Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Candlemas Celebration (Orchidee) This hymn jumps out and sings. It is a core to Christian belief. Nicely...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:34
• where time stood still (Arqios) Beautifully written it holds a bit of respect with its aged nature. I...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:32
• 1,2, &  3  from 575s and 57577s (Michael Edwards) Oh dear Fibonacci numbers, mining for bit coin? lol This one has more...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:26
• The Six Nations. (Goldfinch60) Most interesting how sport can interest a man of any age. It has been so...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:13
• Grim Tidings, part one. (Dan Williams) This begins with a Dante epic type feel. The first stanza starts with a...
  February 2nd, 2025 05:07
• Cock Soft (Thomas W Case) Vivid and powerful as a thumb between hammer and nail. It screams.
  February 2nd, 2025 04:58
• Riordan’s First Day! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Real life as it is. Raw and pulling no punches. A good write with...
  February 2nd, 2025 04:54
• The Water\'s Edge. (David Wakeling) Some really great lines in this poem \"God is ill and his silence is a...
  February 2nd, 2025 04:47
• The Complaint Experiment (Gray0328) A great message in a poem. I am a firm believer in the idea of instead of...
  February 1st, 2025 14:22
• The Secret Tale of the Tooth Fairy (Matthew R. Callies) A great retelling of a child tale. Loosing one\'s teeth can be traumatic...
  February 1st, 2025 14:18
• Poetic Quotes (Teddy.15) There is a lot to think about in this but the underlying theme seems to be...
  February 1st, 2025 14:12
• What is Love (Kiamiz) To me love is all things. A lovely poem with great images
  February 1st, 2025 09:47
• The Man I Cannot Hear (Tristan Robert Lange) The form of this poem reminded me a the swing of a church bell. As it...
  February 1st, 2025 09:46
• Anchor in the Storm (Amandatoriii) A sense of security felt in the presence of another a place of shelter...
  February 1st, 2025 09:08
• End (RSM0812) Dark fatalism pervades this poem and indeed it is true. Very nicely put
  February 1st, 2025 09:02
• The superhero (Tony36) Are we speaking of our immune system? A fanciful poem about a real issue.
  February 1st, 2025 08:58
• Dirty mistakes (Domilla) A sense of regret prevades this work and gives the feeling that one wishes...
  February 1st, 2025 08:57
• The little atoms of light (Demar Desu) Deja vu this one seems so familiar somehow. technology has a heavy price
  February 1st, 2025 08:54
• Queria viver (Poetaldo) The feeling of change and the gifts given not always being what we want....
  February 1st, 2025 08:52
• I Say Your Name (Cassie58) There are feelings of pain but also nostalgia and the bitter sweet feeling...
  February 1st, 2025 08:47
• love is just a word (Jim56) Another bright poem Jim to lighten the day and carry one on their way
  February 1st, 2025 06:48
• The Holy Shadow (Ajon4wheels) A mixture of pain and need as well as perceiving damage as help. A...
  February 1st, 2025 06:47
• A Canvas Of Reflections (Salvia.S) To those that love no color is important. A most beautiful write with a...
  February 1st, 2025 06:45
• One More Breath (Accross_world_with_u) Ah the tenacious hold on life so nicely expressed in this marvelous poem....
  February 1st, 2025 05:47
• Sussing the Pot Plant (Neville) And so we all weep in our lonelyness. Separated by species, gender, social...
  February 1st, 2025 05:43
• no one like him (Sheta) A wonderful write personifying an ideal that does not exist. None of us...
  February 1st, 2025 04:46
• The Rain MidNight Serenades (Reynaldo Casison) This poem speaks of inoxication and an altered state of mind that carries...
  February 1st, 2025 04:44
• The Shepherds :- An ode to the Gurung community (Gaurav Gurung) Pride of one\'s roots and place of origin comes through in this poem. It...
  February 1st, 2025 04:42
• FROZEN (Nephilim56) This poem written in a cascading form like a waterfall carries one over...
  February 1st, 2025 04:38
• Night life (Ginny jayne) Clever and cute this poem has a child like innocence to it. Short but fun...
  February 1st, 2025 04:20
• No.2 from JANUARY WRITES (Michael Edwards) I see or rather C or is it sea. Another of your most marvelous worded...
  February 1st, 2025 04:18
• The Pirates Of Penzance. (Goldfinch60) Andy this is a fun and fanciful read. It sounds as if you had a very good...
  February 1st, 2025 04:15
• The Dawning Grace. (David Wakeling) Beautiful verse and near rhyme in a somewhat classical form that carries...
  February 1st, 2025 04:13
• speak to them (Arqios) Communication the key to a relationship. So nicely stated in poetic from...
  February 1st, 2025 04:08
• The little atoms of light (Demar Desu) Now there is something to think about. Once again short and sweet and to...
  February 1st, 2025 04:06
• Confident Calling (Orchidee) Another beautiful hymn Orchi. Tell me Orchi why it seems that most hymns...
  February 1st, 2025 04:04
• Sunrises through the blinds (Eliaskayne) Loved the line \"ghost laughter on my lips\" a great line that conjurs up...
  January 31st, 2025 21:38
• Juxtaposed Justice (NinjaGirl) Heart rending and powerful this poem speaks to pain
  January 31st, 2025 21:36
• Ben vindo (Poetaldo) This is a poem of the seasons and of life with its gratitude and dislikes....
  January 31st, 2025 20:27
• Love (The Indignant Poetess) Strong words and hard questions in this powerful poem. Nicely done
  January 31st, 2025 19:51
• Enduring Love. (Jan bach) Love ties strong bonds that keep a person captive. Abuse is not to be...
  January 31st, 2025 19:50
• Brought up with fairies (Gewar) Here the difference between fantasy and reality is starkly presented in...
  January 31st, 2025 19:45
• Pathetic! Little…Me (Tkatie118) Irony in this poem stands out from the narrator calling for love and...
  January 31st, 2025 19:43
• Girl makes friends with the moon (Caring dove) Metaphorical this poem sends its message of trust and so gently
  January 31st, 2025 19:40
• What words can do (Kaelyn Jade) To be one self is one\'s strongest weapon. A great message in this poem...
  January 31st, 2025 19:38
• When the pain takes over (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) The message alone deserves a fave in this poem of unity. Nicely worded as...
  January 31st, 2025 19:35
• A I (2781) If I were AI I would understand. Most interesting
  January 31st, 2025 19:32
• Between silence and Chaos (Poemsoul) A beautiful poem about the importance of another. Most lovely
  January 31st, 2025 19:27
• Journey of Inspiration... (Davidbrailsford) A beautiful poem full of meaning. It gives importance to our dreams and...
  January 31st, 2025 19:26
• Visit there to understand life (Cedrick) Well written with some very clever lines this poem explores the theme of...
  January 31st, 2025 19:24
• The Paradox of Infinity (Skally) we live in a three dimentional world and trapped in this confine we are...
  January 31st, 2025 19:21
• The women with messy hair (Weep little lion girl) A most interesting poem that goes deeper than the surface. Yes there is...
  January 31st, 2025 19:16
• Fool (WanderingSidd) We all feel the fool at times and yes it is usually us ourselves that are...
  January 31st, 2025 19:14
• The Latest From the Last Frontier? (Cheeky Missy) Spring and shortbread what more could a person want except maybe some...
  January 31st, 2025 17:28
• Contentment (Teddy.15) Every piece is true I\'m sure. Nicely written Teddy
  January 31st, 2025 16:53
• On Vacation back in two weeks! (Thad Wilk) Have fun
  January 31st, 2025 16:52
• Delay is the Deadliest form of Denial (Gray0328) The mood is well set in this write and continues throughout leaving the...
  January 31st, 2025 14:03
• 1933/2016/2024 (Tristan Robert Lange) I see what you mean in the similarity of our writes today and hear you...
  January 31st, 2025 09:12
• Untitled (RSM0812) A look into the vast beyond. Nicely framed in the night sky. Beautiful
  January 31st, 2025 09:07
• Illusions in Reality (Salvia.S) Tis true Salvina and most cleverly said. Very nice.
  January 31st, 2025 07:13
• not to the swift (Arqios) Indeed it is true that in poetry it is not quantity but quality that is...
  January 31st, 2025 07:12
• another day (Jim56) One day the same as the next which is good if yesterday was a good day. A...
  January 31st, 2025 07:10
• Things are dropping away (Emile Dubois) Familar to many aging this poem leaves a feeling of hopelessness and sad...
  January 31st, 2025 04:25
• Firm Foundation (Orchidee) A very beautiful hymn proclaiming victory over evil and wickedness and the...
  January 31st, 2025 04:23
• STRANGER (Nephilim56) A stark and frigid image is cast in this winter scene. Vivid in reality is...
  January 31st, 2025 04:20
• Wise Man Say (1) (Poetic Licence) I can always use the humor and well put indeed. The title led me to expect...
  January 31st, 2025 04:18
• Guest List (Mutley Ravishes) Every day I look to see if my name is still on the guest list. Change is...
  January 31st, 2025 04:14
• Dirty Shirt (Dan Williams) Deeply philisophical this poem poses several questions almost of a...
  January 31st, 2025 04:11
• Orchids (Thomas W Case) A most wonderful haiku sensuous, vivid and alluring in few words of floral...
  January 31st, 2025 04:02
• Australia, diamond, Australia, (David Wakeling) A most beautiful tribute and poem to a land. It rouses the heart with...
  January 31st, 2025 04:00
• Imagine If You Will. (Goldfinch60) A nice thought Andy beautiful images flow through it and in the distance I...
  January 31st, 2025 03:55
• Framed Lies (FallingAwake2) White lies can easiy grow and become gray then black. A good write with...
  January 30th, 2025 17:38
• Message 1 (Maplespal) Very nicely worded it had to be read more than once to understand,
  January 30th, 2025 16:35
• Remarking on A Flight of Fancy (Neville) You got me thinking again. We often fall back in time to burn with past...
  January 30th, 2025 16:30
• Girl on a hill (Caring dove) Lonliness needs company. A poem where I feel a reaching out in the...
  January 30th, 2025 13:26
• Becoming Less (Gray0328) A prayer in a poem or maybe a poem in a prayer. Well written
  January 30th, 2025 13:23
• Will we meet again? (Firefall) We all have those moments when someone touchs our heart and if not acted...
  January 30th, 2025 13:21
• Stare (RSM0812) Poetic words in so little. Nicely done.
  January 30th, 2025 12:34
• Taking Poetry Back (Tom Dylan) Why is it that when we are mad at others we take it out on ourselves? A...
  January 30th, 2025 12:32
• ~> Sparky! -Shakespearean Sonnet- (Thad Wilk) That picture looks just like my old dog Butch and the poem has many of his...
  January 30th, 2025 10:34
• Would It Be? (Tristan Robert Lange) Great questions that I am sure have many opinions. As for me I had a good...
  January 30th, 2025 10:31
• Two stoned aliens (Tony36) A fun read that raises the question as why aliens don\'t have anything...
  January 30th, 2025 10:29
• I love basketball (Demar Desu) Remember the song and remember going to the YMCA to swim. Brings back old...
  January 30th, 2025 08:35
• Moments (Cassie58) A poem of sadness with such a sense of longing for what might have been....
  January 30th, 2025 08:34
• Galactic Serenade (Salvia.S) This gives the mind a bit to think about, Is the a long or short time or...
  January 30th, 2025 08:32
• real love (Jim56) Well written Jim this message is too soon forgotten today where...
  January 30th, 2025 06:43
• QUIET HOUR (Nephilim56) A definate feeling of nostalgia but more a longing for the past and what...
  January 30th, 2025 04:49
• Promise of Providing (Orchidee) It seems that whether Jews, Mormons, christians in general all have had...
  January 30th, 2025 04:46
• Real Fake Beauty (Poetic Licence) A wonderful and powerful message set in great metaphor all too real. I too...
  January 30th, 2025 04:41
• A Fish Called Wonder (Teddy.15) And if people were goldfish? I know this is a literal story but I can\'t...
  January 30th, 2025 04:36
• Grandpa Doe (David Wakeling) A great story with a moral that we all have if we only take time to...
  January 30th, 2025 04:31
• bridge is out (Arqios) This poem sings in a haunting dark fog. It is well worded and conveys well...
  January 30th, 2025 04:25
• Is THIS Why They Call Me Crazy? (Cheeky Missy) I read them all but I think my favorite is the first and the message is...
  January 30th, 2025 04:20
• The Power Law (Mutley Ravishes) Indeed it does but in the distance of space silence prevails. This one had...
  January 30th, 2025 04:08
• Jazz History (Goldfinch60) A great play on words in this poem and title. I sensed the excitement of...
  January 30th, 2025 04:06
• start over (NinjaGirl) A great message that there is always choice, there is always another time,...
  January 29th, 2025 19:32
• Linens And Things! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Every story and piece of music needs a bridge and this is it. Nicely done
  January 29th, 2025 15:42
• Future Days (Cassie58) A perfect poem for a most precious period of life. Lovely Cassie
  January 29th, 2025 13:12
• The visitors (Tony36) A most fanciful write that takes one to the Hobit maybe. Lovely
  January 29th, 2025 13:11
• Service in Motion (Gray0328) What a great message to send I loved it
  January 29th, 2025 13:08