Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- K.Y.L.A.T.E.K. (Dr.:Kyla~Tek) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
The last word caught me by surprise sending a message. Nicely done
August 18th, 2024 06:50 - CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards)
A painting in words beautiful and set with a dusty feeling of having been...
August 18th, 2024 06:49 - The department of youth (2781)
Prophesy of doom on a Sunday no less. Hope next week brings a brighter...
August 18th, 2024 06:47 - The Great Debate (Cocamedo)
A clever and fun read well written.
August 18th, 2024 06:45 - PAINFUL TRANSITION I (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Sad and dark this tribute reflects concerns about such actions.
August 18th, 2024 06:43 - i will dance.. (NafisaSB)
A great message sent in such a brief passage and cleverly written as well.
August 18th, 2024 06:41 - My Dearest Sisters (Dev Parth)
A tribute to a sister and all that she means present and past nicely...
August 18th, 2024 06:39 - I saw her (Bonnie)
A poem of sadness and loss well written
August 18th, 2024 06:38 - ode to death (Thomas3535)
A most beautiful description in vivid images of death at her finest. Great...
August 18th, 2024 06:35 - You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville)
A border terrorist, is that like a border collie? You always get me...
August 18th, 2024 06:33 - Honesty In A World Full Of Lies (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
So true modern technology has a trade off convenience for disease, shorter...
August 18th, 2024 06:28 - to suffer just to suffer (MR.apocalypse)
Cleverly worded this is so true and speaks to the hypocrisy of those that...
August 18th, 2024 06:25 - The Serpent’s Retainer (Mutley Ravishes)
Wise, metaphoric, entertaining and what else could you want.
August 18th, 2024 06:22 - Invisible (Juliette72)
This is tragic and like a punch to the gut knocks the wind out of any...
August 18th, 2024 06:21 - ()
Courage to say what is inside is the key to communication and...
August 18th, 2024 06:17 - Life (Rhmn_7)
A great message to this poem that carries through to the end. Nicely...
August 18th, 2024 06:15 - An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15)
Sunday, not so much lazy day but rather choice day. A feeling of freedom...
August 18th, 2024 06:11 - Time flies forward (Vsevolod Fomin)
A beautiful song here. It takes me through the phases of the day to the...
August 18th, 2024 05:31 - Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee)
This sounds a lot like my old Sunday school songs of years gone by. I know...
August 18th, 2024 05:21 - Understanding Songs. (Goldfinch60)
True Gold that many do not enunciate and some with poor diction leave only...
August 18th, 2024 05:18 - knight (Sheta)
There is more meaning behind these words. Set in fantasy is seems to apply...
August 18th, 2024 05:08 - Would Be Wordsmith (Dan Williams)
Very nicely written the thoughts of a poet who is writing to convey a...
August 18th, 2024 04:59 - Summer of 24 (Jasmine Swift)
Romantic and happy is the mood. Nicely written.
August 17th, 2024 19:35 - The Joy of Simply Being (Gray0328)
A most interesting read bringing memories of playing with toy trains and...
August 17th, 2024 18:08 - Rage reclaimed (Natalie Heisey)
Very nicely written with excellent rhyme and meter
August 17th, 2024 18:06 - I\'m Torn Betwixt What, Eh? (Cheeky Missy)
Beautiful loved the included dialect and accent. Very nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 17:26 - Do it yourself Reparations (EvenwheniLie)
Nicely written. An emphasis on what we lack.
August 17th, 2024 16:15 - Statuesque Statuette Statue (Beatrix M)
Beautifully written with great word choice. Loved it
August 17th, 2024 16:14 - Wanderers (Sami mulaj)
I love how you have left the identity of these invaders vague and unknown....
August 17th, 2024 16:12 - Every Glide (Mark The Phenomenon)
Nicely written a tribute to this noble bird.
August 17th, 2024 16:09 - Saudi Arabia (Thepoetman1234)
Quite a well painted description of the place. Nice word choice
August 17th, 2024 16:07 - Independence (Shanzah)
Mixed feeling come through in this poem of past loss and nostalgia.
August 17th, 2024 13:48 - Moon (E.J. Waling)
The moon is vital to what we know as earth. Nicely written
August 17th, 2024 13:47 - I leave buying food at the market to the spouse... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
An interesting gathering of history in this piece of poetry
August 17th, 2024 13:45 - CAMPUS COLOURS AT SJ✨ (ChrisLyn🕊)
A most interesting use of colors to express the intent of the poem.
August 17th, 2024 13:42 - Cosplay hiring (Arial)
A most interesting view of things. Nicely done
August 17th, 2024 13:39 - Absence (Blossompayal)
The other side of love and one might say its shadow are the darkness left...
August 17th, 2024 13:38 - Waist or Waste? (AuburnScribbler)
So true a second is harder than first. A play on words and a question,...
August 17th, 2024 13:35 - The soul that exists (Justina)
Enigmatic words and phrases make this poem worth pondering. Nicely said.
August 17th, 2024 12:54 - of love (Fire_fly)
Loved your first line \"Mind of a poet heart of stone\" Very nice
August 17th, 2024 12:52 - Goner (Zhangyuyouyu)
Like anyone that receives not reward for what they have done the response...
August 17th, 2024 12:49 - The Circle Game (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Three messages are they linked? Hypocrisy in a form or at least actions...
August 17th, 2024 12:46 - I\'m Dehydrated (Anthony Hanible)
A great metaphor and nicely done
August 17th, 2024 09:28 - ~> Once Upon A Dream (Thad Wilk)
A plea for love to be returned powerfully stated.
August 17th, 2024 09:26 - Rain flickers outside the window (Vsevolod Fomin)
Loved the line that sun changes places with the moon as it literally does...
August 17th, 2024 09:15 - Mask (Thoughtless)
Love Haikus and this one is a good one at least two possible meanings a...
August 17th, 2024 09:11 - Nobody\'s Perfect (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Somewhat cryptic and enigmatic making for a deep read. Nice
August 17th, 2024 09:09 - Alone (Tony36)
Sad but can be looked at as a new start. Looking back leads one to trip....
August 17th, 2024 09:08 - Totem (Lorenz)
A deep symbolic feel to this poem. Totems archetypes in a Jungian style....
August 17th, 2024 09:06 - Puppy - Part 2 (Randyjohnson71)
Man\'s best friend dogs are special and have amazing qualities. Loved it.
August 17th, 2024 09:04 - The Beat & Saint-Tropez (Maplespal)
Beautiful images and memories of beautiful places. Lovely
August 17th, 2024 09:02 - BUILDING THE NATION (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Nicely written and worded.
August 17th, 2024 09:00 - wonderful nature (Jim56)
Loved the colors and images of nature in this poem. Lovely
August 17th, 2024 08:58 - The Last Goodbye (Teddy.15)
And so it is after such moments we have to pick up and carry on. I...
August 17th, 2024 08:57 - Blessing of Peace (Orchidee)
Thanks for the blessing Orchi Loved this piece (peace)
August 17th, 2024 07:21 - Making Green & Reflex (Neville)
Well Neville creative, imaginative loved the blend of colors and the...
August 17th, 2024 07:19 - Toast (Mutley Ravishes)
Lovely metaphor set in such poetic lines. Very creative and well enjoyed...
August 17th, 2024 07:16 - The Unseen Ladder (Fanita530)
Unfortunately nepotism is the rule in most all societies. That is why...
August 17th, 2024 07:15 - Iconic Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful message and emotion expressed here Bold simply lovely
August 17th, 2024 07:12 - When A Man Cries (Garth Rakumakoe)
Full of emotion this poem breaths the norms of society on its expression....
August 17th, 2024 07:11 - At the Bottom, In the Pit (Dan Williams)
Gluttony, greed a human quality no other animals kill more than they need...
August 17th, 2024 07:08 - Infinite Light (RefugeInRain)
Motivating, interesting, inspirational.
August 16th, 2024 20:54 - E.L.V.I.R.A. (Elvira Sith) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Interesting makes one think
August 16th, 2024 20:52 - A gentle presence (Arcane-)
Macenz a beautiful picture you paint in poetic words. Peaceful and calm a...
August 16th, 2024 19:14 - Before off you go flying (Emperor)
Fear of loss pervades many relationships. Say the words.
August 16th, 2024 18:29 - Won\'t call it love (Alan R)
A beautiful take on love to not call it such and I agree.
August 16th, 2024 18:28 - Redmarsh (Kenny O\'Donnell)
A sense of sadness and resignation fills this poem. Lovely wording.
August 16th, 2024 18:26 - If I were a Tree; Beyoncé re-write (Brimelow)
Beautiful wishes and desires become the tree.
August 16th, 2024 18:25 - the curse of aphrodite (Wyster)
A poem of emotion but one to ponder as well. Nicely said
August 16th, 2024 18:23 - summer (Jon Nakapalau)
A thought beautifully stated. Loved it.
August 16th, 2024 18:21 - World Of The Wicked (Mark The Phenomenon)
Bad turned good and a happy ending. Nicely penned
August 16th, 2024 18:20 - I carry my tear everywhere (Sami mulaj)
Beautiful and so poetically stated. Loved it.
August 16th, 2024 18:18 - Firth of the Clyde (Gray0328)
Stunning images painted so poetically. A vision in this poem. Very nicely...
August 16th, 2024 18:17 - Joy (Annonymouswonder)
Faith is a powerful thing. Sounds like a prayer. Nicely said
August 16th, 2024 18:15 - Loch Lomond (Xiaobai Yulan)
A body of water can be beautiful, soft, giving, and very feminine. Loved...
August 16th, 2024 18:13 - You Want To Talk Ok Let\'s Talk (Anthony Hanible)
Very conversational and personal. Nicely done.
August 16th, 2024 18:10 - Until Saved (Kurt Philip Behm)
This seems quite biblical based. The Word seems reference to God as \"in...
August 16th, 2024 18:09 - Poets & Words (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Loved the line \"And no drought is harsh enough,
to dry a poets well.\"...
August 16th, 2024 18:05 - Rose of Reminiscence (Bliss)
So wonderfully worded and metaphoric it pulls at the heart. Very nice
August 16th, 2024 08:48 - ~> On This Moonlit Beach, (Thad Wilk)
Sweet and romantic. Nicely penned.
August 16th, 2024 08:30 - Towards a happy world 🙂✌ (Starlight)
A most beautiful sentiment so well expressed in metaphor.
August 16th, 2024 08:00 - Closed and Clothed (Mya)
Eyes closed keep all that we don\'t want to see seem not real of there. I...
August 16th, 2024 07:59 - When Evil Knocks (Anti-establishment) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I hear the anger and resentment in this poem that cries out against the...
August 16th, 2024 07:57 - Sitting in the dock (Tony36)
A most beautiful vision of places I\'ve been nostalgia and feelings of...
August 16th, 2024 07:41 - A series in order: Extended Family, By the Old Ones, Succubus, and finally a short story, Threesome. (Thoughtless)
Sexual, sensual, vivid this write is an expression of sex from different...
August 16th, 2024 06:38 - TV Judge (AuburnScribbler)
The power of News and TV a one way conversation that molds public opinion...
August 16th, 2024 06:35 - Pinocchio, deep in thought (Teddy.15)
That might have made me a little more than what could be taken in. A fun...
August 16th, 2024 05:28 - Water, then Fire (Mutley Ravishes)
That sword of wisdom is not seen often these days. Very nicely written I...
August 16th, 2024 05:23 - Why Women Weren’t Safe (Dev Parth)
A wonderful write in more than one way. The message itself is great but...
August 16th, 2024 05:20 - plants need water (Jim56)
Yes indeed they do. A fun read that speaks the truth. Well written in good...
August 16th, 2024 05:17 - Lowered (Maplespal)
Sad and even heart rending this poem shows devotion and love of one lost....
August 16th, 2024 05:16 - On Losing Weight (Amogelang Marope)
Well written and I take it a face value but there could be a metaphor here...
August 16th, 2024 05:14 - Pit (2781)
I hear the warning and it seems that it is loud and ferocious. Great...
August 16th, 2024 05:12 - No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves (Neville)
Soft words for a soft topic and beautiful as down feathers they fall upon...
August 16th, 2024 05:10 - IBERIBE ON THE STREETS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Not gay myself I appreciate your views as I do all.
August 16th, 2024 05:06 - Childlike Character (Orchidee)
A message that this time period needs to hear. Well written Orchi.
August 16th, 2024 05:05 - The Great Grey Beast. (Goldfinch60)
I remember those days too and they were so much quieter, more neighborly,...
August 16th, 2024 05:03 - Tigers Tearing (Dan Williams)
Dan this reads clearly and is full of vivid images. As you asked I will...
August 16th, 2024 04:59 - This land is my land (EvenwheniLie)
An old topic put in a most innovative and new form. Loved the rhyming with...
August 16th, 2024 04:53 - Goodbye, Pops (Cocamedo)
A great first person form in this moving write. Fear of loss of someone...
August 16th, 2024 04:51
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