Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The House at Demon\'s Alley (Tristan Robert Lange) This sounds so much like a story that kids would tell and the fear they...
  January 16th, 2025 10:15
• You (Tony36) Very nice Tony many words of wisdom here
  January 16th, 2025 08:12
• new day (Jim56) A wonderful write Jim and yes each day is a new start and we choose what...
  January 16th, 2025 08:09
• Aliens are coming! (Demar Desu) Another fun read. Makes one think and wonder are we not all aliens?
  January 16th, 2025 07:28
• forgotten soul (NinjaGirl) Ignored possiblly but never forgotten. Good or bad our memories remain...
  January 16th, 2025 05:57
• Flushed (Neville) Deeply sensual in literal and metaphorical ways double entendre give even...
  January 16th, 2025 04:31
• time’s no friend (Arqios) You have accomplished the near impossible describing the intangible in...
  January 16th, 2025 04:27
• Start The Day. (Goldfinch60) Good advice bringing yesterday into today is not helpful. Yes true again...
  January 16th, 2025 04:22
• God talks to Adrian in a Dream. (David Wakeling) Don\'t believe in that god but swear I\'ve heard that voice before. Loved...
  January 16th, 2025 04:20
• Hell (Dan Williams) Open heart surgery of the emotional type. Great imagry in this poem
  January 16th, 2025 04:18
• The sunflower (NafisaSB) A single voice can cause a major change. The power of one is often...
  January 16th, 2025 04:13
• Silence (John Prophet) A poem of limits the ends of the spectrum. Framed in zero and infinity...
  January 16th, 2025 04:10
• Hormoans (Mutley Ravishes) Didn\'t know that words played with themselves, being a homophone...
  January 16th, 2025 04:08
• Do You Believe in Magic? (Gray0328) There are a lot of good lines in thes poem. \" the stale smell of last...
  January 15th, 2025 13:54
• Beauty of Living (Demar Desu) This was quite cryptic but after reading your note it became quite clear...
  January 15th, 2025 13:48
• Lovers Fate (RSM0812) A very warm and sensual poem that is heartwarming through its...
  January 15th, 2025 13:44
• Healing Help (Orchidee) Now this is a different style of hymn Orchi. Most interesting very nice
  January 15th, 2025 10:49
• ~. > I Am An Anteater! (Thad Wilk) Now I have to say I have seen a lot of critters but an anteater I have...
  January 15th, 2025 10:47
• Bitter Sweet (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I liked this final chapter that was realistic and poetic. Your rhyme and...
  January 15th, 2025 10:45
• Lady warrior (Tony36) A poem of a female warrior. There are many and not on the battlefield of...
  January 15th, 2025 10:41
• To my kind: It\'s time (Maplespal) A haunting write and a different point of view presented in this poem....
  January 15th, 2025 10:34
• PAIN (Nephilim56) Poor self esteem can lead to feelings of being looked down on and feeling...
  January 15th, 2025 10:30
• The Sound of Rain (Tristan Robert Lange) Death\'s sorrow reflected in this poem full of images of it but no mention...
  January 15th, 2025 10:25
• issues (Jim56) Ruminating on issues is a big problem for most people. I always say if...
  January 15th, 2025 10:21
• spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie (Arqios) What were once face to face social ties now facebook connections. People...
  January 15th, 2025 10:16
• Right On Time (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Another chapter complete and I guess I\'ll have to come back for the end....
  January 15th, 2025 04:15
• Eyes of Glass, Hearts of Stone (David Wakeling) It takes a different kind of mind to understand ugliness, pain,...
  January 15th, 2025 04:12
• Death In The Night. (Goldfinch60) There are too many of them out there looking for money to suck or...
  January 15th, 2025 04:06
• Purgatory (Dan Williams) Thought provoking. \"only paper mâché morals.\" a great line. A most...
  January 15th, 2025 04:02
• I\'m Sorry (DLewis88) Dark. The pressures felt from others are felt in this poem and the...
  January 14th, 2025 20:04
• The Birds of November (Thomas W Case) Time such a relative thing. A powerful write that leads to reflection
  January 14th, 2025 20:02
• Beef Hot Dawgs at Midnight....oh! (Cheeky Missy) Used to live next to a family that owned a hotdog factory. They would...
  January 14th, 2025 17:29
• The Clowns of the Evening News (Gray0328) Scam and spam, take the ignorants money while you can. Fake news social...
  January 14th, 2025 13:34
• the Unfathomable (NinjaGirl) Metaphors here as well as a direct hint at past pain still present. Sad...
  January 14th, 2025 13:30
• ~`` But, I Am A Tiger! - Tiger Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) Tigers are not my choice of a wrestling partner. A fun read my firend
  January 14th, 2025 11:24
• Broadsword My Friend, My Gentlemen (ADarkerMind) Cryptic as always but powerfull lines. nicely written
  January 14th, 2025 11:20
• The right (RSM0812) This poem reads well with great rhyme and flow as well as a thought...
  January 14th, 2025 09:15
• We are (Maplespal) A great thought and a philisophical poem as well. Nicely worded
  January 14th, 2025 09:14
• robin melody (Jim56) A lovely poem with such good flow and rhyme. It was a short as a robin...
  January 14th, 2025 09:12
• The power of words (Tony36) Wise words Tony yes words shadow lingers longer than the sun and cuts...
  January 14th, 2025 09:11
• Poetry Called (Tom Dylan) So glad you did that, poetry is a most wonderful guest. Very nicely
  January 14th, 2025 09:09
• Closed Open in Bloom (Tristan Robert Lange) A most sensual and errotic poem about flowers. The metaphor is strong and...
  January 14th, 2025 09:07
• Help! There’s a dragon in my stew! (Arqios) As a child used to look at the soup and imagine things now I eat it to...
  January 14th, 2025 04:14
• $1.86 in my bank account (Demar Desu) A dollar short and a day long seems to be the tone of this poem. A fun...
  January 14th, 2025 04:10
• Oratio Sensitiva. (David Wakeling) This poem is a melding of the old and the new. Not only an old god and a...
  January 14th, 2025 04:08
• New Moon Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Another wondrful sonnet to your credit Andy well done
  January 14th, 2025 04:03
• red (NinjaGirl) Seeing red an old cliche is something that can happen in times of extreem...
  January 14th, 2025 03:57
• Worm (RSM0812) You have a most interesting way of pairing opposite dualities in each...
  January 13th, 2025 19:42
• Blue Star (Mutley Ravishes) Now this was a short one that sent its message in just a few words. It can...
  January 13th, 2025 19:39
• Truth and lies (RSM0812) Unique wording in this poem kept me guessing. A fun read
  January 13th, 2025 19:35
• You Didn\'t Want the Photograph, Did You? (Cheeky Missy) Too cold and hungry a most sad condition and to have fun despite this is a...
  January 13th, 2025 17:28
• The evening angel (Lorenz) Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this...
  January 13th, 2025 17:24
• Get Out of Dodge (Gray0328) Gray this is deeper than the story. There is a time to leave and give up...
  January 13th, 2025 15:44
• Visions of the Soothsayer (Matthew R. Callies) You have woven into this poem deep wisdom and advice that in the telling...
  January 13th, 2025 12:40
• Influenced by Woodkid (Maplespal) A most beautiful poem of where one can be taken with the magic of music....
  January 13th, 2025 12:26
• `~> Christmas Day, Far Away -Acrostic form- (Thad Wilk) For many Christmas is not a time of cheer but of sorrow war has always...
  January 13th, 2025 10:19
• Life in America (Demar Desu) A most amusing piece this Senryu displays both sides
  January 13th, 2025 10:17
• Lasting (Cassie58) A sad poem that has that haunting feeling. Very nicely written in very few...
  January 13th, 2025 10:15
• crested (Tristan Robert Lange) When you got to go you got to go. A fun piece my friend
  January 13th, 2025 10:13
• Fallen Angel (Tony36) Makes one wonder what an angel could do that would result in that sever a...
  January 13th, 2025 08:10
• all the same (Jim56) A great message Jim said so nicely in this poem.
  January 13th, 2025 06:53
• Angels Watching Over You (Poetic Licence) A most beautiful wish for betterment and wellness of a ailing friend....
  January 13th, 2025 06:49
• SUMMER HAZE (Nephilim56) Haunting in feel aswell as longing. It reads with an unfinished ending and...
  January 13th, 2025 04:51
• January Snow (Tom Dylan) A picture of winter painted in words that I remember from my younger years...
  January 13th, 2025 04:48
• Hopeful Help (Orchidee) Orchi another wonderful poem that again focuses on gratitude and...
  January 13th, 2025 04:46
• once there was a boy (Arqios) Cryptic This is a beautiful write that details that right of passage to...
  January 13th, 2025 04:42
• The kindness of the lady. (David Wakeling) Wow! I think David that this is one of your most beautiful poems. It is...
  January 13th, 2025 04:38
• Our Book Of Life. (Goldfinch60) with most books I can see how many more pages I have to read so I know...
  January 13th, 2025 04:25
• The ocean at early morning (Tony36) Sounds like a place I used to live many lives ago. Beautiful images.
  January 12th, 2025 20:45
• \"Wait, Wait--Don\'t Tell Me!\" (Cheeky Missy) Morning ritual verses night and so it goes day to day. Well done Chic
  January 12th, 2025 20:43
• I need to get rich (Demar Desu) Content may be a better word. Short and to the point
  January 12th, 2025 20:39
• mind trapped (NinjaGirl) What you describe is common to people that have suffered significant...
  January 12th, 2025 16:24
• Arrival Day (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) This is a nice bridge between the last chapter and what is still pending....
  January 12th, 2025 15:18
• Delightful (Thomas W Case) Sexual, sensual, errotic it is all of these Thomas
  January 12th, 2025 12:27
• The Good Fight (Bella Shepard) In our selfish and individualistic society even technology conspires...
  January 12th, 2025 12:25
• A question on time (Maplespal) A most difficult concept to grasp. It is philisophical and you have looked...
  January 12th, 2025 12:20
• ~`* Solar Eclipse *`~ (Thad Wilk) Deeply thoughtful and though provoking the idea of gray and the looking...
  January 12th, 2025 12:17
• dove love (Jim56) Love whether with humans or animals is always a beautiful thing to...
  January 12th, 2025 12:13
• nuance (Tristan Robert Lange) Truth generally does lie between. A most thought provoking writes. Very...
  January 12th, 2025 12:11
• A True Broken Heart is not from Love (Teddy.15) Indeed it is and it pumps that life giving fluid to the brain that...
  January 12th, 2025 06:33
• Natures Wonderful Residents of Africa (Poetic Licence) This poem although apparently quite upfront makes great use of language...
  January 12th, 2025 06:26
• STREETLIGHT (Nephilim56) You have set the scene well and I feel that I have been there, in fact am...
  January 12th, 2025 04:53
• the lighthouse keeper’s watch (Arqios) The poem resonates with me because I from time to time live on that rocky...
  January 12th, 2025 04:50
• Breaking a Myth About Bad Words (Neville) I used to hate vegtables as a child now I love them. I guess things...
  January 12th, 2025 04:45
• My Live With Music. (Goldfinch60) Very nice Andy I too love music and agree about the formula of todays...
  January 12th, 2025 04:42
• SECLUSION (David Wakeling) Bathed in metaphor this poem to me speaks of dualities and difficulty of...
  January 12th, 2025 04:36
• What I got to do (Poetaldo) Nice to hear someone concerned for the poor and homeless. Nicely said.
  January 11th, 2025 20:12
• Broadsword My Friend, My Gentlemen (ADarkerMind) Has the sounds of a song. The words take one on a journey through places...
  January 11th, 2025 19:12
• My Black Goddess: A Tale of Passion and Desire (DLewis88) Some men measure their virility in inches you in feet. A fun read sensuous...
  January 11th, 2025 18:44
• Mother waters (Lorenz) A poem of longing and desire that is well painted in images of a sureal...
  January 11th, 2025 18:39
• fire (NinjaGirl) Cleaning out old memories and burning them is a great image to present...
  January 11th, 2025 14:07
• The Gods in Disguise (Gray0328) Each of us our own god so why not each a god to be honored whether the...
  January 11th, 2025 14:03
• People over Profit (Demar Desu) Greed is the driving force of humanity as strong or stronger than sex it...
  January 11th, 2025 13:31
• Between the Steps (Matthew R. Callies) Taken literally I feel I have been there and as a metaphor I am there a...
  January 11th, 2025 11:56
• lifes school (Jim56) Being graded in life\'s school of hard knocks is leaving me a bit bloodied...
  January 11th, 2025 11:53
• ~> Frankenstein! - Form Acrostic - (Thad Wilk) A fun read and well put togeather just like the monster stiched with care
  January 11th, 2025 11:51
• Baby giggles (Tony36) Yes there is something so natural and free about a baby giggle they are...
  January 11th, 2025 11:49
• Fireproof (Tristan Robert Lange) Very nice Tristan it shouts with force and rings with power. The last line...
  January 11th, 2025 11:47
• spaces we inhabit: with every breath (Arqios) Indeed it is so you can still see the spirit of Pompeii in its frozen...
  January 11th, 2025 07:48
• Last mans grave (Maplespal) Thought provoking yes women are the prototype and theoretically men may...
  January 11th, 2025 07:41