Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Falling Apart (Not_defined)
You convey well the feeling of falling apart with nicely worded phrases....
April 19th, 2025 10:36 - Taking Flight (Kurt Philip Behm)
Love this one Kurt I talks of how there is no absolute. First thing I...
April 19th, 2025 10:34 - Appearance (Starlight)
A pledge of love and the allegory well know is well applied. Nicely stated
April 19th, 2025 10:03 - I Wish You Would Love Me , Mom (Akshadha_Joshi1310)
A cry for love that one does not see from the one that should love you...
April 19th, 2025 10:01 - The innocence is fatal here (Devender Kumar)
Here I sense a metaphor behind the mother as well as the literal little...
April 19th, 2025 09:58 - Losing Myself For Me To Be Found (Randall Racine)
A poem of redemption in a season that is most appropriate. A story in good...
April 19th, 2025 08:50 - Waiting for Romeo (Justyouraveragewriter)
Be not deceived by rumors or views as Juliet was and let life become a...
April 19th, 2025 08:45 - Pointing pictures (Maplespal)
I think I get the point lol. A most interesting form and rhyme in a poem...
April 19th, 2025 07:58 - Winds (John Prophet)
I liked this soup. A fave
April 19th, 2025 07:56 - Texas Queen (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི)
Poetry is often birthed from pain as much as love, from monsters that...
April 19th, 2025 07:55 - holy nothing (Tristan Robert Lange)
A poem of entropy and decay, where blackness is the only light. What a...
April 19th, 2025 07:53 - Cry (Tony36)
Wonderful this is both literal and metaphorical in the issue of cleansing...
April 19th, 2025 07:48 - Words (Teardrop)
A wonderful piece of work that calls to me in that I feel the same way....
April 19th, 2025 07:46 - Your Deadly Disease (Ajon4wheels)
Overcoming the darkness inside can be dazzling. A poem that ends in a...
April 19th, 2025 05:46 - Thorny (Libellule)
Very nice rhyme in a poem about writing. The poem flows well with good...
April 19th, 2025 05:42 - Water (Mottakeenur Rehman)
A powerful and deep message. \"Nothing in the world is softer and weaker...
April 19th, 2025 04:33 - Scratches Galore (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
That\'s a rap. A fun read with a message. Nicely done
April 19th, 2025 04:28 - And I’ll Keep Finding You (Spring Sugar Bunny)
A poem of devotion and commitment well written and convincing.
April 19th, 2025 04:27 - respect (Jim56)
A great message again Jim. it is hard to disagree with this one. Very...
April 19th, 2025 04:25 - Goliath (Gray0328)
This poem speaks to me and seems somehow majestic. Line after line of...
April 19th, 2025 04:24 - can’t sleep! (Demar Desu)
We all become addicted to what we love. A fun short
April 19th, 2025 04:16 - Pursuit of Immortality (Arobot)
Deep thoughts in this poem that provoke reflection. I suppose you are...
April 19th, 2025 04:15 - I\'ve Never Been to the Moon (Quemis)
Even before reading the author\'s note I found the lines:
The men that...
April 19th, 2025 04:11 - Something (Lana c)
A most thought provoking poem in its brevity it says a great deal about...
April 19th, 2025 04:05 - purity (Dimpy)
There is a longing sensuality in this short poem that speaks to me. Nicely...
April 19th, 2025 04:03 - Stand in the fire with companion piece you still love here (Chris Anderson)
I particularly liked the power of the first of these two it sings out and...
April 19th, 2025 04:02 - STAYING WITH THE DEAD (Nephilim56)
A graphic and powerful statement in this poem that speaks to the horrors...
April 19th, 2025 03:58 - With the Midnight rain (Reynaldo Casison)
That\'s what I call staying power. All kidding aside this has a very...
April 19th, 2025 03:57 - Harrys Easter Egg for Mary (Poetic Licence)
Got to break a few eggs if you want to make an omelet they say. Humorously...
April 19th, 2025 03:55 - w o r d s (Arqios)
Words, dialogue at times are projectiles and at others calming forces....
April 19th, 2025 03:44 - Think Hippie Thoughts. (Goldfinch60)
A most liberating poem Andy a sonnet to peace I love it.
April 19th, 2025 03:39 - Demons by Alexander Pushking (Ksey_Gan)
A poem that seems right out of the nineteenth century in Russia or close...
April 19th, 2025 03:36 - Woman like Rain (Reynaldo Casison)
Romantic and endearing words fill this poem. It speaks well the emotion of...
April 19th, 2025 03:30 - Rotting fingers (Shadowbones)
The ups and downs of relationships comes through to me in this poem that...
April 19th, 2025 03:17 - Sardines on Pizza (Maydanae)
A great metaphor there are many types of pizza and many types of people...
April 18th, 2025 20:13 - Headache (MinaH)
Some good lines in this poem that leaves few options. Dark it screams out...
April 18th, 2025 19:08 - FreeFall (Anthony Hanible)
Low expectations and darkness voiced in this poem. Nicely written.
April 18th, 2025 18:36 - Footsteps of the Forgotten (TheInnerLens)
This is a great poem with wonderful wording and images where metaphors...
April 18th, 2025 17:56 - This Year (Pineapple_pizza018)
This poem is one of confidence and belief. A wonderful write.
April 18th, 2025 15:48 - Forgiveness (Clarita)
Very beautiful lines and words in this poem they speak of forgiveness....
April 18th, 2025 15:40 - Sadness (Poetaldo)
Taking charge of what we can is a great part of not only life but belief...
April 18th, 2025 14:46 - ACUPUNCTURE (Michael Edwards)
Now that is funny. I love humor in poetry and this is one of those. Lovely
April 18th, 2025 14:43 - it is all going away (Jon Nakapalau)
Creative and true entropy takes all. A great write in very few words
April 18th, 2025 14:42 - show me the way (Muse of Calliope)
The poem is so gentle and kind in true poetic form. It speaks out to...
April 18th, 2025 13:51 - Brightest star (Kaz)
A beautiful message sent in true poetic form. Very nicely said
April 18th, 2025 13:48 - New Emperor (Damaso)
A great fantasy poem but I feel a metaphor here. Nicely done
April 18th, 2025 13:47 - The very abridged version recounting untold tragicomic storied life of Matthew Scott Harris (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Quite the story that many can identify with. Gladly the story has no...
April 18th, 2025 12:35 - Pro Tem (Kurt Philip Behm)
Profound. The changes in time and the weathering of the stone. Very nice...
April 18th, 2025 11:45 - YET, ONCE AGAIN (Abdullah123)
A poem of a continuing story where we pass on our selves to others. Dark...
April 18th, 2025 11:43 - Enigmatic Individual (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི)
A great write that provokes thought and with whom many can identify. And...
April 18th, 2025 11:41 - Truth of Love is Lust (Anamika Hari)
A most interesting perspective and thought provoking. It is a great poem...
April 18th, 2025 11:39 - always on (Gray0328)
The message of this poem earns a fave. But do not think that that is all...
April 18th, 2025 11:37 - Time (Rrodriguez)
This poem in tranquil arms transports me to past memories of places and...
April 18th, 2025 11:33 - Standing Eight Count (Thomas W Case)
Just like I like em gritty, dark, full of flavor. Well done Thomas
April 18th, 2025 11:31 - The Eve Of Easter (Orchidee)
Very nicely crafted this well known tale. Nicely appropriate for the...
April 18th, 2025 11:29 - Ahem, Don\'t Look At Me (Cheeky Missy)
Chic I particularly enjoyed your first it being so intricately woven with...
April 18th, 2025 11:26 - THE NATURE OF REALITY (Twizzle48)
A great write about a very complex subject. Quantum physics is the poetry...
April 18th, 2025 09:24 - A Colored Night (Maplespal)
A very poetic description of fireworks that sparks memories and explodes...
April 18th, 2025 09:19 - True Friends (Simerjeet Singh)
Friends are special in that they are chosen while family is not. This...
April 18th, 2025 09:17 - the skull called place (Tristan Robert Lange)
A very powerful beginning that thunders at the reader with the power of...
April 18th, 2025 09:14 - Graves (Tony36)
A beautiful poem reminiscent of the song (Where have all the flowers gone)...
April 18th, 2025 07:43 - Wind (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah it is the ambiguity that catches my eye first. Is it the traveler or...
April 18th, 2025 07:41 - Love and Trust (🅔🅜🅘🅛🅐🅨🅨)
A wonderful and beautiful poem of love for another. It encompasses many...
April 18th, 2025 07:37 - In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc. (Demar Desu)
A beautiful thought tied into this cultural difference. In native American...
April 18th, 2025 07:33 - Whispers (Teardrop)
A most beautiful poem of the language of nature and our deafness to it....
April 18th, 2025 07:29 - Chocolate (Mutley Ravishes)
A great write and for a good purpose. Nicely done in few words
April 18th, 2025 06:17 - Ēostre Or Easter? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Even the date is hard to place the first Sunday after the first full moon...
April 18th, 2025 06:15 - Soul 2 (Teddy.15)
Dark or bright the soul is yours and in this piece it shines through. A...
April 18th, 2025 05:34 - sleeping pills (Dimpy)
Biting one\'s tongue is painful. A very nice poem with a little advice
April 18th, 2025 05:31 - The Best is Left of Me (Randall Racine)
Well rhymed this poem tells the story of a life changed by adversity. Very...
April 18th, 2025 05:29 - mans best friend (Jim56)
Another tribute to man\'s best friend. Nicely done Jim
April 18th, 2025 05:23 - Mythos (Libellule)
So many entranced by the screen few read anymore and poetry less still....
April 18th, 2025 05:22 - Higanbana (Arobot)
A poem with such a haunting feeling to it. Loved it
April 18th, 2025 04:25 - Wonder (Mottakeenur Rehman)
In this small jewel there is much that goes unseen. Deeper meaning and...
April 18th, 2025 04:24 - Angel of my afterlife (Alan R)
A collage of images vivid all intermingled with nature scenes. A most...
April 18th, 2025 04:21 - ROBINS IN WINTER (Nephilim56)
In the literal this is a parents worst nightmare. The poem well written...
April 18th, 2025 04:19 - The Last Loss (Devender Kumar)
The dark side of death. In few words this is conveyed. Very nice
April 18th, 2025 04:14 - Borrow (Salian)
Sugary sweet and a clever line this poem is traditionally romantic and...
April 18th, 2025 04:11 - If you ever return (Chris Anderson)
Welcome to MPS this poem shows such nice flow and good rhyme with a topic...
April 18th, 2025 04:08 - So close yet so far (Lana c)
This is very clever poetry is the condensation of emotion into words and...
April 18th, 2025 04:04 - Buy Me (Randall Racine)
This poem utilizes careful meter in each line to create the rhythm and...
April 18th, 2025 04:01 - Maxim (James Michael)
An extremely short poem with deep meaning and in the right season. Full of...
April 18th, 2025 03:56 - A Poem Illl Write But Hows about May We Marry? (Hollow Enigma)
Couplets compose this poem with a one line romantic and the other not so...
April 18th, 2025 03:53 - A Daisy on My Mind (Rrodriguez)
A beautiful metaphor. Love so beautiful and yet delicate. Very nicely...
April 18th, 2025 03:44 - Heart or Mind. (Poetic Licence)
I love question poems because it leaves it up to the reader and thereby...
April 18th, 2025 03:36 - twilight trek (Arqios)
To me this poem represents life\'s journey where the final word is hope. A...
April 18th, 2025 03:28 - The Air That You Breathe. (Goldfinch60)
I often wonder how life would be if the proportion of oxygen and nitrogen...
April 18th, 2025 03:19 - The Light I Left for You (TheWanderer_and_his_Ms.Reverie)
A poem of loss and well rhymed nicely written. Well done
April 17th, 2025 20:50 - When Somebody’s Dead (MDStone)
A truth and a nice set of quadruple rhymes. Well done
April 17th, 2025 20:47 - Damn it to Hell! (Mutley Ravishes)
So where do you go if you\'re not good enough to to to heaven and the...
April 17th, 2025 20:44 - Today the Sky Looked Painted (Maydanae)
A beautiful picture painted in words and no no one is finished until their...
April 17th, 2025 18:48 - Fogged rainbows (Arial)
Surreal and at the same time deep thought. Nicely written.
April 17th, 2025 17:22 - German Death Camp by Boris Slutsky (Ksey_Gan)
A hard read about the cruelty of man to his fellows. A dark poem story of...
April 17th, 2025 17:19 - Long story, Words short (Mya)
A question that depends upon its very intent. This poem can be taken in...
April 17th, 2025 16:17 - Elegy For a Name No One Remembers (Rawaneigh.99)
A poem of deep pain, hurt, and screaming out for recognition of it. It is...
April 17th, 2025 16:12 - the women that saved my life (Bethan)
A wonderful tribute in poetic form. Well done
April 17th, 2025 16:08 - Have fun, sell some words (Maplespal)
A great technique and a fun poem all in one. I do that from time to time...
April 17th, 2025 16:06 - Hoisted Detriments (Duran Mazzana)
This poem speaks with power of violence and healing. Well worded
April 17th, 2025 16:03 - Good Old Friend (Mya)
A wonderful write about a muse that comes for tea or whatever. I am...
April 17th, 2025 16:00 - Bring Me Alive (Gray0328)
A poem with wonderful flow and meter that takes the reader on a ride and...
April 17th, 2025 15:57
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