Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• ~> My Mem\'ries Of A Tibetan Monastery (Thad Wilk) What a great story. Unique and fun as a punishment for a minor crime that...
  December 6th, 2024 12:38
• King of the Road (Mutley Ravishes) Mojo jest what a most unique manner of saying it. A most fun read.
  December 6th, 2024 12:35
• What’s Shaken? (Jerry Reynolds) Such a great metaphor for the common practice of taking what one...
  December 6th, 2024 09:20
• The Quiet Conqueror (Arqios) Beautiful!! Such a great metaphor and as you put it symbol of...
  December 6th, 2024 09:18
• Set you free (Tony36) Sounds like a good trip and thanks for the invite. A very upbeat poem of...
  December 6th, 2024 09:15
• A Tale of Two Journeys (Tristan Robert Lange) We like wolves are social animals and look for acceptance. A poing well...
  December 6th, 2024 09:13
• Silly (2781) A great use of words in this write. Clever and well done.
  December 6th, 2024 07:54
• caring dove (Jim56) If only people were the same. A beautiful poem of giving and love. Nicely...
  December 6th, 2024 06:13
• Shadows In The Dark (Teardrop) A beautiful metaphor with great imagery. Many of us hide in the shadows...
  December 6th, 2024 06:10
• I escaped (Maplespal) This writing has a most familiar sound to it from your last. Again,...
  December 6th, 2024 05:30
• Day Dawning (Orchidee) Another great write . A worthy hymn. It’s funny.Orchi How these ratings...
  December 6th, 2024 05:28
• Hidden in Sight (Neville) Absolutely beautiful!! A lovely short that has more impact on the reader...
  December 6th, 2024 05:26
• Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence) How easily we look down upon others. We forget that we are all human...
  December 6th, 2024 05:24
• I Am A Monster Born Of Woe (Rho1975) A poem with power and deep emotion. It evokes a sense of outrage as well...
  December 6th, 2024 04:17
• The Edge of Everything (Rho1975) Very nicely written this poem tightly describes the difficulty in letting...
  December 6th, 2024 04:14
• Natural Art. (Goldfinch60) Lines of a master. Gold this poem presents wonderful lines of free verse...
  December 6th, 2024 04:07
• The Gardner Walks Off Slowly (Dan Williams) This poem as a metaphor contains very deep meaning. It is inspiring...
  December 6th, 2024 04:02
• Table Manners (Mutley Ravishes) When you lose your head, it’s hard to mind your manners. A fun read they...
  December 6th, 2024 03:54
• That hot day (Maplespal) A wonderful beginning and entry into this poem. The drop of sweat was...
  December 5th, 2024 13:23
• I Dreamed in Green (Thomas W Case) Lovely! Thomas this was wonderful full of familiar images that took me...
  December 5th, 2024 13:20
• ~> Grim Reaper\'s Not Lonely Anymore! (Thad Wilk) Here is a fun read that tickles the fancy to the bone. Loved it
  December 5th, 2024 13:19
• There Is No Place To Return To (ADarkerMind) I feel drunk after reading this poem. That is not a bad thing but one of...
  December 5th, 2024 13:16
• Toast (Tony36) Tony you are getting ahead of me. This sounds like New Years and we...
  December 5th, 2024 13:12
• Dying Bird (Jerry Reynolds) Most poeticly worded this poem is wistful and nostalgic. Lovely!!
  December 5th, 2024 12:13
• Time machine (Lorenz) This evoked many old memories and resurrected some old emotions. That is...
  December 5th, 2024 08:41
• Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58) Very nice Cassie yes, it is the rare person that stands up against the...
  December 5th, 2024 08:39
• santa dream (Jim56) You are getting us ready for the season, Jim. This seasonal poem is full...
  December 5th, 2024 08:37
• Crowing Time (Tristan Robert Lange) Another dark passage with words of caution. It reads as a cloudy day under...
  December 5th, 2024 08:34
• Hidden Garden (reverse nonet) (Arqios) A most peaceful and relaxing passage. I was in that very spot this...
  December 5th, 2024 08:31
• Creation of Life (Poetic Licence) An interesting journey. If it is a human one in all very few cases, it is...
  December 5th, 2024 08:28
• Plagiarised (2781) It is always good to put a smile on one’s face. A little humor never...
  December 5th, 2024 03:55
• The Ghost of John Lennon (Teddy.15) One of my favorite songs, Teddy. A beautiful thought and beautiful words....
  December 5th, 2024 03:53
• The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60) Nothing speaks, louder than silence. Yes, Sandy silence is a powerful...
  December 5th, 2024 03:44
• The Promise of Happiness (Gray0328) Promises depend upon who makes them. It is like truth. It depends upon how...
  December 4th, 2024 18:48
• Bobby Fischer (Lorenz) Bobby had his troubles and became a bit paranoid in the end. I feel rooked...
  December 4th, 2024 13:05
• ~> Elephant Insemination Workers \"A Tribute To Them\" (Thad Wilk) I don\'t know I would hate to get the sperm jerking on that...
  December 4th, 2024 13:01
• Numbers (Tristan Robert Lange) I love the use of numbers in this piece. 2 begin with it was gr8.
  December 4th, 2024 12:57
• Sponge (Tony36) A most beautiful sentiment and so well said
  December 4th, 2024 12:54
• Who The Hell Stole Christmas? (Teddy.15) Such a great recanting of the tale in such good verse it could be told...
  December 4th, 2024 12:53
• Evil time (2781) A prophesy of doom sounds like Jeramiah I had better head for the cellar....
  December 4th, 2024 12:50
• home is where the heart beats (Arqios) Cryptic, Again, if you dive just below the surface of your poems, there is...
  December 4th, 2024 05:30
• Off I drove (Maplespal) Frightening thoughts that many have already had some time in their life....
  December 4th, 2024 05:27
• Who reads this rubbish? (Orchidee) Orchi it is only the craftiest that fain daftness. Underneath those words...
  December 4th, 2024 05:25
• Close Shaves and Final Cuts (Neville) Neville. Now this is something that I hadn’t thought about. Since you...
  December 4th, 2024 05:21
• One of Life’s soliders hidden in the brush (EvenwheniLie) The beat of each rhyming word is like the throb of one’s pulse. This...
  December 4th, 2024 05:18
• My sweet rain (Domilla) A longing poem that lays out its need for another before the reader....
  December 4th, 2024 05:00
• Oyster Shucking - Factory Girls (Cassie58) Cassie, this is poetic indeed it has several wonderful lines“ harvest...
  December 4th, 2024 04:56
• Sitting By My River. (Goldfinch60) Another painting of peace and tranquility all in words, magnificently laid...
  December 4th, 2024 04:48
• Love Poem (Dan Williams) Love that goes beyond this life inscribed in this poem. The first part of...
  December 4th, 2024 04:45
• What Way This Sea I Crave? (ADarkerMind) Here I felt a series of poetic lines fall as leaves from trees. They...
  December 3rd, 2024 20:04
• Crow-Spazzing (Mutley Ravishes) Wow!! What a great poem. This one is surreal and speaks to the...
  December 3rd, 2024 19:17
• Clue: The Whodunit Quest (Gray0328) I remember the game well and not just the game but the application of this...
  December 3rd, 2024 17:04
• If I was a boy (Domilla) A beautiful romantic take on what a man should say to a woman but that...
  December 3rd, 2024 11:31
• Sight Seeing With Melllan part 2 (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) I grew up in the cold and snow so I know what that’s about. I tuned back...
  December 3rd, 2024 10:35
• Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws (Tristan Robert Lange) A read on the darker side it seems to have a feel of Gothic to it....
  December 3rd, 2024 10:32
• ~> MONKEY BUSINESS! (Thad Wilk) I’ve known some people that look like that. Nowadays, you have to be...
  December 3rd, 2024 10:29
• You\'re Own Path (Tony36) Another good message. It is more and more difficult nowadays for us to be...
  December 3rd, 2024 10:27
• Insulting KP Again? (Orchidee) Be careful. Orchi she is becoming more famous than you. Another fun read....
  December 3rd, 2024 10:25
• Poetry of Motion (Nethra) Beautiful images flow through this poem. Wonderful choice of wording....
  December 3rd, 2024 08:07
• 2 poems again brain dump (Maplespal) Poems that grow darker. Nicely written with good rhyme and flow beautiful...
  December 3rd, 2024 07:48
• When Love Takes Its Final Bow (Teddy.15) Pride is like a virus that takes over one’s body. It has little use, but...
  December 3rd, 2024 07:46
• happy song (Jim56) Jim, this is a beautiful thought. I have done it many times. It truly...
  December 3rd, 2024 07:43
• tango of us (Arqios) A great metaphor. Through my years of life, I have mastered several...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:56
• Maternal Love (Cassie58) Cassie, this poem presents strong contrast between an infant in arms and...
  December 3rd, 2024 04:59
• Shanty (Neville) Salty indeed. A poem of ship set sale and a sailors tail. As salty and...
  December 3rd, 2024 04:55
• Precious Days Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful sonnet, Andy. Words of advice to look for the good in...
  December 3rd, 2024 04:51
• Abdominal Abominable (Mutley Ravishes) A fun read. I surrendered years ago. I held up the white flag to food and...
  December 2nd, 2024 20:26
• Cryogenic Catharsis (Tristan Robert Lange) Bleeding is cathartic seems like a term used in the days when they did...
  December 2nd, 2024 20:24
• ~> OMG, I Needed A Job Fast! (Thad Wilk) Humor is the cure all for all that ails ya. Lovely
  December 2nd, 2024 12:28
• From here: direction 1 (Maplespal) Sexual, sensual, errotic and romantic it calls out for physical touch
  December 2nd, 2024 09:42
• The book (Lorenz) This poem carries with it the feel of mystery, magic, the occult a type of...
  December 2nd, 2024 09:40
• A Hippie\'s Soul (Tony36) I heartly agree with you Tony
  December 2nd, 2024 09:29
• When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58) A most peaceful state is formed by this poem. It flowes with the stream...
  December 2nd, 2024 09:28
• Xmas and other stuff (Orchidee) Blame the Romans for stealing a few days to put into July for Julius of...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:40
• feels like paradise (Jim56) Sweet and romantic this poem reads well and has a longing feeling to it....
  December 2nd, 2024 06:36
• LIMERICK 131 (Michael Edwards) Another fun seasonal read. I have already told you I like limericks and...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:35
• Variety is the Spice……. (Doggerel Dave) Everywhere now is becoming multicultureal and I have found that people are...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:33
• All a Glow (Teddy.15) Ah just what I needed a fun read in the middle of a season of rush, push...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:23
• A Hand Full of Ashes (Neville) Haunting and gets better with each read. It reads with melancholy and...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:21
• where I could no longer go home (Arqios) Marvelously worded this poem rolls like waves on the sea. The beauty of...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:12
• Let\'s Just Say She\'s Having a Bit Too Much Fun, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy) The one thing that I do like about the season and that is food. A most...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:08
• To The Gym. (Goldfinch60) I do that all the time about a lot of different things. It wears me out...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:58
• Time Resigns (Dan Williams) Here I hear the frustration and hopelessness of a situation. This is a...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:56
• You Can`t Get Me! (Mutley Ravishes) It sounds like you discovered what I did. I thought that my secret was...
  December 1st, 2024 19:57
• White Rain (Gray0328) Most beautifully worded this poem drips with wonderful images and lines.
  December 1st, 2024 19:55
• ~> Another Day At The Vets! (Thad Wilk) Now that was a very flexible vet and a very creative well written poem...
  December 1st, 2024 19:53
• Ledger In Blood (Kurt Philip Behm) Hard hitting and raw this poem is graphic and on point.
  December 1st, 2024 19:51
• A soul\'s journey (Lorenz) A sureal poem with many classical mythical elements. This poem paints a...
  December 1st, 2024 19:49
• Poor Eddie Van Patten (Thomas W Case) A single trauma often provokes reactions too late. A sad poem but with a...
  December 1st, 2024 12:05
• I Should Have (Cassie58) I hear Leonard Cohen in this poem. Brilliant lyrics to a song. Wonderful...
  December 1st, 2024 09:23
• From here (Maplespal) Sexy and erotic, romantic, and sensual. Where else can we go from here? A...
  December 1st, 2024 09:20
• Never Give Up (Tony36) Perseverance, they say is the key to success. In a sense it is also the...
  December 1st, 2024 09:18
• Hourglass (Tristan Robert Lange) The paradox of time to me is that the more miserable one is the slower it...
  December 1st, 2024 09:16
• lonely christmas (Jim56) Filled with sadness and a sense of grief this poem speaks of a season that...
  December 1st, 2024 09:12
• Too Sweet for Your Sweet Tooth (Rebellion_in_sanity) In this marvelous poem of yours, the first stanza took me to a personal...
  December 1st, 2024 09:09
• She Says Goodbye (Poetic Licence) Saying goodbye as often a very difficult thing to do. We form attachments...
  December 1st, 2024 05:47
• a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s. (Arqios) Cryptic this poem sends a hidden message. So often in poetry messages are...
  December 1st, 2024 05:40
• Return Readiness (Orchidee) I am familiar with this passage. And it should be taken to heart in regard...
  December 1st, 2024 05:37
• LIMERICK 130 (Michael Edwards) I love Limmerick and this is a good one. I feel like I have been in that...
  December 1st, 2024 05:34
• A World That’s Still (Mark The Phenomenon) Like the continual beat of a hammer the rhyme at the end of each line,...
  December 1st, 2024 05:33