Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Old Codgers Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Love, no snow age Andy. A tender and lovely write. May that love last...
  September 6th, 2024 04:29
• Out of Choices (Dan Williams) As usual, there is a significant amount of philosophy and wisdom in this...
  September 6th, 2024 04:26
• A Very Poetic Finish (Teddy.15) Nothing like getting down to the bare bones I find it interesting that...
  September 6th, 2024 04:18
• Pizza (DLewis88) Is this really about pizza? Or is it a metaphor? Nicely said in very few...
  September 5th, 2024 13:55
• Have You? (Jace) I think many people have had this thought. It is nicely expressed in this...
  September 5th, 2024 13:54
• listening ears (Mixxedchixs) A very important message in this poem. Listening is more important than...
  September 5th, 2024 13:51
• ~ Clyde The Turkey ~ Limericks (Thad Wilk) Thad, I’ve told you before I like limerick and this is a good one. It...
  September 5th, 2024 13:49
• Hibiscus Tea (Mya) A very nice metaphor. Yes those memories can be good or bad and carry with...
  September 5th, 2024 13:47
• My post is traumatic (EvenwheniLie) Whatever you call it, Shellshock or post traumatic stress disorder it is...
  September 5th, 2024 13:45
• The Man in the Corner (Raye) A poem of an undesired guest. Whether a creeper or an admirer or even a...
  September 5th, 2024 13:42
• Garbage (2781) A great story and I love poems that are ballads. This could be called a...
  September 5th, 2024 13:41
• DEAD INSIGHT (Adnan it is) Lost if not dead. That is a powerful statement. I sent the emotion in this...
  September 5th, 2024 13:36
• Crack (Gray0328) A very interesting poem. Metaphorical in many ways. Mind provoking.
  September 5th, 2024 13:31
• Dream (E.J. Waling) Dreams, mysterious, and intriguing. The most interesting poem.
  September 5th, 2024 13:29
• Dream (E.J. Waling) There are times when we are different than there are times when we are the...
  September 5th, 2024 10:56
• Spellbinding Tale (Job Welime) Gratitude well expressed in a love letter
  September 5th, 2024 10:51
• K.R.O.N.A.H.E.L. (Krona~Hel) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Powerful words, well said
  September 5th, 2024 10:48
• Point of View (Tony36) Prejudice again, darkens the eyesight of the viewer. Very nicely put into...
  September 5th, 2024 10:48
• Cross Hairs (Kurt Philip Behm) The prejudice of our point of view put into a few words that read so...
  September 5th, 2024 10:46
• The Tempest\'s Strike (Tristan Robert Lange) Descriptive and vivid in imagery. These images accompany the emotions of...
  September 5th, 2024 08:19
• A Whale of a Time (senryu) (Teddy.15) Teddy I love this haiku. It has far deeper meaning than the ocean the...
  September 5th, 2024 06:46
• The Dance of Power and Weakness (Prasun Goswami) Ahh the quest for truth. We all search for it and find it it changes day...
  September 5th, 2024 06:44
• Hereby, A Confession (Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet) We are all actors on a stage as Shakespeare said. We should all question...
  September 5th, 2024 06:42
• ODOGWU WITH THE LITERARY PEN 🖋 (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A great tribute. Nicely said.
  September 5th, 2024 06:40
• Fish (Out of water) (Weep little lion girl) Very nice tree. I love the analogy of a fish drowning. This was brought...
  September 5th, 2024 06:39
• Bitter Chains (Mark The Phenomenon) A beautiful message is sent in this poem. It is nicely worded and flows...
  September 5th, 2024 06:37
• The Bow is Drawn (Mutley Ravishes) Most beautifully said. We all ask why. A beautiful choice of wording and...
  September 5th, 2024 06:36
• What\'s Next? (Sunshine777) A wonderful message one should never look back. One should live in the...
  September 5th, 2024 06:34
• 10:09 pm (NightCoffee) Wonderful wording in this poem. It is well concocted with its own witchery...
  September 5th, 2024 06:32
• At Church (Rrodriguez) One should always go to where one finds peace. Whether this is a church or...
  September 5th, 2024 06:30
• it is not all just sad and gloomy (MR.apocalypse) Beautifully stated I love the line about how the rain makes the grass...
  September 5th, 2024 06:28
• Affirmative Lament (Steve Goldenfort) I love the first stanza to this poem. Much wisdom is contained in the poem...
  September 5th, 2024 06:24
• Locked Sensor (Introverted Sage) The center is the place to look. Answers lie within in the matter what you...
  September 5th, 2024 06:21
• Sneezing fit – tests nasal septum (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Well, I guess that pretty well says it. You have covered the subject quite...
  September 5th, 2024 06:19
• By Your Law\'s (Drone7) A good poem for parents, but also a metaphor that we as children of...
  September 5th, 2024 06:17
• 12:06 To 12:07 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Hard to know what to believe. Books all change politics change the world...
  September 5th, 2024 06:15
• Dirty Boy Heaven (A Boy With Roses) So many drugs. Love is a drug as well and one can become addicted to it....
  September 5th, 2024 06:13
• How do I speak to you? (Maplespal) A very poignant question. What do we say to one who is gone? What words...
  September 5th, 2024 06:10
• love hurts (Jim56) Very nice Jim. Love can be a one-way street. It comes from inside and does...
  September 5th, 2024 06:08
• Growing In Grace (Orchidee) Another beautiful hymn, welcome composed and with a bright thought. Good...
  September 5th, 2024 06:06
• Against The Flow/ (Goldfinch60) Gold as always, your thoughts are positive. I too go against the flow and...
  September 5th, 2024 06:04
• Now it feels right (Vishakha) Nicely said. This is the most positive thought and needs to be...
  September 5th, 2024 06:00
• What is the word? (Maplespal) I search for the same word. It seems somehow buried deep inside, but my...
  September 5th, 2024 05:56
• The Mindshark (Dan Williams) I love this one Dan it is an anthropomorphic metaphor of life itself. Cute...
  September 5th, 2024 05:21
• Hula Hooping Thru Insignificance (Rocky Lagou) With political correctness the way it is I am surprised that they got away...
  September 5th, 2024 05:10
• The Sell-Out Gig (Tom Dylan) Most intriguing writing. It is a good story by itself, but seems to be a...
  September 5th, 2024 05:08
• () The unexpected is always good. A fun read that gave me a smile.
  September 4th, 2024 13:44
• EverGreen (Bren Wrights) Fanciful and cute the things that fairytales are made of very nice
  September 4th, 2024 13:39
• The Two Sides of A Coin (The Great Kateri) Yes, the positive and negatives need to be considered without this one...
  September 4th, 2024 13:01
• ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT (Michael Edwards) From this writing, it seems as though change is difficult and tradition is...
  September 4th, 2024 12:58
• Burrow (Leoue) Clever format it was eye-catching. The messages a good one. Enjoyed the...
  September 4th, 2024 12:57
• L.U.S.T. (The Lust Ov The Nightmare Woman) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Sensual, sexual, and tempting, nice write
  September 4th, 2024 12:55
• unpredictable (Jim56) Oh yes, so many pathways we have to choose from. Reminiscence of Robert...
  September 4th, 2024 12:54
• Remontant Hydrangeas (Gray0328) Oh yes, Resurrection reincarnation call it what you may if not, literal...
  September 4th, 2024 12:52
• What is the word? (Maplespal) As I get older, I find that I have this word finding problem. I identify...
  September 4th, 2024 12:51
• Crush (Tony36) Ahh for those days again. This was a very fun read, and I wish you the...
  September 4th, 2024 12:49
• Water Divine (Kurt Philip Behm) Good questions to the majority of which I have to say yes. A fun read and...
  September 4th, 2024 12:48
• I am writer (Tom Dylan) Memories of English and poetry I am bic pentameter If I remember right,...
  September 4th, 2024 12:46
• Blank Sheet (Teddy.15) The dark and a sad piece played in a minor key or rather should I say...
  September 4th, 2024 12:37
• Exploiting life (Saleh Ben Saleh) Words of wisdom about the passing of life and its stages and how to react...
  September 4th, 2024 06:03
• HIGHWAY HEROES (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Very true words that prayers without work are dead indeed. A powerful...
  September 4th, 2024 05:53
• No Forcing No Pushing (Anthony Hanible) There is a great message in this poem and patience is to be admired....
  September 4th, 2024 05:51
• Cats Comforts (Orchidee) Orchi A nice tribute to our furry friends. I have had pets in the past and...
  September 4th, 2024 05:50
• IS THIS THE NARROW GATE? (Cerry) Jubilant writing, although some confusion as to how one thinks or feels...
  September 4th, 2024 05:48
• Death of Me (John Lee) This poem has a sense of darkness to it, almost as if it was hiding in the...
  September 4th, 2024 05:46
• Generator (E.J. Waling) This seems an echo of my flow of thought as it freely floats. A fun read.
  September 4th, 2024 05:45
• My Dothraki doctor (EvenwheniLie) Cleverly worded this poem is a fun read. It smacks of humor, but also has...
  September 4th, 2024 05:44
• The Mirage of Power (Prasun Goswami) Powerful words about a subject that is a paradox. It pretends to be all...
  September 4th, 2024 05:42
• Six Weeks and One Day (Cocamedo) In reading this poem, I got a sense of the poet, musing with thoughts,...
  September 4th, 2024 05:40
• portents ix (Eugene S.) A sense for boating privates this piece. There is a shadow of darkness as...
  September 4th, 2024 05:38
• Bukhara (Uzbek Voices) I’m most enlightening writing of a place I have never been. Full of...
  September 4th, 2024 05:36
• From A Distance. (Goldfinch60) So true Gold. We take many things for granted and see them from a distance...
  September 4th, 2024 05:03
• Like a Hangman (Dan Williams) A monologue, this writing is dark and seems metaphorical. It seems as...
  September 4th, 2024 04:59
• ~ Bloody Red Riding Hood! (Thad Wilk) This nursery rhyme seems more fit for older people. At least I would...
  September 4th, 2024 04:54
• You (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this poem gives the feel of someone who is grateful for the...
  September 4th, 2024 04:49
• The Tuesday AFTER Labour Day AND Come, Did the Holiday Fool Me? ...aaaand: Beware the Tug of Backwards  (Cheeky Missy) Old style, indeed, both in form and in wording. Nicely done
  September 3rd, 2024 20:06
• reach out (Jim56) I’m most encouraging read. This seems based upon the goodness of human...
  September 3rd, 2024 17:00
• Gifts In Life. (Goldfinch60) Aw, Andy, you have found the golden egg. So true that it is not the...
  September 3rd, 2024 16:58
• I Swear They Called It Saturday, AND, Go Say I\'m Eighty: I\'ll Swear It\'s True (Cheeky Missy) The dialect in these poems, give them a sense of character that goes...
  September 3rd, 2024 16:53
• - Blue Dragon And Viking Boy - (Thad Wilk) Brings back memories of childhood. I used to love those cookies. Thank you...
  September 3rd, 2024 16:45
• And All That\'s Gold (Teddy.15) I love the reference to fall as a sleeping summer. A most glorious right...
  September 3rd, 2024 16:42
• It Is Over (ADarkerMind) Darker, this poem is crammed full of ancient images. I haven’t heard of...
  September 3rd, 2024 16:39
• Trinity Trust (Orchidee) Aw, the old three and one. I have heard that mystery explained in many...
  September 3rd, 2024 13:35
• Everything\'s Alright (Tom Dylan) Very nice everything is a point of view I think of the song don’t worry,...
  September 3rd, 2024 07:39
• Peace To All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Very nice message and sent in such a unique way nicely Done Andy
  September 3rd, 2024 05:30
• Death Of a Monster (Dan Williams) This poem seems quite Gothic. The metaphor is a good one and I enjoyed the...
  September 3rd, 2024 05:27
• No Way to Cotham (AuburnScribbler) Often detours in life have their own blessings. A fun right in itself take...
  September 3rd, 2024 05:22
• Windy (2781) Not much of a seaman But appreciate the danger in this poem. Remember as a...
  September 2nd, 2024 12:12
• Spellbound (Teddy.15) This one Teddy has hidden meaning. It is sometimes out of the darkest...
  September 2nd, 2024 12:04
• Psalm Poem (Orchidee) Orchi Although I am no longer religious your writes Are motivating and...
  September 2nd, 2024 11:57
• Here & There (Kurt Philip Behm) I smell physics as well as a metaphor for people here. Very nicely worded.
  September 1st, 2024 17:56
• [This Is To Prove Jennifer CAN Ink Dark Stuff] (Cheeky Missy) This is a haunting read, set in classical form even the wording takes on...
  September 1st, 2024 13:17
• An Ode To The Kookaburra (Teddy.15) Teddy I love the personification of the kookaburra as a poet. I see all...
  September 1st, 2024 08:32
• Bread of Life (Orchidee) Good right Orchi I always liked the symbolism in this story. You receive...
  September 1st, 2024 08:29
• Chance Of A Kiss (Dan Williams) Bitter sweet memories. Sweet in their happiness at the time and bitter in...
  September 1st, 2024 08:26
• This Is Me. (Goldfinch60) So true Andy and accepting oneself for who one is so important. If you...
  September 1st, 2024 08:23
• It Was You? (𓆩Mase𓆪) Faith and hope are important in everyone\'s life A very personal write
  September 1st, 2024 08:21
• Look at Me, Mama (Thomas W Case) A very sad poem somewhat dark and reminds me of an old song. Nicely
  September 1st, 2024 08:19
• Yellow Is The Colour (Cassie58) Lovely the contrast of a single yellow on a field of green that to me...
  August 31st, 2024 18:46
• A man in my past (Neilton) Being taken advantage of and discarded is a very painful thing. This poem...
  August 31st, 2024 15:12