Goldfinch60) So few people can seer that there are more than one side to an issue....
  August 16th, 2023 06:59
• On Tour. (Doggerel Dave) I loved the poem but not sure if I would love a stay there. Sometimes the...
  August 15th, 2023 07:41
• Trust And Abide (Orchidee) \"Which cannot be removed, does stand Abides e\'er in the land\" A great...
  August 15th, 2023 07:31
• Life (Bella Shepard) I loved the format to this poem of great advice. To give is to receive,...
  August 13th, 2023 18:33
• Goldilocks and the…. (Doggerel Dave) With her being too hot is this the x rated version? lol
  August 11th, 2023 22:49
• RINSE & REPEAT (Bobby O) It takes a tough man to wear pink and an even tougher one to ride such a...
  August 11th, 2023 15:02
• Service Settings (Orchidee) The government has told me for many years that I must give and that...
  August 11th, 2023 11:48
• Certainly Not! (Orchidee) I could use a little levity and it\'s okay I\'m over 18 x 4. Thanks for...
  August 10th, 2023 15:54
• Moonbeams (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Orchi
  August 10th, 2023 15:50
• Grace Gloryings (Orchidee) Grace is a great name for a lady but I\'m more set for a lady with the...
  August 9th, 2023 05:22
• Worn Out Shoes (Teddy.15) There is something about dancing that involves the whole body and soul,...
  August 8th, 2023 16:18
• Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee) It helps to recognize all that we have as opposed to look at what we...
  August 6th, 2023 10:34
• Observing a Miracle (Teddy.15) I once had a patient whose wife had died several years before. Yet every...
  August 5th, 2023 17:49