Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The SINGULARITY (Muse of Calliope) A great write raising the questions and fears that too share. Maybe we...
  April 17th, 2025 13:09
• The Good Of Golgotha (Orchidee) A great write for this time of the year Orchi. Well done.
  April 17th, 2025 13:05
• I\'m 19 years into this life (Pineapple_pizza018) That existential crisis that many of us go through usually in our teens...
  April 17th, 2025 13:04
• Love of the Old (Tony Dawson) Clever and touching a rare combination. Well written and composed. A fave
  April 17th, 2025 13:01
• I wonder (MinaH) A great question or several questions. Very philosophical. I would say it...
  April 17th, 2025 12:59
• Forever Lost (Kurt Philip Behm) Beautiful I\'ve had that feeling although it makes no sense. the poem...
  April 17th, 2025 10:57
• wolf in sheep\'s clothing (Gia) The duality of this poem speaking from a outside point of view and as the...
  April 17th, 2025 09:19
• Cryptical (Libellule) (All of these secrets kept within a true bounty of virtue and sin yet...
  April 17th, 2025 09:02
• Sometimes (Caring dove) A feeling of being just a little out of place. Nicely said
  April 17th, 2025 07:44
• the agony (Tristan Robert Lange) Very dark, this poem dives deep into the depths and reveals the festering...
  April 17th, 2025 07:42
• The Streets (Tony36) The harshness of life in this poem. Well written and with just enough...
  April 17th, 2025 07:39
• Mitchell Man: Lover (Tkatie118) Blinded by passion and love one forgets and forgives and even believes...
  April 17th, 2025 06:30
• Long Death, Liberty  (Arobot) As a Hydrogen molecule bonds to Oxygen to form water so a soul to a body...
  April 17th, 2025 06:24
• Wife of Shadow (RSM0812) Beautiful lines here (A shadow we\'d become. Forever painted in the...
  April 17th, 2025 06:21
• birthdays (Jim56) True it is Jim and I have had many. A bright poem for those of us with...
  April 17th, 2025 06:19
• Flirty (🅔🅜🅘🅛🅐🅨🅨) Cute and fun with a surprise twist at the end what more could you ask for.
  April 17th, 2025 05:08
• \"She said to herself\" (Antra.sharma_) A parents message to their child a lovely thing. Nicely written
  April 17th, 2025 05:06
• Fate, the Soul mate (Devender Kumar) This one requites careful and deliberate reading to understand that it is...
  April 17th, 2025 05:03
• The things you can’t buy… (Demar Desu) Everything has a price it is only a matter of determining what the price...
  April 17th, 2025 05:01
• Coin Flip (Salian) A great way to express fate or destiny a two headed coin would also work....
  April 17th, 2025 05:00
• Infinity Of Love (Ajon4wheels) Here the history of a love felt strong and long lasting. Nicely written
  April 17th, 2025 04:58
• in darkness... (Dimpy) Sensual, erotic, sexual, full of desire. A poem with energy
  April 17th, 2025 04:56
• Do You Believe Katy Perry Went To Space? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This was a really fun read with great rhyme and humor it rocks
  April 17th, 2025 04:54
• Whispers of Palani Hills ([email protected]) Painted with wonderful and vivid imagery this poem talks of natural beauty...
  April 17th, 2025 04:52
• Leading the Sweet Revolution: Chocolate Dressing Manufacturer with a Taste for Excellence (Rekha Pandey) I like real chocolate not imitation a fun read that could make a person...
  April 17th, 2025 04:49
• Midnight sky (Reynaldo Casison) Here a combination of incongruous words make for a indescribable feeling...
  April 17th, 2025 04:47
• experimental haiku (Thoughtless) Trying something new is a good thing. Nature does it all the time. It\'s...
  April 17th, 2025 04:42
• Around Her (Salian) A soul mate, a deep and close friend, someone that is part of you. A poem...
  April 17th, 2025 04:40
• STONE IN MY BOOT (Nephilim56) Small things that can distract from the bigger things in life. For the...
  April 17th, 2025 04:36
• Seeds (Pineapple_pizza018) A beautiful poem of faith and seeing how things fit in a longer...
  April 17th, 2025 04:34
• Message (John Prophet) A universe that is full of waves, vibrations if you will just has to be...
  April 17th, 2025 04:32
• To live forever (MinaH) So I hear most all people say and billions are spent on attempting to...
  April 17th, 2025 04:30
• CrAvE (Natalie Heisey) This poem carries with it a feeling of oppressive sheltering and the urge...
  April 17th, 2025 04:26
• I Got Burned. (Poetic Licence) A poem of injustice in an unjust world where little makes sense but all...
  April 17th, 2025 04:14
• but a flesh wound (Arqios) This reminds me of Monty Python\'s Meaning of Life. You have painted the...
  April 17th, 2025 04:08
• The Four Composers. (Goldfinch60) A poem with a very good point that I agree with and who I am listening to...
  April 17th, 2025 03:55
• El Yunque (Rrodriguez) Simply beautiful in its imagery and nature. For this alone it is a fave
  April 16th, 2025 20:10
• Now isn\'t that Lovely. (Maydanae) In this poem all seems well until the last line. Everything with or...
  April 16th, 2025 20:07
• Searching (Mik) I loved this poem it speaks to the head through the heart and belief in...
  April 16th, 2025 20:03
• Forevermore (Muse of Calliope) A great use of multiple rhyme in a poem of a powerful emotional nature....
  April 16th, 2025 20:01
• Lionel Groom (Kevin Hulme) What a great poem. People are not always what they seem to be or the other...
  April 16th, 2025 19:00
• One Sided Love (Charicebcampos) Hopes and dreams shattered by perceived rejection. A most powerful write.
  April 16th, 2025 18:56
• My Own (Alex PB) We all can live on our own but it is not the same as with someone else. A...
  April 16th, 2025 18:54
• Ammo Comes and Goes (Duran Mazzana) Destiny? A bullet in a gun. Nicely written thought provoking
  April 16th, 2025 17:25
• To Begin (Tayama) This poem weaves its tale in wonderful wording and form. Well done
  April 16th, 2025 17:01
• Almond seed (Amethyste) How interesting that we tend not to see plants as on an equal level with...
  April 16th, 2025 16:59
• For your review (Maplespal) A very personal poem offered to the readers. I would say thank your for...
  April 16th, 2025 16:57
• she told me she felt like a loaf of bread (Jon Nakapalau) A sad waste without gratitude how human. A great metaphor. Very nicely...
  April 16th, 2025 16:54
• The Treasures of Tomorrow (Shahla Latifi) A poetic dream of a fair world where all have equal opportunity, a lovely...
  April 16th, 2025 16:52
• Seeding The Palms (Kurt Philip Behm) And so my grandfather said. It is fine to make a prophesy as long as you...
  April 16th, 2025 14:58
• A trip to London (Chris Duffy) A great amount of fun in this poem of being where one does not belong and...
  April 16th, 2025 14:56
• Where did the enemy lurk? (Mottakeenur Rehman) Powerful words. Plundered by one\'s own no deeper wound. Gunpowder does...
  April 16th, 2025 14:22
• RAIN (SEATTLE) (Magzzbaby) Used to live close to Seattle and my son lives there. A poem with a...
  April 16th, 2025 13:42
• The Stained Silk Dress (Tony Grannell) Now I felt that I had just read a Dickens or Tolstoy novel. The...
  April 16th, 2025 13:40
• Positive Side (RSM0812) Find yourself and stay true to what you are I hear in this poem. Very...
  April 16th, 2025 13:28
• Just A While Longer (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I love how you are able to carry your rhyme in such a natural way through...
  April 16th, 2025 13:26
• Cut Me Some Slack...I Have a Crazy Streak (Cheeky Missy) Woh now I worked in a factory that canned corn when I was young and I will...
  April 16th, 2025 13:24
• Soother, The Rose (Devender Kumar) A great short write full of images of color and tactile? senses. Very nice
  April 16th, 2025 11:32
• Passover Ponderings (Orchidee) A great rewrite in poetic hymn form. Well done Orchi
  April 16th, 2025 11:30
• Paraphrase of Wolfgang Mozart Tearful Rest (Ksey_Gan) A Lachrymosa in poetic words. Indeed a sad and tearful day. Well written
  April 16th, 2025 11:28
• \"Eternal Love Laced in Loss.\" (Cirawrites01) A great write on missing and longing wishing and not finding. Lovely
  April 16th, 2025 11:25
• The Fragile Geometry of a Tuesday Night on Acid (Gray0328) What a nice description of taking a trip to here, there, near, far, and...
  April 16th, 2025 11:23
• Street Rat (Tony36) Sad and a pathetic comment on a society that can not take care of its own....
  April 16th, 2025 09:49
• Never Saw it Coming (Thomas W Case) A most interesting write with various incongruous combinations. Well done
  April 16th, 2025 09:46
• faces of the mirrors (Skyler2) This poem has such great story telling and rhyme. I am curious why you...
  April 16th, 2025 08:36
• prairie sky (Jim56) A beautiful picture of nature you have painted in the will penned poem....
  April 16th, 2025 07:25
• Letters of Complaint (Tristan Robert Lange) For the rawness and bravery to put on paper what is so deeply felt a fave....
  April 16th, 2025 07:23
• His Concert (Arobot) Each word carefully placed, each line evoked an emotion, the stanzas...
  April 16th, 2025 07:18
• CoacHELLa (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A fun read about a not too fun topic. Well done
  April 16th, 2025 05:17
• Lost (Caring dove) There is a strong feeling of alienation and separation in this poem that...
  April 16th, 2025 05:16
• Cursivity (Libellule) Beautiful and well said. Cursive does connect each letter to the next as...
  April 16th, 2025 05:14
• O (Mourgana of the Fey) I love this cryptic reference to the title and its implications the O in...
  April 16th, 2025 05:11
• FOOTPRINTS IN THE SNOW (Nephilim56) Deeply metaphoric this poem talks of the price of selling ones trust...
  April 16th, 2025 05:04
• 4 am PT2 (Angeline) Memory is the key to many emotions. A strong write it asks the question if...
  April 16th, 2025 05:01
• a ravenous thirst... (Dimpy) Strongly sexual this poem pulsates with desire and passion that pushes...
  April 16th, 2025 04:58
• Midnight rain (Reynaldo Casison) A most original love poem declaring ones love for another. Nicely written
  April 16th, 2025 04:53
• pot plants (Arqios) Clever play on words creating expectations that are not met but instead...
  April 16th, 2025 04:40
• Tick Tock. (Poetic Licence) The power of this write comes in its format and meter. The use of two...
  April 16th, 2025 04:36
• Words You Said (The Indignant Poetess) A powerful poem with a strong message said in the first person...
  April 16th, 2025 04:30
• Bipolar soul (Zephyrschild) I hear anger, distrust, suspicion, hurt in this write of past...
  April 16th, 2025 04:23
• Not Perfect. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful message that any partner would love to hear. Nicely said Andy
  April 16th, 2025 04:17
• Where Swallows Play (MDStone) A wonderful depiction of nature and a picture of watching life as it...
  April 15th, 2025 21:33
• No Value (Santajah Douglass) A longing for the past and its values. Well written with rhyme and good...
  April 15th, 2025 21:31
• Not a losing fight (Pukur) A fight with oneself and the different parts of who one is. Nicely...
  April 15th, 2025 21:28
• Immortal Chortles (Mutley Ravishes) Short and to the point with a thought provoking question.
  April 15th, 2025 19:42
• Enough? (Maydanae) We all ask at times how much is enough. A good poem that emphasizes this...
  April 15th, 2025 19:39
• Discern Over Despair (Descovia) Everyone needs a friend. A very good message. Well done
  April 15th, 2025 17:44
• If I were to make you (Funmiwrites) A most interesting thought of what others wish we were. How they would...
  April 15th, 2025 17:40
• Sick of???? (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba) So many frustrations, so many problems and they only seem to grow. Nicely...
  April 15th, 2025 17:37
• To the coming death (Ksey_Gan) The onset of age, deterioration and break down. In the end each year holds...
  April 15th, 2025 17:34
• 4 am PT1 (Angeline) A most beautiful scene painted in words in this poem. Very nice
  April 15th, 2025 16:01
• Ocean (Amethyste) We do many thing in our dreams and imagination wishing we could. Very...
  April 15th, 2025 15:59
• Upon a sureal mist (Kaz) Smooth words well woven in this poem. Nicely said
  April 15th, 2025 15:57
• Rewind (Tkatie118) Quite the story. A most interesting write
  April 15th, 2025 12:21
• Like, How On Earth? (Cheeky Missy) Another good set of poems Chic. Well done
  April 15th, 2025 12:17
• Stepford Ice (Kurt Philip Behm) Did they add any preservatives? Good write cleverly worded Kurt
  April 15th, 2025 12:06
• Pilate\'s Perturbations (Orchidee) A very dramatic part of the Bible and leading into the central issue of...
  April 15th, 2025 10:57
• Exodus (Sunshine777) A poem appropriate for the season nicely said
  April 15th, 2025 10:55
• Melancholic love tune (Sonal monhyung) Love unrequited is more common than believed and love separated is more...
  April 15th, 2025 10:15
• YET AGAIN (Abdullah123) I remember the last and this one fits well as a sequel. Some are such by...
  April 15th, 2025 10:09