Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Jimmy The Bully Man (Poetic Licence)
Standing up to a bully is more important than winning but winning helps. A...
April 3rd, 2025 03:07 - Storms In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Everything turns out for the best if one only has the patience to wait. A...
April 3rd, 2025 03:05 - Russian veteran of the war with Hitler after Aleksandr Megiroff (Ksey_Gan)
A sense of mystery in this poem that may be more metaphoric than its...
April 3rd, 2025 03:04 - I prayed (Joseph M Marion)
A poem of prayer, one of good wishes and faith. Nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 03:01 - The Color of Pain (MDStone)
Nicely written in rhyme this poem explores the issue of pain and how it is...
April 3rd, 2025 02:59 - Against All Odds (Ezekiel Olayemi)
Such a positive feel to this poem and good advice as well. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 18:55 - Silence. (Jonathan Merida)
Beautiful it leaves a mood of peace. The last line is superb and contrasts...
April 2nd, 2025 18:53 - Okay, March, Our Affair is Officially OVER. (Cheeky Missy)
Such beautiful images of nature you paint in these sonnets Chic. A fave
April 2nd, 2025 18:51 - My Children (Sunshine777)
A mother\'s love and a proclamation that she will always feel this. There...
April 2nd, 2025 16:40 - We Can Breathe (Andrew Isaiah Castillo)
A nice flow to this poem. Nicely written.
April 2nd, 2025 16:37 - KFC Cannibals? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A hair raising read. Chicken fingers takes on a whole new meaning....
April 2nd, 2025 14:26 - A letter to my future (Pamela)
A plea that is heartfelt. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 14:24 - Thirty four Winters -Chills and Thrills (Narayan Gadagkar)
A most hopeful view in this poem. Very nicely written.
April 2nd, 2025 12:36 - Painted Sky (Teddy.15)
A most personal and wonderful reveal. Yellow is not my favorite color as...
April 2nd, 2025 12:34 - The Late Val Kilmer (Randyjohnson71)
A beautiful tribute to a great actor. A favorite film of mine (Ghost and...
April 2nd, 2025 12:31 - Devils\' Breath (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another good write the rhymes so well in its telling. Tightly woven
April 2nd, 2025 12:29 - Terrible 1920 in Russia after Diniriy Merejrovski (Ksey_Gan)
A wonderful historical, social, emotional poem that is as dark as the...
April 2nd, 2025 12:18 - The Months as People (Gray0328)
The poem flows through the months smoothly and with great images that...
April 2nd, 2025 10:58 - The Silent Weaver ([email protected])
Art resides within the heart and needs no pay. A lovely write
April 2nd, 2025 10:54 - Undo the Darkness (Thomas W Case)
A write that feels so real. Nicely said Thomas
April 2nd, 2025 10:37 - Me and Mrs Beale (Tkatie118)
Complexities in the relationships of people. A fun read with an ending...
April 2nd, 2025 10:34 - What the Hell? (Tristan Robert Lange)
I have to say this poem is well said and points to many inconsistencies in...
April 2nd, 2025 10:31 - Divided (NinjaGirl)
A poem of a flawed process in a flawed system. Very well written.
April 2nd, 2025 10:22 - What are we? (Nikola)
A poem of questions that in one way or another will be answered. A plea...
April 2nd, 2025 08:33 - Bitter Medicine (Garth Rakumakoe)
Nicely said and may that bitter medicine work its magic healing and...
April 2nd, 2025 08:31 - Betterfly (RSM0812)
A lovely poem sparkling with vivid images and a metaphor of love as well....
April 2nd, 2025 08:29 - His guitar (Tony36)
The picture painted of a flash concert and a man that plays from his heart...
April 2nd, 2025 07:56 - One Busy Day!! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Sometimes we all would like to rewrite yesterdays story but I believe in...
April 2nd, 2025 06:59 - Angel (The Indignant Poetess)
(An angel can not be beautiful and good) a powerful line that sums it up....
April 2nd, 2025 06:57 - How strange (Peculiarly Lauren)
The message in this poem strikes deep in anyone who has loved and wondered...
April 2nd, 2025 06:54 - Painted (Maplespal)
We see what we want to see let it be of love, charity, kindness to oneself...
April 2nd, 2025 06:48 - TODAY IS A DAY LIKE NONE OTHER (@merci)
Although alone you never are for you have yourself as partner always...
April 2nd, 2025 06:47 - A Healing Vision of the Way Life Should Be (Meredith Horstkamp)
Moving, this poem speaks to me in beautiful natural images of the harmony...
April 2nd, 2025 06:44 - Stop Staring Crazy Mind To Get In To (Anthony Hanible)
Anxiety and racing thought came first to mind. Loosely connected and...
April 2nd, 2025 06:40 - love is like a song (Jim56)
A lovely description of the sunny side of love. Very nice Jim
April 2nd, 2025 06:37 - Theory Of Evolution (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
Well written in terms that confront without confronting. A lovely piece
April 2nd, 2025 06:36 - Double-Edged Feeling (Rosiii ;))
Like a shot of tequila that warms and burns. Love is a two edged sword...
April 2nd, 2025 06:35 - Ni siquiera sabes (Falcon_mn)
Beautiful love poem cast in dreams. Loved it
April 2nd, 2025 03:35 - I MISS YOU RIN! (Demar Desu)
A Haiku with a plug for the site as well. That was well done
April 2nd, 2025 03:33 - DREAMER (Nephilim56)
(The fiery tail of a fading dream) a great opening and line. A wonderful...
April 2nd, 2025 03:32 - A LAYMAN\'S FRUSTRATION OVER THE COUNTRIES SYSTEM AND MECHANISM. (Blissed-secret)
Satirical, irony deserving of sarcasm, a mockery and absurdity acted out...
April 2nd, 2025 03:28 - Free Diver (Mutley Ravishes)
This metaphor or should i say allegory is as deep as the depths of the sea...
April 2nd, 2025 03:21 - Toasting Our Love (MDStone)
A lovely poem of companionship and its comfort. Although could be literal...
April 2nd, 2025 03:12 - Web Of Thought (John Prophet)
Not only see the meaning in this but feel the same way. It all makes sense...
April 2nd, 2025 03:09 - Only Love can hurt like this (Kevin Hulme)
Beautifully worded the theme is gradually revealed and is quite clear,...
April 2nd, 2025 03:06 - Capricorn (Lorenz)
This poem in its darkness speaks to me of justice and in that a sense of...
April 2nd, 2025 03:00 - Smile (Poetic Licence)
Here is the balance and ours the choice which side to sit on. Lovely...
April 2nd, 2025 02:57 - Island Of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful thought and a wishful dream. Lovely Andy
April 2nd, 2025 02:55 - a future\'s horizon (Arqios)
Wow! This is a form I was not familiar with and that works so well for...
April 2nd, 2025 02:53 - The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare (NinjaGirl)
There is some deep philosophical thought in these three stanzas. Might i...
April 2nd, 2025 02:48 - The one who completes me (Nicole Pritchard)
A belief and pledge of love. A proclamation of devotion and love
April 1st, 2025 18:53 - A LITTLE OLDER (ChrisLyn🕊)
A poem with a message of being true to oneself. A most important write
April 1st, 2025 15:55 - Chameleon (Molly Delaney)
Such raw feelings of an existential nature that many don\'t feel until...
April 1st, 2025 15:51 - Stripping the Veneer (Gray0328)
So much emotion in this piece. Very nicely worded Gray.
April 1st, 2025 13:37 - Dissolving Our Bond (Mr. Not)
Arrogance ignores all messages but those it wants to hear. Nicely stated
April 1st, 2025 13:35 - hurt (Patriciapicciocchi)
A poem so applicable to so many expecting change in the face of facts that...
April 1st, 2025 13:34 - This Is (Sunshine777)
A poem of missing someone from the past. Well worded and expressed. Very...
April 1st, 2025 13:24 - ...On April Fool\'s THIS Year!!! (Cheeky Missy)
Another tasty write delicious Chic
April 1st, 2025 13:22 - What A Fool Believes (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another wonderful write Kurt
April 1st, 2025 13:18 - The Road Though Quiet Pines (Dev Parth)
Robert Frost comes to mind and this journey we take we have choices in our...
April 1st, 2025 13:17 - Smile (Lorenz)
So true there is a regression to the mean. Smiles go back to nonsmiles. A...
April 1st, 2025 13:13 - Wanted: Love (Kenny O\'Donnell)
A lovely poem of found love after a fall. Nicely done
April 1st, 2025 13:10 - False Salvation (Mya)
(In the form of a salvation, a savior- in the form of sprinkles of salt...
April 1st, 2025 13:06 - Opioid (Tristan Robert Lange)
This speaks so much truth. The format I took at first as a tornado then a...
April 1st, 2025 12:53 - Congo\'s Christian Killers (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A raw work on hard brutal behaviors that we enact on each other. An...
April 1st, 2025 09:42 - Decay (RSM0812)
Very poetic words that weave a picture in the mind. Nicely done
April 1st, 2025 09:37 - Music (Tony36)
It does the same for me Tony and I feel you.
April 1st, 2025 07:39 - Melancholy by Dmitry Merezhkovsky (Ksey_Gan)
Beautiful words set the feeling in this poem. Wonderful!
April 1st, 2025 07:37 - $38.58 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
I didn\'t have to ask it eloped in the night before I checked in the...
April 1st, 2025 06:57 - State Of Mind (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
Real or metaphoric is the question. A wonderful write that poses the...
April 1st, 2025 06:24 - Arching death (Maplespal)
In the war of life death falls indiscriminately on all. We kill without...
April 1st, 2025 05:42 - If You Died (The Indignant Poetess)
We often don\'t appreciate what we have until we loose it. Ironic how life...
April 1st, 2025 05:38 - dawn chorus (Jim56)
I love to hear the birds sing as well and also love to hear the poets sing...
April 1st, 2025 05:06 - Suicide Meetings (Anthony Hanible)
A strong message that I learned long ago. There are two types those that...
April 1st, 2025 05:04 - The Sealed Chamber\'s Tale ([email protected])
I smell a bigger metaphor here. It is not just the apple we are studying....
April 1st, 2025 05:02 - THE CALM BEFORE (Nephilim56)
Suicide is a most serious thing being a one way street with no return it...
April 1st, 2025 05:00 - The House is on Fire (Steve Goldenfort)
Clever words of forgiveness to a friendship that has grown distant and...
April 1st, 2025 04:56 - Inseparable Soulmates (Narayan Gadagkar)
A great tribute to a couple that spent a life together. Lovely
April 1st, 2025 04:54 - Such a perfect time (Gewar)
Tender thoughts expressed about the emergence of feelings all cast in...
April 1st, 2025 04:51 - Dong (Boot)
The human race tends to tear up everything around it and in its greed will...
April 1st, 2025 04:47 - Numb (Jonathan Merida)
A metaphor as well when in shock we fail to notice those things that under...
April 1st, 2025 04:45 - If you could read my mind (Peculiarly Lauren)
A very encouraging poem finding the best out of weakness\' when one is...
April 1st, 2025 04:43 - Burning (Malo J)
I hear the pain from the past in this poem. It screams out to the listener...
April 1st, 2025 04:38 - Help or Not? (Orchidee)
To be able to help someone requires know they need help and what type they...
April 1st, 2025 04:31 - The Voices Have Gone (Poetic Licence)
When we grow accustomed to something no matter what we miss it. A most...
April 1st, 2025 04:27 - waxing witless (Arqios)
April 1st, 2025 04:18 - waxing witless (Arqios)
Myth tells us that the gods were not happy with their first try in...
April 1st, 2025 04:18 - April\'s Senryu (Teddy.15)
A very nice Haiku my friend good to have you back.
April 1st, 2025 04:09 - A Musical Journey Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A music lover\'s sonnet filled with masters of the past. Very nicely done...
April 1st, 2025 04:05 - SCULPTED (MDStone)
A great metaphor. Poetry in stone would ensure that it would last for...
March 31st, 2025 20:36 - Epidermiss (Mutley Ravishes)
This required two reads and some thought before it sunk through. Profound...
March 31st, 2025 18:52 - Do You Want To Be Loved? (Tkatie118)
A plea for love. Wonderfully said.
March 31st, 2025 17:49 - Days are dead (Shadowbones)
Feeling misunderstood and not valued is the message that I get from this...
March 31st, 2025 16:45 - I\'m Fragile (Anthony Hanible)
A poem that speaks of being easily damaged and not repairable. a fragile...
March 31st, 2025 16:42 - Humanity (Amethyste)
Profoundly stated and poetically said.
March 31st, 2025 16:03 - Unveiled (Nicole Pritchard)
The best way to know that one is loved is to have nothing to offer. This...
March 31st, 2025 15:53 - isn\'t is weird (Xqw)
True and talks to character that our appearance to others is more...
March 31st, 2025 15:51 - Looking On (Paul Gerard Reed)
A beautiful poem of a helping power whether God, a companion, a father or...
March 31st, 2025 15:50 - Lamentation for the human race (Kenny O\'Donnell)
Dark predictions that seem to be taking shape. A sad side to the...
March 31st, 2025 13:04 - 10 stories (NinjaGirl)
Creative and dark at the beginning becoming darker as it goes on and black...
March 31st, 2025 12:57
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