Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• SILENCE SHOUTS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Good rhyme and meter in a poem of dark isolation in a threatening world...
  August 26th, 2025 05:06
• Cancel, Click, Repeat (DLewis88) As the population grows so do laws of control and now we are too damn...
  August 26th, 2025 05:03
• Point of view (Jerry Reynolds) I started to write this three times and each time stopped and started over...
  August 26th, 2025 04:59
• Futile (MatPie) Surreal reflections in this poem It creates images that in metaphor take...
  August 26th, 2025 04:56
• Children (Part.2) - What Type Of Theory? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) We as humans are arrogant by nature liking to see ourselves in the best...
  August 26th, 2025 04:54
• Hitchhikers Guide. (Goldfinch60) Andy you got me on this one had me going thinking about the people I give...
  August 26th, 2025 04:49
• Fragments (Kaz) At first glance this appears just another frozen crystle but upon further...
  August 26th, 2025 04:44
• You Look Happier (Cam) We all fake our feelings from time to time to hide what we don\'t want...
  August 26th, 2025 04:38
• Silly Girl (13LaurenD) A poetic redirection and refocus from what one was chasing to what one...
  August 26th, 2025 04:35
• Starting right now (Hzugman) Truth in few words. Too often we grow neglectful of what we should...
  August 26th, 2025 04:18
• gated folds (Arqios) Cryptic you have selected your pen name well your writings are growing...
  August 26th, 2025 04:16
• The Quiet Room (DLewis88) Nicely rhymed but more its metaphors are well done. Very nice and a fave
  August 25th, 2025 19:40
• The Dunes (Emery Walker) A poem of fantasy and love that is misty and in a fog of wistfulness....
  August 25th, 2025 19:37
• I Lied About That One Too (Malo J) Life is full of contradictions. Nicely done
  August 25th, 2025 18:50
• Watching. (Keeter C) Deeply philosophical blended with science it becomes poetic nicely done
  August 25th, 2025 17:07
• echoes (Kayla Jackson) Short and sweet a clever play on a famous saying applied to missing
  August 25th, 2025 17:05
• Leaving your legacy (Yazz) Many think of leaving a legacy either in an empire of wealth of fame....
  August 25th, 2025 16:11
• Where Are the Swallowed Clocks That Held Back Our Morning? (Gaias Soothing Haven) A unique approach and metaphor as well. Lovely
  August 25th, 2025 16:05
• Conversations we never had. (Aa Harvey) A poem of passion and desire. Very nicely done
  August 25th, 2025 16:02
• Borderless (Kurt Philip Behm) Although bathed in society we can still be alone. A lovely write Kurt
  August 25th, 2025 16:00
• Stubborn as the Earth Beneath Us (Gray0328) This poem made me think of my old English bull and left me missing him....
  August 25th, 2025 15:58
• EVERYONE KNOWS I EXPECT I (Infinite) How others want to shape us and the emotion left in this poem. Be oneself....
  August 25th, 2025 15:51
• Afterthought (Analogaddict) This poem speaks of being an annoyance that results in being discarded or...
  August 25th, 2025 15:41
• Older. (Chris Duffy) Sex a measure of youth where virility is the elixir of staying young. A...
  August 25th, 2025 15:39
• () A poem of how someone molds another and a lovely carving it makes. Nicely...
  August 25th, 2025 15:36
• Atrocity (Ray Moonee) With the aid of the author\'s not this one becomes clear in its metaphors...
  August 25th, 2025 15:33
• The Girl with a Broken Funny Bone (Lu) Our sense of humor says a lot about us. There is nothing wrong with being...
  August 25th, 2025 15:28
• The Way I See You (Louiray) A beautiful poem dedicated to someone loved. Very nicely written
  August 25th, 2025 15:24
• Brain Shutdown (Anthony Hanible) Standing out as unique. A lovely statement
  August 25th, 2025 15:23
• For You (Mithra) A feeling of being possessed by someone runs through this poem Nicely...
  August 25th, 2025 15:21
• I’m No Longer Waiting (Yumi Gab) All things change even relationships and feelings despite vows to the...
  August 25th, 2025 15:19
• Dear God (David Hopkins) Even Christ felt forsaken in the garden as he prayed. Well written
  August 25th, 2025 15:17
• Tempered by the Sea (Kaz) How some things so common can stand out and even the worthless can be...
  August 25th, 2025 15:16
• Life feels like a to-do list (Sophenia) How a person can be not only the main coarse but the seasoning Nicely done
  August 25th, 2025 15:15
• Borrowed from eternity (RSM0812) Full of wordplay and metaphor it breaths. Nicely done
  August 25th, 2025 15:12
• An eye (Kingdaniel) Revenge is not justice and when served cold it is not palatable. Well done
  August 25th, 2025 15:11
• Blue Clogs (Lorna) A most interesting title and colorful as well. Nicely metaphoric
  August 25th, 2025 15:08
• Slow it Down (Thomas W Case) Indeed we are all nuts in one way or another Thomas. Another good read
  August 25th, 2025 15:05
• Oh, I Dunno. (Cheeky Missy) I have had plans canceled before and it is a disappointment. This whole...
  August 25th, 2025 15:03
• The house of the unsaid (Lorenz) This tickles the brain in places that can not be itched or scratched only...
  August 25th, 2025 15:00
• Skeleton Key (Tristan Robert Lange) There is a lot of darkness here with feelings of self cannibalism. A...
  August 25th, 2025 14:57
• The Storms of Life (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A poem of a constant that is always there and unchanging. A pillar of...
  August 25th, 2025 14:44
• It\'s a bedtime thing (Maplespal) A poem with dharm and a sense of familiarity that gives it a home like...
  August 25th, 2025 05:54
• The Yin and Yang Show (Pete the poet) Indeed this presents the opposites in nature and the how they compliment...
  August 25th, 2025 05:50
• hope (Jim56) A most beautiful message Jim and nicely said
  August 25th, 2025 05:16
• The Quiet Coffin (Samuel) A most interesting poem that paints a picture. Nicely done
  August 25th, 2025 04:17
• a clockwork orangerie (Arqios) This poem feels surreal, industrial, mechanical, post classic,...
  August 25th, 2025 04:14
• no colors (Yael Olalde-Garcia) Modernistic, fragmentational I would call it and a bit surreal. Nicely...
  August 25th, 2025 04:07
• Racism (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I too feel that racism has lost all function and purpose. We are all...
  August 25th, 2025 04:05
• Disillusioned (NafisaSB) Buyer beware they always used to say. A clever poem of advice that anyone...
  August 25th, 2025 04:02
• MANS LAST DAY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem of prophetic proportions that speaks of man in the midst of this...
  August 25th, 2025 04:00
• in my bed, all alone (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A poem of loneliness and pain and although poetry is not always a great...
  August 25th, 2025 03:58
• Hurting soul forgives (Devil_dear) A great message set in poetic form. Very nicely crafted.
  August 25th, 2025 03:54
• A Picture In My Mind (David Hopkins) This poem comes across as dream like and feelings of loss in a surreal...
  August 25th, 2025 03:52
• Pie (E.J. Waling) Wonder if it tastes like numbers or electrical current, whether it has the...
  August 25th, 2025 03:49
• My Hungry Body Satisfied. (Goldfinch60) A fun turn in this poem Gold where a thought to be person becomes music....
  August 25th, 2025 03:45
• Eye 2 Eye (Ja'Quan Shepard) A most interesting format and presentation in this poem. It challenges the...
  August 24th, 2025 20:47
• The Agony (Kayla Jackson) There is often a battle between the brain and the heart in love and there...
  August 24th, 2025 20:45
• The Crying Tree (Friendship) A poem that dedicates meaning to pleasant past memories and a sense of...
  August 24th, 2025 20:43
• some people never go crazy (Gray0328) Great lines in this poem that speak to me of how some people never take a...
  August 24th, 2025 16:07
• Portrait of Dora Lyse (Kevin Hulme) This is poetic humor loved it a fave
  August 24th, 2025 16:01
• Hope (Keeter C) There is a deepness to this poem that speaks. Nicely worded
  August 24th, 2025 16:00
• Envy Dries Slower Than Skin (Gaias Soothing Haven) Very nicely written with some very good lines.
  August 24th, 2025 15:56
• Stuck (Sunshine777) Life is the wait. Nicely written
  August 24th, 2025 15:53
• A life long friend (EvenwheniLie) A dedication to one I assume lost. Well done
  August 24th, 2025 13:37
• Beyond Breath (Ray Moonee) A lovely poetic dedication to an astronaut well written
  August 24th, 2025 13:35
• The Persephone verses (Zephyrschild) So well written this resume of the Greek Goddess and her metaphoric story....
  August 24th, 2025 13:33
• I Don’t (Lu) A beautiful depiction of how things don\'t need to be totally destroyed to...
  August 24th, 2025 13:30
• The Flower (Deepak Vohra) This is a wonderful poem that in its most poetic style broaches the impact...
  August 24th, 2025 13:29
• The Mirror that Trembled (TheInnerLens) Deep emotions penetrate this poem and are reflected in the glass of its...
  August 24th, 2025 13:26
• Womb on Trial (Aman 12) The world needs someone to blame and extends its roots looking for shame....
  August 24th, 2025 13:24
• Lord of Our World (Abdullah123) Speaking through a carved image to a god this poem gives a earthly view to...
  August 24th, 2025 13:20
• Believe Me: I Made a List (Cheeky Missy) Another set of sonnets set in the home environment with all that the...
  August 24th, 2025 13:17
• Sertraline Sunrise (Aurora1) Nicely set this poem speaks of memories of peace amongst chaos
  August 24th, 2025 13:13
• Just Three (Kurt Philip Behm) I have been there many time Kurt those early awakenings with a blessed...
  August 24th, 2025 12:29
• George Committed Suicide (Rebellion_in_sanity) Deeply philosophical this poem paints a dark picture. It is poignant and...
  August 24th, 2025 12:09
• Summer Fun (Jerry Reynolds) Beautiful! Loved it
  August 24th, 2025 07:56
• Green, Yellow And Red (Anthony Hanible) Traffic of any type, a great metaphor and nicely done.
  August 24th, 2025 07:26
• Outcasts\' Oculus (Tristan Robert Lange) The format again emulates the theme. A poetic metaphor as well. A...
  August 24th, 2025 06:45
• Why not share 4 poems (Maplespal) A wide diversity in these poems from missing someone lost to tripping over...
  August 24th, 2025 06:39
• The Flower in the Stone (RSM0812) A most interesting metaphor here. Well done
  August 24th, 2025 06:35
• purple penguin (Jim56) Fanciful indeed Jim unless he swam though a dye spill. A fun poem that is...
  August 24th, 2025 05:13
• The Eyes : A Vibrant Tale (Aman Kumar Holy) Love how you maintain the central theme throughout the poem. The flowing...
  August 24th, 2025 05:11
• Owning the Quiet (Samuel) Loved this poem and silence is not only okay but a friend and place of...
  August 24th, 2025 05:07
• \"the question\" (Arqios) You have captured in words the moment and excitement of the hunt. It is...
  August 24th, 2025 05:06
• For Aidan (Tia Desilva) Very personal it drips with emotion and is well written evoking emotion...
  August 24th, 2025 05:01
• A Hole Lot Of Light (Teddy.15) Love the word play in the title my friend in fact I like it a hole lot. I...
  August 24th, 2025 04:57
• Suppression (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A fun read with the built in symbolic masonic words nicely painted. Not a...
  August 24th, 2025 04:52
• Oh no! (Aa Harvey) Ah the plus\'s\' and minus of having someone. Love poems and songs are...
  August 24th, 2025 04:49
• Guardian angel (Starlight) A feeling of dependability and reliance fills this poem. Nicely written
  August 24th, 2025 04:45
• WINGED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) It is the empty cold feel and incomplete thought that comes from this poem...
  August 24th, 2025 04:43
• Girlhood (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Dark thoughts in this poem of feeling unwanted. A sad poem with a...
  August 24th, 2025 04:40
• The poet in Russia by Sergei  Esenin.     (Ksey_Gan) Most injuries physical of mental we expect to heal shortly but some remain...
  August 24th, 2025 04:38
• Piece by Piece (Maydanae) An interesting metaphor of the egg and bit by bit. Going home bit by bit...
  August 24th, 2025 04:35
• Lost (Catherine Houston) A poem of pain that confuses the mind and seems to impede action. Nicely...
  August 24th, 2025 04:32
• All Items Numbered 204 (Neville) Simple small natural treasures often overlooked and so well imaged in...
  August 24th, 2025 04:30
• I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember (NinjaGirl) Memory can be cruel or kind it also can be accurate or distorted. I choose...
  August 24th, 2025 04:24
• A Walk To My Willow. (Goldfinch60) A most lovely walk indeed. Nothing like a walk in nature to give one...
  August 24th, 2025 04:18
• I Rather Prefer Klondike Original (Cheeky Missy) I tend to agree Chic I prefer Klondike original as well. A fun read
  August 23rd, 2025 19:26
• The Devil (Obada) The self incorporation of evil or at least its belief is a heavy burden....
  August 23rd, 2025 19:21