Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Rescue (Teddy.15) So often we need to look in a mirror to recognize that those feelings or...
  December 1st, 2024 05:28
• The wedding (2781) A fun read that emphasizes the differences in cultures and customs. We...
  December 1st, 2024 05:26
• Signs of Things to Come (Neville) If I didn’t know that it was biological, I would think that it was being...
  December 1st, 2024 05:01
• I Now Say The Word. (Goldfinch60) I know what you mean, Andy. I avoid saying that word except on the day...
  December 1st, 2024 04:57
• There, Are Ye Satisfied? (Cheeky Missy) What a delicious first poem it got my saliva flowing and made me hungry...
  November 30th, 2024 14:47
• assisted dying (Jim56) I am a supporter of euthanasia, but only if one is honest and shares it...
  November 30th, 2024 12:50
• Progress (Maplespal) We all need a way to de-escalate and diffuse ourselves from the world we...
  November 30th, 2024 12:48
• Home so sweet (Lorenz) We all have or would like to have such a place a place of safety, peace,...
  November 30th, 2024 12:45
• Music Time Machine. (Goldfinch60) Feeling survive, whereas we people do not. Nicely worded, Andy.
  November 30th, 2024 12:41
• Still Art For Art’s Sake (Neville) The makings of an artist. Whether paint or print the color comes through....
  November 30th, 2024 12:40
• Her (Tony36) Beautifully written a story of too many young women and older women as...
  November 30th, 2024 12:38
• Flood (Cassie58) You have painted a picture of nature in all of its turmoil and beauty....
  November 30th, 2024 10:22
• within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope) (Tristan Robert Lange) I like the form of this poem, but even more I liked some of the internal...
  November 30th, 2024 10:18
• Silent Scars (Rebellion_in_sanity) Such a great metaphor for this particular issue. This wonderful poem...
  November 30th, 2024 10:15
• Boy and Bonnet (Arqios) That’s very heartwarming and I’m sure all mothers feel the same. A...
  November 30th, 2024 10:12
• Footy (Doggerel Dave) Haven’t seen that game lately, Dave I guess I’m getting too old. The...
  November 30th, 2024 10:09
• But I Absolutely Love Lemoncello Cheesecake (Teddy.15) It sounds delicious and you are raising my appetite at this early hour of...
  November 30th, 2024 04:13
• Amiable Andrew (Orchidee) Orchi I feel back in Sunday school again. Nice to hear you’re back to...
  November 30th, 2024 04:09
• Sunlit Waltz (Gray0328)
  November 29th, 2024 16:21
• Sunlit Waltz (Gray0328) Beauty is there for those that wish to see it. In this poem it is...
  November 29th, 2024 16:21
• ~> Disinterred - free verse - (Thad Wilk) I think you just did. I hear the spirit speak and see the writing on the...
  November 29th, 2024 16:19
• Strolling Down Christmas Lanes (Tristan Robert Lange) Christmas was to celebrate peace, closeness to others, charity and instead...
  November 29th, 2024 16:17
• What’s in the box; torture (EvenwheniLie) A dark poem with beautiful internal rhymes. This poem screams out for...
  November 29th, 2024 12:12
• Flashback (Maplespal) Post traumatic stress disorder is a terrible thing. It takes one out of...
  November 29th, 2024 12:09
• Red and dreams girl (Lorenz) Images that pass through the mind, dreams of what could be sensations of...
  November 29th, 2024 12:07
• I want to dance with you (Tony36) A beautiful love poem that expresses a desire for closeness and touch as...
  November 29th, 2024 10:58
• Angel (senryu) (Teddy.15) May those wings carry you wherever your heart desires. A beautiful poem...
  November 29th, 2024 10:56
• winter’s embrace (Arqios) I can feel it Cryptic I can see it and that’s all that’s needed for it...
  November 29th, 2024 06:03
• Bake Day Beth (Cassie58) I have often wondered about the kitchen chaos and why every pan bowl needs...
  November 29th, 2024 06:02
• weathers getting colder (Jim56) I have seen the homeless I have talked to them. I feel for them and often...
  November 29th, 2024 06:01
• And So It Was In Early May (Kevin Hulme) This poem takes a classical form and reads well into a relationship that...
  November 29th, 2024 04:57
• morning mourning dove (Mya) Beautiful, mournful and full of the wistfulness very nicely written
  November 29th, 2024 04:54
• A Mother\'s Betrayal (Rebellion_in_sanity) Most interesting analogies that makes sense and call out for peace not war...
  November 29th, 2024 04:52
• Hanging On by My Fingertips. (Poetic Licence) When relationships fade away, it is disturbing. This poem speaks to this,...
  November 29th, 2024 04:49
• Here (Doggerel Dave) Dave, you hit upon a sore spot. I don’t believe there is any certainty...
  November 29th, 2024 04:46
• Your Most Un-Favourite Saying (Orchidee) This is an interesting subject, indeed. My least favorite saying is when...
  November 29th, 2024 04:44
• Solitude (Ishwar Chandra) The title of this poem caught my attention. I too enjoy solitude live much...
  November 29th, 2024 04:41
• Tale of the Heike parody (Rin) As I read this poem, I thought I understood it until I got to the last...
  November 29th, 2024 04:35
• My way (2781) Indeed, so true many state that he is unjust unfair but we don’t...
  November 29th, 2024 04:33
• Such a Waste of Fine Words (Neville) Oh Neville how many discarded love poems I have written. This speaks right...
  November 29th, 2024 04:32
• Buddha Says (Goldfinch60) A most lovely poem from a beloved leader. Nevertheless, my wife says that...
  November 29th, 2024 04:30
• Gossip (NafisaSB) Very good advice to all. Once you open your mouth, you open it to all the...
  November 29th, 2024 04:28
• A Crow Recollects (Mutley Ravishes) Morbidly, funny darkly, tasteful, pun intended. A great right short to the...
  November 29th, 2024 04:18
• PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O) Bobby, this is a beautiful poem of gratitude and is Confucius said...
  November 29th, 2024 04:16
• Because I Love you (Mark The Phenomenon) A pledge of love Embossed in violence. Anger to defend love nicely
  November 28th, 2024 16:57
• My sister (Rin) We all have our own ways of showing our love, and sometimes others do not...
  November 28th, 2024 16:55
• Ayahuasca spirit (Lorenz) Mystical magical And wondrous
  November 28th, 2024 16:54
• Confused hands (Maplespal) I have been there. As I have been reading your poems I have noticed their...
  November 28th, 2024 16:50
• christmas robin (Jim56) Jim, I love your nature poems, especially about the birds. I too love...
  November 28th, 2024 16:48
• Barefoot in the Snow (Rho1975) Haunting and cold this is a dark poem that conveys its message through...
  November 28th, 2024 16:43
• A Thanksgiving Poem (Tristan Robert Lange) Yes, Cristiano, you and I are on the same page today and I echo your...
  November 28th, 2024 16:41
• mateship’s duty of care (Arqios) A poem of kinship and closeness very nicely worded, convey the feeling of...
  November 28th, 2024 06:54
• Best Dream Ever (senryu) (Teddy.15) It doesn’t get any better than that. Have a wonderful day.
  November 28th, 2024 05:19
• We Are Piggies..... (Orchidee) Very nice whatever they are. I’m sure they’ll have a good day. Hope...
  November 28th, 2024 05:17
• Jazzy Night Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A glorious evening out where music plays and all cares are left at the...
  November 28th, 2024 01:52
• Quick Response (Gray0328) This poem has a creepy, kind of surreal feel of a dystopia where barcodes...
  November 27th, 2024 17:01
• My Friend (Kez) I hear a deep longing in this poem a sense of loss very well written
  November 27th, 2024 15:20
• Seen With Sadness (Cassie58) Sad, premature death., The years do not dim the sorrow. You can hear it in...
  November 27th, 2024 15:18
• ~> A Voodoo Christmas (Thad Wilk) Dark very dark and somewhat spooky with a creepy feeling to it too close...
  November 27th, 2024 15:16
• Rinascimento (Lorenz) A blend of the classical with modern the renaissance with the Z...
  November 27th, 2024 10:45
• Idol (Kerry) Adapting into a new lifestyle takes time and is difficult. Good poem,...
  November 27th, 2024 10:41
• Silent Poem (Orchidee) I think I’m losing my mind. This is the second poem. I’ve read today...
  November 27th, 2024 10:39
• Hmm (2781) The most interesting poem that is black and white, just like the print on...
  November 27th, 2024 08:11
• will the war be over (Jim56) A poem for peace, a noble cause nicely written Jim
  November 27th, 2024 07:40
• Parting of the Ways (Thoughtless) And so it is with love. Or at least what we call love which is really...
  November 27th, 2024 06:30
• UNKNOWN FACTS (Michael Edwards) Those I didn’t know. But then there are so many that I don’t know. In...
  November 27th, 2024 06:24
• The transparent wall (Rin) Full of metaphor and vivid images, this poem speaks at various levels....
  November 27th, 2024 06:22
• Kill it next life (Maplespal) An interesting in logical poem. Logic and belief have always been at odds....
  November 27th, 2024 06:20
• when the downpour ends (Arqios) Soft, tender, a rebirth. A poem of growth from sadness. Solace from the...
  November 27th, 2024 06:17
• Unreasonable Logic  (Neville) Brilliant!!! An unconventional view of convention. Masculinity in its...
  November 27th, 2024 06:11
• Farewell to Strangling (Rebellion_in_sanity) One must do what one fines fulfilling. To be simply a cog in the machine...
  November 27th, 2024 06:09
• Saccharine Succor (Tristan Robert Lange) The authors note aids in deciphering this poem. Nevertheless, as brilliant...
  November 27th, 2024 04:39
• An Unreal Dream. (Goldfinch60) Indeed, they are Andy a necessary evil they say. Well, written and well...
  November 27th, 2024 04:33
• Writer\'s Cramp (Dan Williams) The continuous thoughts of a poet. These and others circulate through the...
  November 27th, 2024 04:30
• ADULT FUN (Bobby O) Made me smile Bobby that’s worth a lot. Have a wonderful day.
  November 27th, 2024 04:25
• Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps. (ADarkerMind) Fun read, full of twisted metaphors a maze like poem of symbolic, blind...
  November 26th, 2024 20:15
• Brahmachariot (Mutley Ravishes) Sounds like something Solomon would say after all, he had a lot of...
  November 26th, 2024 19:22
• Coal Black Night (Gray0328) A beautiful poem about the mystery and darkness of night both in the...
  November 26th, 2024 18:28
• Thousands (Tony36) Yes, so many cry for peace and so many cry for freedom, but few do...
  November 26th, 2024 12:07
• Labeled (Tristan Robert Lange) I hate labels. I think they do a great disservice to anything that they...
  November 26th, 2024 12:04
• Stuck in a noose & Inaccessible (Maplespal) Two points about two different points. Nevertheless, I have seen many use...
  November 26th, 2024 06:38
• ode to the broken dream (Arqios) Buried in this beautiful complex rhyme scheme lies the metaphor of life...
  November 26th, 2024 06:35
• life (Jim56) The duality of life it has its good and it’s bad points just as a whole...
  November 26th, 2024 06:31
• Lying & Truly (Neville) Neville this poem speaks to the heart. I have felt these feelings before...
  November 26th, 2024 06:24
• Upon Visiting the Dead (Thomas W Case) I’d rather go fishing too. A great poem Thomas filled with wonderful...
  November 26th, 2024 06:21
• ~> Even Death Can Be Replaced! - A Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) I like this porn it speaks to women’s rights I suppose. At some things,...
  November 26th, 2024 06:20
• Death Asked Life. (Goldfinch60) Andy, this is a deep drop of wisdom put into a short poem. And you were...
  November 26th, 2024 06:15
• Sunrise in an Empty Field (RSM0812) Most beautiful images in this poem, and the metaphors are well placed, and...
  November 26th, 2024 06:13
• consuming (NinjaGirl) It is exactly as this that one drowns nicely written and good word choice....
  November 25th, 2024 21:04
• Silent Pictures (River123) Hi Lisa, symbolic and metaphoric. It takes a bit of thought to unravel the...
  November 25th, 2024 20:27
• Summer of dead leaves (Lorenz) An erotic and sensual poem that sounds almost surreal. Nicely worded
  November 25th, 2024 15:55
• Pulling strings (2781) This sounds reminiscent of a second coming. It has religious overtones and...
  November 25th, 2024 15:53
• My Bike (Tony36) Open Road ahead. This poem sounds carefree. Nicely done, Tony.
  November 25th, 2024 15:52
• ding a ling (Jim56) This one reminded me of the song by Chuck Berry, my Dingaling, but then...
  November 25th, 2024 15:51
• Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it? (Doggerel Dave) Yes, Dave I knew that one. I guess that I’ve been told it too many times...
  November 25th, 2024 13:02
• Echoes (Tristan Robert Lange) Familiar words maybe it was an echo I heard before or maybe just déjà vu...
  November 25th, 2024 12:59
• KP Nuts (Orchidee) Fido is right it is a +18. Oh well nice write Orchi
  November 25th, 2024 12:56
• Returned If Defective (Gray0328) There are layers of meaning to this poem, and they extend to all types of...
  November 25th, 2024 05:43
• The last part of that day (Maplespal) Your poem again of loss past memories that provoked continued mourning
  November 25th, 2024 05:40
• near or far of love (Arqios) What are those relationships that are so merged that one cannot tell where...
  November 25th, 2024 05:39