Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Pull of the Streets (Thomas W Case) A tale of the hard life and it setteling in. The imagery is very well dond...
  January 21st, 2025 14:37
• ~> The Mona Lisa CATastrophy! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) A bit of catty humor hear or at least is seems so for the cat. Wrote a...
  January 21st, 2025 13:07
• Dust and Joy (Rebellion_in_sanity) A beautiful write and the message deserves the Fave
  January 21st, 2025 09:15
• Freezing (RSM0812) Frozen images play in this winter wonderland. Descriptive to say the least
  January 21st, 2025 08:42
• expectations causing depression (Demar Desu) A mind teaser this haiku or maybe senryu makes one think
  January 21st, 2025 08:41
• writing therapy (Jim56) This one struck close to the heart Jim a true and heart felt write
  January 21st, 2025 08:39
• Grief (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I loved this piece it echos with rhyme and near rhyme in a pros style that...
  January 21st, 2025 08:37
• Descent in D Minor (Tristan Robert Lange) You have outdone yourself with this poem of music that can be seen. The...
  January 21st, 2025 08:34
• The Old Neighborhood (Tony36) Perpetual change society\'s menace and though memories may distort they...
  January 21st, 2025 08:30
• ( T S A ) if pigs could fly (Arqios) Loved the pig\'s tail and the note which was very informative and fun. A...
  January 21st, 2025 08:01
• Wind Chime Tree (Cassie58) This poem carries with it the reader. Very well written it pulls the...
  January 21st, 2025 05:06
• An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu) (Teddy.15) Another lovely senryu of a most positive nature to begin the day. Dream on...
  January 21st, 2025 04:14
• The Most Stupendous Love Story the World has ever known. (David Wakeling) David I thought that this was going to end as a Bridge over Troubled...
  January 21st, 2025 04:12
• Medusa Rattle (Mutley Ravishes) You made me smile with this one and that deserves a Fave. Humor in poetry...
  January 21st, 2025 04:08
• From Mourning To Joy (Orchidee) This one sings with metaphor and a sense of future brightness lovely Orchi
  January 21st, 2025 04:02
• Live For Today. (Goldfinch60) A most interesting take on the past. Nicely written with a positive view...
  January 21st, 2025 03:58
• The Catholic Priest and the little boy. (David Wakeling) A sad situation. Hard to deal with and harder to read. The world is full...
  January 20th, 2025 19:05
• BLUE (Nephilim56) Separation and hope or reunion themes in this poem that is written in good...
  January 20th, 2025 17:01
• It is it (Maplespal) Destiny? Well could be then there are no guilty. Loved the poem a great...
  January 20th, 2025 13:04
• choice? (NinjaGirl) A matter of definitions, happieness may not be an immediate choice but as...
  January 20th, 2025 13:01
• I\'m sticking with you, poetry (Tom Dylan) Here here! I\'ll vote for that. I love the way that you have personalized...
  January 20th, 2025 10:35
• Just One Kiss ~* - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) A pledge of devotion ignited from the spark of passion. Lovely
  January 20th, 2025 10:31
• Inauguration Day (Tristan Robert Lange) Several times in history such events have happened and with differing...
  January 20th, 2025 10:29
• Gypsy Fate (RSM0812) A fun and fanciful read. Very nicely done
  January 20th, 2025 08:58
• natures wonder (Jim56) Your poems of nature are always refreshing. Good write Jim
  January 20th, 2025 08:56
• The Visitor (Tony36) A fun read with the last line I thought that Jeff would say he had a...
  January 20th, 2025 08:55
• It\'s Called...Yes, What, Precisely? (Cheeky Missy) The beauty of the first a plea of the second resolved in the third a...
  January 20th, 2025 06:27
• Colourful Cloudy Reflections (Salvia.S) Creative in its use of color and emotion this poem reads smoothly and in...
  January 20th, 2025 06:11
• A Bartender\'s Gift (Gray0328) Many great lines and metaphors in this poem of spilt drunken swill a...
  January 20th, 2025 05:57
• Edgar Allan : Ravenous Poe, 216 years on (Arqios) Indeed he was apoet of darkness that left us an image who\'s shadow in the...
  January 20th, 2025 05:53
• Let’s run away (Liana🦋) This poem carries a carefree and wistful feel a desire to let the wind...
  January 20th, 2025 04:48
• EN PLEIN AIR (Michael Edwards) As per usual clever in concept and wording. Love your work Michael
  January 20th, 2025 04:44
• Wait a While (Orchidee) A comforting poem one of solace and belief. Lovely
  January 20th, 2025 04:41
• bad dreams (Demar Desu) I like the use of negatives in this poem to trite cliche to something...
  January 20th, 2025 04:39
• My Very Own Nevada (Teddy.15) You are right Teddy I remember this poem well from the last posting and...
  January 20th, 2025 04:33
• Appetite For Identification (Mutley Ravishes) Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions...
  January 20th, 2025 04:27
• Seventies Love Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Love on into the sunset a happy ending to an old western movie. A...
  January 20th, 2025 04:24
• Foolish Love (Dan Williams) Regrets echo in this poem time can not be reset and life goes on. There...
  January 20th, 2025 04:20
• Shortcut (NinjaGirl) If you\'re not dead rage against the dying light. The strength of the mind...
  January 19th, 2025 17:11
• Orpheus Rebooted (Thomas W Case) A different Orpheus and in this metaphor one is drug to the underworld....
  January 19th, 2025 13:30
• Magical Melody, Melancholic Remedy (Salvia.S) Much joy is derived from our thoughts, wishes, fantasies and dreams. Very...
  January 19th, 2025 10:44
• Puerto Rico! (Demar Desu) This one requires a great deal of thought.
  January 19th, 2025 10:33
• My Inner Inhibitions (ADarkerMind) Metaphor upon metaphor in this poem with great images and lines \"as cold...
  January 19th, 2025 10:31
• ~> Your Local News Reporter! (Thad Wilk) I\'m so glad that no pigeons were harmed. A most fun read and I hate bird...
  January 19th, 2025 10:18
• The Battle (Tony36) Life is a battle and one we are forced to fight every day. It is hard to...
  January 19th, 2025 10:10
• unexpected snowfall (Tristan Robert Lange) Once again the format enhances the feel of falling snow and its blanketing...
  January 19th, 2025 08:00
• Melting Snow (Cassie58) Cassie you have outdone yourself with this write. It beams with poetic...
  January 19th, 2025 07:56
• With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa.... (Cheeky Missy) I thought at first it was the topic and imagry but then realized that...
  January 19th, 2025 07:52
• twinkling stars (Jim56) A poem that takes me back to when we could see the stars. With pollution...
  January 19th, 2025 07:49
• Sunday School Afternoons (Neville) This poem captured the nostalgia of the past put in the perspective of the...
  January 19th, 2025 05:16
• An impossible Quest (Teddy.15) Live like love has many definitions. We can exist without love but is that...
  January 19th, 2025 05:12
• The insensible god. (David Wakeling) Pain brings a different view that the distance of comfort. A powerful...
  January 19th, 2025 05:10
• Of Sprites and Other \"Nonsense\" (Cheeky Missy) Years ago had a glass coke bottle thrown at and bounce off my windshild...
  January 19th, 2025 05:07
• The Calm (RSM0812) The rhyme, near rhyme and irregular internal patterns of rhyme in this...
  January 19th, 2025 05:00
• new day (Arqios) The duality involved in this haiku is amazing itself. So few words in a...
  January 19th, 2025 04:48
• Walking By My River Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Andy you have outdone yourself with this sonnet. It is one of my favorites...
  January 19th, 2025 04:26
• Buffering (Mutley Ravishes) Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read
  January 18th, 2025 20:37
• Your pictured view (Maplespal) Reminders often bring sadness. Few greater reminders than a picture. A sad...
  January 18th, 2025 20:35
• f words (NinjaGirl) Flexability, focus, function, friendship, freedom Ninja a most fun read
  January 18th, 2025 15:26
• Wild Horses (Teddy.15) A beautiful thought written wonderfully with great verse.
  January 18th, 2025 14:10
• ~> It\'s Not Easy, -Sonnet- (Thad Wilk) A well worded and pleading poem of love. Very nicely done
  January 18th, 2025 11:21
• riverbeds (Tristan Robert Lange) A most interesting format Tristan and it appears to be a dried river bed....
  January 18th, 2025 11:20
• Field of Flowers (Tony36) A great metaphor and poem Tony nicely done
  January 18th, 2025 11:15
• Commitment Call (Orchidee) Very nice Orchi a great hymn
  January 18th, 2025 11:14
• Flight Benefits (Demar Desu) Capitalism based on greed is a profit first operation and there is no...
  January 18th, 2025 07:58
• everyone has love (Jim56) Lovely and true even in detail. Love is different in each and everyone. We...
  January 18th, 2025 07:55
• bicnic py the sea (Arqios) Crypticly clever. A run fead. Thanks for sharing
  January 18th, 2025 07:53
• At The Risk of Reaching Out (Neville) A truism spoken poetically in so few words. Lovely Neville
  January 18th, 2025 05:31
• Abrim’s Life in a Cave in the Lore Hills (David Wakeling) What a great metaphor for the evolution of man and his development of...
  January 18th, 2025 04:46
• Mozart Yet Again. (Goldfinch60) Music is such a strong emotional force a universal language. Lovely Andy
  January 18th, 2025 04:41
• Dust (Doggerel Dave) Dust like a fine patina creates an ambience of age and destinction. lol A...
  January 18th, 2025 04:39
• Gland Goes On A Rant (Mutley Ravishes) Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem...
  January 18th, 2025 04:34
• pain (NinjaGirl) Again a dark write and it ends leaving the reader concerned. Does pain...
  January 17th, 2025 19:21
• Thought 3 (Maplespal) Very nice. Man, woman, child even animals wild we are all living...
  January 17th, 2025 17:30
• When All Else Fails (Gray0328) It used to be that we could fix things that broke or install things but...
  January 17th, 2025 13:04
• Wisdom Within Water (Salvia.S) Change and adaptability should not be under rated. Very nicely written
  January 17th, 2025 12:57
• ~> Chameleons (Thad Wilk) Yellow is the principle color they take. Although some turn green with...
  January 17th, 2025 12:55
• Passion\'s Paradox (Tristan Robert Lange) This one turned from night\'s day to day\'s night. Bright and seductive to...
  January 17th, 2025 12:53
• Old rucksack (Lorenz) This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys...
  January 17th, 2025 12:47
• Bobby O. (Bellaperf) Fills me with sadness and will miss him terribly but his words will linger...
  January 17th, 2025 12:42
• Morning Stillness (RSM0812) Senual and by metaphor sexual it speaks to the seduction of the night....
  January 17th, 2025 12:37
• Still ill (Tom Dylan) I feel the illness in this poem it strikes hard and there seems no escape....
  January 17th, 2025 12:34
• The Abandoned McDonald\'s (Tony36) A great metaphor in this poem Tony it seems to me to lament the passing of...
  January 17th, 2025 12:28
• CTRL + ALT + DLT (Arqios) So many directions. My first take was anesthesia after an operation that...
  January 17th, 2025 12:26
• There\'s Nothing Like the Pick-Up Line: \"I\'m Running A Fever of 104°\"...Is There?! (Cheeky Missy) Work stories are about all I miss of the office or work site. They grow in...
  January 17th, 2025 10:58
• Time\'s Sweetest Tales (Salvia.S) This poem holds a sweetness to it and reads well. Nicely crafted
  January 17th, 2025 05:59
• pet friends (Jim56) Animals are more sincere than people. A wonderful write about the...
  January 17th, 2025 05:38
• damn you networks (Demar Desu) What good is a Safari if you can not see the animals? Have had this happen...
  January 17th, 2025 05:36
• Obsession. (David Wakeling) This is a most beautifully worded deep write on the need for humanity to...
  January 17th, 2025 05:34
• A Rose Without Thorns (senryu) (Teddy.15) This could be any one of many but I think I know who. Well written and...
  January 17th, 2025 05:28
• At the Very End of Darkness (Neville) This poem has echoes. It resounds with internal rhymes and near rhymes...
  January 17th, 2025 05:22
• Healthy Body. (Goldfinch60) Truer words never spoken Gold a person that eats well, exercises, sleeps,...
  January 17th, 2025 05:15
• Spazzm\'d (Mutley Ravishes) A few lines that pack a punch. Lovely
  January 16th, 2025 21:22
• I Just Want to Swim (Thomas W Case) A series of thoughts here all tied together. Nicely woven the setting of...
  January 16th, 2025 17:14
• Plentiful Providings (Orchidee) Generous indeed he has multiplied your seed giving you KP. A fine write...
  January 16th, 2025 14:05
• Highgate Cemetery (Cassie58) Bring together history, and different cultures and faiths all in a single...
  January 16th, 2025 14:02
• Rosy Lea (Teddy.15) Clever use of words in this Teddy. A most fun read
  January 16th, 2025 13:58
• Kisses To Die For! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) A fun read and it makes the mind run wild with who might show up to this...
  January 16th, 2025 11:47
• The House at Demon\'s Alley (Tristan Robert Lange) This sounds so much like a story that kids would tell and the fear they...
  January 16th, 2025 10:15
• You (Tony36) Very nice Tony many words of wisdom here
  January 16th, 2025 08:12