Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• citrus stains (Lunarchloedip) A magnificent metaphor well explored and a fave. Just remember that the...
  December 15th, 2025 12:38
• My Envious Dream (JustARandomJulia) A reflection that can not be seen. A haunting poem nicely worded and laid...
  December 15th, 2025 12:11
• The Proof of Mistakes (Gray0328) I loved the wording of this surreal poem that dives deep into the psyche...
  December 15th, 2025 12:09
• The Reluctant Prophet (Kurt Philip Behm) Well said Kurt I feel at times that all poetic fruit has left the vine and...
  December 15th, 2025 12:07
• Sweet cadaverous cacophony (Jaryyn) A chaotic and violent world where no one can be trusted and everything...
  December 15th, 2025 12:05
• The old radio (Lorenz) Lorenz this caught my attention because as a young child I too went up the...
  December 15th, 2025 12:03
• The Big Book of Christmas Mishaps: 13 Wildly Wobbly Verses (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Here is a series of Christmas shenanigans wrapped in rhyme. Perfect for...
  December 15th, 2025 11:58
• Lion and the fox. (Andrew Deaton) It is the most skillful warrior that doesn\'t have to fight and the best...
  December 15th, 2025 11:15
• I Feel For Those Suffering (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) It is the last line that gives chills. Complacency is the great villain...
  December 15th, 2025 11:12
• An Unexpected but Pleasant Twist (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) I like how you as the author break the forth wall in this write it makes...
  December 15th, 2025 11:09
• Born Like This (Thomas W Case) To write to live or to live to write is the question. A gritty poem about...
  December 15th, 2025 11:08
• Toys for Tots (Matthew R. Callies) A fave for the message in this poem. What ever your religious belief this...
  December 15th, 2025 11:06
• Forever Here (DesertWords) Physical loss does not mean mental or emotional loss. A lovely write
  December 15th, 2025 09:44
• Untitled {24} (Niko Papadatos) Self blame in this poem nicely written. Well done
  December 15th, 2025 09:41
• Fainted (Maplespal) This is a sad and dark poem of addiction. Well written with good rhyme
  December 15th, 2025 09:38
• My Angel (RSM0812) There is more depth to this poem than first appears and it is revealed in...
  December 15th, 2025 08:07
• Blessed By An Angel (Ajon4wheels) A very nice thought expressed in this poem that mixes the physical and...
  December 15th, 2025 08:05
• hedgehog in my garden (Jim56) And so it is the season for hibernation and a cut poem it was Jim
  December 15th, 2025 08:03
• Cora (Katie B.) I love the metaphor of outgrowing her gown. Death but a change and we out...
  December 15th, 2025 06:49
• One Day Closer (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) A backward count in this poem of thanks. Full of love, love for life and...
  December 15th, 2025 05:47
• there is a room (Arqios) And so it is with poems, verbs alter the nouns and adjectives just enough...
  December 15th, 2025 05:44
• Land of Opportunity (Doggerel Dave) Plan on doing a little hunting Dave? The color of the type makes me a...
  December 15th, 2025 04:24
• SONNET ON DESOLATION ([email protected]) It is not only the with that we feel but the without. A lovely poem
  December 15th, 2025 04:02
• Heidelberg (Atticus_made) There is a feel in this poem of antiquity and of heritage as well as a...
  December 15th, 2025 04:00
• A VIOLENT NIGHT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Thoughts can be violent not in physical but mental and emotional manner....
  December 15th, 2025 03:58
• The poem of heart (Nature) Here in this poem I hear a broader definition of music than most give it....
  December 15th, 2025 03:56
• Interim (Sail) There is anticipation and anxiousness in this poem that feels like any...
  December 15th, 2025 03:53
• Sing of Salvation (Orchidee) It seems that God is a music lover and likes to party. A good read Orchi....
  December 15th, 2025 03:51
• \"Down for the Count\" Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A sonnet well written my friend about a subject we both enjoy, music. So...
  December 15th, 2025 03:47
• Remembrance (Freyaaa) This leaves me with the feel that an imperfection is still desired and...
  December 15th, 2025 03:45
• The World Waits (Jjudaharts) And indeed it does for those that still read and feel the zest of the...
  December 15th, 2025 03:42
• I Haven’t Healed (Vanna) A sad poem of damage done faith put in the wrong hands. Nicely done
  December 15th, 2025 03:41
• The Digits of Day (JustARandomJulia) This flow of message and word meter gave me the feel of Sting\'s Fields of...
  December 15th, 2025 03:40
• We Wish You a Merry Christmas (Sanitized Version) (Cody Ellis) Unfortunately it is only once a year that it is not amiss, it would be...
  December 15th, 2025 03:38
• Have you ever stopped to consider how the ant feels when a giant pane of glass floating in the air beams pure sunlight into its carapace? (Simple Tendencies) I understand I myself lie about lying. A fun read and full of interest....
  December 14th, 2025 20:27
• Delusional (Jazmyne Monroe) Delusional we all are at times. A lovely love poem
  December 14th, 2025 19:27
• Regrets (Keeter C) A type of poetic expression of gratitude and ending almost as a prayer....
  December 14th, 2025 19:25
• Free souls (Amethyste) Well stated and so true. Very well said
  December 14th, 2025 18:11
• Fall in this Place (Scarlette Howard) A poem of faith and belief well said
  December 14th, 2025 17:13
• Love (Hadley) Romantic love expressed in this poem nicely done
  December 14th, 2025 17:10
• Mountain Peak (RSM0812) This reminds me of a Hawaiian volcano. Great images
  December 14th, 2025 17:06
• Facts Pt3 (Anthony Hanible) And with that thin line one can be bound. A good read
  December 14th, 2025 13:39
• Appreciate (William Hromada) The words of love put in this poem touch the heart. Well done
  December 14th, 2025 13:38
• WHAT A SOUL GOES FOR (David Welch) Another great narrative tale told in poetic form. Well done
  December 14th, 2025 13:31
• Ego Death (Shadowbones) Clever and yet open it speaks to the heart. Lovely
  December 14th, 2025 13:07
• An Abandoned Father (Soheil khodaparasti) This poem calls out for one missing and felt lost. A lovely poem of a...
  December 14th, 2025 13:06
• The Prince and the Forge (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Hauntingly dark this poem speaks with controlled power as a ghost speaking...
  December 14th, 2025 13:04
• Getting Along Well (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Another chapter and the story moves along. Well done Shamrocker
  December 14th, 2025 12:58
• This Fight Chose Me (JBentley) Militant answers fill this poem with reflection too many unnecessary...
  December 14th, 2025 10:48
• ℜ𝔢𝔫𝔡𝔢𝔯𝔢𝔡 (Keyara S Trotman) A rendezvous of loves and nicely done
  December 14th, 2025 10:45
• Sheik cog go - Illogical jumbled kooky literary mashup (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Starting weak and dependent it evolves and unrolls. Nicely done
  December 14th, 2025 10:41
• \"Open Sesame\" — No Way Back (Kurt Philip Behm) Another cleverly worded poem that sends its message in rhyme and another...
  December 14th, 2025 10:39
• Perception (Eugene S.) Lovely wording in this poem that uses multiple rhymes to set a mood. A
  December 14th, 2025 10:37
• The Witness (Gewar) Relationship issues fill this poem. Nicely done
  December 14th, 2025 09:29
• Lying Scissors (Awam) A sad and dark subject that pulls at the heart. Well done
  December 14th, 2025 09:27
• My mood swung (Maplespal) A poem of variations in mood cycles and the downward fall. Nicely done
  December 14th, 2025 09:13
• Salvation Don\'t Slither (Tristan Robert Lange) A great acrostic and well set for a Sunday it seems very Christian in...
  December 14th, 2025 09:06
• natures way (Jim56) Beautiful Jim you know I love nature and once again you have captured in...
  December 14th, 2025 07:13
• Hanukkah to Me of the stories l was told (Friendship) A seasonal poem of light, history and the present in hope and cheer for a...
  December 14th, 2025 06:26
• Within you. (Andrew Deaton) An all encompassing poem of who one is and the opposites and...
  December 14th, 2025 06:12
• little panda (The breaktime monologue) A powerful and dark write that points the way to the light. It is raw and...
  December 14th, 2025 06:10
• Now, Tomorrow and Always. (Aa Harvey) The plea of a man intent upon passion and the reluctance of a woman that...
  December 14th, 2025 06:06
• We Rue the Day (Katie B.) Beauty turned ruin and the thoughts that accompany it from splendor to...
  December 14th, 2025 06:03
• winter palette (Arqios) This is poetry my friend where imagery blends with metaphor and words cast...
  December 14th, 2025 05:30
• 2 shots (Isa kemmy) So much distilled in this shot of words. A blend and powerful it is for...
  December 14th, 2025 05:27
• Tied to the Mast (Gray0328) Blended with mythology this poem speaks of reality and to what anchor we...
  December 14th, 2025 05:22
• Noisy Neighbours (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Identifiable yes in a world of crowed people where each lives their life...
  December 14th, 2025 05:19
• I Only Loved (Deepak Vohra) There is something human in this something identifiable and raw. It is a...
  December 14th, 2025 05:18
• haiku (Arobot) Beautiful images portrayed in these short lines
  December 14th, 2025 05:15
• Thorns In The Wilderness: The Rise Of Injustice (Oputa Samuel Daberechukwu) A message I hear. Being a cynic I fear that there has never been a truly...
  December 14th, 2025 04:01
• A Lament for the Forgotten Dawn (Dhiman Shah) A poem that I can identify with and magnificently written in wonderful...
  December 14th, 2025 03:57
• TREMBLING THOUGHTS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A most intriguing rhyme scheme in this poem pulls the reader through with...
  December 14th, 2025 03:51
• No Beds (Mark The Phenomenon) A romantic and sensuous poem of passion ignited. Well done with such good...
  December 14th, 2025 03:49
• It’s Back Again (Vanna) True love does not depend upon liking it is or is not and if it is no...
  December 14th, 2025 03:46
• Thinking About You (Freyaaa) We often implant our desires into our view of things and interpret it...
  December 14th, 2025 03:43
• My Plans by Cor (Cornny-guy) This poem tells us that God has a plan for us and that although we may not...
  December 14th, 2025 03:42
• The Greatest Commandments - OT/NT Series 15 (Orchidee) Now this is a hymn that if any heard none understood a word. The Bible...
  December 14th, 2025 03:40
• The George. (Goldfinch60) Andy with this piece I half expected Billy Joel\'s The Piano Man to be the...
  December 14th, 2025 03:35
• Old Campbell’s Mansion (Joan Reese) Memories burned started with embers of anger and desire to forget. This...
  December 13th, 2025 20:56
• One by one, overcoming all obstacles... (Cellinic) There are a lot of inner reflections and manipulations going on in this...
  December 13th, 2025 20:52
• unpanned memories (Isa kemmy) Such an interesting write where I can hear the caution abandoned and the...
  December 13th, 2025 20:51
• Every Girl is a Poet (Molly Delaney) I would agree that everybody is a potential poet. Nicely done with great...
  December 13th, 2025 20:48
• Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love (Thomas W Case) Well done Thomas a story of life.
  December 13th, 2025 18:45
• My Shower (Anthony Hanible) I got the feeling and have been there. Sometimes one just would rather not...
  December 13th, 2025 18:43
• Hope امید (Soheil khodaparasti) The end of this poem reinforced my thoughts. To me hope is white the...
  December 13th, 2025 16:32
• swimming in blue (Jjudaharts) A proclamation of nature\'s beauty and a realization of its grandeur well...
  December 13th, 2025 16:29
• Connection (Amethyste) A most felt piece. I ask myself why is it so hard to understand others?...
  December 13th, 2025 16:27
• Life Isnt that Bad When You Give it a Chance. (Hey!) A cute approach to a view on life. Well done
  December 13th, 2025 14:45
• Futile (Aa Harvey) A poetic search for love in all the wrong places. Loved the line about...
  December 13th, 2025 14:44
• Radio report (Gewar) Is this news of destruction from war in one\'s own town or is it...
  December 13th, 2025 14:41
• The Iron Answer and Zero-sum Strike (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Well written with imagery and well painted
  December 13th, 2025 12:45
• Muddy Steps (Chanel T.) Accepting and loving oneself one of the most important things in life. A...
  December 13th, 2025 12:10
• Space Traveler (RSM0812) A surreal poem that talks to the reader about facing their own fears well...
  December 13th, 2025 12:07
• Arawak (Lorenz) To begin with a true people and end with an empty fable is the beauty of...
  December 13th, 2025 12:03
• Paned In Shame (Kurt Philip Behm) So well said my friend this one concisely says all that is needed. A fave
  December 13th, 2025 10:45
• ink-stained noose (Lunarchloedip) Very raw yet with continued echoing rhyme like skipping a stone on a pond...
  December 13th, 2025 10:44
• I already lost (Poetaldo) The annoyances we all experience with growing old. Very nice
  December 13th, 2025 10:02
• Procreation essentially endows the species of Homo sapiens immortality..., (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) What a great point to focus on the strong points nicely written
  December 13th, 2025 09:59
• Labyrinth for the Living (Tristan Robert Lange) Thank you Dave and Tristan for this. Amazing unwinding a bent course as is...
  December 13th, 2025 09:54
• Questioning it (Maplespal) Human nature from violence that has led to war is getting harder and...
  December 13th, 2025 09:02