Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- God as a guy (Helena Yonatan)
Too long we have kept the image of God as a man. To me neither male of...
August 22nd, 2024 05:25 - Morning pep talk (Maplespal)
Surprisingly refreshing the ending puts a whole new view upon the...
August 22nd, 2024 05:23 - Torn apart between 2 worlds (SonamThago)
Decisions from which we can not return. That crossing of the roads that...
August 22nd, 2024 05:21 - Run run run.. (2781)
Nicely worded this poem speaks of change and the confusion of what was...
August 22nd, 2024 05:17 - Gone The Summer (Cassie58)
What a great metaphor in this poem. The seasons of life expressed in each...
August 22nd, 2024 05:14 - About to Be Forgot (Neville)
Memories that prick the soul of things promoting guilt done and comfort...
August 22nd, 2024 05:12 - Profitable Pleadings (Orchidee)
A plea for help expressed in this hymn of strife and need for mercy. A...
August 22nd, 2024 05:08 - A Walk On The Moors. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful images created in this poetic walk through memories of the past....
August 22nd, 2024 05:05 - ()
August 22nd, 2024 05:02 - why (Sheta)
Dilema well expressed. Love is a complicated thing.
August 22nd, 2024 04:34 - Sin (Alan R)
Where one ends the other begins in an endless circle a most interesting...
August 22nd, 2024 04:33 - Senior\'s day (NafisaSB)
Well stated a great message with good form and rhyme. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 04:31 - Our Bridge (Cocamedo)
Nicely written this melancholic piece is set in a dark place in the dark...
August 22nd, 2024 04:30 - butterflies in glass prisons (Anna_x_life)
A most interesting approach. By using scattered bits and pieces you join...
August 22nd, 2024 04:27 - what if i die ????? (Sheta)
A thought that anyone in a relationship has. Nicely expressed leaving it...
August 22nd, 2024 04:23 - Step back, I’m a professional taster (EvenwheniLie)
This happens as we grow older our hearing starts to go. lol It is true...
August 22nd, 2024 03:46 - All Of Me (Sunshine777)
Nicely said and positive as well.
August 21st, 2024 20:05 - Revolutions (E.J. Waling)
Constant change is the order and the only constant. This is evidenced in...
August 21st, 2024 20:04 - Dear Death (NinjaGirl)
Glad that the sad did not occur. Such a feeling of ambivalence expressed...
August 21st, 2024 19:23 - hate is heavy (Emvd)
Good advice and a nice message
August 21st, 2024 18:47 - Darkness (Kevb)
Glad you have found a way out. A great message.
August 21st, 2024 18:45 - Why? (Rrodriguez)
The answer to one question always leads to another. Well written
August 21st, 2024 18:41 - Untitled😞 (Arcane-)
Nature at its best. wonderful images Mackenz
August 21st, 2024 17:21 - Burn The Bridge (13LaurenD)
A good story but one of loss and sadness, Well written
August 21st, 2024 16:51 - God Revived (Helena Yonatan)
A most interesting presentation of both sides. Nicely done
August 21st, 2024 16:48 - Eve (Kurt Philip Behm)
Your poems always amaze me with their apparent simplicity yet far deeper...
August 21st, 2024 15:22 - Sonnet for an Angel (Thomas W Case)
A beautiful sonnet it is Thomas and a great message to someone loved.
August 21st, 2024 15:20 - In the Name of Peace (Prasun Goswami)
A story too common unfortunately. We all fight for our beliefs but...
August 21st, 2024 15:18 - Tides of love (Sami mulaj)
A most beautiful image with the feel of nature guiding a peaceful world....
August 21st, 2024 15:15 - Luke and Loretta! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A common story that many live and a nice write
August 21st, 2024 15:13 - Moving on (Purnima)
A most sad write of what could have been but didn\'t turn out to be....
August 21st, 2024 15:11 - Me (Zhangyuyouyu)
If you don\'t feel real help yourself to heal. Take the help that others...
August 21st, 2024 15:08 - Imperfect (B.E.Poet)
And so what is wrong with that? Find the perfect woman she\'s out there....
August 21st, 2024 15:05 - Take your life back (Michael William Reid)
A great message and sent well. Determination and guts is what it takes....
August 21st, 2024 15:03 - Lurking in the Shadows (M.E.M.)
Few people take the time to listen too busy in their own heads.
August 21st, 2024 11:21 - NEVER ENDING (Magzzbaby)
Loss is a difficult thing and sometimes is buried under protective...
August 21st, 2024 11:19 - The Nuthouse Olympics (Gray0328)
A fun read of nature and all its wonders. lovely
August 21st, 2024 11:18 - Inside Out (Teddy.15)
The inner light becomes an outer glow. Smiles of the heart on the outside...
August 21st, 2024 10:22 - ~ Inseparable ~ { Vignette } (Thad Wilk)
Great story of romance on the high seas. A fun read.
August 21st, 2024 09:25 - Coition Reaching The Galaxy (Mark The Phenomenon)
A most sensual exploration. Lovely
August 21st, 2024 09:24 - COMBATIVE (Bobby O)
Loved the creative rhyme scheme in this Bobby
August 21st, 2024 09:23 - Contemplation (Thoughtless)
Good advice do what I say not as I do.
August 21st, 2024 09:22 - H.E.L.L.E.N. (Hellen Greer) (WoWza!) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
A fun read nicely done
August 21st, 2024 09:20 - BROKEN CHRYSALIS (Lily May Emerald)
A most interesting message set to good rhyme
August 21st, 2024 09:19 - The way it is (Tony36)
Literal a post apocalyptic disaster and in metaphor we all live it as...
August 21st, 2024 08:11 - Wiltshire Downs (Thepoetman1234)
A beautiful write about a beautiful land. The images took me there. Very...
August 21st, 2024 08:07 - In A Time of War (Davmor73)
A most beautiful message and very well written.
August 21st, 2024 08:06 - My Jaguar (Young Fella)
The metaphor is a good one and in reality the literal jaguar is a...
August 21st, 2024 08:03 - And Then Comes The Thunder (MDStone)
Loved the theme of this one and the rhyme was great my bucket is already...
August 21st, 2024 07:38 - I think that..... (Mutley Ravishes)
Fight for a draw I say. Nice one
August 21st, 2024 07:37 - Made Like a Mountain & A Brief Conversation in A Bar About Bears .. (Neville)
Thinking about the wild again Neville wild sex and wild bare no bear...
August 21st, 2024 07:36 - The Breaking In of A New Summers Day (Neville)
A lovely setting in this poem and the section that caught my interest most...
August 21st, 2024 05:27 - different ways (Jim56)
A great message in poem that is true only you can make decisions for your...
August 21st, 2024 05:18 - MY HEAVY HEART (Kwrites)
The heart is a heavy penalty to pay for its benefits. Lovely thoughts...
August 21st, 2024 05:13 - It’s without you (Maplespal)
A clever use of language to illustrate the different aspects of the...
August 21st, 2024 05:11 - Little red boots (Falcon_mn)
This is a powerful poem that pulls at the heart strings using one of the...
August 21st, 2024 05:09 - Blues (Alan R)
This poem has a noir blue feel to it and I loved it.
August 21st, 2024 05:07 - DARK LIGHT OF NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
A great poem whether taken literally or metaphorically nicely done
August 21st, 2024 05:06 - NZUZU ON THE STREETS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A message heard loud and clear in this piece.
August 21st, 2024 05:04 - Time After Time (The Great Kateri)
An interesting question posed from two different perspectives. I like that...
August 21st, 2024 05:03 - Consoling Comforts (Orchidee)
A most familiar and good message Orchi. What ever one believes in should...
August 21st, 2024 05:01 - The past (Karalacey20)
I like the way you use language forms to give this poem character and the...
August 21st, 2024 04:59 - The Bench of Solace (Cocamedo)
The poem a metaphor for lost love and loneliness is so well worded. Nicely...
August 21st, 2024 04:57 - \'found\' (Athora13)
A poem of fear to trust and well based too. Trust first oneself and love...
August 21st, 2024 04:55 - Water (NafisaSB)
The more people the more our need for water. Conserve water and stop...
August 21st, 2024 04:53 - Back Burner (RefugeInRain)
A wonderful message that everyone needs to hear from someone, Nicely...
August 21st, 2024 04:51 - Eternal Happiness (Pita)
A most wonderful attitude expressed in this short poem well worded and...
August 21st, 2024 04:49 - Dawn\'s Full Moon. (Goldfinch60)
A most beautiful write Andy loved every word and image.
August 21st, 2024 04:00 - To Pamela (Dan Williams)
A message that many would like to send but either don\'t have the courage...
August 21st, 2024 03:56 - Skyology (Mutley Ravishes)
Most fun and vivid in the imagery.
August 20th, 2024 20:58 - Ninety (Carter M. Flynn)
Fun and true at the same time loved the line:
\"Nostalgia is the most...
August 20th, 2024 20:57 - the fear (Anouk)
A most interesting read and position on love.
August 20th, 2024 19:32 - S.P.I.R.I.T. (Spirit) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Nicely crafted with spirit.
August 20th, 2024 17:55 - Welcome to Northfield (Emvd)
Peaceful and idyllic a place one could feel was home nice images. Calming.
August 20th, 2024 17:54 - PEBBLE IN MY SHOE (R. Gordon Zyne)
Irritations are part of life it is what you do about them that counts. I...
August 20th, 2024 17:50 - The lesson in the struggle (Domilla)
A great self pep talk in this poem. One needs to feel that they can make...
August 20th, 2024 15:58 - RAW 👤 (ChrisLyn🕊)
So much pain in this poem it bleeds with sadness. Nicely written
August 20th, 2024 15:57 - for my grandma (Sheta)
Sweet and such a wonderful thought. Nicely expressed in a poem. Very nice.
August 20th, 2024 15:34 - My sweet Canary (Saleh Ben Saleh)
A beautiful poem about a cherished pet. I have had several pets in the...
August 20th, 2024 15:28 - The unspoken (Sami mulaj)
Very descriptive with vivid images. Nicely stated.
August 20th, 2024 12:51 - Always (A.L.H)
Cries of pain over loss nicely written
August 20th, 2024 12:49 - Rain (Abhishek Roy)
Rain can be so soothing and it is nice to hold up in the house or even...
August 20th, 2024 12:45 - One two till six (Kenny O\'Donnell)
A very cool story well written with good imagery and detail loved it the...
August 20th, 2024 12:04 - Can I Just Stay Sleep (Anthony Hanible)
Insomnia a terrible thing. Hope you can over come it.
August 20th, 2024 11:55 - Lineage (MarvelousM)
A beautiful thought expressed in a poem.
August 20th, 2024 11:53 - Smile (Starlight)
Hope so too. A wishful poem that feels light and airy
August 20th, 2024 10:31 - Zealots Be Warned (Kurt Philip Behm)
Seems that little is politically correct anymore even to curse demons and...
August 20th, 2024 10:29 - `~ Grandpa Tell Me Why (Thad Wilk)
Humor is the best medicine. You brought me a smile and I thank you for...
August 20th, 2024 10:27 - Foreigner (Garth Rakumakoe)
Treated as such only by the ignorant. We all belong to the same planet. I...
August 20th, 2024 10:25 - The Tiny Jug of Water on a TV Panel Show (AuburnScribbler)
Nicely worded and with a good message this one strikes to the heart of...
August 20th, 2024 08:25 - Fairs (Tony36)
We all have that child like part to us that craves excitement, color,...
August 20th, 2024 08:21 - The Quiet Bridge (Gray0328)
Most beautiful poetic lines
\"Between the teeth of hope and the tongue ...
August 20th, 2024 08:19 - Long Distance (Cassie58)
Haunting nostalgia is the best I can do in English it is far better in...
August 20th, 2024 08:14 - It\'s In You (13LaurenD)
A good write about perseverance and sticking to it. A great message.
August 20th, 2024 08:10 - His Word (Iyeah)
Prevarication such a nice word for such an ugly act. Lies come in all...
August 20th, 2024 08:07 - Stuck (Boot)
Too true to laugh social conformity is what keeps us safe but also what...
August 20th, 2024 08:05 - Apology (Thoughtless)
Message received and understood. Short and to the point a great Haiku
August 20th, 2024 06:18 - we all have a heart (Jim56)
Another piece of true wisdom in a very short poem nicely rhymed.
August 20th, 2024 06:16 - grey (Xqw)
The feeling that accompanies depression and the images that go along as...
August 20th, 2024 06:15 - Torpedoes (Maplespal)
Mistakes can be costly and here in few words this strikes home. Sounds...
August 20th, 2024 06:14
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