Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Greatest Myth (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) These are almost Tao like in their wisdom. Most lovely
  March 12th, 2025 12:23
• Clock of time (RSM0812) Images pour though this poem as if it were a dream. The line (And horizons...
  March 12th, 2025 12:21
• Happiness (Gray0328) I had to read this twice to grasp it. The it in this poem makes it...
  March 12th, 2025 12:17
• The Cost of Dreams (TheInnerLens) This poem seems to talk of a heavy price for obtaining dreams. Sometimes...
  March 12th, 2025 12:13
• Beyond words (Nicole Pritchard) A plea for belief this poem has good rhyme and flows well. It makes its...
  March 12th, 2025 12:10
• mothers love (Jim56) True love indeed it maternal Jim. Whether human or animal none can exceed...
  March 12th, 2025 12:08
• Russian Ballad after Alexander Vazenmiller (Ksey_Gan) There are stacks of wood in the wood shed here and someone has lost a hair...
  March 12th, 2025 12:06
• Lost home (Lorenz) All things are not as they seem. This poem offers so many metaphors it is...
  March 12th, 2025 11:59
• Casual Sunburn (Tkatie118) A poem of loss? Or maybe the loss is the innocence lost. A poem of pain...
  March 12th, 2025 08:40
• Don\'t Call This A Come-Back (Tom Dylan) Glad to hear it. We all take a hiatus once in a while and a needed rest...
  March 12th, 2025 08:35
• DREAM RETURNING (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Wow! How nicely written this piece that could be about the old or one...
  March 12th, 2025 08:33
• The Devil\'s Design (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan this poem filled with delightful alliteration, anaphora, oxymoron...
  March 12th, 2025 08:30
• Tick or Tock? (Orchidee) Caught in a time warp Orchi? Think of the jet lag. Maybe your a photon...
  March 12th, 2025 05:09
• Familiar (Eugene S.) I can feel the darkness in this poem and it has sense of power to it....
  March 12th, 2025 04:17
• don\'t run (Sheta) Good advice in poetic form. Motivational, inspirational, educational. Very...
  March 12th, 2025 04:14
• Osiris And The Eye of Horus (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A great metaphor here short but sweet and told for ages in different...
  March 12th, 2025 04:13
• I bleed holy (Funmiwrites) Emotions and sensations flow like waves on the sea in this poem. Building,...
  March 12th, 2025 04:10
• Quantum Mix (E.J. Waling) Information, energy, transformation, matter, gravity, time, entropy, so...
  March 12th, 2025 04:07
• The things I wish I said in Therapy. (Gracie🍯) Such a common feel for any new relationship. How do you strip yourself...
  March 12th, 2025 04:02
• There is a flower (Kevin Hulme) I love the metaphor in this poem, it blooms fresh. So nicely written with...
  March 12th, 2025 04:00
• panhandler’s timepiece (Arqios) This one gives the mind space to wander. Like time itself it is in no...
  March 12th, 2025 03:56
• Buzzard. (Goldfinch60) I would too if not for the menu. It takes a tough stomach to be a buzzard....
  March 12th, 2025 03:50
• Cant do anything right (Trix) A sad point of view. When one doesn\'t believe in themselves no one else...
  March 11th, 2025 19:57
• Returns (Mutley Ravishes) Dreams are often best or at least better than reality. Mastery often only...
  March 11th, 2025 19:54
• Distractions (Dyslexic.gun) A poem of realization of self. Very nicely done
  March 11th, 2025 19:51
• How is it? (Kez) Many questions in this poem and they all lead to the same answer: you...
  March 11th, 2025 19:46
• Прощання | Farewell to a loved one (Hanna_love) A love poem for distant galaxies. Very nice
  March 11th, 2025 19:43
• Gloryhole (A Boy With Roses) Passion builds tension in this poem of desire and fantasy. Well done.
  March 11th, 2025 17:01
• What do I do (Xqw)
  March 11th, 2025 16:57
• What do I do (Xqw) A poem of emotional confusion where two are torn apart but can\'t bring...
  March 11th, 2025 16:57
• I\'m waiting here (Maplespal) A sense of loss and longing pervades this poem and extends a hand of hope...
  March 11th, 2025 15:54
• Regret\'s Heavy Weight (Nicole Pritchard) Guilt and forgiveness go hand in hand. This poem screams out with pain and...
  March 11th, 2025 15:53
• Let\'s Celebrate Fat Tuesday Year-Round, Eh?! (Cheeky Missy) I hear the exhaustion in the first the longing for sweet in the second and...
  March 11th, 2025 13:17
• Rippling rhymes (Arial) Calming and like a lullaby it hums
  March 11th, 2025 12:46
• Your Mind (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A wonderful write full of wisdom that flows in flowing words as water...
  March 11th, 2025 12:45
• Ms. Neal - The Sonnet (JuneM) Descriptive and with great images it tells its tale without telling it.
  March 11th, 2025 12:42
• Born To Forever (Kurt Philip Behm) Grim thought to many hope to others. Another well written poem
  March 11th, 2025 12:15
• The fifth horseman (Lorenz) A grim picture of the disease and in metaphor it rides its horse over the...
  March 11th, 2025 12:14
• The .embroidered towel after Andre Malishko (Ksey_Gan) Those reminders that trigger memories. A poem that in its charm lays out...
  March 11th, 2025 12:11
• Let\'s say hello... (Cellinic) Ah Hippocrates and the spleen issue. What type of bile do we have today,...
  March 11th, 2025 12:09
• Ordinary married sexagenarian mortal fêted as savior incarnate... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Times have changed and one has to adapt. A fun poem about keeping one\'s...
  March 11th, 2025 12:07
• The Divine Circle (Gray0328) Very nice Gray a poem that I am on board with all the way. Everything is...
  March 11th, 2025 10:56
• friends#2 (Sheta)
  March 11th, 2025 10:54
• friends#2 (Sheta) Friends more important than most know. Friends we pick and so unlike...
  March 11th, 2025 10:54
• Tangle Teaser (Cassie58) A poem of nostalgia and flavored with a hint of sadness and longing. Very...
  March 11th, 2025 09:55
• Night Psychosis (Katdream) A impelling write in question of what is real and what is illusion. A dark...
  March 11th, 2025 09:52
• Empty (RSM0812) Some powerful lines with vivid images in this poem that smacks of pain and...
  March 11th, 2025 09:50
• The Magic Man (Thomas W Case) Great stuff here Thomas. Some lines lead to inspiration. In metaphor it...
  March 11th, 2025 09:47
• Your Journey (Tony36) Another good message to stay true to oneself. (To thine own self be true)...
  March 11th, 2025 08:02
• Astrophel\'s call to the stars (Kaelyn Jade) A great poem of an existential journey that ended in finding oneself and...
  March 11th, 2025 07:06
• Life Saver (Kevin Michael Bloor) Great words that should be taken to heart. To each their own and taste can...
  March 11th, 2025 07:03
• The Life in Words (Whats write for me) Words of wisdom with which to sharpen a tool used to hew stone and flesh....
  March 11th, 2025 07:01
• family (Jim56) A bright and wonderful thought Jim this poem brings a smile of warmth to...
  March 11th, 2025 06:59
• The Dastardly Dell of Death (Tristan Robert Lange) Vivid and graphic this poem appears so literal and dark, Cold as a corpse...
  March 11th, 2025 06:57
• Unmask Me (Scarlette Howard) A poem in a prayer or a prayer in a poem. Either way a plea for protection...
  March 11th, 2025 05:31
• Respect Jesus But Don\'t Forget God (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Contradictions in everything. Religion itself a contradiction as is God....
  March 11th, 2025 05:29
• Epic (Alan R) Memories wings grown strong with positive distortion are a beautiful sight...
  March 11th, 2025 05:25
• Moments (A.H. Browning) And don\'t we all? The question is to whom and for what reason. A fun poem...
  March 11th, 2025 05:21
• This Is Me (Ajon4wheels) A valid point that people base their decisions upon preconceived...
  March 11th, 2025 05:19
• Miss Mary Court (Kevin Hulme) A very nicely worded poem around a topic little discussed and with great...
  March 11th, 2025 05:14
• The Patience of Time (TheWanderer_and_his_Ms.Reverie) A beautiful poem that grows as it moves along until the end where it...
  March 11th, 2025 05:11
• Organic vs Artificial (Demar Desu) Got it I think, how hard to eat rocks. Very nice.
  March 11th, 2025 05:06
• Poetry isn\'t for me (Tom Dylan) A beautiful recognition that poetry in different ways is for all. A...
  March 11th, 2025 05:05
• One More Open Verdict For the Road (Neville) This short poem encapsulates so much in an instant just like the fall....
  March 11th, 2025 05:03
• a royal pain (Arqios) Pride and obstinacy together make for an immovable object as well as an...
  March 11th, 2025 04:54
• A Demon in Disguise (Jodie) A poem of being lost in identity and image and the need for that...
  March 11th, 2025 04:37
• They were just words (Pineapple_pizza018) A poem of regret and sadness. There is anger and remorse in this piece and...
  March 11th, 2025 04:35
• Armored Vehicle (Mutley Ravishes) This could well be about the Covid or black death or about alien invasion...
  March 11th, 2025 04:31
• In recent news (EvenwheniLie) The future doesn\'t look too bright. A good write
  March 10th, 2025 18:09
• My forever puppeteer (Melancholia) We are all pulled by strings. Strings of emotions pulled by those we care...
  March 10th, 2025 18:07
• It there but its not (Trix) Here then gone. Things come and go. Nothing lasts but then in a way it...
  March 10th, 2025 18:04
• The Last Man On Earth (TommyDingo) A most interesting metaphor for social isolation. Nicely rhymed.
  March 10th, 2025 15:46
• The nanosecond bad a** to risk romance (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Poetic cybersex. A most unique write.
  March 10th, 2025 15:45
• THE REVENGE OF THE EXECUTED WITCH after Vessa Blumenbaum (Ksey_Gan) An interesting story well told. Poetically written. Very nice
  March 10th, 2025 15:39
• I Can\'t Cage You Up With A Title (Anthony Hanible) A poem of desperation and enough emotion bottled up to fizz over the top....
  March 10th, 2025 13:46
• A Good Cry (M.E.M.)
  March 10th, 2025 13:44
• A Good Cry (M.E.M.) Spillways are built to let water out of a dam and are far better than a...
  March 10th, 2025 13:44
• hello, spring (Paperjam) The unexpected end is what makes this poem lovely
  March 10th, 2025 11:23
• Self-Love (Kurt Philip Behm) Once again a reflective write that all of us should look at. A beautiful...
  March 10th, 2025 10:55
• Stubbornness (Scarlette Howard) A prayer in a poem recognizing human frailties and asking for help. Nicely...
  March 10th, 2025 10:54
• Queues (Neville) Neville this poem is darker than burnt bread. Ashes to ashes dust to dust...
  March 10th, 2025 10:51
• I am only 85 (Hzugman) A poem that does not tell if this is a girlfriend or a dog. Either way it...
  March 10th, 2025 10:37
• Evening (Ellen Marsell) Great imagery in this poem. Very nice.
  March 10th, 2025 10:35
• The Tavern (JasmineUK) A wild ride fantasy aside a bar\'s bride with doors open wide. Nightmare...
  March 10th, 2025 08:48
• Things Change Everyday (Kaelyn Jade) Change is inevitable in all things from environment to emotions and in the...
  March 10th, 2025 08:40
• One Way (Teardrop) Delightful words and images in this poem of letting go and finding one\'s...
  March 10th, 2025 08:37
• Speak (Tony36) A wonderful message that needs to be heard and acted on. Don\'t only speak...
  March 10th, 2025 08:35
• LEAVES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A beautiful image in and of itself free of the metaphor. And such is life...
  March 10th, 2025 08:33
• Adoration\'s Eyes (Tristan Robert Lange) Romantic, sensuous, erotic and loving. A most lovely love poem.
  March 10th, 2025 08:09
• Hell is a Rollorcoaster (RSM0812) A rather grim thought even for a dark poem. Well written but hopefully not...
  March 10th, 2025 06:53
• happiness (Jim56) I can always depend on you Jim to cheer the day with one of your poems so...
  March 10th, 2025 06:51
• A Fanfair Of Hot Air (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) It would be a fun read if it weren\'t real...... if it weren\'t...
  March 10th, 2025 05:07
• All Things Revealed in Him (Whats write for me) Shedding light on something has various meanings here part is revealed....
  March 10th, 2025 05:05
• Robust and vast (Maplespal) Varied thoughts are introduced as the poem evolves. Imagination is shown...
  March 10th, 2025 05:02
• A Shred of Evidence (Tkatie118) A mystery poem that remains unresolved. The beginning of this poem reminds...
  March 10th, 2025 04:58
• The Constant Flow (Gray0328) Well stated in good images the concept that time continues to flow...
  March 10th, 2025 04:50
• I Would Have Lost Hope Series Pt. 2 (Pita) A very nice sonnet that is at the same time a plea for help. Very nicely...
  March 10th, 2025 04:44
• Mute (Funmiwrites) A most interesting soliloquy with questions of a most rhetoric nature....
  March 10th, 2025 04:40
• Will This Stop? (Orchidee) You made me smile Orchi and that is always good. Have a great day
  March 10th, 2025 04:38
• Hippowhatsitphobia Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A poet\'s nightmare. Try putting rhyme to that. I think that you have...
  March 10th, 2025 04:31