Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- The Lamb and the Tiger. (David Wakeling)
A story about choice power over self and others. very nicely written with...
February 7th, 2025 04:32 - Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda (NinjaGirl)
Three words that are best not to use in real life or in a poem either. The...
February 7th, 2025 04:25 - Jimmy Come Home (Simurgh)
A mother\'s love is a special love no other can have. Being a son not a...
February 7th, 2025 04:23 - Cosmic Onion (John Prophet)
A great litteral and metaphoric write and so it is in most all of our...
February 7th, 2025 04:21 - Galactic Quacks (Mutley Ravishes)
Tis all true each and every word at least in metaphor. A fun read Mutley...
February 7th, 2025 04:17 - On My Road Of Time. (Goldfinch60)
a beautiful story with a happy ending what more could anyone wish for....
February 7th, 2025 04:12 - Riordan and Riosin (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Another chapter done both for the reader and the characters. This story...
February 6th, 2025 14:43 - Shadows and rays (Maplespal)
Such a beautiful set of images you cast and it feels so light. Lovely and...
February 6th, 2025 13:55 - First Steps (RSM0812)
Nothing like a baby or child to brighten the day and lift spirits. There...
February 6th, 2025 13:52 - Ode to Apollo ---- The Sun God (Simurgh)
Classical in form and topic it shines like Apollo himself. A most lovely...
February 6th, 2025 13:48 - When Truth Becomes A Lie (ADarkerMind)
Loved the first line particularly because truth does become a lie at times...
February 6th, 2025 13:45 - ...How About, Yes? (Cheeky Missy)
Beautiful words in all fine images and my favorite is the last. Wonderful
February 6th, 2025 13:40 - The Horses Need Hay (Thomas W Case)
Implication is the key to this poem\'s meaning. It is powerful and strong...
February 6th, 2025 10:42 - Will I have time ? (Lorenz)
This poem is filled with so many metaphors and solar images that...
February 6th, 2025 10:39 - When The Sky Falls Down (Teddy.15)
How much we sould shelter and how much let our child learn for themself is...
February 6th, 2025 10:36 - Farmer (Tony36)
I feel your pain. I\'ve been there and done that and bear the scars from...
February 6th, 2025 08:53 - Gold On Grey (Cassie58)
A very picturesque poem that paints with such artistic wonder. My favorite...
February 6th, 2025 08:51 - I love you John (Hey!)
Some memories never die they just grow in size or remain burried to raise...
February 6th, 2025 07:39 - We meet ourselves coming back (Emile Dubois)
A interesting concept that deserves some contemplation. This may be true...
February 6th, 2025 07:37 - lifes rules (Jim56)
Accepting life as it is is a key to happiness. Nicely written with good...
February 6th, 2025 07:33 - Mindless Mindfulness (Demar Desu)
A fun read
February 6th, 2025 05:51 - LIMERICKS 139, & 140 (Michael Edwards)
A great way to start the day with a limerick. Loved them especially the...
February 6th, 2025 05:50 - Sun is Breaking Through (Poetic Licence)
A beautiful tribute to gratitude and love nicely written with good rhyme...
February 6th, 2025 04:03 - The Eternal Pessimist (Orchidee)
To each positive there is a negative. You and Gold make a great pair the...
February 6th, 2025 04:00 - CLWYDIAN HILLS (Nephilim56)
A beautiful portrayal of how each step is the begining of a new journey...
February 6th, 2025 03:53 - My stupid Mum. (David Wakeling)
Message recieved. Such a wonderful way to present it. I\'ve been a kid,...
February 6th, 2025 03:50 - along legacy way (Arqios)
Many reflections here cast in splendid images and great metaphor. Very...
February 6th, 2025 03:43 - Moon And Stars Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Most lovely the general theme and images presented are most romantic. A...
February 6th, 2025 03:38 - A scifaiku (Thoughtless)
Just the burger please. A fun read
February 5th, 2025 19:00 - Spidersman (Mutley Ravishes)
Tied to the Greek godess Athena who was beat in a weaving contest by...
February 5th, 2025 18:59 - lovesick (NinjaGirl)
A poem enigmatic I love it. It is far different than most love poems and...
February 5th, 2025 18:51 - Restlessly I lay (Maplespal)
Lonliness pervades this poem and it is filled with a longing.very nice
February 5th, 2025 17:19 - Coming Up With A Plan (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
You have a knack at transitioning forward to the next episode. Serial...
February 5th, 2025 17:18 - Hunger (Gewar)
What pleasure would there be in flavor or food without hunger. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 10:41 - Deadly Spread “IVY and MENDACITIES’’ (SJSangeetha)
Beautiful construction and wording in this work of art. Very nicely done
February 5th, 2025 10:40 - The Gaza Plaza (Tristan Robert Lange)
Unfortunatly you can\'t fix stupid especially when they follow a Jim...
February 5th, 2025 10:33 - Drinking Rounds (Tony36)
A knockout. No loosing the title to a decison this one was a champion
February 5th, 2025 10:28 - Between Flame And Smoke (Salvia.S)
So short and so poetic it is true that less is more
February 5th, 2025 10:26 - spring verse (Jim56)
Another beautiful pictuer painted by your words Jim
February 5th, 2025 10:26 - Behold a Rose (RSM0812)
Beautifully worded with a timeless metaphor. Your word choice made all the...
February 5th, 2025 10:24 - My true colors bleed differently than yours (Mysty Monroe)
Wow! A poem that could be a song so well written I feel each throb a...
February 5th, 2025 10:19 - point of contact (Arqios)
A beautiful this reaches deep inside both emotion and the visual image....
February 5th, 2025 10:12 - The Waterfall (MDStone)
I have stood at many and they all charm me. There is something special...
February 5th, 2025 10:05 - Voice of darkness (Poetic Licence)
This poem hit me and meets all the requirements that I hold in my mind for...
February 5th, 2025 10:01 - Marina Musings (Cassie58)
The magnificent imagery that melts into marvelous metaphor fill this...
February 5th, 2025 05:02 - Hasten to Humility (Orchidee)
I like the message in this one Orchi. A lovely hymn with a great meassage...
February 5th, 2025 04:59 - Implications of Doing Nothing (Neville)
It seems clear on the surface that documentaries do little but...
February 5th, 2025 04:57 - BEACH (Nephilim56)
And so we all drift from fantasy or dreams where we escape the reality and...
February 5th, 2025 04:48 - Peace Off (Tom Dylan)
The duality displayed in hypocracy driven by narcissism. Well written with...
February 5th, 2025 04:45 - Together In Wondrous Love. (Goldfinch60)
A proclamation of love that was ordained and predestined continues as...
February 5th, 2025 04:43 - Joseph and the last orange. (David Wakeling)
There may be a meta metaphor here. Poverty asks for justice of which there...
February 5th, 2025 04:41 - The next day (Demar Desu)
Another filled with hidden meaning. Nicely worded.
February 5th, 2025 04:35 - On the other Foot (Thoughtless)
Here the sexual is tied to errotic fantasy that is tied to relationship...
February 5th, 2025 04:33 - Home (Teddy.15)
In the seasons of life we are all annuals. Lovely wording in this poem...
February 5th, 2025 04:28 - Ode to Apollo ---- The Sun God (Simurgh)
A beautiful tribute to the source of life and energy on earth. These words...
February 5th, 2025 04:22 - Rejectshun (Mutley Ravishes)
A greatmetaphor of considerable weight itself.
February 4th, 2025 20:53 - IN THE BEGINNING GOD (Siphesihle Mavuso)
Powerfully said with conviction.
February 4th, 2025 18:41 - New Chapter. (Ginny jayne)
Very nicely said a person should live their own life and be themself.
February 4th, 2025 18:38 - It\'s okay to color outside the lines but reading between them is a mixed bag (Hzugman)
A piece of advice to the wise who know when to use it. Nicely said
February 4th, 2025 18:37 - Message 2 (Maplespal)
A most beautiful message. Very nicely said
February 4th, 2025 18:35 - Mushrooms (Thomas W Case)
A great write that acknoleges the good in all things. In its dark humor...
February 4th, 2025 14:57 - As Quiet As A Tree (ADarkerMind)
Darker I think I\'m going to dub you the Salvador dali of poets. Enjoyed...
February 4th, 2025 13:11 - The Last Ride (Beck)
A great metaphor and very nice rhyme in this poem. It reads smoothly and...
February 4th, 2025 13:09 - Moments (Gray0328)
Tis so true and a great line (memories, glittering constellations in the...
February 4th, 2025 13:06 - Reason for Being (Matthew R. Callies)
A great message for anyone let alone an eleven year old.
February 4th, 2025 13:04 - Depressed writer (Pineapple_pizza018)
Abuse is the most frequent occurance in a relationship. Sad but what one...
February 4th, 2025 13:00 - Everything in Between (RSM0812)
What can you believe and what can\'t you believe? Hard to say. A good...
February 4th, 2025 12:56 - Living Dead (Tony36)
Another spooky write with creepy images. Nicely written
February 4th, 2025 10:22 - Bamboo Forest (Agantuk)
A most beautiful image you paint in words. Lovely it brings on a haunting...
February 4th, 2025 10:21 - Wonder (Amara Carys)
Heavy questions that have different answers depending who you ask. Well...
February 4th, 2025 08:48 - Heil trump (Boot)
Powerful and it speaks of danger of those that do not know history being...
February 4th, 2025 08:44 - Program (John Prophet)
This thought provoking piece was a great read mking one think as its...
February 4th, 2025 08:42 - Shayna Punim - You came a long way baby! (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
The life of parenthood in this poem. I have done it already and it is...
February 4th, 2025 08:41 - He is moving! (Hey!)
Sad in its separation and hard to accept. They say that distance makes the...
February 4th, 2025 08:28 - Why Me? (Prayed The Attacks Away) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A poem of pain and despair with breaking clouds that offer some hope....
February 4th, 2025 08:24 - -$120.74 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
Been there and feel that. Nicely done
February 4th, 2025 08:22 - Back Story on Linens and Things (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A hopeful sense to this piece of the story. Nicely laid out in your style
February 4th, 2025 08:21 - sorrow (Jim56)
A lovely and hopeful message here.
February 4th, 2025 08:18 - Green, Limerick (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Love limericks and this one sounds like it is a grazing animal maybe a
February 4th, 2025 05:03 - The wax (Gewar)
This poem holds the power of unfulfilled wishes in the winds of adversity....
February 4th, 2025 05:01 - While Candles Sigh (Reynaldo Casison)
Vivid imagry fills this poem setting the mood for romance and sensuality....
February 4th, 2025 05:00 - Open again (Shadowbones)
The use of metaphor in this poem enhances its meaning. A great message
February 4th, 2025 04:58 - Eachos of us (Natalie Heisey)
Although hurt won\'t give up and will fight on is the theme of this poem....
February 4th, 2025 04:57 - Silent Opinions (Poetic Licence)
In thought this poem is meta in that it voices its own opinion within a...
February 4th, 2025 04:54 - Art (The Indignant Poetess)
In haunting metaphor you have painted images that puzzle the mind and...
February 4th, 2025 04:51 - DARKNESS AND FIRE (SJSangeetha)
Using the metaphor of light and fire love is portrayed. Very nice
February 4th, 2025 04:49 - Night lies (Bootswiththefur)
So short it seems a single tear, so powerful it seems a river. Well done
February 4th, 2025 04:47 - Gentle But A Strong Touch (Ajon4wheels)
How an obcession and fantasy lost can provoke the mind and haunt the soul....
February 4th, 2025 04:45 - In The Garden Of Understanding (Mohammad younus koul)
Faved for its not only beautiful but urgently important message set in a...
February 4th, 2025 04:42 - Tyler Brown (Kevin Hulme)
Loved the poetic inventiveness and playfulness with the language in this...
February 4th, 2025 04:38 - The Cricket’s Tale (MDStone)
A fun read that has great rhyme and meter that carries the poem onward...
February 4th, 2025 04:34 - The love we’ve yet to give (Meagan Adelle)
Unanswered questions from a different point of view fill this piece and...
February 4th, 2025 04:31 - They got the whole world in their hands (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Probably true but what to do with a populace as stupid and unmotivated as...
February 4th, 2025 04:28 - Tèmítọ̀pe (Kingjamescory)
Beautiful images cast in this poem with a positive message to look for the...
February 4th, 2025 04:21 - they reside within (Aziza S)
A great message sent in a great poem. Most lovely
February 4th, 2025 04:20 - Rain (Hey!)
A poem emphasizes the temporal nature of the bad and focus on good. Nicely...
February 4th, 2025 04:18 - hollow (NinjaGirl)
The transformation of changing from what one is to what one thinks that...
February 4th, 2025 04:14 - Best Poem #3 (DaBestPoemer)
Wise advice in cute words. What is that old saying that out of the mouths...
February 4th, 2025 04:12 - WHERE AM I? (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
A mysterious feeling prevades this poem and goes unanswered. Nicely done
February 4th, 2025 04:08 - TEMPLE (Nephilim56)
I found this poem particularly beautiful in its comparison of the emotion...
February 4th, 2025 04:05
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