Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Moonsomnia (Salvia.S) One must relax to sleep and the moon looks down on those in anguish who...
  January 1st, 2025 20:51
• The Bigger Picture (Teddy.15) So true Teddy live itself is beautiful as are all of its components....
  January 1st, 2025 14:49
• Prayer (Rebellion_in_sanity) Indeed all we need is the strength to arise from our falls. Good write...
  January 1st, 2025 13:23
• For the images (Maplespal) Here the image of the sky reflected like the speaker\'s eyes in puddles...
  January 1st, 2025 08:40
• Mud Maid in Winter (Cassie58) Utterly beautiful, lovely and so well worded. This is a painting of a...
  January 1st, 2025 08:24
• Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets? (ADarkerMind) Indeed we are our own god and we are always hungry let not our beliefs...
  January 1st, 2025 06:51
• resolution time (Jim56) A great start to a new year that we will fill with actions on resolutions....
  January 1st, 2025 06:48
• Easily Fooled Again (Dan Williams) Loaded and packed with metaphor after metaphor this is a read that...
  January 1st, 2025 05:38
• The House of the Dog (David Wakeling) Loved the last line. Like Daniel in the lion\'s den. Had a dog and cat...
  January 1st, 2025 05:33
• Resolution (Tristan Robert Lange) Hopefully a year without destruction, death, rot and decay, but thinking...
  January 1st, 2025 05:28
• A Cheery Prospect? (Orchidee) Isn\'t \"Thou shalt not be ugly\" one of the ten commandments? A great...
  January 1st, 2025 05:24
• Landscapes (Lorenz) There is more to this poem than meets the eye or even the free associating...
  January 1st, 2025 05:17
• I Might Be A Lunatic (Poetic Licence) If so lunatics should rule the earth, after all we all say they do anyway....
  January 1st, 2025 05:06
• 2025 (Arqios) This sounds almost Biblical \"God is light\" in John and in the gospel of...
  January 1st, 2025 04:58
• I don\'t want a rose (Rin) Old as I am I have seen that meme. Maybe the desert rose that is a cactus...
  January 1st, 2025 04:46
• The New Year Of Love, Joy And Peace. (Goldfinch60) A picture of peace and a wish as well. Lovely Andy and a Happy New Year to...
  January 1st, 2025 04:42
• Taurean Mass (ADarkerMind) Mind boggling a fun read Happy New Year to you
  December 31st, 2024 19:07
• Let me see (Maplespal) Haunting in the most pleasant way. This poem speaks from beyond. Lovely....
  December 31st, 2024 14:35
• Tommorow is January (Cedrick) A most positive write and I\'m sure that those you believe you will...
  December 31st, 2024 14:32
• The Orange God (Thoughtless) I have driven over too many speed bumps and some of them very big. A fun...
  December 31st, 2024 13:59
• Blue is the Deepest Colour (Gray0328) Blue my favorite color type of music, true blue an honored value and at...
  December 31st, 2024 13:58
• New year (2781) A great toast to a new year. Here is wishing you and yours a most Happy...
  December 31st, 2024 13:54
• ~. Your Loves My Music, (Thad Wilk) A wonderful love sonnet with great rhyme and flow nicely done Thad
  December 31st, 2024 13:53
• I am (Tony36) A truly existential poem that asks who we are beyond our physical...
  December 31st, 2024 13:44
• bird distress (Jim56) A poem of charity and kindness toward nature. Nicely written in good...
  December 31st, 2024 13:43
• Obadiah (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Returning what one is given has been lost by many as it comes to parents...
  December 31st, 2024 07:09
• DREAM (Nephilim56) So beautifully worded this poem is ethereal and a bit haunting it drifts...
  December 31st, 2024 07:06
• Janice’s Perfection Song. (David Wakeling) Different points of view lead to different moods and actions. A most...
  December 31st, 2024 07:03
• You Stupid Motherbutter! (Mutley Ravishes) Ah the paradox of tunnel vision. Does it apply to us? I think so. A fun...
  December 31st, 2024 07:00
• My love comes with the moon (RSM0812) Selene, Artemis, Cherridwen, Isis all the moon a most beautiful poem of...
  December 31st, 2024 06:53
• Blissful Obliviousness (satire) (Teddy.15) Not speaking French I\'ll take that as good advice. As always joking I...
  December 31st, 2024 04:16
• Evil Apple Tree (Or Is It Me) (Poetic Licence) Some things thrive where others can\'t survive. a fun poem that has hidden...
  December 31st, 2024 04:13
• these are the days (Arqios) Open one\'s eyes to the glory around us and be grateful for that. Too...
  December 31st, 2024 04:09
• The Last Poem This Year. (Goldfinch60) A great piece of advice Gold and here is to wishing you a wonderful and...
  December 31st, 2024 04:06
• You wouldn\'t understand (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Trauma can gag us and bind the brain as well. Sad but when the brain is...
  December 31st, 2024 04:03
• Real or Fake (Demar Desu) The touch of skin once a sin now can no longer be felt except through...
  December 31st, 2024 03:59
• Calibration (John Prophet) Tis seems a free flow of thought similar to an old psychoanalytic tool...
  December 31st, 2024 03:57
• The imaginary (Ellen Marsell) Most beautiful turning of trash to treasure and the recycling of old to...
  December 30th, 2024 15:26
• Questions (Maplespal) Questions that many have asked but no one has answered. Questions that...
  December 30th, 2024 13:40
• The Tasty Toker! - Limericks - (Thad Wilk) Another bit of levity to lighten the day. Loved it my friend
  December 30th, 2024 10:30
• Fido Musing (Orchidee) I too am perplexed by humans as if a needleless tree is not good enough...
  December 30th, 2024 10:25
• Pottersville (Tristan Robert Lange) Some would like us to believe that we live in a black and white world...
  December 30th, 2024 10:15
• Brothers in Arms (Tony36) Brothers we are indeed and though we may not have the same blood it is all...
  December 30th, 2024 10:04
• bluebird a tribute to donald (Jim56) A tribute indeed and a most interesting junction between the boat and the...
  December 30th, 2024 07:47
• New year 2025 (NafisaSB) A timely wish for a new year full of hope and brightness. Very nice
  December 30th, 2024 07:45
• A Touch of Class (Teddy.15) A superstar and hot but still bashful and timid many are you know. On...
  December 30th, 2024 07:43
• The Sermon on the Hill. (David Wakeling) Reminiscent of Mark Twains war prayer this work shines with sarcasm and in...
  December 30th, 2024 05:06
• I Have a GUN ( But we can talk) (Poetic Licence) War as old as man relies on social compliance and the following of the...
  December 30th, 2024 05:01
• UNKNOWN TO MAN (Michael Edwards) Masterfully worded in a classic form it beats with the rhythm of a heart...
  December 30th, 2024 04:50
• I love my wife (Demar Desu) A clever use of language to make an important point. Language quietly...
  December 30th, 2024 04:42
• LOVE WITHOUT MEASURE (Bobby O) Bobby this poem captures the heart in its rhyme, flow but most of all its...
  December 30th, 2024 04:38
• Five Years Ago Today Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I have not lived with it Andy but I have worked with it for many years in...
  December 30th, 2024 04:31
• How Foolish We Are (Bella Shepard) Beautiful and true a great Haiku or should I say Senryu. Loved it Bella
  December 29th, 2024 16:12
• Did You ever Hear about the... (Jerry Reynolds) Typical of most fear not of potential consequences but of public opinion....
  December 29th, 2024 16:09
• Cozy (Thoughtless) BLT\'s are delicious even in the morning. I always was partial to pig skin...
  December 29th, 2024 13:57
• Depressing (2781) Suicide passes through most people\'s mind at one time or another most of...
  December 29th, 2024 13:55
• You Melt My Heart ~` (Thad Wilk) A proclamation of love if I ever heard one. Hope the one that it is...
  December 29th, 2024 13:50
• Take a walk (Tony36) Carpe Diem is the old saying and it applies well here. I do that each day...
  December 29th, 2024 13:48
• Mother Nature (DLewis88) A lovely look at the mother of us all. Very nicely written
  December 29th, 2024 08:16
• Come inside (Maplespal) An invitation to inner exploration a gentle call to one and all to not...
  December 29th, 2024 08:15
• Odelia (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Your stories contain internal rhyme and near rhyme that make them flow...
  December 29th, 2024 08:12
• Depth of Height (Tristan Robert Lange) A wonderful Haiku for the New Year. Very nicely constructed
  December 29th, 2024 08:09
• another year ahead (Jim56) A great New Year resolution and advice to all. Very nicely said my friend
  December 29th, 2024 08:08
• How Green The Tundra Sleeps (ADarkerMind) To sleep green has a nice feel to it. Fresh, new, peaceful, growing,...
  December 29th, 2024 05:39
• Soul Search (Teddy.15) Becoming one with one\'s totem is essential to happiness and completion....
  December 29th, 2024 05:35
• third wheel (Arqios) This is too true to be comfortable Cryptic and yet it sprouts from the pen...
  December 29th, 2024 05:30
• Trio of Chuckles (Poetic Licence) Limericks always bring a smile my favorite the first that reminded me of...
  December 29th, 2024 05:26
• A load of more rubbish! (Orchidee) Ah Orchi can\'t be worse than last year and I\'ll bet that if you keep...
  December 29th, 2024 05:24
• The Horse With the Red Umbrella (Neville) A note of sweet sadness, but that is not the proper word, it also contains...
  December 29th, 2024 05:21
• LIMERICKS 134 & 135 (Michael Edwards) Ah Michael your limericks always brighten my day and put a smile on my...
  December 29th, 2024 05:13
• Penelope and the Sparrow. (David Wakeling) Those that love give those that pretend to love take. Those that are wise...
  December 29th, 2024 05:11
• Loneliness; the unwelcomed guest (Domilla) A most existential write with powerful questions that the reader has to...
  December 29th, 2024 05:07
• Valleys New Years Eve 1955. (Jan bach) We are built layer upon layer with the bricks of memory may they be solid...
  December 29th, 2024 05:02
• Life on the Clouds (Thomas W Case) Wonderful images painted in this poem that give it that surreal feel Very...
  December 29th, 2024 04:53
• Passed Mistakes. (Goldfinch60) What a powerful message. How can we expect others to forgive us if we do...
  December 29th, 2024 04:45
• Random Excuses (Dan Williams) These ring as if out of a new book of Proverbs exposing half truths buried...
  December 29th, 2024 04:41
• Free to be free! (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Lovely thoughts in words don\'t wait to be you or free be so now and...
  December 28th, 2024 17:02
• History (Teddy.15) Nicely done Teddy love can conquer grief of loss and is fertile ground for...
  December 28th, 2024 17:00
• Deep howls and melodies (Domilla) Play it forward seems to be the message of this poem. A lovely message in...
  December 28th, 2024 12:42
• Keep Away From Bognor Regis (ADarkerMind) Does this mean I\'m being run out of Sussex? An intriguing write my friend...
  December 28th, 2024 12:39
• All Of The Above! ~` (Thad Wilk) A most lovely declaration of love written in great verse
  December 28th, 2024 12:36
• A Sonnet on Scroogery (Tristan Robert Lange) Now I have to say that I have never heard a sonnet about the grinch like...
  December 28th, 2024 12:31
• grappling with Today (Arqios) Such a positive and true message. We live in the moment the only thing we...
  December 28th, 2024 12:28
• different minds (Jim56) A beautiful message that encompasses my writing and feelings as well. Well...
  December 28th, 2024 12:23
• Other suns (Maplespal) Literally a message to all to take care of where we live and...
  December 28th, 2024 12:21
• Cooking (Tony36) So visceral and sensual in a physical sense it tastes good Tony
  December 28th, 2024 12:18
• Wet lips. (David Wakeling) Becoming one with nature is a wonderful thing. A beautiful poem of joining...
  December 28th, 2024 04:53
• Take What`s Left (Poetic Licence) When one is deprived of all one has then it is an opportunity for a new...
  December 28th, 2024 04:50
• To know (2781) This poem has a great flow and cadence with rhyme that holds it all...
  December 28th, 2024 04:47
• Masterpieces (Neville) A poem with a twist a play in the words that reverses the initial take and...
  December 28th, 2024 04:44
• Holy Innocents Horror (Orchidee) A dark hymn indeed as always nicely worded
  December 28th, 2024 04:37
• Love To Eternity. (Goldfinch60) A lovely tribute to a love held dear. May that love be with you always
  December 28th, 2024 04:32
• The Redundant Rose (Starbeam.antarctica) Deep meaning of metaphor in this short piece. It rings true.
  December 27th, 2024 14:42
• Love Is Everywhere I Go (Esrathedumbies) Great images and the picture presented for this poem was amazing and went...
  December 27th, 2024 14:41
• I will stick it through. (Job Welime) A poem, a pledge and vow that calls out to the other for faith and unity...
  December 27th, 2024 14:38
• Bare Skin (Ksenija Ostojić) Men and women often look for different things in a relationship and both...
  December 27th, 2024 14:36
• A HALL FULL OF PEOPLE (Kashish) Phantom of the hall. I think that we all have seen this person at one time...
  December 27th, 2024 14:34
• Pass (Thoughtless) Got the message and a fun and clever read it was. Short and to the point...
  December 27th, 2024 14:31
• MIDNIGHT ANGEL (Nephilim56) A beautiful picture painted by this poem. Great images and very nice rhyme...
  December 27th, 2024 14:30
• Faith (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A marvelous poem with great rhyme and cadence as well as a most wonderful...
  December 27th, 2024 14:25