Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Wasps (2781) A fun read and do I detect a metaphor in the gist of this poem? I have had...
  January 6th, 2025 04:14
• Please let me arrange the flowers for you my love. (David Wakeling) A melancholic and sad poem written in such a way that the reveal comes at...
  January 6th, 2025 04:10
• The Time Has Come. (Goldfinch60) As the old saying goes Andy \"Home is where the heart is\" and so I hear...
  January 6th, 2025 04:07
• Galaxease (Mutley Ravishes) Wonder what the sky would look like from the heart. A fun read that gives...
  January 6th, 2025 04:05
• Blizzard (Thoughtless) You cast an image that revives old memories of days in the north and cold...
  January 6th, 2025 04:03
• Video Games! (Demar Desu) Aye aye AI, What a fun write this one was. Too real for comfort
  January 5th, 2025 20:28
• wild curls (NinjaGirl) This poem makes my skin crawl with revultion, not from the poem but the...
  January 5th, 2025 18:04
• Natures Taunt (RSM0812) Nature vs nature and natuer vs man great metaphors
  January 5th, 2025 15:44
• Star Shining (Orchidee) Good write Orchi and timely too
  January 5th, 2025 13:43
• \" Buy American Made! \" (Thad Wilk) A fun read with a message and a sense of patriotism. A great bit of fun
  January 5th, 2025 11:42
• Palermo (Lorenz) Dark and somewhat gothic in nature this poem paints a picture of...
  January 5th, 2025 10:36
• Sometimes Too Wide The Sky (ADarkerMind) Cast in metaphor and symbolism is the feeling of gentleness. Very nice
  January 5th, 2025 09:46
• The Power of Forgiveness (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A story based on hope and faith with the belief that faith will make you...
  January 5th, 2025 09:43
• UNKNOWN VICTIM (Nephilim56) A poem of courage and pride well worded in a most classical sense that...
  January 5th, 2025 09:41
• Chocolate cake (Tony36) This poem has a definite child like quality to it with a sense of pleasure...
  January 5th, 2025 09:40
• Hidden Words, Revealed Truths (Tristan Robert Lange) Cleanly done words of wisdom indeed. This reflects a great deal of work....
  January 5th, 2025 09:34
• I\'ll be going home (Maplespal) A poem of moving on and the transience of existence in one state or...
  January 5th, 2025 07:27
• country song (Jim56) Nothing like music to alter the mood. Country music is known for its...
  January 5th, 2025 05:50
• A Storms Gonna Come My Way (Teddy.15) And so a poem is born out of a storm. It is these storms that I love to...
  January 5th, 2025 05:48
• The Flight Home (Gray0328) Traveling with children always an adventure. A most identifiable read that...
  January 5th, 2025 05:44
• here and there (Arqios) This poem and principally its title left a feeling of care free. I live in...
  January 5th, 2025 05:03
• Are The Words Still Healing (Poetic Licence) A most intersting format that makes good sense for the theme of the poem....
  January 5th, 2025 04:58
• Random My Foot (Mutley Ravishes) A good question I thought that they were one and the same. Well worded...
  January 5th, 2025 04:54
• Rainbow Colors Meaning (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Most creative society is full of its don\'t. Here they are on display in...
  January 5th, 2025 04:53
• The dog that climbed trees. (David Wakeling) Let me go out on a limb. Some are destined to be different and as such are...
  January 5th, 2025 04:48
• unreadable english poems (Rin) Some poems are undecipherable others are not identifiable, there are those...
  January 5th, 2025 04:42
• Another New Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Great message Andy every day is a new one and a fresh start.
  January 5th, 2025 04:30
• Wet Orchids (Thomas W Case) Very poetic Thomas
  January 4th, 2025 19:31
• Daley double (2781) Some wise words here. Very nicely done
  January 4th, 2025 15:47
• daughter love (Jim56) There is nothing like being a parent and it carries special feelings....
  January 4th, 2025 15:44
• The land of marble statues (Lorenz) A sense of nostalgia goes with this poem and a longing for a return of the...
  January 4th, 2025 15:40
• Swans A Plenty (Cassie58) A most beautiful picture you paint here Cassie. Nature at its best and a...
  January 4th, 2025 15:36
• Watching the rain (Maplespal) I normally like the rain, unless I have to go out in it. It does produce...
  January 4th, 2025 15:34
• The Abbanded School (Tony36) Decay takes its way in all things. Entropy rules. We may say it is sad but...
  January 4th, 2025 15:31
• -$7.27 in my bank account (Demar Desu) Been there done that and said in a great Haiku
  January 4th, 2025 15:28
• Guess THIS Beats All.... (Cheeky Missy) It is great to hear sonnets about common daily experiences. I have done my...
  January 4th, 2025 15:27
• DARK HEART (Nephilim56) Loss although painful can be for the best although this is often not seen...
  January 4th, 2025 15:23
• A Saucer For My Combat Garb (ADarkerMind) Words, each brings a message and feeling and in their combination...
  January 4th, 2025 15:21
• blistered fingers (NinjaGirl) Two people playing the same song do not sound the same. Each puts their...
  January 4th, 2025 15:19
• The Music of Twilight (Rebellion_in_sanity) Dark but there is a warmth with it as well. A sense of loneliness and an...
  January 4th, 2025 15:17
• ~> All About My Kitty! (Thad Wilk) More poetic fun. Have had cats and don\'t like emptying the litter....
  January 4th, 2025 15:14
• Epiphany Expressions (Orchidee) A great poem that is part of the nativity such a famous image. Lovely
  January 4th, 2025 10:52
• Inhale/Exhale (Tristan Robert Lange) Have worked with many on breathing exercises to relax, deal with pain and...
  January 4th, 2025 10:18
• read to your satisfaction (Arqios) Agreed it is in reading that we broaden our minds and too few people now...
  January 4th, 2025 08:16
• My Heart Still Beats The Same (Poetic Licence) All social animals have a tendency to pick on those that they perceive as...
  January 4th, 2025 04:38
• It\'s no different from a stove (Rin) Clever and human even the note fit in. There are things that Ai is not yet...
  January 4th, 2025 04:33
• Brightening Love. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful and peaceful picture of fulfillment. Most lovely Andy
  January 4th, 2025 04:30
• No2 FROM \'ANOTHER COLLECTION\' (Michael Edwards) You made me laugh with this little gem of rhyme. That qualifies for a Fave
  January 4th, 2025 04:28
• Asleep at last (Thoughtless) Reminds me of a George Jones song \"He stopped loving her today\" Strong...
  January 4th, 2025 04:26
• trauma (NinjaGirl) Great metaphor and it is hard to open doors that have no key. Hard to...
  January 3rd, 2025 20:58
• Well, Well Now, Who\'da Thunk?! (Cheeky Missy) Ah Chic you always make me hungry with your sonnets. Always a fun read...
  January 3rd, 2025 20:55
• WHEN I DIE (MELFA THE POET) A beautiful thought. We are all one part of the universe. Loved it
  January 3rd, 2025 20:53
• no music playing (Rin) Opposite in all things. This is the balance. Very nice
  January 3rd, 2025 18:41
• Obadiah Makes It to Mom (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) It is often good to end on an upbeat in a poem or story not so in music....
  January 3rd, 2025 17:26
• My Jericho, My Fable (ADarkerMind) Took this as a puzzle with the key 6 and 9 reading it such gives a...
  January 3rd, 2025 12:40
• ~> Icie The Alien (Thad Wilk) ET? A clever write with a clever play on words in the last line. A fun...
  January 3rd, 2025 12:33
• Mt. Caramel’s Tunnel (Vicecream) A most interesting tale in a most interesting format. Intriguing
  January 3rd, 2025 12:29
• The pony tail in the mirror (Bella Shepard) Age takes us all if we are fortunate enough to live. It is what is inside...
  January 3rd, 2025 12:25
• Adulting is Overrated (Gray0328) Memories mean age but with age a loss of innocense and we don\'t laugh as...
  January 3rd, 2025 10:10
• We Knew (Tristan Robert Lange) The only constant is change and so it seems every year. Love the shape of...
  January 3rd, 2025 10:07
• The old barn (Tony36) A ghost story set in an old barn on a hill. Tale from the past about a...
  January 3rd, 2025 10:04
• Invisible Man (Rebellion_in_sanity) Metaphor that leaves questions. There are many emotions presented here in...
  January 3rd, 2025 10:02
• What a wonderful world (Lorenz) Cynicism and sarcasm woven into this critique of the modern world. Sharp...
  January 3rd, 2025 07:47
• in candescent ascent (Arqios) Magnificent words of meditation to center body and mind. Nicely timed and...
  January 3rd, 2025 07:42
• lifes roundabout (Jim56) Been in round abouts and if you don\'t know where your getting off you go...
  January 3rd, 2025 05:34
• Break The Spell That`s Cast (Poetic Licence) I remember well as a youth climbing the mountains and camping where we...
  January 3rd, 2025 04:08
• Orange Blues (Mutley Ravishes) Whether aging or just a bad day this poem speaks of assessing one\'s body...
  January 3rd, 2025 04:02
• The Flight of the Bird boy. (David Wakeling) Used to as a child dream of flying in lucid dreams. Haven\'t had one of...
  January 3rd, 2025 03:57
• Edge of the Abyss (Dan Williams) A great poem/rant on the human situation. Population increase, technology,...
  January 3rd, 2025 03:55
• Old vs New year [2024/2025] (NafisaSB) A great pairing of old and new in this poem. Nicely done and a Happy New...
  January 3rd, 2025 03:50
• Thirsty Times (Orchidee) Another comforting hymn from your pen. Nicely done Orchi
  January 3rd, 2025 03:48
• Into The Great New Year. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful positive attitude that certainly will lengthen life and give...
  January 3rd, 2025 03:42
• his sister (NinjaGirl) Raw, open and full of gut wrenching emotion. This poem is difficult to...
  January 2nd, 2025 20:49
• airport privileges (Demar Desu) All should be treated the same with respect and kindness. Love the write
  January 2nd, 2025 18:04
• young me mirage (NinjaGirl) Abuse is never acceptable and to allow it only fosters it. So glad to hear...
  January 2nd, 2025 18:00
• > My Fu-kit List! (Thad Wilk) Another fun read I can identify with. Great write
  January 2nd, 2025 13:10
• Lazy Loo Logic (Tristan Robert Lange) Reminds me of the two seater on the hill. Once shared a dorm with some...
  January 2nd, 2025 13:08
• Here we go (2781) Most hopefully the future is bright for those in the nursery. A warning...
  January 2nd, 2025 08:20
• THE MAN AT NUMBER 6 (Nephilim56) Life is precious when it comes to an end. Just one more ride is the cry....
  January 2nd, 2025 08:18
• twin jesus (Rin) A thought provoking thought that explores the idea of being the real you...
  January 2nd, 2025 08:15
• Poetry Sharing (Tony36) It is so nice when others listen to what we have to say and even better...
  January 2nd, 2025 08:12
• Thank you silence (Maplespal) A most wonderful write on the power of silence. It is in silence that we...
  January 2nd, 2025 08:10
• believe in you (Jim56) Great encouragement Jim a powerful message
  January 2nd, 2025 08:08
• Darkest of Rhythm and Blues (Teddy.15) A most poignant write Teddy the music of today is a dischordant note in...
  January 2nd, 2025 06:23
• The Day I became My Mother. (David Wakeling) Both carefully concealed and in your face this poem presents the two sides...
  January 2nd, 2025 05:08
• Life Limitless (Orchidee) Another great hymn Orchi this story a little less familiar to the non...
  January 2nd, 2025 05:03
• spaces we inhabit: mornings (Arqios) A beautiful image cast in a moment and then gone with just an echo in the...
  January 2nd, 2025 05:00
• Think Twice Before Sending (Poetic Licence) A most poignant write with a message we all should hear. If you enjoy...
  January 2nd, 2025 04:57
• Travelling Through Life. (Goldfinch60) Whether planned or by good fortune you have reached Nirvana or Shangri-La...
  January 2nd, 2025 04:50
• Ahem, Happy...Yes, [curtsies, clumsily] (Cheeky Missy) Queen of sonnets I bow here are three fun reads great post holiday poems....
  January 2nd, 2025 04:45
• Obadiah’s Back Story (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Happy endings seem to be in your nature so I\'m leaning that way. Another...
  January 2nd, 2025 04:38
• Strange Days (Thomas W Case) In this poetic flow of thoughts that go by like the seasons we always...
  January 1st, 2025 20:56
• Moonsomnia (Salvia.S) One must relax to sleep and the moon looks down on those in anguish who...
  January 1st, 2025 20:51
• The Bigger Picture (Teddy.15) So true Teddy live itself is beautiful as are all of its components....
  January 1st, 2025 14:49
• Prayer (Rebellion_in_sanity) Indeed all we need is the strength to arise from our falls. Good write...
  January 1st, 2025 13:23
• For the images (Maplespal) Here the image of the sky reflected like the speaker\'s eyes in puddles...
  January 1st, 2025 08:40
• Mud Maid in Winter (Cassie58) Utterly beautiful, lovely and so well worded. This is a painting of a...
  January 1st, 2025 08:24
• Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets? (ADarkerMind) Indeed we are our own god and we are always hungry let not our beliefs...
  January 1st, 2025 06:51
• resolution time (Jim56) A great start to a new year that we will fill with actions on resolutions....
  January 1st, 2025 06:48
• Easily Fooled Again (Dan Williams) Loaded and packed with metaphor after metaphor this is a read that...
  January 1st, 2025 05:38