Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- MY BURNING TOWER (Nephilim56)
A metaphor here of a burning tower. A guide, a passion what ever the...
April 8th, 2025 04:32 - Without My True Love (Ajon4wheels)
Missing someone is a difficult thing. This poem does well in expressing...
April 8th, 2025 04:30 - A story of the servants who don\'t serve. (Blissed-secret)
A lesson given in parable form poetic and wise. Nicely done.
April 8th, 2025 04:28 - Fireflies waltz (Reynaldo Casison)
Romantic and beautiful in its wording this poem showers wonderful images...
April 8th, 2025 04:26 - A Thousand Years (Lewisgale mental hospital)
A poem that could be a song with chorus and all. Nicely worded
April 8th, 2025 04:23 - Burp (Boot)
The transient nature of relationships comes through in this poem. Very...
April 8th, 2025 04:21 - Tailspin (Baker)
The complexities of relationships in this poem and how we can not go back...
April 8th, 2025 04:18 - Passwords (Chris Duffy)
That is what humor is about, something that everyone can identify with....
April 8th, 2025 04:15 - Racing Thoughts (MDStone)
Racing thoughts well depicted in this poem well penned. Anxiety in action....
April 8th, 2025 04:11 - as she was walking out the door (Jon Nakapalau)
Well formed this poem was clever in shape to come to the final point in a...
April 8th, 2025 04:08 - On the Road To Insanity. (Poetic Licence)
Is it not more insane to tell a person that they are insane because they...
April 8th, 2025 04:06 - Vilvoorde: wash (Arqios)
With each reading the poem becomes less cryptic. Sheets in the wind...
April 8th, 2025 03:58 - Lessons Learned In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Words of truth and at times a truth we do not want to see or accept....
April 8th, 2025 03:46 - AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!! (Demar Desu)
The war cry of the common man. A fun read.
April 8th, 2025 03:41 - A Shadowy kiss (Pukur)
Quite the story in rhyme with a moral. Nicely done.
April 7th, 2025 20:12 - Kundagarten (Mutley Ravishes)
A poem that seems a magical chant, it seems that I have missed the key....
April 7th, 2025 19:31 - When I Figure That Out.... (Cheeky Missy)
Ah sonnets of weather, squirls and groundhogs a seasonal composition....
April 7th, 2025 19:02 - Kindness my Ass (Thomas W Case)
Very nice Thomas great write
April 7th, 2025 18:42 - Oh you smart-assed worms (Hzugman)
Clever I liked the humor. Very nice
April 7th, 2025 16:23 - shadows (Thoughtless)
A beautiful stanza of love. Here the imagination runs. Very nice
April 7th, 2025 16:22 - A mother like mine (Pineapple_pizza018)
A mother\'s love goes beyond poetry. A most lovely recognition of a...
April 7th, 2025 16:20 - How strange! (Hzugman)
How strangeness births itself and grows more comfortable as it sits in its...
April 7th, 2025 15:02 - Cold Love (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
How often we allow pride to keep us from expressing what we feel. A lovely...
April 7th, 2025 14:31 - You Are (Lewisgale mental hospital)
How interesting that we allow the majority tell the minority that they are...
April 7th, 2025 14:30 - Him, That\'s in the Fog (AuburnScribbler)
Confusion, blurred thoughts that break and come and go. A frightening and...
April 7th, 2025 14:26 - Til Death Do Us Part (>Kai<)
A great concept well expressed in poetic form. Most flowers do decay...
April 7th, 2025 13:52 - Navigate Contradictions (Alex PB)
A great metaphor in the crystal ball. Yes it can be valued but is fragile...
April 7th, 2025 13:49 - Tinge (Libellule)
A great write about the process of writing. A colorful and bright write....
April 7th, 2025 13:47 - Gremlins (2781)
There is no privacy, no anonymity, you can not be off the grid now days. ...
April 7th, 2025 13:45 - The Weight of Redemption (Eira Solen)
A poetic question that each person has to answer for themselves. Nicely...
April 7th, 2025 13:41 - Lifeless (DLewis88)
A poem of strange thoughts and mental reflections. Most interesting.
April 7th, 2025 13:38 - muse (Lunarchloedip)
To serve as inspiration is as great as to be the creator. A wonderful
April 7th, 2025 13:37 - Spoken Tide (Kurt Philip Behm)
If not mistaken a beautiful metaphor here. It is not only the canals that...
April 7th, 2025 11:02 - San Juan (Gatiuski)
A beautiful picture painted of outside walls that hold a history that goes...
April 7th, 2025 11:00 - \"Ifs\" (Tayama)
A poem of misconnection that could have been if one had wished to sell...
April 7th, 2025 10:58 - Maybe I\'ll Fall Again (Santajah Douglass)
A beautiful poem of hope cast in wonderful images. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 10:28 - Personal Hell (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Wow! This is a most interesting poem that speaks to a taboo subject. After...
April 7th, 2025 10:26 - Silver Gray (Garth Rakumakoe)
A poem I feel in my own silver gray or if your British silver grey. Nicely...
April 7th, 2025 10:16 - GUESS WHY I LOVE YOU (DEBIH MARTIN)
A beautiful poem that speaks to beauty in many forms. Most lovely
April 7th, 2025 10:14 - Jay North (Randyjohnson71)
A very nice dedication to a man I knew as a kid watching his show...
April 7th, 2025 10:12 - Heaven or Hell (RSM0812)
A poetic prophesy, they say that the word is God and was with him since...
April 7th, 2025 10:11 - An Everlasting Remembrance (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
Loved your last two lines they are truly poetic. Very nice
April 7th, 2025 10:03 - Loop of Lost Tomorrows (Tristan Robert Lange)
Maybe it is our myopia that impairs a cornucopia of benefits from such a...
April 7th, 2025 10:02 - Roller Skating Dreams (Demar Desu)
A great short that paints a picture of action toward one\'s goal. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 07:05 - React (Tony36)
A great question to begin a poem. Love is just that not to be rejected but...
April 7th, 2025 07:04 - The downplayed hazard of swallowing vitamins a -z (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Wow look what the vitamins have done. Irregular growth poetic spin, a...
April 7th, 2025 07:02 - Ottawa in love (Lorenz)
A most beautiful mix of metaphor, fantasy, realities images of a place...
April 7th, 2025 06:54 - Distantly heard (Maplespal)
A fun story of which myths are woven and fanciful though it be more truth...
April 7th, 2025 06:49 - Same old story (Mik)
We infect all those around us with our disease, ask the native Americans,...
April 7th, 2025 06:46 - Broken Hearted Girl (Ajon4wheels)
Loss of a relationship whether through death, separation by distance or...
April 7th, 2025 05:47 - How? (Hey!)
A good write about feeling good about who one is and the freedom this...
April 7th, 2025 05:44 - dogs love (Jim56)
I can\'t but agree having had several dogs in my life they are my animal...
April 7th, 2025 05:41 - GHOSTLIKE (Nephilim56)
Have felt that before as I feel it now. A most haunting poem. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 03:48 - Mystery..... (Orchidee)
Those people with a lick a common sense will commit themselves to the...
April 7th, 2025 03:47 - In Quiet Sorrow (Kaz)
A nugget of gold this gem and in the tradition of alchemy it\'s gold may...
April 7th, 2025 03:44 - Successfully Failed Again. (Poetic Licence)
Very nicely said in most poetic form that we are what we tell ourselves...
April 7th, 2025 03:40 - How Often ? (Charlie Nine)
A motivational poem that encourages each one to believe in themselves and...
April 7th, 2025 03:37 - eye on the road (Arqios)
Here here a topic I have thought about for some time. Do we not do the...
April 7th, 2025 03:26 - Two Roses after D’Aktill (Ksey_Gan)
A tone of sadness pervades this poem and continues through it until the...
April 7th, 2025 03:17 - Trumpet Player (Gatiuski)
The words of the poem echo like the sound of the horns in a hypnotic...
April 7th, 2025 03:12 - A World Without Love. Sonnet (Goldfinch60)
A lovely love sonnet Andy. I remember well the song as well.
April 7th, 2025 03:07 - Of Pranks, Spoofs, and yes, April Fool\'s (Cheeky Missy)
A banquet of various foods from French toast to mushrooms and onions an...
April 6th, 2025 19:45 - Waiting (Amethyste)
Waiting is the worst. A poem that captures this well.
April 6th, 2025 17:40 - I wanted to have coffee with the heroes…?! (Sami Mulaj)
A poem that I take of metaphor. We are all heroes in one way or another....
April 6th, 2025 16:47 - Like it hot Tango (Ksey_Gan)
Seductive, sensuous, filled with wishes and hopes. Lovely
April 6th, 2025 15:41 - I\'m sorry mother (Pineapple_pizza018)
Nice to love a mother and even nicer that she is still here better yet a...
April 6th, 2025 14:29 - Acceptance (Anthony Hanible)
An analogy of class and school put into real life. Nicely written it...
April 6th, 2025 13:33 - Te Amo Cafe Blues (A Boy With Roses)
I\'ve made it a rule no alcohol before 10:00 AM. A poem of passion and...
April 6th, 2025 13:31 - What Distance This (ADarkerMind)
I really liked the complexion of this poem. The internal rhyme from time...
April 6th, 2025 13:28 - Tomorrow\'s Child (Kurt Philip Behm)
Can we be bigger than that around us can we accept change and embrace it?...
April 6th, 2025 12:11 - Song of a little road (Hirok Das)
We often don\'t enjoy the trip until it is over. The destination gives...
April 6th, 2025 12:09 - My love, Am I the wrong one? (Definitelymayank)
Holding on to anger cankers the soul. Letting go frees and heals it....
April 6th, 2025 12:08 - to the thoughts that die (Demar Desu)
So hard when there is nothing to write on and a thought comes through. Has...
April 6th, 2025 12:06 - You Choose You (13LaurenD)
Saying no is a hard thing to do especially after a lifetime of saying yes....
April 6th, 2025 12:05 - The ice cream (Isa kemmy)
A great metaphor ice cream sweet that melts. Kindness that melts a heart...
April 6th, 2025 11:59 - Loss and Gain (RSM0812)
A poem of redemption. Not bright but dark it cries out. Nicely written
April 6th, 2025 11:56 - Horsemen 4 (Mik)
Metaphor in religion and in poetry sometimes one and the same. A good...
April 6th, 2025 11:54 - Something to Drink (Coracaodacripta)
Not at all disturbing but rather finely poetic. This speaks in metaphor...
April 6th, 2025 10:20 - Bird with a broken wing (Cruel Summer)
At times most of us have broken wings, some heal some not and we either...
April 6th, 2025 09:32 - Gran my guiding star (Heledd)
A fine tribute to a most important person that knew the value of giving...
April 6th, 2025 08:17 - Take It Easy (Peppino)
Take time to smell the roses. One can not be a poet if one does not open...
April 6th, 2025 08:15 - Blush of the moon (Kaz)
A most beautiful picture painted in words where paper becomes the sky and...
April 6th, 2025 08:09 - Defy (Tristan Robert Lange)
A poem of depth defying expectations in exchange for a solid rooted...
April 6th, 2025 08:07 - Just a drink (Maplespal)
Real and metaphoric my favorite type of poetry. The feeling is not just...
April 6th, 2025 07:59 - Booted Grace (Gray0328)
This is an example of how context gives different meaning to a poem. I...
April 6th, 2025 07:21 - Habitación número cuatro (Falcon_mn)
Beautiful in its horror, death in a haunting dream with images to fill the...
April 6th, 2025 06:38 - Fuck (Pamela)
Disappointment? A powerful poem strongly worded to make its point. Use the...
April 6th, 2025 06:30 - hedgehog pilot (Jim56)
Another story in poetic form Jim. Well worded and set as a wonderful...
April 6th, 2025 06:27 - This Very Moment (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
There is deep philosophy in this poem. Living in the moment Carpe Diem is...
April 6th, 2025 06:24 - Epilogue (Ria_1005)
Love exists beyond separation by death, distance, or even anger and...
April 6th, 2025 06:20 - BUTTERFLY (Nephilim56)
If we could only keep that innocence and nonprejudicial view into...
April 6th, 2025 06:18 - Blood in my Champagne (Malcolm)
Quite the story of anger and all emotions in a rap. Nicely done
April 6th, 2025 06:16 - Paint (Charlie Nine)
Man as god in this write. We are all gods and as creators we slash in...
April 6th, 2025 06:11 - Impermanence (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Brilliant!!! The last line of the poem (Life is glorious for being...
April 6th, 2025 06:04 - Is this it? (Spencer Wilhelm)
Layers of metaphor like falling dust bury this poem in meaning hidden....
April 6th, 2025 05:55 - Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9) (Poetic Licence)
No don\'t assume you know the old saying. I have grown to enjoy your...
April 6th, 2025 05:47 - The voice of blood (Lorenz)
I hear religion and its symbols used as excuses and archetypes of violence...
April 6th, 2025 05:43 - puppeteering farewell (Arqios)
A balloon ready to burst it joins so many disjointed pieces, a...
April 6th, 2025 05:37 - Brass Monkey. (Goldfinch60)
Now this is a gem Gold a story that sounds so familiar that I feel I have...
April 6th, 2025 05:24 - ROAD (NafisaSB)
Here you use anthropomorphism to its best in the road telling its story....
April 6th, 2025 05:15
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