Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Abbie talks to a stranger at the beach. (David Wakeling) Haunting is one word that comes to mind and this one following your last...
  January 11th, 2025 05:00
• A new day (NafisaSB) You have painted a most beautiful scene of dawn and all that accompanies...
  January 11th, 2025 04:56
• Consistency, I have None. (Doggerel Dave) Please don\'t move off too far, kinda like having ya around.
  January 11th, 2025 04:53
• Sir Orchi NS (Orchidee) And a good tribute at that. Now I have three more keys to hit each time...
  January 11th, 2025 04:50
• Quem me dara o paraiso (Poetaldo) At first I thought it was a temporal father but then it became clear. The...
  January 11th, 2025 04:45
• Never Blame. (Goldfinch60) A most positive outlook and the most helpful one at that. Difficult to...
  January 11th, 2025 04:34
• Endangered Candles (Dan Williams) Cold words for a cold society. We have a self destructive nature to...
  January 11th, 2025 04:29
• fingerprints (NinjaGirl) A great run of rhyme that leave a bit of doubt regarding whether abuse, or...
  January 10th, 2025 21:15
• The Vultures Will Come (Thomas W Case) So well written Thomas your poems have grown in a growth spurt. I found...
  January 10th, 2025 18:41
• ~`* Shirley Temple, The Little Princess *`~ (Thad Wilk) Remember her films well and later in life sucessful too a diplomat. Nicely...
  January 10th, 2025 18:37
• Dear Samuel T. Coleridge.... yes, Memory Lane (Cheeky Missy) The first two sonnets seemed focused on giving and the joy it brings then...
  January 10th, 2025 18:34
• Consuming (Vicecream) A most beautiful poem that adresses the issue of gratitude and the...
  January 10th, 2025 18:27
• Grass (Tristan Robert Lange) So true it is we are all temporal and our time is short. Well written with...
  January 10th, 2025 11:14
• I love women (Demar Desu) A very nice wording in this piece that captures my feelings as well.
  January 10th, 2025 09:06
• Picnica (Tony36) A poem that brings back many memories and a bit of nostalgia from the...
  January 10th, 2025 09:05
• Footprints Left In Sand and Snow (Cassie58) Cassie this poem held a most lovely rhyme scheme and rhythm that took the...
  January 10th, 2025 09:03
• reflection by the sea (Arqios) Although on the surface this appears and well could be a beautiful love...
  January 10th, 2025 08:56
• Never Enough (DLewis88) Fellings of inadequacy take us all from time to time and I hear them in...
  January 10th, 2025 08:49
• Behind the kiss (Maplespal) In this poem I took the voice to symbolize friendship and the kiss...
  January 10th, 2025 06:22
• faithful friend (Jim56) Have had a few dogs in my time and your words ring true for each and every...
  January 10th, 2025 05:58
• A Poet\'s True Worth (2) (Teddy.15) A wonderful senryu with meaning that transforms words to art. Lovely my...
  January 10th, 2025 05:56
• As The Clouds Gently Roll On By (Poetic Licence) This could easily be a song with the chorus. Reflections on one\'s life...
  January 10th, 2025 04:55
• Couple Goals (Tom Dylan) A lovely piece with a great message about priorities and love.
  January 10th, 2025 04:52
• Majestic Marvellings (Orchidee) Nicely done Orchi another wonderful hymn.
  January 10th, 2025 04:50
• Our Father who art in Prison Hallowed be thy name. (David Wakeling) Raw and powerful, loaded with emotion. This one speaks to issues of...
  January 10th, 2025 04:49
• Clean Bed from \'ANOTHER COLLECTION\' (Michael Edwards) Ah yes those childhood dreams that led to bedtime surprises and not of...
  January 10th, 2025 04:45
• LOVE DYING (Nephilim56) The wording and lack of punctuation in this verse leave it open to various...
  January 10th, 2025 04:42
• Strange (2781) A fun run through episodes of one\'s day and the accompanying thought...
  January 10th, 2025 04:41
• Walls of gold (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Great rhythm in this poem of rhyme and meter. Very nicely done
  January 10th, 2025 04:38
• Driftwood (Mutley Ravishes) A fun read that conveys well the modern mindset and how accustomed we have...
  January 10th, 2025 04:36
• Train Wreck (Rocky Lagou) A good metaphor and the formate of the poem aided in the presentation of...
  January 10th, 2025 04:34
• My Path Of Life. (Goldfinch60) It is all a matter of mental state, if one is happy where one is then the...
  January 10th, 2025 04:29
• shame (NinjaGirl) Poems can be liberating to the author and at their most powerful state...
  January 10th, 2025 04:24
• Even An Angel Takes Her Cigarette Breaks (Gray0328) Up in smoke. The breath of life also the dying breath a most sensuous poem...
  January 9th, 2025 14:54
• Every Night A City Sleeps (ADarkerMind) This poem to me goes deeper than the surface of history and present of...
  January 9th, 2025 11:58
• Klaus Kinsky . (Lorenz) Dark and gothic in nature this poem gives a shiver.
  January 9th, 2025 11:53
• For the Princes of the Alleys (Thomas W Case) A wonderful poem of empathy and kindness and yes this metaphor goes deeper...
  January 9th, 2025 11:49
• ~> Ralphina The Ballerina (Thad Wilk) Cute and I can hear a little girl telling this to her dog. A fun write.
  January 9th, 2025 11:14
• Twenty-Five (Tristan Robert Lange) Musings of the past? The what ifs in life and the what is. To find a word...
  January 9th, 2025 10:05
• Forges of Life (Tony36) I hear desire in this poem a striving for betterment and a refining of...
  January 9th, 2025 09:23
• Cayenne (Demar Desu) A splendid Haiku deep in philosophy and so well said in so few words
  January 9th, 2025 07:18
• start the year a new (Jim56) A great wish for the new year well expressed
  January 9th, 2025 07:17
• Changes (Maplespal) Wow! Love is moving on, forgiveness is moving on. A most beautiful write...
  January 9th, 2025 06:18
• One Windy Morn (Teddy.15) A wonderful write my friend a poetic acknowledgement of the protection...
  January 9th, 2025 06:14
• Praise Proclamation (Orchidee) More protestant than chatholic this hymn is a reminder to give credit for...
  January 9th, 2025 06:12
• MY DAD (Nephilim56) Love can grow over the years as our understanding grows as well. A truely...
  January 9th, 2025 06:08
• Love and Hate (Poetic Licence) It is said that the one that can not hate you can not love you. So true...
  January 9th, 2025 06:07
• An Evening Out. (Goldfinch60) Grandchildren are the joy of life and I often say that if I could have had...
  January 9th, 2025 06:01
• a grasp away (Arqios) Well written this cryptic poem in its depth speaks to me of the power of...
  January 9th, 2025 05:58
• My name is Mary Judith MaCallister. (David Wakeling) We have five senses they say but many feel there is a sixth. If deprived...
  January 9th, 2025 05:51
• \"....Off With A Shot! And Running---\" (Cheeky Missy) How quickly time does fly if one is having fun and how slow it does drag...
  January 9th, 2025 05:44
• forget me not (NinjaGirl) This poem dives deeper into the psychi of memory, The desire to be...
  January 9th, 2025 05:18
• Success ain\'t physical (𓆩Mase𓆪) Motivational and inspirational asking people to be all they can be. A good...
  January 8th, 2025 18:20
• something only Winter can bring (Vicecream) The use of opposites that are viewed in a most positive way to create a...
  January 8th, 2025 14:11
• The Heart of a Small Town (Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87) Very nostalgic this poem brings back memories of a simpler life, slower...
  January 8th, 2025 14:10
• Spring Day (Marigold02) Although about a terrible illness there is great beauty in this poem. The...
  January 8th, 2025 14:06
• The Moon (M. Ali) A great write about our closest neighbor and satelite. Nicely worded and...
  January 8th, 2025 14:03
• The Leviathan of Leisure (Gray0328) The hights of luxury dipped in debauchery. Technology for the wealthy...
  January 8th, 2025 14:01
• Odelia’s Decision (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Another happy ending. Well done.
  January 8th, 2025 13:58
• Come Back, It! (Mutley Ravishes) It remains one of the most used words in the language. Thing comes in...
  January 8th, 2025 09:55
• Answers Undiscovered (Dan Williams) The question of all is whether one can find or be better and the...
  January 8th, 2025 09:51
• LIMERICK 136 (Michael Edwards) A great limerick of a scam and it is obvious that one only need add water....
  January 8th, 2025 09:48
• Bones (RSM0812) Powerful meaning in this poem disguised under a thin layer of metaphor it...
  January 8th, 2025 09:45
• You Changed Like the Weather (Brian Otucho) A great line the last line and title of the poem it changes the meaning of...
  January 8th, 2025 09:42
• WINTER SKY (Nephilim56) I loved the stanza \"As infants dream Such wondrous dreams Old men in...
  January 8th, 2025 09:40
• The fold lifts - he\'s there in the mist (Amy Michelle Mosier) It is the last line of this poem that changes its meaning and leaves the...
  January 8th, 2025 09:36
• Boundless Love (Matthew R. Callies) Passion and its memories that remain prevade this poem of desire, passion,...
  January 8th, 2025 09:34
• ~> Natures Own Poetry! (Thad Wilk) A beautiful image, a beautiful thought and a beautiful poem
  January 8th, 2025 09:28
• between (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan you have grown very philisophical and versed it in beautiful...
  January 8th, 2025 09:26
• The Tower (Tony36) A fun story but not for children. As a metaphor I take meaning in this to...
  January 8th, 2025 07:33
• take away today (Jim56) This one Jim was not only good advice and upbeat but very clever in its...
  January 8th, 2025 07:30
• tears you could have cried (Arqios) Like most of your writing this poem requires thought and rereading to...
  January 8th, 2025 07:24
• Cesium\'s glow (Maplespal) I loved the development of this poem and the last lines that emphasize the...
  January 8th, 2025 07:19
• Which Did You Choose (Poetic Licence) With two eyes is see both evil and good, with two ears I hear both evil...
  January 8th, 2025 04:33
• Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee) Another great hymn to start my day, Thank you for sharing Orchi
  January 8th, 2025 04:30
• Mary’s boy child Jesus Rodriguez (David Wakeling) Dark and sad. To any mother their child is a baby Jesus and as a metaphor...
  January 8th, 2025 04:28
• Out (2781) Sometimes we trie too hard to control what is happening around us and...
  January 8th, 2025 04:25
• I don’t go out at night (Demar Desu) Another wonderful senryu that deserves much contemplation. Nicely worded
  January 8th, 2025 04:22
• Our Lakeside River. (Goldfinch60) Optimism in full gear and even with water all about swans are seen. Also...
  January 8th, 2025 04:17
• Mostly Bitter (Dan Williams) A difficult subject handled well. Nicely stated in most poetic form
  January 7th, 2025 20:54
• Whispers of the Abbagoochie (Matthew R. Callies) The title attracted me (good marketing) the poem brought the feeling of...
  January 7th, 2025 17:20
• Measures (Teddy.15) Carefully worded this poem speaks the truth in deep wisdom. Our love takes...
  January 7th, 2025 17:07
• The Poet\'s Bride (Framed Mirror) A clever play on words that becomes a verse that can be taken many ways....
  January 7th, 2025 13:54
• paranoid (NinjaGirl) Which is better to think that no one is after you when they are or think...
  January 7th, 2025 13:37
• Claustrophobic Indifference (Rebellion_in_sanity) The only person that knows and cares is yourself. So true it is. A...
  January 7th, 2025 13:34
• roasted rice cake (Rin) All gods are jealous. A good write with a hidden meaning. Well constructed...
  January 7th, 2025 13:07
• Final Retreat (Tristan Robert Lange) The contrast of light and dark where a black hole beyond the event horizon...
  January 7th, 2025 10:17
• ~> Mother Nature - form Rondeau- (Thad Wilk) Beautiful and bursting with life it shines a sun beam of light over...
  January 7th, 2025 10:12
• Dawn (Lorenz) The fiercness of nature and the uncertainty of infant man trying to hold...
  January 7th, 2025 10:10
• The Chest (Tony36) I thought ore or maybe something more. A most fun and intriguing write my...
  January 7th, 2025 08:43
• The Over-thinking, late-night drinking, aspiring writer, insomniacs Club (Tom Dylan) Love that song it resonates with so many. Sleepless nights are few for me...
  January 7th, 2025 08:42
• sun visit (Jim56) Jim your poems always bring a ray of sunshine and brighten the day I thank...
  January 7th, 2025 07:13
• One of those days (Maplespal) Wondering if the broken broom is a metaphor or literal or both. Waiting is...
  January 7th, 2025 07:11
• FOODBANKS (Nephilim56) No it doesn\'t is the answer. But the people should care and do something...
  January 7th, 2025 06:06
• tarkovsky-esque (Arqios) Words to give thought.I particularly loved \"people together, alone\" so...
  January 7th, 2025 06:03
• My Uncle Veritas (David Wakeling) Wise words from experience are better than holy words from scripture I...
  January 7th, 2025 06:00
• Hope in Those Smiling Eyes (Poetic Licence) The human condition is a social one and one of our fears is being alone....
  January 7th, 2025 04:17
• Praise Profession (Orchidee) Another powerful hymn about a powerful subject nicely written Orchi
  January 7th, 2025 04:14
• Tilt (Mutley Ravishes) Similarities in all things and we may say as well something is in there. A...
  January 7th, 2025 04:11
• Watson And Homes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60) I needed that Andy a smile to start the day. Anytime is a good time for a...
  January 7th, 2025 04:04