Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Hiding (Anthony Hanible) We all put on our best face to pretend to be what we are not but wish...
  December 7th, 2025 15:56
• They Rise (Kurt Philip Behm) Mind provoking I think of all the greats forgotten to time, those...
  December 7th, 2025 15:55
• Chalk Cliff (A piece of luggage) A wonderful poem of opposition between the happiness and lightness of the...
  December 7th, 2025 15:49
• Fast Eddie\'s Pier VI (Eugene S.) A fave for the creativity in this poem. The intermittent altering from...
  December 7th, 2025 15:47
• Rainforest vail (Nicole Pritchard) Beautiful a place I call home as well. I have seen all types of beautiful...
  December 7th, 2025 15:44
• Final act (Dara Ó Rinn) Powerful and captivating a poem of a bond. Nicely written
  December 7th, 2025 15:29
• The Yule-Kaleidoscope (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Ragnarök on saccharin steroids taken on a tab. Oh holy night a fun read...
  December 7th, 2025 13:50
• Breeze of the Charity ✨ (Nayak) Planting a garden I pull the weeds and some are nettles that sting. Taking...
  December 7th, 2025 13:38
• I don\'t want to go to school monday (Sam.C) I love this and it brings memories but different ones. When I went to...
  December 7th, 2025 13:36
• The Quite Between the Words (Gray0328) \"wars begin long before words\" what a profound statement that rings so...
  December 7th, 2025 13:33
• Love You Forever (Evie Baker) A mother could not ask more than the love of her children. A lovely poem...
  December 7th, 2025 13:31
• Bay area blues (Lorenz) So many songs so many memories haunt these shores. Death but a change and...
  December 7th, 2025 13:22
• FLY (Abhinav) A most encouraging and positive poem to lift the soul of the reader....
  December 7th, 2025 09:36
• Silent yelling (Maplespal) Here the absence of naming the person of object make this poem all the...
  December 7th, 2025 09:35
• Silence Westward (Soheil khodaparasti) The image is clear and so is the message. Well done
  December 7th, 2025 09:34
• birdsong (Jim56) Love your nature poems Jim and this is another on that calls out to be
  December 7th, 2025 09:33
• An Angel Sighs (RSM0812) We all need such encouragement and from a divine source would not hurt...
  December 7th, 2025 09:32
• What Happened? (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A sad situation where the world has to walk on egg shells and where people...
  December 7th, 2025 09:30
• O, What Comfort Brings The Night (Paul Gerard Reed) So aptly described and imaged this poem is truly poetic by nature and a...
  December 7th, 2025 09:28
• Torquemada\'s Trepidation (Tristan Robert Lange) Deep and historical but pertinent today as well. A metaphor within...
  December 7th, 2025 09:26
• Ass liquor both ways. (Friendship) A wonderful write full of images and metaphor that enriches the meaning. I...
  December 7th, 2025 09:23
• When The Night is Still (Katie B.) A wonderful write Katie this poem conveys the peaceful feelings of night....
  December 7th, 2025 09:20
• still waters stirred (Arqios) Such a hard read knowing many that have suffered them. Well explained from...
  December 7th, 2025 09:17
• Timing (Aa Harvey) A love poem a plea for unity and to hear the words said. Nicely done
  December 7th, 2025 05:28
• WIDOW AT THE GRAVESIDE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Beautiful! In its tender starkness this poem breaths the breath of loss....
  December 7th, 2025 04:42
• \"Love Math\" (Florida John) Clever and the merging of love with math makes some sense in that few...
  December 7th, 2025 04:06
• LIGHT / LUZ (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) A beautiful poem equating light and love. Nicely written in short lines...
  December 7th, 2025 04:05
• Locked away (Ethan Mikel StAmour) There is no understanding hate and it forges strong chains that wrong so...
  December 7th, 2025 04:02
• In stillness. (Andrew Deaton) There needs to be quiet and a stillness to hear the whispers of the inner...
  December 7th, 2025 04:01
• I said no and you wouldn\'t stop! (Aaron Roberson) Sad and tragic a poem of pain and powerlessness in the face of a stronger...
  December 7th, 2025 03:58
• weird (Ja'Quan Shepard) A rap of a poem that speaks and carries a beat. Nicely done
  December 7th, 2025 03:53
• Utopia (NafisaSB) So well worded this poem presents and proposes a better world that is a...
  December 7th, 2025 03:51
• Somebody Like That (Vanna) A sad poem that speaks to growing up and the disillusionment that goes...
  December 7th, 2025 03:49
• Dame Justice (Awam) I like this poem that is a metaphoric satire and twists and turns several...
  December 7th, 2025 03:45
• my imaginary slavoj žižek quotes #2 (Jon Nakapalau) A great write that affirms that greed overrides common sense. A lovely...
  December 7th, 2025 03:44
• I want to be free (Aaron Roberson) A poem of taking back what is one\'s own. Written with a sense of...
  December 7th, 2025 03:42
• No Flowers - Revisited (Orchidee) Now this was a bit of a turn. A nonbiblical hymn Orchi and well done as...
  December 7th, 2025 03:39
• Dangerous Hobs. (Goldfinch60) A while back a research paper revealed that water can cause cancer in...
  December 7th, 2025 03:36
• Ode to 3 Voices (Thomas W Case) This poem is gritty and speaks of patchy days of clouds shadows and sun...
  December 7th, 2025 03:31
• am i unlovable? (Lunarchloedip) A plea for acceptance in this poem asking for love. Well worded and imaged...
  December 6th, 2025 20:32
• Distractions (Freyaaa) We often distract ourselves even from whom we are. Well said
  December 6th, 2025 19:21
• Home (Ja'Quan Shepard) A most interesting flow in this poem. it seems almost free association
  December 6th, 2025 19:18
• Stardust (Kora) Loved the last stanza in this poem that is romantic in a cosmic way. Every...
  December 6th, 2025 16:02
• Kaye Brown (Randyjohnson71) A beautiful dedication and wonderful tribute. Nicely done
  December 6th, 2025 15:59
• GOOD BORN OF TRAGEDY (David Welch) Compensation for a kindness done and what I would call the love of one\'s...
  December 6th, 2025 15:05
• Tired but kind (Aa Harvey) Exhaustion, tired , worn out all come through in this poem. A lovely write
  December 6th, 2025 15:02
• The Gaze: The Purifier of Truth in the Human Soul (Soheil khodaparasti) The words that are veils keep hidden some of the self sometimes because...
  December 6th, 2025 15:00
• Tech-mania (EvenwheniLie) Humans believe that what sets us apart is our mind and the rest does not...
  December 6th, 2025 13:38
• Resighted (Kurt Philip Behm) This poem is deeper than the surface of the mirror it goes to the silver...
  December 6th, 2025 13:37
• The Second Arrow (Gray0328) Learn from experience everyone makes a mistake but to make the same...
  December 6th, 2025 13:35
• Flying Amongst Stars (Evie Baker) This poem ends romantic and touching. Well done
  December 6th, 2025 13:31
• Deep Reflections Within Mornings (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Seeds grow when planted. A most interesting and complex poem. Well done
  December 6th, 2025 13:25
• Facts Pt2 (Anthony Hanible) A lie that is a lie is like two negatives making a positive and becomes...
  December 6th, 2025 13:15
• Last words (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Judge no one. This write bounces from one time to another. Well done
  December 6th, 2025 13:12
• My Shadow Follows You (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) All things can and do change good to bad and bad to good nothing is...
  December 6th, 2025 12:31
• Journey into the revealed (Lorenz) A creation in entropy and unity in dissolution. All opposites are one and...
  December 6th, 2025 11:35
• pig stye (Tristan Robert Lange) Why are we always picking at scabs? A most interesting write Tristan where...
  December 6th, 2025 11:31
• Snot-Freeze (Matthew R. Callies) I can equate. In the past lived where lighter fluid would freeze before...
  December 6th, 2025 10:21
• Emotions (TRADMAX) Most interesting logic in this poem. A thought provoking write.
  December 6th, 2025 09:40
• Analysis (Tkatie118) Perceptions always change with time whether memory fades and distorts or...
  December 6th, 2025 09:39
• xmas robin (Jim56) Very nice Jim You must live a little south to still have robins this time...
  December 6th, 2025 09:36
• Making the Cut? (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Shamrocker you are a definite one for writing stories. Well worked and...
  December 6th, 2025 08:57
• Mindful (2781) Wow! full of metaphor indeed. I have often wondered about the issue of...
  December 6th, 2025 08:23
• Man\'s best friend (Maplespal) Man\'s best friend in this poem is all that is needed in life. A wonderful...
  December 6th, 2025 07:28
• ℳℯ𝒶𝓈𝓊𝓇ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) A beautiful thought that is well said. Nicely done
  December 6th, 2025 07:20
• This Christmas (RSM0812) A most lovely seasonal poem and greeting it is set to good rhyme and meter...
  December 6th, 2025 07:04
• Christmas. (Friendship) Such a nostalgic poem of fond memories. Christmas literally and...
  December 6th, 2025 07:03
• The Faintest Outline (Iris Nazarene) Self doubt creeps in and remains held within. What others say makes no...
  December 6th, 2025 05:31
• no flowers (Arqios) What on this earth doth cures is judged the same by the universe. A lovely...
  December 6th, 2025 05:29
• TRACES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Times come and go mines to homes, Coal to smoke. Work to leisure people...
  December 6th, 2025 04:18
• Cobalt (Katie B.) Katie this should be familiar to many, in that often we have a favorite...
  December 6th, 2025 04:15
• Night has fallen (Ethan Mikel StAmour) Loved this haiku that brings memories of many days turning twilight, dusk...
  December 6th, 2025 04:11
• Déjà vu (Kering.karim) Reflective tender words of being enthralled, entranced and obsessed with...
  December 6th, 2025 04:09
• The Awakening Beyond the Lie (Dhiman Shah) Deeply philosophical and metaphorical as well this poem deals with the...
  December 6th, 2025 04:04
• Anthem of the Russian Bandits by Savely Yadov (Ksey_Gan) Corruption, connections, collusion, criminals combine in this poem.
  December 6th, 2025 03:56
• Christ for Jews and Gentiles - OT/NT Series 8 (Orchidee) Well Orchi as I hear it there were progressive roots as far back as Isaiah...
  December 6th, 2025 03:54
• Brubeck Lives On. (Goldfinch60) I remember him from my childhood. I too loved his music. A most nostalgic...
  December 6th, 2025 03:50
• Passing By (Hacklec) Enigmatic and surreal this poem unfolds as a conversation on a bus and...
  December 5th, 2025 19:57
• A little game (called Russian roulette) (Sam.C) It reminds me of childhood when I did play games. Nicely done
  December 5th, 2025 18:29
• BURNING AFTER MIDNIGHT (David Welch) An emotional poem that speaks of spending of the night. A lovely song that...
  December 5th, 2025 18:26
• Together (Amethyste) A tender and sad poem with a longing for togetherness. Well done
  December 5th, 2025 18:23
• When I\'m gone. (Chris Duffy) This is a sad poem of missed opportunity lost time. A wonderful poem about...
  December 5th, 2025 18:21
• Exhaustion (Freyaaa) I hear the tiredness in this piece. Well done
  December 5th, 2025 16:22
• Mercedes Benz (for Janis Joplin) (Norman Flagtea) I remember that song well. Loved the song
  December 5th, 2025 16:20
• How To Survive an Argument in 15 Steps (Malo J) A poem of apologies and the first time I would agree but repeated...
  December 5th, 2025 14:35
• My gift to you (Anabasova) This poem reminds me of the gift of a child. Lovely and so innocent.
  December 5th, 2025 14:32
• PSA 🎤 (Ms.divine) Feelings expressed. An assertion of power in this write.
  December 5th, 2025 12:58
• just a random thought (Jjudaharts) Love the twist in the last line. To be funny it has to have a bit of truth
  December 5th, 2025 12:38
• Red-Ribbon Spirals (Matthew R. Callies) A holiday poem that sweetens the season. Nicely done
  December 5th, 2025 12:38
• those who burned the light✨ (Nayak) The way I took this was a cremation a funeral and the work going into the...
  December 5th, 2025 12:36
• The Epic of Saint Nicholas and Krampus (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) I loved this poem. I am not much for Christmas but it\'s legends and lore...
  December 5th, 2025 11:33
• Too Late Now (Wondergirl) A poem that pleas for a timely response. When one waits the opportunity...
  December 5th, 2025 11:29
• Stop Signs (Gray0328) What a beautiful poetic prayer Gray and although I don\'t pray this could...
  December 5th, 2025 11:05
• The lone heart beats for two (Yazz) We all feel alone at times and yet we are never alone. A lovely write that...
  December 5th, 2025 11:03
• A Small Everyday Miracle (Soheil khodaparasti) A definite fave. This poem pulls at the heartstrings for as a grandfather...
  December 5th, 2025 11:00
• Critics (Kurt Philip Behm) Another great write Kurt. A poem that holds meaning. Loved it
  December 5th, 2025 10:18
• Cult (Awam) Well written with great flow and meter as well as rhyme. The message is...
  December 5th, 2025 10:16
• Ready? (Tristan Robert Lange) All so true and more for some people than others. So well described in...
  December 5th, 2025 10:12
• Patiently waiting (William Hromada) A lovely poem that could be about a lover, spouse, friend, child or even a...
  December 5th, 2025 08:43
• Recognize. (Friendship) A most beautiful poem that encapsulates our difficulty dealing with the...
  December 5th, 2025 08:41