Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Rapture (TommyDingo) Well rhymed with meter that enhanced the flow. The poem takes the reader...
  April 23rd, 2025 09:33
• Every. Single. Day. (Nikola) The drain and monotony of day after day and no promise of change, no hope...
  April 23rd, 2025 09:29
• Present (Kenny O\'Donnell) Teddy you have outdone yourself in this write. Yes you are here in this...
  April 23rd, 2025 09:27
• Pope Francis, addio a te! (Azeezah Awal) Nicely written about a wonderful Pope that has past a true tribute in...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:27
• The Abortion (Tony Grannell) Wow! This one graphic, raw, hard hitting in its explicit imagery paints a...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:26
• Change of Heart (Akshadha_Joshi1310) A poem of growth and learning. It speaks of maturing in what one is doing...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:19
• Flame and Steel (Kaz)
  April 23rd, 2025 07:16
• Flame and Steel (Kaz) Noble love in a most classic setting take form in this poem. Well said and...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:16
• Lost Paradise (RSM0812) This has biblical as well as more astronomical references and is very...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:14
• The House of Fire (Yumi Gab) This has such a middle eastern flavor to it and the metaphor in this story...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:11
• Shrouded by snow (Thinkerbell) What a metaphor here it like the snow itself disguises what lies beneath....
  April 23rd, 2025 07:07
• My Heart (Tony36) A pleading in this poem for affiliation and understanding. Very...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:04
• Bald Is the New Beautiful (Tristan Robert Lange) How frequently our initial perceptions are inaccurate and need revision. A...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:02
• Goodbye, Pope Francis! (Azeezah Khadeejah Awal) A very nice tribute to a most wonderful Pope very nicely done
  April 23rd, 2025 05:55
• They say \"Move on\" and I reply:- (Antra.sharma_) Short and to the point with great charm. Lovely
  April 23rd, 2025 05:50
• time goes so fast (Jim56) How quickly time passes indeed Jim, A great poem illustrating this.
  April 23rd, 2025 05:49
• Violets (Amethyste) Now there is a metaphor indeed. Lovely short.
  April 23rd, 2025 05:48
• Pen and Cob (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Such descriptive images fill this poem with charming detail and paint a...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:47
• Take a ride with me (Sylvia Somaduroff) A most interesting poem of love and the question of it were to all be done...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:42
• Rendering (Libellule) So identifiable this metaphoric depiction of the existential crisis we go...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:38
• Rattled & Bored and waiting (Maplespal) Loved the first most original poem that depicts focus during times of...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:35
• The Headphones And Red Woolly Hat (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Seasonal wear depicted battle predicted. A lovely short
  April 23rd, 2025 05:32
• Ode to the Void (Mottakeenur Rehman) This poem is quite thought provoking and deep in its philosophical meaning...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:30
• We Are Nothing but Uttered Words (Muntadher Saleh) A deep and wise poem that is poignant and applicable to all but...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:26
• Here Before They Were (J.Edse) This poem has a mystical, old, from the past feel to it that calls...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:20
• Did you miss me? (Chad Carlson) So glad that you are back
  April 23rd, 2025 05:18
• Once In Awhile (Reynaldo Casison) A refreshing sparkle to a love poem that shines like the stars. Very nice...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:17
• THE OLD PORTRAIT (Nephilim56) A most beautiful poem of times lost in the past and forgotten as are its...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:14
• 575s and 57577s (1) (Michael Edwards)
  April 23rd, 2025 05:06
• 575s and 57577s (1) (Michael Edwards) The mind can rove over these words and follow many paths. The literal is...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:06
• a miscreant yearns (Arqios) Poetry indeed does bridge the gap between mind and heart in words. A most...
  April 23rd, 2025 05:02
• Moving Forward Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Yes so true for us to see the sun we must open our eyes and with that life...
  April 23rd, 2025 04:24
• Promise of forever (Pukur) A poem of friendship that lasts, maybe more. A most lovely write.
  April 22nd, 2025 20:10
• Through Concrete Curtains (Maydanae) A beautiful poem of nature and the season. I loved the change of rhyme...
  April 22nd, 2025 20:08
• Possession (Mutley Ravishes) This poem is well constructed and sends its message so poetically
  April 22nd, 2025 20:05
• Love Remains In Me (Sunshine777) To love oneself first before one can love another makes total sense to me...
  April 22nd, 2025 17:09
• With Eyes Like Candytuft (A Boy With Roses) A poem of reflections and observations that is somewhat dysphoric and dark...
  April 22nd, 2025 17:07
• The Earth\'s Reckoning ([email protected]) A poem of things about nature as if she was a person. A wonderful poem...
  April 22nd, 2025 14:56
• Listening to birds (Caring dove) The birds singing I take to be a metaphor since you said that you have...
  April 22nd, 2025 14:12
• The Rover\'s Song (Tony Grannell) The process of life and death all contained in this poem. Lovely
  April 22nd, 2025 13:18
• The Wooden Brother\'s Embrace (Brian Otucho) Enemies sneak into our midst with little regard and knowledge of what...
  April 22nd, 2025 13:13
• Heartstrings (Genesis) Strong and powerfully stated this poem is a protest against being used....
  April 22nd, 2025 13:09
• \"the sky is GREEN\", They Said (Muse of Calliope) Different points of view that will never agree. We are all different in...
  April 22nd, 2025 13:07
• Naked Ashes (Kurt Philip Behm) We respond to warning in such a delayed manner if at all disaster will...
  April 22nd, 2025 13:04
• Strength and Courage (Gray0328) A poem of love and nature and how they are one. Lovely
  April 22nd, 2025 13:00
• Seen Or Not Seen (Orchidee) I tend to be a doubting Thomas too and this is a good hymn Orchi
  April 22nd, 2025 12:08
• New Moon (Damaso) Powerful and full of sad emotion and grief. It is in such moments that all...
  April 22nd, 2025 09:50
• Farmer (Devender Kumar) Farmers have it tough. A great poem to them and maybe a metaphor as well....
  April 22nd, 2025 09:25
• A Boricua Speaks of Rivers (Rrodriguez) The beauty of nature and the strength of layers of history are in this...
  April 22nd, 2025 09:22
• You and me (Poetaldo) Wonderful thoughts and pledges that ring through this write. Nicely done
  April 22nd, 2025 09:19
• Abou Russian Civil War (Ksey_Gan) A great poem that questions why we remember certain people like Genghis...
  April 22nd, 2025 09:18
• Mike Berry (Randyjohnson71) A great tribute in a poem nicely penned
  April 22nd, 2025 09:15
• Knick-Knack-Kerouac (Libellule)
  April 22nd, 2025 08:32
• Knick-Knack-Kerouac (Libellule) Now that is what I call a poem. Starting sweet becoming quirky with a dash...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:32
• In This Rain (MinaH) A great poem of the dichotomy of rain and how nice it is inside and how...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:26
• Patience and Chimney (Jerry Reynolds) Well told this metaphor in form of fable speaks to those who have children...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:23
• Flat line (HollyGolightly) Unconscious, numb, there is seldom pain in the red just numbness. I have...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:17
• The Roads Desire Built (Tristan Robert Lange) Strong, logical, philosophical and poetic quite a bunch in one short...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:13
• Yearning For You (Akshadha_Joshi1310) A sad longing pervades this poem with feelings of sadness and loss for...
  April 22nd, 2025 07:28
• Express Yourself (Tony36) A hymn of recognition and exaltation for what one is. Very nice Tony
  April 22nd, 2025 07:26
• Maybe (Jino) A poem of self recognition and flagellation over the undone. Nicely worded...
  April 22nd, 2025 07:24
• The Pond (RSM0812) Lovely word combination leads to deeper meaning in this poem. The flow...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:51
• With A Cupid’s Arrow (Ajon4wheels) Impassioned and enamored with a smile this poem cries out with innocent...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:49
• Its Her Love (Reynaldo Casison) A love poem that speaks of being enamored by a love. Romantic and very...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:46
• what we will (Jim56) Another poem with a positive message Jim. Loved the message of respect
  April 22nd, 2025 05:44
• Love Story (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Sorry that you think it sucks. To me it has a power and strength that...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:42
• Directing thought (Maplespal) With this comes thoughts of Carl Jung and his anima and animus both male...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:40
• middle of the night (Dimpy) The stars soaked my eyes is a great line. The whole last stanza now turns...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:18
• A Lotus Flower in Muddy Waters (Mariel Ilagan) A beautiful metaphor for raising above adversity well worded in rhyme....
  April 22nd, 2025 05:14
• To Touch the Sun (Xlayla55x) Very nicely worded in Greek mythology its metaphor is well taken and so as...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:12
• Letter to a narcissist (Mourgana of the Fey) Ah metaphor following metaphor in this poem it reads mysteriously and we...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:09
• YOU AND ME (Nephilim56) Lost in the chaos of the past not to be found in the present. A poem that...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:05
• Silent warrior (Kaz) The old biblical phrase comes to mind (do not hide your light under a...
  April 22nd, 2025 05:03
• Sipping On Lemonade In Wigan Wetherspoons (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Jammin\' a most fun poem that flows well with rhyme nicely done
  April 22nd, 2025 05:02
• Self-Immolation (Mottakeenur Rehman) This poem takes such a somber classical style that reads sadness and...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:57
• EAT CAKE (Michael Edwards) Clever and short. I wonder if Marie Antoinette returned as Donald Trump. A...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:53
• Molded (John Prophet) Events shape us and age hardens us that clay from which we were formed and...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:49
• ableism is the foundation for fascism (Demar Desu) Yes Demar I agree racism is dumb. A good read
  April 22nd, 2025 04:47
• When the Caged Bird is Set Free (Teddy.15) Turning things on their head is a good way of mixing what is inside. Love...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:46
• cavernous (Arqios) This poem clever in its writing as well as form also used a homograph to...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:38
• Exodus at Sea: Beyond False Beacons (TheInnerLens) The author\'s note confirms my suspicions about the metaphor in this poem...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:31
• Chopin\'s Nocturnes. (Goldfinch60) Poetically sound. Music to my ears Andy. A very nice poem of the beauty we...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:26
• The Son (Thoughtless) Caught me by surprise. I think at times he should have. A fun read
  April 21st, 2025 20:05
• In Measure, Go On (Duran Mazzana) And so it is today with people so much into comfort. Very nice
  April 21st, 2025 18:18
• Crescendo. (Jonathan Merida) Enigmatic and mysterious this poem rocks with power. Lovely
  April 21st, 2025 18:16
• I Watched the Rain Fall (Rrodriguez) This is a great description of the rain with such vivid imagery and word...
  April 21st, 2025 18:13
• He\'s Risen (Cedrick) A wonderful write, well composed and powerful. Loved it very nice
  April 21st, 2025 18:00
• BIRD (Kman Pumpkin King28) How many of us have dreamed of being a bird. We all want to fly and not in...
  April 21st, 2025 16:34
• The Right Honourable Gentleman (Kevin Hulme) A fun read using cynicism. Nicely done.
  April 21st, 2025 16:32
• The Lovecats (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) The combination of dialectic opposites that attract is most interesting in...
  April 21st, 2025 15:29
• Beside the city (Devender Kumar) Full of nature images and a carefree feel to this poem. Most lovely
  April 21st, 2025 15:26
• Inner Peace (Anthony Hanible) I take this poem to say that in order to smile and be really happy one has...
  April 21st, 2025 15:24
• Some Nights (Maplespal) A poem of loss and missing the lost. Most people feel this at one time or...
  April 21st, 2025 15:22
• Tribute to Pope Francis (Jerry Reynolds) They say there is no discrimination in the trenches of war and so in the...
  April 21st, 2025 15:19
• Nude (Amethyste) Erotic and seductive it provokes the reader into asking why is it...
  April 21st, 2025 15:17
• The Redundancy of Certainty (Gray0328) A deep message set in this poem that hides behind the silver word plate of...
  April 21st, 2025 15:10
• The Poem I Never Knew I Was Reading🌺 (Petrichor of Love) Such a beautiful recognition of a love that may be too late but sill...
  April 21st, 2025 15:08
• Whispering Still (Kurt Philip Behm) A metaphor for the season or maybe the season a metaphor for the nature....
  April 21st, 2025 14:49
• Pain (Ajon4wheels) A great take off on the rain thing. I can only imagine pain is my worst...
  April 21st, 2025 14:47
• THE RAINY EASTER MONDAY DAY! (Swarovski20) So many feelings of the present day hypocrisy of a society that preaches ...
  April 21st, 2025 14:46