Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Therapists Lament (Randy Carter) Love limericks and this one fits the bill. A most fun read about a sordid...
  August 19th, 2025 10:50
• Foretold (Sassy Lou) Valid questions in poetic style that come through with the feeling of...
  August 19th, 2025 09:29
• [SYNTAX_ERR0R] (DeadRose) Most creative and poignant in the age we live in. A wonderful and artistic...
  August 19th, 2025 09:27
• Oh, a child’s mind. (Micah Watson) So well spoken and the last line ties it up so well. Nicely done
  August 19th, 2025 09:24
• Bet (Damaso) Love your author\'s note that clarifies the poem. A mad hatter dash for a...
  August 19th, 2025 09:23
• Cold As Hell (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem is cold and dark it breaths the air of the tomb. It smells of...
  August 19th, 2025 09:16
• RAINBOW. (Vamsi Sudha) Charming and most lovely. I have chased rainbows to find their end and as...
  August 19th, 2025 07:32
• Circus in my head (REBELLIOUS SOUL) Ah but so true life is a circus with all its pleasures and its fleeting...
  August 19th, 2025 07:22
• To Them Who... (Tony Grannell) Timeless! Tribute to the unseen that hold the fabric of society and weave...
  August 19th, 2025 07:16
• Morning (YannickM) Loved the rhyme scheme of this poem. It speaks from darkness into light....
  August 19th, 2025 05:29
• living on an island (Jim56) Very nice Jim Although not alone I have lived there and it is very nice. A...
  August 19th, 2025 05:11
• Where my Name Used to Live (Samuel) Brave is the word that comes to mind as this seems a proclamation and...
  August 19th, 2025 05:10
• Little Flower (RSM0812) A great metaphor in this poem where love needs to be nurtured and cared...
  August 19th, 2025 05:05
• Love (Dn) A poem of expressing the inexpressible and with emotion. Nicely done
  August 19th, 2025 05:03
• what he did to me (Carpe4diem) On first reading this sounds like a poem of past abuse but it could be...
  August 19th, 2025 04:58
• Wordless music talks (Poetic Dan) A fun read that rings with truth. I heard the water sing in the pipes from...
  August 19th, 2025 04:55
• ritual II (Yael Garcia) Love word play and this poem is full of it all four lines.
  August 19th, 2025 04:53
• MORE THAN A SOCIAL DRINKER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Have had friends like that. Sad to see someone loose control of drink,...
  August 19th, 2025 04:52
• Relationship Problems (Anthony Hanible) Distilled anguish of truth where all boils down to separation of what once...
  August 19th, 2025 04:50
• Constantly Pushed To One Side (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Avoidance a safer tactic when one wishes to steer clear of conflict....
  August 19th, 2025 04:48
• Don\'t Pretend Like You Don\'t Know (Pita) Good advise as to how to maintain a relationship. An insightful piece
  August 19th, 2025 04:45
• Last Breath (Sassy Lou) A poem of sadness and darkness that speaks of the end in a harsh world....
  August 19th, 2025 04:43
• There\'s still more (Hzugman) Well said. This poem in a short quatrain delivers a rhymed truth. Our...
  August 19th, 2025 04:40
• Defeated (Sharvi) A great analogy that fits so well as a metaphor. Indeed dreams are like...
  August 19th, 2025 04:35
• simple sample (Arqios) Indeed there is something distancing in the technological, mechanical...
  August 19th, 2025 04:33
• Marching on Bone Spurs (Neville) Although the individual does not come to mind the message seeps through...
  August 19th, 2025 04:27
• Soup (Teddy.15) Real strength lays behind the facade of power. Quite is the granite bolder...
  August 19th, 2025 04:21
• Towards The Beauty. (Goldfinch60) Love the country Andy, always have and that is my choice of living. Very...
  August 19th, 2025 04:16
• Little Bird (Sami Mulaj) A sad poem with allegorical and nicely formed story
  August 18th, 2025 20:20
• Artemis (Ja'Quan Shepard) Artemis king of the hunt. Nicely done
  August 18th, 2025 20:17
• Hindsight (Keeter C) Mind provoking and something to think about. nicely done
  August 18th, 2025 18:17
• Not So Broken (Fränz Müller) We all break things from time to time but that does not mean that we are...
  August 18th, 2025 18:16
• National Bad Poetry Day (Spencer Wilhelm) You can\'t believe anything you hear anymore internet, news, social media...
  August 18th, 2025 18:13
• The lost world (Nicole Pritchard) Many different types mentioned in this poem. Nicely done
  August 18th, 2025 18:11
• Remember good something by Andrey Dementyev (Ksey_Gan) Memories are most important. Nicely penned.
  August 18th, 2025 18:08
• Is Poetry Salvation (Tooway) A poem of relationships and striving to make things work. Nicely done
  August 18th, 2025 18:05
• Family tied (Philomena) What is family, can they rid themselves of you? An interesting concept of...
  August 18th, 2025 18:01
• If meant to be (Wildecho14) I always loved this theme of secrets kept that interupt what could have...
  August 18th, 2025 15:40
• I’d let the world burn for you. (Micah Watson) A poem of love and dedication to the point of antihalation. Nicely done
  August 18th, 2025 15:38
• Dolly (Paul Bell) The horrors of war seen through the eyes of a child so accustomed to death...
  August 18th, 2025 15:36
• Love And Pain (Anthony Hanible) Abuse in this poem that pits the abused as challenger against the champion...
  August 18th, 2025 15:34
• Circus (Mik this is mik) An interesting work in metaphors that speaks of good and evil in a...
  August 18th, 2025 15:17
• The Existence Plan (Aa Harvey) A lovely poem that metaphorically speaks of relationships and differences...
  August 18th, 2025 15:15
• F.R.A.U.D. (DeadRose) A poem of self criticism so common among those that have high standards. A...
  August 18th, 2025 15:13
• Tears, Fears, Years & Eggshells (BoxMyHeart) Literal or metaphorical there is distance here emotional distance. It may...
  August 18th, 2025 15:10
• Gloomy (Amethyste) A most interesting contrast of being alone in a city, bored with nothing...
  August 18th, 2025 15:08
• Burning Letters (Priya Tomar) I may be reaching too far here but to me this poem brings images of Indian...
  August 18th, 2025 15:07
• Yellow (A.N.) Defined by a color a lovely concept and quite poetic. Nicely done
  August 18th, 2025 14:58
• My Prime Number (Adventuressmalik) A most interesting concept in that a prime number is only divisible by 1...
  August 18th, 2025 14:57
• Affectations trailed with pet appellations, particularly endearments suffuses me with giddiness (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Thoughts and images pepper this poem with a bit of spice. Nicely done
  August 18th, 2025 14:54
• Rebuilt by My will (Funmiwrites) A lovely write and even lovelier message of charity and the art of giving...
  August 18th, 2025 14:52
• Psalm for the Mosquito (Yael Garcia) A great message of giving even from one\'s own need. No violence toward...
  August 18th, 2025 14:49
• Right Next To Me (Pete the poet) Fanciful is the mind of the poet where there are no constraints by reality...
  August 18th, 2025 14:47
• Occam Says ... (Kurt Philip Behm) There is no figuring wisdom for it comes with age and experience not logic...
  August 18th, 2025 14:44
• The poet in hell (Lorenz) Poets do not belong in the religious and traditional heaven and must be...
  August 18th, 2025 14:43
• What Would You Do For A Collar? (Cheeky Missy) I love dogs too and the aroma of your cooking must bring them running....
  August 18th, 2025 14:39
• Top Drawer (Teddy.15) A great image. I think I have its brother. How those drawers fill is...
  August 18th, 2025 14:01
• South of Me (Tristan Robert Lange) Living under hell what a most interesting concept. Basement please. A fun...
  August 18th, 2025 14:00
• We Have All Been There (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Another poem of faith and belief to give strength to those that believe....
  August 18th, 2025 13:02
• Missing Persons Report (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A sense of darkness and decay mentioned here. Well done
  August 18th, 2025 09:22
• Dead-man\'s Chest (Rebellion_in_sanity) Cynicism a cutting knife that can leave wounds and scars. A most...
  August 18th, 2025 09:19
• Trapped. (Friendship) Such beautiful rhyme enfolds this poem where it is pointed out that there...
  August 18th, 2025 09:16
• Stargazing (YannickM) Welcome to MPS the poem leaves the writer voyaging on time. Nicely written...
  August 18th, 2025 09:12
• The Noise (Samuel) A physiological metaphor for the emotional. Closely related one to the...
  August 18th, 2025 06:42
• Woe (Lorna) A dark and cloudy poem of rainy days. Well worded it casts its shadow on...
  August 18th, 2025 06:40
• Goodbye Terence Stamp (Randyjohnson71) Another wonderful tribute to a passing actor. Well written in poetic form...
  August 18th, 2025 06:39
• Past messages (Maplespal) This brought to mind the Kabalistic view of the angel\'s alphabet where it...
  August 18th, 2025 06:37
• dreamer (Jim56) We all do our share of dreaming, some more than others. A lovely poem of...
  August 18th, 2025 04:50
• The Hawk\'s Arrival (Gray0328) Very nicely done this poem speaks of vision that goes beyond what most...
  August 18th, 2025 04:49
• Facing Empire (Tony Grannell) Irish history pours out of this dark vessel. A time when the stronger hand...
  August 18th, 2025 04:46
• Scribed to my brain (Poetic Dan) How we react to others dictates the type of person we are. Nicely written
  August 18th, 2025 04:29
• Unspoken Confession (Xalvazora) Values explored in this poem and boundaries where one begins and the other...
  August 18th, 2025 04:26
• Are You A Good Worker? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The workplace has always been a difficult political playing field but...
  August 18th, 2025 04:23
• LITTLE DOGGIE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Fun but a barking dog is no fun. Written in poetic humor style it also...
  August 18th, 2025 04:20
• Analysis - Entering Furnace - Part 5--14 Aug 2025-last part (Soman Ragavan) It is most interesting to me how man has designed cerimonies that have...
  August 18th, 2025 04:18
• People change (RSM0812) A poem of faith and belief merged with life\'s struggles. Nicely written
  August 18th, 2025 04:16
• Birth of Mothergaia (Joseph M Marion) A spiritual poem that embodies the health of the planet and its life...
  August 18th, 2025 04:14
• I See You (Introverted Sage) A dark presence is felt in this poem and as it says it is in view and...
  August 18th, 2025 04:09
• Emotionally Unavailable (Ja'Quan Shepard) This poem leaves the feeling of being part of a special group where...
  August 18th, 2025 04:07
• Stuck on you (Just_my_poetic_side) A poem of passing fancy or obsession? A common feeling that many have and...
  August 18th, 2025 04:04
• Magpie (Emery Walker) This poem has a period feel to it. It casts its own spell on the reader....
  August 18th, 2025 04:01
• Confusion (Dan Williams) Here physiology and everyday events are placed in allegory painted...
  August 18th, 2025 03:55
• The Neglected. (David Wakeling) The contrast of man\'s value of compassion and pity and nature\'s survival...
  August 18th, 2025 03:50
• clarity (Arqios) This one left me in a different land. I feel drifting somehow, vaguely...
  August 18th, 2025 03:43
• Pork Pies (Orchidee) Now what could be more entertaining that talking with a pork pie? as for...
  August 18th, 2025 03:35
• Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode (Neville) A beautiful picture that seems like I\'ve seen before in my life. Nicely...
  August 18th, 2025 03:30
• The Long Day. (Goldfinch60) Distance make the heart grow fonder. Nicely written Andy
  August 18th, 2025 03:28
• What Makes me Woman (Malo J) Anger, disgust, regret, pain, in your face all in this poem. A tough and...
  August 17th, 2025 19:29
• No wet cheeks (Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet) A poem that leaves me feeling that there is a very uneven power base here....
  August 17th, 2025 19:24
• Here God Lies – In the Eyes of a Failure (Tooway) A great perception of creation no better that the creator. Nicely done
  August 17th, 2025 18:47
• Life (Keeter C) Hard work of any type works. Nicely done
  August 17th, 2025 18:45
• Shame On You (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) Deep lines in this poem nicely done
  August 17th, 2025 17:21
• The Beginning (_Doc_) Bits of truth mounted in a poem nicely done.
  August 17th, 2025 17:04
• my imaginary sancho panza quotes #28 (Jon Nakapalau) Well said and with great wisdom and truth
  August 17th, 2025 17:01
• To the Value of One (Kevin Hulme) A beautiful poem so well written a fave
  August 17th, 2025 17:00
• Cant save pain (Natalie Heisey) The format of this poem is like a song. I feel the madness. Lovely
  August 17th, 2025 16:55
• Reading in the paper about local government policies (Simple Tendencies) A most interesting approach looking at things from a negative point of...
  August 17th, 2025 15:56
• He Knows (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A poem of reliance and belief strongly stated. Faith and belief can go a...
  August 17th, 2025 15:47
• The Empty Nest (Kurt Philip Behm) The excitement of children their innocence and their inquisitiveness it...
  August 17th, 2025 14:09
• I\'m just starting - in Trump\'s own words (Raidoc) Are you sure that it\'s a parody sounds on point to me. A fun read
  August 17th, 2025 14:07