Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• TALL SHIPS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Quite the image pained in this beautiful poem. It seemed that i could see...
  May 25th, 2025 03:41
• Yesterday For Today. (Goldfinch60) Lovely Andy I can see why the Beatles if you listen closely it may not be...
  May 25th, 2025 03:38
• con un beso (with a kiss) (Arqios) The two the same but at the same time not. English is my first language...
  May 25th, 2025 03:34
• THE DOUGHNUT BEE (Michael Edwards) Silly is good when it puts a smile on your face and so did this and for...
  May 25th, 2025 03:29
• One step pushed back (Brynlee) Lingering thoughts in this poem that irritate and won\'t diminish. The...
  May 25th, 2025 03:20
• Ode to the Oglochyssyginator (Matthew R. Callies) A fun read filled with humor and neologisms it also is a metaphor for...
  May 24th, 2025 18:42
• The Whisper and the Roar (Rrodriguez) A lovely poem of nature and all its majesty. Wind that they call Mariah...
  May 24th, 2025 18:39
• Fleeing the pain (Nicole Pritchard) Ghosts of the past often haunt us and fighting them becomes a an...
  May 24th, 2025 16:56
• Versions (Sunflowersinrain) Poetic reflections that flow until the end of the poem. Nicely written
  May 24th, 2025 16:52
• Poem, My Sweet Lord! (AwHec8) A fun poem spiced with humor and a mixture of faith nicely done
  May 24th, 2025 16:49
• blind faith (Corian Baek) In my humble and most limited expertise I still say this is an extremely...
  May 24th, 2025 16:44
• The Tale of a Snitch Goblin (Steve Goldenfort) Addiction with lack of purpose and unaware of possibilities and hope....
  May 24th, 2025 14:50
• Radiant (Nathan Lafata) Questioning one\'s life and purpose as well as redemption. An existential...
  May 24th, 2025 14:47
• The urge (BlessedbyGod) A poem that calls out of the darkness and reaches for the hands of hope....
  May 24th, 2025 13:35
• Violated, Yet Unbroken (A Symphony of Scars and Light) (Mottakeenur Rehman) The old adage What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger comes to mind. A...
  May 24th, 2025 13:32
• Gold digger (EvenwheniLie) Loved this poem it reads so well and tells its tail which I am not sure to...
  May 24th, 2025 12:57
• One (Keeter C) Dark and ominous with an all true feel to it. Lovely
  May 24th, 2025 12:54
• Last Betrothal (Kurt Philip Behm) Love this one Kurt I could feel it a fave
  May 24th, 2025 12:52
• The Body Bazaar (Gray0328) A most wonderful comment in poetic form of man\'s and woman\'s...
  May 24th, 2025 12:50
• The Quiet Symphony ([email protected]) Beautiful words to frame the beauty of nature herself. A lovely write and...
  May 24th, 2025 11:17
• Within In (TheVlama) This could be anyone\'s mother or mother nature herself. Lovely
  May 24th, 2025 11:15
• Anti portraits (Lorenz) This is in a different way what we all are. We are a mix of so many things...
  May 24th, 2025 10:45
• Conceptual Identity \'Me\' (AddieThomas100) Nicely said a good message.
  May 24th, 2025 10:39
• Thank you! (Hzugman) Some people are just lucky if you consider contentment good. An enjoyable...
  May 24th, 2025 09:30
• Instruction Manual (Molly Delaney) We all come with damage and flaws as well as no warrantee. A good read
  May 24th, 2025 09:29
• How Much Is  The Hippocratic  Oath? by Remikh Elena (Ksey_Gan) A lovely historic story told in most poetic form. Loved it
  May 24th, 2025 08:16
• Sweet Dreams (Kevin Michael Bloor) A most beautiful rhyme about fading away with age. Wonderful wording
  May 24th, 2025 08:12
• Of Dreams, Poetry, and Yes, Precisely. (Cheeky Missy) Break the ice with food and keep the mood with some throughout. Another...
  May 24th, 2025 08:10
• A Senryu (Thoughtless) Well written and a powerful point where overreaction has led to terrible...
  May 24th, 2025 08:06
• Edge of sorrow and love (Jerry Reynolds) A most wonderful write and a fave. The wording is its selling factor...
  May 24th, 2025 08:04
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 39-The auction--28April2025 (Soman Ragavan) Indeed I agree that satire has its place in the armory of the poet to...
  May 24th, 2025 06:50
• Love was made for you and for me (Poetaldo) As in the parting of bread we should share what we have with others.
  May 24th, 2025 06:46
• A Thought: A dawns spark (Maplespal) Very nicely written this poem of rhyme with a metaphor of time passing in...
  May 24th, 2025 06:45
• An Apology To My Poems (Rebellion_in_sanity) Loved this poem and the metaphor here. Vanity is one of the greatest foes...
  May 24th, 2025 06:43
• I kept but forgot (Pamela) A poetic expression of the person that focus\' on the negative and forgets...
  May 24th, 2025 06:39
• Porchlight to Cityscape (Samuel) This poem to me a metaphor of life in general where the familiar and...
  May 24th, 2025 06:37
• Jaguar Wright: Agent Of Deception (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Don\'t doubt anything and don\'t believe anything that\'s my policy. Good...
  May 24th, 2025 06:34
• cruelty (Jim56) People are cruel and kind by nature and this is true to animals and other...
  May 24th, 2025 06:24
• Everyone takes a shit (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Now there\'s a thought to start off the day. Made me feel like going LOL...
  May 24th, 2025 06:20
• Absurd Aburdity (Libellule) Very well rhymed and with such good flow this poem has a deeper message...
  May 24th, 2025 04:36
• Liar. (Rosie) This poem is well constructed and flows nicely leading to a marvelous end...
  May 24th, 2025 04:33
• Have you ever dreamed? (Gewar) Sometimes those naps are short and sometimes they are long sleeps but we...
  May 24th, 2025 04:31
• Safe, Even If He Leaves (The Soft Witness) There is a type of internal wisdom that grows with age and in this case...
  May 24th, 2025 04:29
• WHY? (Kayewaye) Life is at time hard to figure out. A wonderful write that is raw and...
  May 24th, 2025 04:26
• Come To Me Before Winter (ForeverJesus7) This has the feel of another era past and carries with that feel of age....
  May 24th, 2025 04:24
• FREQUENCY OF GODS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Death and its mourning portrayed nicely in this poem that may be a dirge a...
  May 24th, 2025 04:22
• Invocation (Vasile Serban) Sad and mournful this poem reflects on loss and a sense of loneliness that...
  May 24th, 2025 04:18
• The River Thinks for Me (Rrodriguez) A fave for the metaphor in this poem. A lovely image penned
  May 24th, 2025 04:15
• Nothing else to add (Seybsdatroller) Cute and endearing this poem speaks of an infatuation that is more than...
  May 24th, 2025 04:13
• Cry Petey, I See Bards Rounding the Bend (Arqios) This one accomplishes its task well in Acrostic form. It sounds...
  May 24th, 2025 04:10
• Beethoven Will Live On. (Goldfinch60) A lovely poem about a lovely experience. Love Beethoven especially his...
  May 24th, 2025 04:01
• Smile (Sunshine777) A poem of religious belief and conviction that leads to a better life....
  May 24th, 2025 03:54
• Just Shoot Me (Anthony Hanible) This seems scattered thoughts of a free association that takes one through...
  May 24th, 2025 03:52
• Chastity (Alex PB) Most interesting beginning to this seductive poem of love. Nicely done.
  May 23rd, 2025 19:58
• I Human (Kevin Hulme) A fun read. Too bad we have gotten to that point. Well done
  May 23rd, 2025 19:56
• Nighttime images (BlessedbyGod) So many beautiful places to see mentioned in this poem. Have seen them all...
  May 23rd, 2025 18:37
• He who Troubles his Own House (Thomas W Case) Once again a most gritty poem with plain talk of life. Lovely
  May 23rd, 2025 17:16
• Deathbed (Teddy.15) This poem of synchrony of appreciation of nature and love is nicely...
  May 23rd, 2025 17:12
• Sleeping with you (Amethyste) Short and seductive this poem pulls no punches. Well done
  May 23rd, 2025 15:39
• I Set the Moment Down (GeekSusie) So many beautiful stanzas of acceptance. The Master told Tenzin: “You...
  May 23rd, 2025 14:48
• A Waste of Time (A.N.) A poem so nicely said in a few words. Speaking of a loss and the...
  May 23rd, 2025 14:02
• My Anger Turned Into Sadness (Akshadha_Joshi1310) A poem of loss and sadness over it as well as some denial that it had...
  May 23rd, 2025 13:12
• The Unfiltered Mirror (Gray0328) A lot of unexpected combinations in this poem. Another fun read.
  May 23rd, 2025 13:07
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 38-LimbsInTheBush--28April2025 (Soman Ragavan) Another great analysis of a poem and the socio-cultural implications as...
  May 23rd, 2025 12:01
• Your Face (Paul Gerard Reed) I sense deeper meaning to this poem where a grave is not where the person...
  May 23rd, 2025 11:57
• Archer Divine (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Karma they say or justice depending upon belief. Nicely done Kurt
  May 23rd, 2025 11:55
• A Rhyming Believer (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Rap is poetry in music with meter and rhyme. Nicely done
  May 23rd, 2025 11:53
• A senior moment experienced by this drip... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Clever use of the letters REM in spellings and the allusion to dreams....
  May 23rd, 2025 11:51
• Unrequited Love (Eira Solen) We all have choices and sometimes we feel we made the wrong one and can\'t...
  May 23rd, 2025 11:46
• Instant (E.J. Waling) This sounds like the new computer generation and AI news briefs. A great...
  May 23rd, 2025 11:43
• Traviata (Ksey_Gan) Such a great analogy in this piece. A flower wilted.
  May 23rd, 2025 11:41
• My twin sister (Lorenz) You know what it is to hear discordant music this poem was so many chords...
  May 23rd, 2025 11:39
• the night & the carnage (Yael Garcia) Mind altering indeed. Chemical handcuffs. A most interesting read.
  May 23rd, 2025 11:31
• Rain (2781) We all bail when the water starts coming in. A great tale in poetic form....
  May 23rd, 2025 11:23
• Bonkers! (Orchidee) Ah what would this site be without Orchi? The saga goes on. Made my day.
  May 23rd, 2025 11:19
• joys of retirement  (Devender Kumar) A most idealistic senryu loved it. You know no one retires anymore they...
  May 23rd, 2025 09:09
• Untitled (RSM0812) The words, rhyme and meter captured me with this write and like a lullaby...
  May 23rd, 2025 09:02
• my porcelain bird (Corian Baek) The metaphor seems clear to me and how we are all that bird frozen on a...
  May 23rd, 2025 09:00
• THE PRE-ANNOUNCED BOMBING- WHILE SWIMMING 1992. (Swarovski20) A most interesting write of the battle of justice against greed and of...
  May 23rd, 2025 08:57
• Echoed and streamed (Maplespal) A wonderful story told in this poem of deceit and consequences. Most...
  May 23rd, 2025 08:53
• Tell it slant (Libellule) Such good wording in most poetic style bordering on neologisms that cast...
  May 23rd, 2025 08:50
• Pandora’s Box (Muse of Calliope) A most lovely poem of myth and the metaphor always got me. If you think of...
  May 23rd, 2025 08:46
• Desolate Vigil of Longing (Amirreza Nazari) A poem of praise to one\'s God and belief nicely stated
  May 23rd, 2025 05:54
• Scent of Secrets (Salvia.S) Secrets promote guilt and guilt can be resurrected by any reminder. Nicely...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:40
• wishes (Jim56) Wish upon a star and then believe with all your heart and in that belief...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:37
• A CHALICE OF GORE (Saša Milivojev) Violence and its horrors portrayed in this poem of modern day war torn...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:36
• Two Houses, Two Loves (Samuel) Very nicely crafted with a wise concept of how definitions vary and lead...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:33
• Only Love Will Keep Us Together (A piece of luggage) Identifying with a past memory can be a trigger that sets off old feelings...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:29
• FROST OF LOVE (MYSTROGWAPO) A cute poem of finding and capturing one that is felt to be chosen. Lovely
  May 23rd, 2025 05:20
• CHILD GHOST (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A haunting poem that is left to the reader\'s mind the outcome. This...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:19
• I Didn\'t Answer (The Soft Witness) A poem of growing self respect and sense of what one wants and how to get...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:17
• \"Stars Beyond Reach\" (Cirawrites01) A poem where the cosmos becomes part of the metaphor of chase. Lovely
  May 23rd, 2025 05:14
• Just A Test (Sahildhobalepoetry) A poem of encouragement and belief. Nicely done
  May 23rd, 2025 05:12
• ONCE CALLED HEAVEN (Ferjohn Timung) It is the combination of the rhyme and wording of meaning that gets the...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:10
• Velvet Command (Salian) A most erotic, sensual poem where sex and power become one. Strangely...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:08
• Exclusively Ours (Mottakeenur Rehman) Such poetic clever wording that encompasses so much meaning. A truly...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:06
• Fine wine Beauty (Reynaldo Casison) Sensuous, seductive it likens one to nature itself and all of its beauty....
  May 23rd, 2025 05:04
• An Unspoken Conversation (Radha Raghunathan) A great metaphor. Nicely penned it speaks of passing by things that may or...
  May 23rd, 2025 05:00
• Made of Mirrors (COGNOVA) I loved how this poem reflects how we take pieces of others to be...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:57
• Spit pages (Bonnie) Reflections in this poem that have the feel of both being stuck in time...
  May 23rd, 2025 04:54