Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• negotiable leave (Arqios) A great pick for music to accompany this image crammed piece. This speaks...
  November 21st, 2022 10:28
• Scatter Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) Andy there is too little of this. Years ago, in Brazil, the news would...
  November 20th, 2022 06:08
• fastidious malignment (Arqios) Such use of verbiage. Who has been slandering you? I loved the feel of the...
  November 19th, 2022 07:09
• where might you be? (Arqios) A beautiful dream like image of memories and the presence. So well worded...
  November 17th, 2022 08:33
• My Good Life. (Goldfinch60) I feel the same way Gold and I feel and endorse your last line.
  November 16th, 2022 07:26
• What is To Be Done? (Doggerel Dave) Well rhymed, well timed. I approach politics like a crime scene with the...
  November 15th, 2022 22:01
• irreconcilably different? (Arqios) A good question that can be taken more than one way. I suppose that the...
  November 15th, 2022 10:37
• transitions (Arqios) I particularly liked the last stanza, pregnant with imagery. A timely...
  November 13th, 2022 09:03
• To Walk By Moonlight (Bella Shepard) Bella this revives many feelings of peace and serenity. Such moments must...
  November 12th, 2022 12:48
• Love (Doggerel Dave) So true Dave. Love is used as a façade to cover what really lies behind a...
  November 12th, 2022 07:21
• muffly muppet (Arqios) Somehow this little miss Tuffet sounds vaguely familiar. Are you sure...
  November 11th, 2022 07:29
• Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60) The older I get the more this is true. When young other\'s opinions...
  November 10th, 2022 11:07
• Fatalist? (Bella Shepard) This one goes far deeper than the light hearted initial impression. I...
  November 9th, 2022 16:56
• Presence Perceived (Orchidee) Very nice orchidee it reminds me a great deal of Psalms, one of the more...
  November 9th, 2022 16:45
• asteriskos (Arqios) This brings to mind the Kabala and the angel\'s alphabet that to those...
  November 9th, 2022 09:25
• POOL (Dusk arising) A wonderful reflection. It is in water that we seek wisdom, its form...
  November 9th, 2022 08:44
• Truth (Sorenbarrett) Thank you dusk so good to hear from you your comments are always so
  November 9th, 2022 08:36
• The Future (Bella Shepard) Another great haiku yes we are all trying to catch up with our future.
  November 7th, 2022 16:02
• Dwelling Delights (Orchidee) A hymn indeed. Be careful they will soon draft you to write these for the...
  November 7th, 2022 10:09
• rail branches (Arqios) This short snapshot of a poem dives deep into my heart and soul. I have...
  November 7th, 2022 10:03
• Centipede scare (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) We. as people, seem attracted to danger and what can cause pain. Nature...
  November 6th, 2022 14:27
• fill each unruled page (Arqios) Judging a book by its cover when there is no book seems to be the norm now...
  November 6th, 2022 09:12
• To Tyro Poets in Need of Advice: (Doggerel Dave) Poetry is like music to me, there is no one type that I prefer. A well...
  November 6th, 2022 09:00
• Praises Prepared (Orchidee) A true hymn of praise. I am glad to see you pointed out the the formal...
  November 6th, 2022 08:53
• Integrity Issue (Doggerel Dave) A well told story with wit and a happy ending. What more could you want in...
  November 5th, 2022 07:11
• Brain Full. (Goldfinch60) The process may not be selective but why does it seem that what falls off...
  November 5th, 2022 07:05
• minding your portals (Arqios) This piece has a hypnotic beat that like its message takes charge of the...
  November 5th, 2022 06:58
• seasonalities (Arqios) Many think of Christmas when talking of seasons, I no. I hear these words...
  November 4th, 2022 21:32
• Storms Of Clearance. (Goldfinch60) If it doesn\'t kill you it will make you stronger.
  November 4th, 2022 21:28
• Exhorting To Endurance (Orchidee) A hymn of praise indeed. This could easily be sung in church. Nicely...
  November 4th, 2022 21:26
• Collective Communion (Orchidee) A true poem of thanks giving. Very nicely written.
  November 3rd, 2022 06:20
• The C Word. (Goldfinch60) It\'s funny what is in a word that we can only use the first letter and...
  November 3rd, 2022 06:16
• Just Another Day…. (Doggerel Dave) I don\'t know what has led us to be so politically correct and loose our...
  November 2nd, 2022 19:10
• I Dreamt (Bella Shepard) This to me is an ideal haiku, although maybe not by oriental standard, it...
  November 2nd, 2022 13:26
• with you (Arqios) A wonderful longing feeling accompanies this poem. It seems somehow...
  November 2nd, 2022 09:41
• Not Enough (Doggerel Dave) Agreed, too many unthought suggestions by those that don\'t understand the...
  October 31st, 2022 13:58
• Turtle On A Brick (Bella Shepard) Bella I love the way you present this story and dilema. Not only were the...
  October 31st, 2022 13:55
• main architect (Arqios) This is what I once believed and still hold some tendency toward. I would...
  October 31st, 2022 13:50
• Teaching Respect. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful story. To me a handshake is a sign of respect. I knew a man...
  October 31st, 2022 13:46
• Raindrop (Sorenbarrett) Thank you, L.B. your comments are always so welcome. I deeply appreciate...
  October 31st, 2022 08:39
• Concern.... (Doggerel Dave) Years ago in Brazil they made an attempt to match each bad item on the...
  October 27th, 2022 07:31
• Ian (Rocky Lagou) I have weathered so many hurricanes I have lost count, of holding in...
  October 27th, 2022 07:02
• Going On In Grace (Orchidee) A beautiful write that we should all look to fulfill
  October 27th, 2022 06:47
• Magic In Music. (Goldfinch60) Art, poems, and music all give meaning to life and translate life\'s...
  October 27th, 2022 06:45
• toward-winter verse (Arqios) All things need a time of rest or hibernation, so too with writing. It...
  October 27th, 2022 05:59
• there were shadows (Dusk arising) A snapshot frozen in time. This also evokes something far deeper, a...
  October 26th, 2022 16:39
• Two Loners at the Pond (Haiku/Senryū #6) (Rocky Lagou) I always have been intrigued by haikus and only wish I knew how to wright...
  October 26th, 2022 16:29
• Just Because (senryu-maybe) (Bella Shepard) I know little about the senryu form but regardless this is an appropriate...
  October 25th, 2022 18:58
• Phoenix (Bella Shepard) Bella I have seldom found so few words convey so much emotion and meaning....
  October 24th, 2022 16:07
• Into The Universe (Bella Shepard) Breathing helps center us, calm us and is a method used by different...
  October 23rd, 2022 16:09
• A Single Thought (Bella Shepard) Profound and deep, but don\'t pant too deep or it may never come up. So...
  October 21st, 2022 13:43
• Compass Rose (Rocky Lagou) All dreams need just a little water to spawn germination and a little more...
  October 17th, 2022 11:51
• Seize and See. (Fay Slimm.) Carpe diem! Well expressed. I too believe that there only is the present...
  October 17th, 2022 11:47
• Off On Vacation! (Bella Shepard) I hope that this trip inspires many more wonderful poems of yours. Look...
  October 17th, 2022 11:42
• licence to keel (Arqios) All kinds are needed, comedy and tragedy, but of Shakespeare\'s works, I...
  October 17th, 2022 11:33
• With All My Fondest Regards (Neville) Not limited to ex-lovers, this could easily be sent to many so called...
  October 17th, 2022 11:24
• Nature Nurtured (Orchidee) A true poem of thanksgiving. Very appropriate for this season in the U.S....
  October 17th, 2022 11:21
• Thoughts In Life. (Goldfinch60) A positive view that lifts the spirit and gives hope in a world so full of...
  October 17th, 2022 11:13
• queen (Dusk arising) Am touching piece, about a loved lady. We all must some day follow.
  October 17th, 2022 11:09
• Strindberg Principle (Arqios) A wonderful write Strindberg would be proud. naturalism or mysticism,...
  October 10th, 2022 10:34
• The Fortress of a Lonely Mind (J.H.Byron-Nuel) I like plays, although I am somewhat ignorant in this area. This was short...
  October 8th, 2022 07:45
• Gracie’s Ghost (J.H.Byron-Nuel) Ghosts hold two juxtaposed images for me: the spirit that can not rest and...
  October 7th, 2022 22:03
• sunrising sunset (Arqios) This poem hit me in different ways. The sunrise portrayed so well the dawn...
  October 6th, 2022 20:58
• Hot or Wot? (Doggerel Dave) Dave I love the humor at the expense of the suffering. I find it helpful...
  October 6th, 2022 09:40
• Brahn Boots. (Doggerel Dave) I love satire in any works, but poetry seems to lend itself to this....
  October 6th, 2022 07:12
• In Life (Bella Shepard) An existential question that we all need to ask ourselves. Well said Bella
  October 5th, 2022 13:00
• looking for a real bargain (Arqios) I love these bits and pieces. Too little too late.
  October 5th, 2022 07:23
• take two (Arqios) \"Personification of hope\" well stated. Hope the last to die. I loved...
  October 4th, 2022 06:49
• I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere.. (Doggerel Dave) I think most of us can identify with that. My house I trapped over 80 rats...
  October 4th, 2022 06:38
• Oh Please! (Doggerel Dave) Politics has been a problem for some time. Plato wrote a book or two on...
  October 4th, 2022 06:32
• Each Night (Bella Shepard) A beautiful verse, so full of peace and calm. It brought back so many...
  October 3rd, 2022 13:59
• Let Me Be (Bella Shepard) Wise words and good advice for everyone. I felt almost as if I were in...
  September 29th, 2022 14:19
• to be seen (Arqios) The mind can make time stand still for good or bad. Beautifully written...
  September 27th, 2022 13:23
• Teach Me (Bella Shepard) A great message that is far deeper than the few words initially reflect.
  September 26th, 2022 16:40
• This Cat is Coo Coo (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) A fun poem to read. It is always nice to lighten up a bit.
  September 26th, 2022 10:02
• hands off that snooze button! (Arqios) This conjured up feelings long buried. I particularly liked \"release the...
  September 23rd, 2022 07:08
• A Right Royal...... (Doggerel Dave) God save the queen. Oh too late. I too did like her and her image....
  September 17th, 2022 09:29
• re(ad)writing poetry (Arqios) This struck me in a long-buried place. Long before I started writing...
  September 17th, 2022 06:49
• You Make Me Feel So Bad (Bella Shepard) I have always felt that it is only those that we really love that have the...
  September 15th, 2022 13:13
• impervious impermeability (Arqios) Perceptive from eyes that do not see. I liked this poem very much, it...
  September 15th, 2022 09:02
• The Cold Light of Day (Jenny.g) I took this to apply to more than relationships or people and seems more...
  September 13th, 2022 12:58
• 100 Years Strong (Bella Shepard) Inspiring! A wonderful write and tribute. My grandfather was a...
  September 9th, 2022 18:54
• Gone! (Dusk arising) She was extraordinary. I seldom give much notice to world leaders but even...
  September 9th, 2022 07:45
• this old upturned boat (Dusk arising) The image is so perfect, that of old boards. The metaphor of a boat turned...
  September 8th, 2022 09:37
• starlight (Dusk arising) This touches my soul and reaches beyond now to timelessness
  September 6th, 2022 13:59
• Let it be (Shaa) A beautiful expression of young love and passion.
  September 5th, 2022 18:44
• The Steel Fortress (Bella Shepard) Bella this is a wise and wonderful statement.
  September 5th, 2022 13:20
• My Mother- My Heart (LittleTalks) This is a heart rending and heart warming poem all in one. So much to...
  August 27th, 2022 16:54
• The Final Over. (Goldfinch60) I know very little of cricket but this poem brought back memories of Casey...
  August 27th, 2022 07:48
• September (Dusk arising) No matter which season you love this poem conveys the passion and lust for...
  August 27th, 2022 07:41
• Creating Memories. (Goldfinch60) We rarely think of the memories that we are creating. But as we look back...
  August 24th, 2022 07:27
• Happy Together (Bella Shepard) Dear Bella music has always been a passion for me. I too grew up in that...
  August 22nd, 2022 16:01
• read to your satisfaction (Arqios) A wonderful metaphor Thoth inventor of the written word, who later in,...
  August 22nd, 2022 07:29
• the budding senescent (Arqios) They say you are only as young as you think you are. Although the body...
  August 21st, 2022 21:50
• Being Human (Bella Shepard) Whenever we think we know something about it we find we were wrong. Being...
  August 16th, 2022 13:24
• Sticky Hands and Grape Juice Smiles (Bella Shepard) Bella this brought so many memories of my own children and the past. The...
  August 12th, 2022 13:02
• surface tension (Dusk arising) Like an ember that glows, hope can be ignited to blaze anew with the...
  August 12th, 2022 11:18
• Every Life is a Story (Bella Shepard) Bella I love how you connected the individual story of people to the...
  August 6th, 2022 17:50
• Turtle Life (Jazzwa30) Good advice. It is easy to see and we would be better off if we followed...
  August 5th, 2022 08:10
• Moonlight face-timing (Jue Ju) (L. B. Mek) L.B. I have to say I am not familiar with this form but thank you for...
  August 5th, 2022 06:52