Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Delay is the Deadliest form of Denial (Gray0328)
The mood is well set in this write and continues throughout leaving the...
January 31st, 2025 14:03 - 1933/2016/2024 (Tristan Robert Lange)
I see what you mean in the similarity of our writes today and hear you...
January 31st, 2025 09:12 - Untitled (RSM0812)
A look into the vast beyond. Nicely framed in the night sky. Beautiful
January 31st, 2025 09:07 - Illusions in Reality (Salvia.S)
Tis true Salvina and most cleverly said. Very nice.
January 31st, 2025 07:13 - not to the swift (Arqios)
Indeed it is true that in poetry it is not quantity but quality that is...
January 31st, 2025 07:12 - another day (Jim56)
One day the same as the next which is good if yesterday was a good day. A...
January 31st, 2025 07:10 - Things are dropping away (Emile Dubois)
Familar to many aging this poem leaves a feeling of hopelessness and sad...
January 31st, 2025 04:25 - Firm Foundation (Orchidee)
A very beautiful hymn proclaiming victory over evil and wickedness and the...
January 31st, 2025 04:23 - STRANGER (Nephilim56)
A stark and frigid image is cast in this winter scene. Vivid in reality is...
January 31st, 2025 04:20 - Wise Man Say (1) (Poetic Licence)
I can always use the humor and well put indeed. The title led me to expect...
January 31st, 2025 04:18 - Guest List (Mutley Ravishes)
Every day I look to see if my name is still on the guest list. Change is...
January 31st, 2025 04:14 - Dirty Shirt (Dan Williams)
Deeply philisophical this poem poses several questions almost of a...
January 31st, 2025 04:11 - Orchids (Thomas W Case)
A most wonderful haiku sensuous, vivid and alluring in few words of floral...
January 31st, 2025 04:02 - Australia, diamond, Australia, (David Wakeling)
A most beautiful tribute and poem to a land. It rouses the heart with...
January 31st, 2025 04:00 - Imagine If You Will. (Goldfinch60)
A nice thought Andy beautiful images flow through it and in the distance I...
January 31st, 2025 03:55 - Framed Lies (FallingAwake2)
White lies can easiy grow and become gray then black. A good write with...
January 30th, 2025 17:38 - Message 1 (Maplespal)
Very nicely worded it had to be read more than once to understand,
January 30th, 2025 16:35 - Remarking on A Flight of Fancy (Neville)
You got me thinking again. We often fall back in time to burn with past...
January 30th, 2025 16:30 - Girl on a hill (Caring dove)
Lonliness needs company. A poem where I feel a reaching out in the...
January 30th, 2025 13:26 - Becoming Less (Gray0328)
A prayer in a poem or maybe a poem in a prayer. Well written
January 30th, 2025 13:23 - Will we meet again? (Firefall)
We all have those moments when someone touchs our heart and if not acted...
January 30th, 2025 13:21 - Stare (RSM0812)
Poetic words in so little. Nicely done.
January 30th, 2025 12:34 - Taking Poetry Back (Tom Dylan)
Why is it that when we are mad at others we take it out on ourselves? A...
January 30th, 2025 12:32 - ~> Sparky! -Shakespearean Sonnet- (Thad Wilk)
That picture looks just like my old dog Butch and the poem has many of his...
January 30th, 2025 10:34 - Would It Be? (Tristan Robert Lange)
Great questions that I am sure have many opinions. As for me I had a good...
January 30th, 2025 10:31 - Two stoned aliens (Tony36)
A fun read that raises the question as why aliens don\'t have anything...
January 30th, 2025 10:29 - I love basketball (Demar Desu)
Remember the song and remember going to the YMCA to swim. Brings back old...
January 30th, 2025 08:35 - Moments (Cassie58)
A poem of sadness with such a sense of longing for what might have been....
January 30th, 2025 08:34 - Galactic Serenade (Salvia.S)
This gives the mind a bit to think about, Is the a long or short time or...
January 30th, 2025 08:32 - real love (Jim56)
Well written Jim this message is too soon forgotten today where...
January 30th, 2025 06:43 - QUIET HOUR (Nephilim56)
A definate feeling of nostalgia but more a longing for the past and what...
January 30th, 2025 04:49 - Promise of Providing (Orchidee)
It seems that whether Jews, Mormons, christians in general all have had...
January 30th, 2025 04:46 - Real Fake Beauty (Poetic Licence)
A wonderful and powerful message set in great metaphor all too real. I too...
January 30th, 2025 04:41 - A Fish Called Wonder (Teddy.15)
And if people were goldfish? I know this is a literal story but I can\'t...
January 30th, 2025 04:36 - Grandpa Doe (David Wakeling)
A great story with a moral that we all have if we only take time to...
January 30th, 2025 04:31 - bridge is out (Arqios)
This poem sings in a haunting dark fog. It is well worded and conveys well...
January 30th, 2025 04:25 - Is THIS Why They Call Me Crazy? (Cheeky Missy)
I read them all but I think my favorite is the first and the message is...
January 30th, 2025 04:20 - The Power Law (Mutley Ravishes)
Indeed it does but in the distance of space silence prevails. This one had...
January 30th, 2025 04:08 - Jazz History (Goldfinch60)
A great play on words in this poem and title. I sensed the excitement of...
January 30th, 2025 04:06 - start over (NinjaGirl)
A great message that there is always choice, there is always another time,...
January 29th, 2025 19:32 - Linens And Things! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Every story and piece of music needs a bridge and this is it. Nicely done
January 29th, 2025 15:42 - Future Days (Cassie58)
A perfect poem for a most precious period of life. Lovely Cassie
January 29th, 2025 13:12 - The visitors (Tony36)
A most fanciful write that takes one to the Hobit maybe. Lovely
January 29th, 2025 13:11 - Service in Motion (Gray0328)
What a great message to send I loved it
January 29th, 2025 13:08 - Hanging out with the Muse (Thomas W Case)
A nice write with a great message to encourage those that aspire.
January 29th, 2025 13:07 - The Pain of Pleasure (Demar Desu)
It is the contrast between to opposites that give appreciation for each....
January 29th, 2025 13:04 - ~> Bloodsuckers Of Portsmouth! (Thad Wilk)
A monster thriller that is dark at its core. The story of something out of...
January 29th, 2025 13:03 - Echoes of Inevitability (Tristan Robert Lange)
A question I have heard form books, films, and many people and all have a...
January 29th, 2025 09:05 - The anguished heart (NafisaSB)
I hear in this the difference between women and men. The one for love the...
January 29th, 2025 08:57 - When Sky Meets The Earth (Salvia.S)
A most lovely poem of complimenting the best in others with the best in...
January 29th, 2025 06:43 - bully-free (Arqios)
Have always believed that people do the best they can with what they have...
January 29th, 2025 06:41 - spring joy (Jim56)
Ah remember the dafodills poking up through the melting ice so nice....
January 29th, 2025 06:38 - Part of A Whole That Needs Mending (Neville)
Certainly you play with my mind. On the whole if I were to mend a whole...
January 29th, 2025 04:45 - The Devils Smile (Poetic Licence)
This poem is deffinately in a minor key. I\'m impressed with the beat and...
January 29th, 2025 04:26 - Reigning Ruler (Orchidee)
Another great old testement hymn Orchi well done
January 29th, 2025 04:22 - SILENT SOLDIER (Nephilim56)
In so few words so much said. Loved the short lines giving a sense of...
January 29th, 2025 04:20 - Fire Earth Water Air. (David Wakeling)
Mythical in form, Biblical in sound, Apocalyptic as it reads, this poem...
January 29th, 2025 04:16 - In Silence And Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
I find silence from time to time rest for the mind and soul. I know well...
January 29th, 2025 04:11 - No.3 from JANUARY WRITES (Michael Edwards)
This one was great Michael. I\'ve had sadwiches like that and read poems...
January 29th, 2025 04:08 - Goldmining (Mutley Ravishes)
Sounds like a most interesting recipe loved the idea. Very nice Mutley
January 29th, 2025 04:05 - The Great Filter (John Prophet)
Familiar words but not really this poem is filled with statements. Very...
January 28th, 2025 19:19 - Here (Maplespal)
I get the feeling that this is the end of the road, it sounds hollow and...
January 28th, 2025 17:17 - rain (NinjaGirl)
A great picture running in a stream from the roof to the gutter free....
January 28th, 2025 14:00 - -$1.56 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
You got that nothing worse than a date ordering what you can\'t afford. On...
January 28th, 2025 12:05 - ~. OMG! Poor Pussycat. - Form Monotetra - (Thad Wilk)
Didn\'t know he was picking up Chineese habits. A fun read and the picture...
January 28th, 2025 11:46 - You (Tristan Robert Lange)
A poem percieved deprication by one that should be important to the...
January 28th, 2025 11:41 - Alice down the rabbit hole (Tony36)
Fun, fanciful and a great read loved it from beginning to end. In other...
January 28th, 2025 08:33 - I am (2781)
Love the last two lines of this poem they are a clever and more poetic...
January 28th, 2025 08:26 - spring is on the way (Jim56)
A bright poem full of expectations and hope. Spring and its promises of...
January 28th, 2025 07:00 - Too Soon (Cassie58)
A most lovely poem with many metaphors that sent shivers. Following each...
January 28th, 2025 06:55 - WISHES (Nephilim56)
The reason so many play the lottery and I guess we all do in the journey...
January 28th, 2025 06:52 - Riordan (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Again so nicely written in your personal style full of adventure and...
January 28th, 2025 06:50 - Love For You (Salvia.S)
Short and very sweet an alegory of love. Very nice
January 28th, 2025 06:47 - Blindness (Framed Mirror)
Ahh much to digest in this poem. It speaks with words neither sound or...
January 28th, 2025 06:46 - into the arms of night (Arqios)
Whether metaphor or not this poem holds its beauty and sings on to sleep....
January 28th, 2025 06:38 - Is Our Children`s Future On a Knife Edge (Poetic Licence)
A powerful write where the author\'s emotions are right out there. I too...
January 28th, 2025 04:24 - Taste (Neville)
I can taste it now. Where can I buy this? Oh well this may be private...
January 28th, 2025 04:17 - Help Here (Orchidee)
Ahh a poem or rather hymn of support, I\'ll vote for that. I can always...
January 28th, 2025 04:13 - WAU 1982. (David Wakeling)
I would indeed be remiss to not give this a Fave. David what has happened...
January 28th, 2025 04:10 - Big Sugar (Mutley Ravishes)
This holds a blemd of the dark and light and leaves the reader wondering....
January 28th, 2025 04:02 - Words On This Page. (Goldfinch60)
A most charming way of saying that you live in the moment. Living in the...
January 28th, 2025 03:57 - Days of Nothing (Demar Desu)
I have already laid with the couch and the couch is not faithful. A most...
January 27th, 2025 18:16 - CLASSLESS (Nephilim56)
And so it has always been. A great write with a good point
January 27th, 2025 18:15 - With Fingers Linked (RSM0812)
There is the surface of this poem and then what lies beneath. In metaphor...
January 27th, 2025 12:26 - My Shoes (Thomas W Case)
I love this poem it speaks of what is most personal there is a reason that...
January 27th, 2025 12:23 - ~> Poison Ivy! (Thad Wilk)
Poison Ivy? Lizzie Borden took an ax and gave her father fourty whacks. A...
January 27th, 2025 12:19 - Deep in My Bed (Tristan Robert Lange)
Wow and after the Christmas season too. I think I know what you mean...
January 27th, 2025 12:15 - Riosin (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
I have gotten used to your style and the more I read it the more I like...
January 27th, 2025 12:13 - The Garden Gnome (Tony36)
What seems fun and humor on the surface holds a deeper meaning for me in...
January 27th, 2025 12:09 - violent world (Jim56)
Violence seems worse and worse as the media pump us full of every incident...
January 27th, 2025 12:07 - Longing For Longer (Salvia.S)
Ah yes Christmas for a child. Very nicely said
January 27th, 2025 11:34 - The Uninvited Guest (Tom Dylan)
Highly inventive this poem takes a common situation and makes it unique. I...
January 27th, 2025 05:25 - Salvation Security (Orchidee)
This hymn feels very jewish and old testement Orchi. We all should...
January 27th, 2025 05:21 - The Devils Kiss (Poetic Licence)
A look at the dark side of what we call love but I feel is more passion....
January 27th, 2025 05:18 - Mozart\'s Birthday Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Genious of all musical geniouses a great tribute Gold
January 27th, 2025 05:15 - Faith and Warragul. (David Wakeling)
A sad story of love and giving and the cost of it to both parties. This...
January 27th, 2025 05:12 - fleet-footed good (Arqios)
In metaphor we all walk through this life. As I grow older I notice more...
January 27th, 2025 05:01 - The Eternal Miracle of a Poet (Teddy.15)
Ah the purpose of life my poetic friend. Lovely verse in this poem floats...
January 27th, 2025 04:53 - Iron Under Acid (Dan Williams)
I get the image of an outclassed boxer to proud to give in being pummeled...
January 27th, 2025 04:43 - Inner peace (DLewis88)
Peace, rest, no stress are all images I get from this.
January 26th, 2025 17:48
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