Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Holes in the ground (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks so much for the read and the comment. The tears dry and the ink and...
August 27th, 2024 05:36 - The Ferris Wheel. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful and so descriptive bringing back memories of going to the fair...
August 27th, 2024 05:32 - The Picture (Thomas W Case)
A tender write that fills in the surprise that it was done after her death...
August 27th, 2024 05:27 - SET IT FREE (Mompu)
A true statement. Set it free and if it returns then it is meant to be....
August 26th, 2024 17:49 - the essence of imagination (DeadRose)
In that case the answer is infinite.
August 26th, 2024 17:47 - Burning Out (Cocamedo)
Nicely written and soul searching
August 26th, 2024 16:14 - Dumb star (Miranda)
Clever and a fun read
August 26th, 2024 16:12 - No One Left (M.E.M.)
Raw and well done
August 26th, 2024 16:11 - UNAFFECTED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A most interesting read
August 26th, 2024 16:10 - up and down (Sheta)
Live for the good times they do come. Nice write
August 26th, 2024 16:08 - Friendship (Sami mulaj)
A great read that has a good message. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 16:07 - Ed Poe in Yellowknife (Paul W Conway)
I heard that you have to split their tongue first. It\'s a tongue twister...
August 26th, 2024 16:03 - The Endless Muse (Tristan Robert Lange)
Death is just part of life and is as much a friend as is birth
August 26th, 2024 15:59 - The Ninth Chorus (Gray0328)
This makes me think of when baseball started.
August 26th, 2024 15:57 - Worst Nightmare (Akhilausman)
In the past I took to pulling my own it was more under my control
August 26th, 2024 15:55 - Letting a piece of you go (Epulafiq)
Letting go is always hard. Memories linger Nicely written
August 26th, 2024 15:53 - Hunger (Anabella151)
Hunger sometimes persists beyond its time or usefulness and leads to...
August 26th, 2024 09:42 - Sound Bites: 8-26-2024 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Great messages in short sound bites. Lovely
August 26th, 2024 09:41 - ~> A True Turkey Tale! (Thad Wilk)
Loved the build up before the cutting blow. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 09:40 - Thoughts into reality (Starlight)
A nice analogy that makes sense
August 26th, 2024 09:39 - \"Sanctuary\" (Thoughtless)
What a write about relationships not just of people but societies and...
August 26th, 2024 09:38 - Double Date Night!! (GenXer Shamrocker āļø)
A continuing saga reminds me of my mother\'s soap operas
August 26th, 2024 09:36 - R.E.V.S.K.A. (Revska Skinn) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
A puzzle? this one is mind provoking
August 26th, 2024 09:34 - The Smell Of Rain (Garth Rakumakoe)
So beautiful and tender a thought and well expressed
August 26th, 2024 09:33 - The Gigger at Balderton (AuburnScribbler)
Such a classical feel to this poem it leaves an older feel. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 09:32 - OM (Davyson F Santos)
A mantra of a sort this relaxing read is full of meaning and wisdom Lovely
August 26th, 2024 09:30 - (Not) Just a Paper (Gaurav Gurung)
Writing itself probably the world\'s greatest invention long neglected in...
August 26th, 2024 09:28 - Memories of Autumn (Rrodriguez)
You have painted a picture of fall indeed. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 09:25 - sing for the free (Emvd)
A song is one of the best ways to free the soul. Nicely written
August 26th, 2024 09:24 - I EMBRACE MY FAITH LIKE A DOG WITH A BONE (R. Gordon Zyne)
This reads like a song with the chorus and I can hear it sing
August 26th, 2024 09:23 - A Witch\'s Longing (CarnationsCaretaker)
I read this poem three times and it still echoes
August 26th, 2024 09:21 - never to old (Jim56)
So well said Jim love is for everyone and there are no age restrictions....
August 26th, 2024 09:19 - Stepped in a puddle (Maplespal)
A fun read on the surface. Deeper meaning is reflected and in its depths...
August 26th, 2024 09:18 - lightning is coming like a woman with a blue past... (Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi)
Nicely written and beautiful this poem is thought provoking
August 26th, 2024 09:15 - Whispers of Midnight: A Janmashtami Hymn (Dev Parth)
My god is nature but you have so well made this god into nature that it...
August 26th, 2024 09:13 - Roses of Eternal Love (Salvia.S)
A most beautiful message well said
August 26th, 2024 09:06 - REMINDER BELL (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Each day should be a day of repentance and reflection. Very nice
August 26th, 2024 09:05 - The Eternal River of Existence (Prasun Goswami)
Beautiful!! A modern version of old thought. This was framed so nicely and...
August 26th, 2024 09:03 - Journal Entry 004: Music Is My Muse (The Great Kateri)
That\'s the spirit follow that path less taken and the one you want. If...
August 26th, 2024 09:01 - Secrets In Sniper Sights (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
It\'s not over until the King is dead. I agree the sight is not a good one...
August 26th, 2024 08:58 - A Soul\'s Quite Struggle (Fanita530)
Superbly written in good rhyme and a most wonderful flow. The message is a...
August 26th, 2024 08:56 - Reddish (Mark The Phenomenon)
A most beautiful and poetic image drafted here. Simply lovely
August 26th, 2024 08:53 - Life\'s journey (Tony36)
A most positive thought and message. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 08:52 - How`s Things? (Mutley Ravishes)
A nightmare or rather a day mare. Images that provoke thought and bend the...
August 26th, 2024 08:50 - My Love (Cassie58)
As usual you have so eloquently expressed feelings of love and tenderness...
August 26th, 2024 05:22 - Senryu to Love (Teddy.15)
This strikes deep to the heart of anyone who loves. Is it love or words?...
August 26th, 2024 05:20 - In Limbo (Orchidee)
Wishing you and yoiurs the best Orchi. Hope all works out well
August 26th, 2024 05:19 - Here\'s Looking At You. (Goldfinch60)
One of my favorite films I have seen several times. It bursts with famous...
August 26th, 2024 05:15 - Premonition (NafisaSB)
Call it premonition or panic attack what ever it is a very unpleasant...
August 26th, 2024 05:10 - Until it Wasn\'t (Dan Williams)
\"Corruption as tactile as stucco on cement\" A great line that I can...
August 26th, 2024 05:06 - Two Bunnies Beneath a Cold Grey Sky (Thomas W Case)
Taking care of someone or something is a responsibility that many are not...
August 25th, 2024 18:51 - Nexum (Kurt Philip Behm)
Hard to come up with an adequate name or word to characterize something....
August 25th, 2024 18:48 - Forever My Darlings (Cassie58)
A beautiful expression of loss and the hollow feeling it leaves
August 25th, 2024 18:42 - A game no one can play (Saleh Ben Saleh)
A well written poem with such a great message. Love is not a game as many...
August 25th, 2024 11:01 - ``~ Guess Who! (Thad Wilk)
A wonderful presentation of the seasons and their staying past their...
August 25th, 2024 10:58 - A Nervous System (Elias H.F.)
Clever play on words here. I too am nervous at times and always for a...
August 25th, 2024 10:56 - The Bottoms (Thoughtless)
Beautiful wording in the imagery paints a picture in words that can be...
August 25th, 2024 10:54 - The Nature of Evil (Davmor73)
A deeper message lies beneath with the feeling of loss. I got the sense of...
August 25th, 2024 10:51 - Forest Games (Tony36)
There are few places like this anymore. I remember them in my youth and...
August 25th, 2024 10:48 - Lessons Learned (_jyotsna27)
The hard knocks of experience sometime teach us best. Nicely done
August 25th, 2024 10:46 - GLASS AMNESIA BLOCKS THE RAYS OF THE SUN (R. Gordon Zyne)
Several great lines in this poem of destruction. It paints a picture of...
August 25th, 2024 10:45 - Solar Resistence (Mutley Ravishes)
Short and well said. I too am short on reverence it is reserved for...
August 25th, 2024 10:39 - The day of New To You Belongs (Teddy.15)
Beautiful images portrayed in this poem that merges fantasy and reality...
August 25th, 2024 06:11 - lifes days (Jim56)
In it for the ride paid for the ticket and am going to ride the...
August 25th, 2024 06:05 - AVENGERS ASSEMBLE. (Akhilausman)
Our fantasies always stalk our brains with what ifs hidden desires. So...
August 25th, 2024 06:03 - A New Dawn (Gray0328)
I love the rhythm that this form of poetry gives to the piece. It has a...
August 25th, 2024 06:00 - Biorhythms (Maplespal)
Biorhythms below the surface of awareness flow in music unheard but danced...
August 25th, 2024 05:59 - Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse (ADarkerMind)
Powerful words vivid images and hidden metaphors fill this piece
August 25th, 2024 05:57 - DEBORAH (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
So many bloody deeds done in the name of God
August 25th, 2024 05:55 - A Tapestry Of Trauma (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A painting of human savageries always present but now more visible with...
August 25th, 2024 05:54 - A conversation with him. (Nicholas12)
A soliloquy that many of us have had well expressed. Poignant and highly...
August 25th, 2024 05:51 - A mystery (Orchidee)
Orchi this is a vast departure from your regular writes and seems as if it...
August 25th, 2024 05:48 - Iām Not Superman (Mark The Phenomenon)
Loved the word interpretation that in reality is the opposite of what most...
August 25th, 2024 05:42 - their 1000 watt smile (NafisaSB)
I could feel the bubbling enthusiasm of children in this poem so nicely...
August 25th, 2024 05:41 - Freed (Introverted Sage)
Highly emotional the vibrations could be felt in this piece. Nicely...
August 25th, 2024 05:36 - Calls A Graveyard (Cassie58)
A beautiful message sent from beyond the grave to serve one another.
August 25th, 2024 05:30 - \"I Love You.\" (Goldfinch60)
And with that love those words would be enough. Beautiful Andy
August 25th, 2024 05:24 - The Lines, part two (Dan Williams)
A wonderful critique of poets and poetry. The line forms an arrow pointing...
August 25th, 2024 05:19 - The Affirmations of a Mentally Unstable 18-Year-Old Girl (Emptythoughts)
Sad, raw, hurt and pain.
August 24th, 2024 20:05 - Finding Middle (Steve Goldenfort)
You have to make me think to understand.
August 24th, 2024 20:02 - Just a Dream I Had (Teddy.15)
We all have a dream song and this was a good one. A fun story that was...
August 24th, 2024 19:04 - The Grave of Douglas Enoch (A.B. Jakobsen)
So well organized and composed this is very well done with a great story
August 24th, 2024 18:58 - Ghosts (BlessedbyGod)
A cry for help in this poem. I can hear the anguish.
August 24th, 2024 18:54 - Spur (Jeffery Lee Palmer)
A pledge of love nicely said
August 24th, 2024 18:53 - *Number 30*š (Kyr0)
A cry for help that goes unheard. Said with good rhyme
August 24th, 2024 18:51 - Undergrown in Overgrowth (RefugeInRain)
A poem of humility and gratitude nicely expressed.
August 24th, 2024 18:49 - One (Saxon Crow)
Short and to the point
August 24th, 2024 18:47 - Over There (ThoughtsFromB4)
Nice internal as well as ending rhyme
August 24th, 2024 18:46 - When God steps back, chaos fills the gap (Charlotte3)
A most interesting concept.
August 24th, 2024 18:45 - Ambition - in Kamalas own words (Raidoc)
I\'ll wait and see the comedy of parody in the next election. Nicely...
August 24th, 2024 18:44 - Aftermath from this er... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Curious and interesting write. Full of incongruencies in image.
August 24th, 2024 18:39 - Puddles of rain (Shadowbones)
Murky and mixture of earth and water two of the main elements. Ink and...
August 24th, 2024 18:36 - Have you ever seen a green flower? (Elias H.F.)
Clever and nicely done. Short but says so much
August 24th, 2024 18:32 - drips for the grip on reality (NinjaGirl)
Mark it beautifully to remind yourself of the beauty inside. A most...
August 24th, 2024 18:31 - What A Woman means to me (DLewis88)
Indeed all of those and just as you say so much more. Lovely
August 24th, 2024 18:30 - ~` The Atmosphere Is Getting Heavy Here! - French Sonnet (Thad Wilk)
Lived in Montana and can\'t imagine a French accent there. A fun read...
August 24th, 2024 18:28 - Farndon on a Friday (AuburnScribbler)
Beautiful scenery set with great images. A feeling of peace pervades this...
August 24th, 2024 12:39 - At the feet of love (Sami mulaj)
A most beautiful thought and image. Very nice
August 24th, 2024 12:36 - Beyond Reapir (Meera Mere)
I hear despair and loss in this poem Nicely expressed.
August 24th, 2024 09:37 - A Young Woman (Cassaundra 40)
A lovely tribute to one\'s daughter. Nicely done
August 24th, 2024 09:36
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