Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Pity, Really Such A Dreadful Pity (Cheeky Missy) I had a cat that had kittens and I never realized how hard it was to get...
  August 21st, 2025 09:28
• The Man Who Lowers His Gaze (Aurora1) A poem of fidelity and of loyalty to the point of vision, sound, touch,...
  August 21st, 2025 09:10
• Simple pleasures (Jerry Reynolds) I have smelled that before my friend and this poem brought back that...
  August 21st, 2025 09:07
• In The Stillness of His Love (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) We all need a healer and guide and I hear you reaching to a greater power...
  August 21st, 2025 09:06
• Alone (Tristan Robert Lange) I can take the first few lines literally for none of us remember our...
  August 21st, 2025 09:04
• Continuous (Purgatory Phoenix) The cycle of life and its many circles. Nicely done
  August 21st, 2025 06:32
• autumn beauty (Jim56) Very nice Jim a fine presentation of Fall and its beauty
  August 21st, 2025 06:31
• Laddy Boy (RSM0812) I hardly dare venture to speak on this beautiful poem. Wonderful wording...
  August 21st, 2025 05:29
• Eileen (Parsa) A fave for some really wonderful lines in this poem to etch a mountain on...
  August 21st, 2025 04:59
• This Planet / God Commands It (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Difference between a cynic and realist. Nicely worded
  August 21st, 2025 04:49
• 08.21.24 (Samuel) We all leave marks, some fade with time others not. A lovely poem
  August 21st, 2025 04:47
• Man are NOT Brave (EmotionsOnwhitepaper) People that count themselves brave to fight are often shy in...
  August 21st, 2025 04:45
• A Clock Face Stranger (Malcolm Gladwin) This poem is all about building atmosphere and comes out of a fog like a...
  August 21st, 2025 04:43
• Save me, save my tears (Funmiwrites) I hear distance in a relationship in this poem and a desire for...
  August 21st, 2025 04:40
• A shiny rock called inclusion (EvenwheniLie) This poem seems a criticism of change and development in society. Well...
  August 21st, 2025 04:38
• LITTLE PICTURES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem can be taken in a couple of ways. I took it first as a poets...
  August 21st, 2025 04:36
• Half (Alan R) This poem drips with anger and resentment. Nicely worded
  August 21st, 2025 04:32
• Let\'s Pray (Anthony Hanible) It is the omissions that make this poem out of a familiar child prayer....
  August 21st, 2025 04:31
• Airport Predators (Spencer Wilhelm) I took this two ways, someone afraid of being harmed and someone on the...
  August 21st, 2025 04:29
• Discernment (Spencer Wilhelm) A bemusing and fun read that the thought is enhanced by the rhyme. Lovely
  August 21st, 2025 04:26
• New World Slaughter (Mutley Ravishes) This brings the image of a boxer before a fight in front of the news media...
  August 21st, 2025 04:23
• The sea of dreams (Sami Mulaj) I like the metaphor that applies so well to many things in this poem, how...
  August 21st, 2025 04:22
• Help without taking credit (Hzugman) A wonderful attitude to assume and with time it will just become who you...
  August 21st, 2025 04:15
• The Grave Digger (Tony Grannell) Another most entertaining poem Tony. Have a good friend that was a grave...
  August 21st, 2025 04:12
• eye of the beholder (Arqios) I felt that I entered the Twilight Zone in this poem. A poem that opens...
  August 21st, 2025 04:08
• Memories Brought Back (Goldfinch60) It is a blessing when all of our memories are golden. Good one Andy
  August 21st, 2025 03:57
• Once Upon a Happy Ever After (Kevin Hulme) You have covered pretty well the fairy tales and nursery rhymes in this...
  August 20th, 2025 19:36
• forbidden pain (Dizzzaa) Abandonment and isolation accompanied by panic little hope. A sad poem
  August 20th, 2025 19:32
• Futility (Keeter C) A poem of imagined adventure mixed with a bit of fantasy. Serious...
  August 20th, 2025 19:30
• Why cant i be free? (Lei) This poem is filled with romantic images and script. Nicely done
  August 20th, 2025 19:28
• Lost Youth (A Boy With Roses) Recollections and longings fill this poem. A lovely write
  August 20th, 2025 19:24
• Don\'t Stand so Close (Thomas W Case) Now this one came out of nowhere. An unknown woman in this poem. Mystery...
  August 20th, 2025 19:19
• Never forgotten (Maplespal) A tender poem of missing that special someone that gave us birth and...
  August 20th, 2025 15:39
• Rivalry on ice (Nicole Pritchard) A great poem of rivalry forged in friendship. So glad that hocky bonds us...
  August 20th, 2025 15:37
• Side by Side (Purgatory Phoenix) Short but nicely written with good rhyme and meaning. Well done
  August 20th, 2025 15:34
• Where love turns to sighs. (REBELLIOUS SOUL) A poem of keeping all inside. Nicely written with rhyme. Well done
  August 20th, 2025 15:33
• Abyss (Rosey) A feeling of desperation and hopelessness. Nicely written
  August 20th, 2025 15:31
• When Boredom is truly underrated (Teddy.15) Shoot and all these years I thought it was a yawn. A fun read my friend....
  August 20th, 2025 12:55
• You are free (Devender Kumar) What a most interesting structure to this poem in its alterations. Very...
  August 20th, 2025 12:53
• Kissing (Amethyste) A poem of adoration. Very nicely written
  August 20th, 2025 12:51
• Run Away With Me (Tkatie118) Carpe diem, live for today, live in the moment. A wonderful poem
  August 20th, 2025 12:50
• To be a Poet... (Sad girl) A most beautiful definition that in itself is poetic
  August 20th, 2025 12:47
• Little Green Caterpillars (Malcolm Gladwin) Simply beautiful lovely images, Great metaphor a fave
  August 20th, 2025 12:35
• Walking the plank (YannickM) Very nicely written cleverly rhymed and emotionally powerful. A fave
  August 20th, 2025 12:32
• When You Walked Away (Samuel) Powerful words, broken promises, sad but strong. nicely written a fave
  August 20th, 2025 12:30
• O Too The Tears (Anthony Hanible) Floods can be disasters whether literal or emotional. Nicely penned
  August 20th, 2025 10:51
• Mt. Zero-Sum (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Now this one made me think. The mountain had a cloud surrounding it and...
  August 20th, 2025 10:49
• butterfly (Jim56) Lovely in image, beautiful in color, splendid in memory a wonderful poem...
  August 20th, 2025 10:47
• Silent As Seed Beneath Soil (Gray0328) Beautifully poetic the words of this piece. Nicely done Gray
  August 20th, 2025 10:45
• The Mirror Says Aye (Rebellion_in_sanity) The only safe designation is one\'s name (if it is a popular one) mine...
  August 20th, 2025 10:44
• Who Had A Better Label? (Cheeky Missy) Yes I agree the phrase day after has an ominous feel to it, either...
  August 20th, 2025 10:40
• Core (Tristan Robert Lange) Reading this in the image as opposed to the poem beneath I am left with...
  August 20th, 2025 10:38
• Summer (Jerry Reynolds) Always refreshing to read you poems Jerry
  August 20th, 2025 10:28
• we meet again, mid-sentence (Arqios) Cryptic your poems are growing deeper or maybe my mind is getting older,...
  August 20th, 2025 10:27
• To create something from scratch. (Friendship) A well rhymed and nicely metered poem of a dream friendship. It flows in...
  August 20th, 2025 10:21
• The Making of the Dawn (Tony Grannell) Once again Tony you have penned a poem that is a joy to read. Hats off.
  August 20th, 2025 10:10
• Lovers Rose (RSM0812) A very nice sonnet in most classical form. Lovely words
  August 20th, 2025 04:17
• DERELICTION OF DUTY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Ironic that the one that could not take life unjustly is judged to loose...
  August 20th, 2025 04:14
• Test of life (Poetic Dan) Our children carry pieces of us some one piece and others another. Nicely...
  August 20th, 2025 04:10
• Born To Be A Rebel (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A message that many of us would agree with. It seems that as population...
  August 20th, 2025 04:08
• Biscuit Jar (Chris Duffy) A lovely metaphor for giving to others and offering what one has as a...
  August 20th, 2025 04:04
• Little Things (Catluvr18) Tender and nostalgic it speaks of missing someone loved. As noted in the...
  August 20th, 2025 04:01
• The fifth season (Sami Mulaj) I really like the last two lines of this poem that ground it and give it...
  August 20th, 2025 03:58
• Expression of an Impressionist (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Here in free floating association and word play this poem ambles through...
  August 20th, 2025 03:56
• Sculpture (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) This poem presents uncommon parings in metaphor that require a bit of...
  August 20th, 2025 03:53
• Against The Flow. (Goldfinch60) A peaceful poem Gold with a happy ending. It is a shame that most do not...
  August 20th, 2025 03:46
• Never say never (Keeter C) Experience makes one leary. A poem of loss and accompanying mistrust
  August 19th, 2025 19:14
• Begging for Release (Malo J) Thoughts and memories of a difficult past that bled out of pain and desire...
  August 19th, 2025 14:56
• Thoughts of seams (Maplespal) A poem of lost love that is not understood. The love itself misunderstood...
  August 19th, 2025 14:52
• Phoenix rising (Nicole Pritchard) Fire and the phoenix, rebirth from the ashes. There is passion in this...
  August 19th, 2025 14:50
• A letter (Amethyste) A letter of missing someone and a hope for a response. Nicely done
  August 19th, 2025 13:07
• Of Eating, Growing Up, and Kissing Scenes (Cheeky Missy) I am not so sure but I feel that kissing scenes are more a woman thing. As...
  August 19th, 2025 10:56
• Incoming Freshmen (Gray0328) Higher education, jobs, life itself all could fit here. Nicely written
  August 19th, 2025 10:53
• Only He Can (Kurt Philip Behm) A poem of doing what we are able and looking up to those that can do more....
  August 19th, 2025 10:52
• Therapists Lament (Randy Carter) Love limericks and this one fits the bill. A most fun read about a sordid...
  August 19th, 2025 10:50
• Foretold (Sassy Lou) Valid questions in poetic style that come through with the feeling of...
  August 19th, 2025 09:29
• [SYNTAX_ERR0R] (DeadRose) Most creative and poignant in the age we live in. A wonderful and artistic...
  August 19th, 2025 09:27
• Oh, a child’s mind. (Georgia Watson) So well spoken and the last line ties it up so well. Nicely done
  August 19th, 2025 09:24
• Bet (Damaso) Love your author\'s note that clarifies the poem. A mad hatter dash for a...
  August 19th, 2025 09:23
• Cold As Hell (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem is cold and dark it breaths the air of the tomb. It smells of...
  August 19th, 2025 09:16
• RAINBOW. (Vamsi Sudha) Charming and most lovely. I have chased rainbows to find their end and as...
  August 19th, 2025 07:32
• Womb on Trial (Aman 12) What a wonderful twist on the old saying that love is blind. Too true to...
  August 19th, 2025 07:29
• Circus in my head (REBELLIOUS SOUL) Ah but so true life is a circus with all its pleasures and its fleeting...
  August 19th, 2025 07:22
• To Them Who... (Tony Grannell) Timeless! Tribute to the unseen that hold the fabric of society and weave...
  August 19th, 2025 07:16
• Morning (YannickM) Loved the rhyme scheme of this poem. It speaks from darkness into light....
  August 19th, 2025 05:29
• living on an island (Jim56) Very nice Jim Although not alone I have lived there and it is very nice. A...
  August 19th, 2025 05:11
• Where my Name Used to Live (Samuel) Brave is the word that comes to mind as this seems a proclamation and...
  August 19th, 2025 05:10
• Little Flower (RSM0812) A great metaphor in this poem where love needs to be nurtured and cared...
  August 19th, 2025 05:05
• Love (Dn) A poem of expressing the inexpressible and with emotion. Nicely done
  August 19th, 2025 05:03
• what he did to me (Carpe4diem) On first reading this sounds like a poem of past abuse but it could be...
  August 19th, 2025 04:58
• Wordless music talks (Poetic Dan) A fun read that rings with truth. I heard the water sing in the pipes from...
  August 19th, 2025 04:55
• ritual II (Yael Olalde-Garcia) Love word play and this poem is full of it all four lines.
  August 19th, 2025 04:53
• MORE THAN A SOCIAL DRINKER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Have had friends like that. Sad to see someone loose control of drink,...
  August 19th, 2025 04:52
• Relationship Problems (Anthony Hanible) Distilled anguish of truth where all boils down to separation of what once...
  August 19th, 2025 04:50
• Constantly Pushed To One Side (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Avoidance a safer tactic when one wishes to steer clear of conflict....
  August 19th, 2025 04:48
• Don\'t Pretend Like You Don\'t Know (Pita) Good advise as to how to maintain a relationship. An insightful piece
  August 19th, 2025 04:45
• Last Breath (Sassy Lou) A poem of sadness and darkness that speaks of the end in a harsh world....
  August 19th, 2025 04:43
• There\'s still more (Hzugman) Well said. This poem in a short quatrain delivers a rhymed truth. Our...
  August 19th, 2025 04:40
• Defeated (Sharvi) A great analogy that fits so well as a metaphor. Indeed dreams are like...
  August 19th, 2025 04:35
• simple sample (Arqios) Indeed there is something distancing in the technological, mechanical...
  August 19th, 2025 04:33