Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Daffodils Of Yellow (Ajon4wheels) Close observation and respect for nature are evident in this poem....
  March 1st, 2025 04:48
• Gravity between us (Amy Michelle Mosier) Here metaphor meets love and one thinks of how spacy one feels when in...
  March 1st, 2025 04:45
• Scotch Tape Sweepstakes (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Never thought I would see a poem about a book cover just goes to show that...
  March 1st, 2025 04:42
• i/o (AnxiousMane) A clever write with great word usage and so much said in so few words....
  March 1st, 2025 04:37
• It Is Still Love (Teddy.15) A recognition of the good and sad in even love but all is resolved in the...
  March 1st, 2025 04:35
• Creation Praise (Orchidee) Another great hymn of praise. I always wondered Orchi why so much time was...
  March 1st, 2025 04:32
• That Place Called Home. (Goldfinch60) A warm place that leaves a warm feeling and whether there or not it always...
  March 1st, 2025 04:27
• My Dog\'s Revenge (Randyjohnson71) This one made me chuckle and that is worth a fave. A fun read
  February 28th, 2025 21:27
• Lines on a Railway Station (Kevin Hulme) A lovely write in rhyme and good meter I think it is the nostalgia of the...
  February 28th, 2025 21:25
• NBA 2k25 (Demar Desu) A fun Senryu. It seems that all games have deteriorated over the years to...
  February 28th, 2025 21:21
• Passionless (RefugeInRain) This poem leaves a feeling of being stuck somehow and the need for motion....
  February 28th, 2025 21:20
• You (Ofentsevictoriousthomas) I feel fond memories in this poem as if remembering a grandparent or maybe...
  February 28th, 2025 21:18
• Am I Enough (Dev Parth) A poem that speaks to being oneself. A lovely write about finding oneself...
  February 28th, 2025 19:08
• Dark writer??? (Pineapple_pizza018) Such a sense of loss. Feelings of being robbed of oneself. Drugged and...
  February 28th, 2025 19:05
• growing (Lunarchloedip) A poem of growth that at times is painful or difficult but blooms. A...
  February 28th, 2025 19:00
• “Impressionist” (Peanut) Beautiful! A lovely write of under estimating oneself and surprise when...
  February 28th, 2025 18:58
• Without dreams we have nothing (Poetaldo) Change and acceptance of it seems to be the theme of this poem. I get the...
  February 28th, 2025 18:55
• i care (Sheta) To love someone requires energy but it defies the laws of entropy by...
  February 28th, 2025 13:30
• These Eyes (Anthony Hanible) A powerful write of enough being enough. Well written
  February 28th, 2025 13:29
• A Poet\'s Heart (Newt) It is true that with our senses and brain we as poets paint the world in...
  February 28th, 2025 13:27
• ...Where Tomorrow Never Truly Comes (Cheeky Missy) Chic another two great poems this time with no food and I was prepared to...
  February 28th, 2025 13:06
• the lessons we swallow (Gray0328) There is a positive side to every coin and even the most difficult has...
  February 28th, 2025 11:19
• Death\'s Indenture (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) This has wonderful lines that draw the reader along. Very nice
  February 28th, 2025 10:28
• The American Dream (Truskiad) The melding of fruit to love to religion. A wonderful write
  February 28th, 2025 10:24
• Plan Éternel (Whats write for me) Well written in form of faith. The Bible has its own poetry.
  February 28th, 2025 10:22
• Beyond The Veils (John Prophet) So true at least they say. A concept that holds true for physics, society...
  February 28th, 2025 08:37
• Race night (Tony36) Whether a metaphor for the race to the weekend or literal it is a great...
  February 28th, 2025 08:34
• Epilogue (Lorenz) Such a blend of metaphor and real in this poem loved it
  February 28th, 2025 08:32
• Lament of the Last Leaf (Salvia.S) This poem is tightly woven. Memories, echoes, time, beauty are all...
  February 28th, 2025 08:21
• Call This What You Will, I Call It Misogyny (Tristan Robert Lange) A noble poem for those that are least likely to read it, a message for...
  February 28th, 2025 08:11
• The last 3 of the River story (Maplespal) Each with its own form of sadness, forlorn they cast shadows and darken....
  February 28th, 2025 06:49
• This Is the Start (Paul Gerard Reed) Great metaphors contained in this piece. A lovely write of rejuvenation
  February 28th, 2025 06:42
• dog company (Jim56) A tribute to man\'s best friend and what more could one ask. Very nice Jim
  February 28th, 2025 05:56
• The Tree That Grieves (Ajon4wheels) The cycle of life presented here in metaphor children representing new...
  February 28th, 2025 04:32
• Only Rose (Reynaldo Casison) A romance with words, pouring images sensuous, over natures beauty. Very...
  February 28th, 2025 04:30
• To Be Alone (Poetic Licence) With so much struggle to be with others we all find in the end that we are...
  February 28th, 2025 04:28
• ANOTHER MILE (Nephilim56) Memory fades slowly and once imprinted carries its mark. A wistful and...
  February 28th, 2025 04:25
• Deep Water Harbor (Mutley Ravishes) Full of metaphor this one falls back on mythology to aid its course and so...
  February 28th, 2025 04:23
• The Flower and Me. (Junes) A beautiful write that touches the heart and for that I give it a fave....
  February 28th, 2025 04:21
• untitled 575 ( what lingers on ) (Arqios) Lovely poetic metaphors play in this poem of musical images a painting of...
  February 28th, 2025 04:18
• The Beauty Of The New Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A most beautiful sonnet Andy. It lightens the heart and turns ones...
  February 28th, 2025 04:16
• poetry the gateway drug (MR.apocalypse) A fun read of rhyme the question is what the poet is moving on to.
  February 28th, 2025 04:06
• Rule morning (Funmiwrites) It is early morning here and the sun is just starting to brighten the...
  February 28th, 2025 04:04
• I, II, III (Beccadeepinside) This write was powerful and highly emotional pulling at the heart strings....
  February 28th, 2025 04:00
• Tremble (Beccadeepinside) You have a powerful piece here with a great theme and you have chosen a...
  February 28th, 2025 03:42
• Back Roads (MDStone) There is a lot to be said for back roads. I have taken many in my life....
  February 28th, 2025 03:34
• In ten years... (Weep little lion girl) Poetry can be therapy, it can give direction, it can be dreams. A lovely...
  February 28th, 2025 03:30
• Night And Day (Kurtis77) Teenage fun described in this poem. This takes me back creating a lot of...
  February 27th, 2025 19:41
• \" Love Without Stir \" (Shlok kumar author) A definite love poem as each line reinforces this. Nicely written in a...
  February 27th, 2025 19:38
• My Love My Love (Anthony Hanible) It is a difficult thing to loose something. This is well expressed in this...
  February 27th, 2025 19:32
• The Tide Pool (Thomas W Case) Such a recognition of our place in this universe. A most wonderful write...
  February 27th, 2025 14:49
• Stay Forever Young (Paul Gerard Reed) A great message and well written. Very nice
  February 27th, 2025 14:39
• Silent in the Crowd (Rawaneigh.99) Heartfelt and sad this poem pulls at the heartstrings and is very well...
  February 27th, 2025 14:37
• “Sunset Sorrow” (Peanut) A sad but beautiful sonnet about being left. So well written it pulls at...
  February 27th, 2025 14:34
• what\'s fair (Newt) This poem is the sprouting of a shoot of empathy in barren ground. A...
  February 27th, 2025 14:31
• internet! What have you done! (Demar Desu) The good and bad all things have. This is portrayed in this poem. Yes we...
  February 27th, 2025 14:30
• sleepless nights (NinjaGirl) Cryptic is this poem. The rhyme holds me like a magnet and it rolls on...
  February 27th, 2025 14:26
• On The Other Side Of Something (ADarkerMind) Now Melvin this one pulled me in and as it drifts with glimpses of meaning...
  February 27th, 2025 14:24
• Remind Me of Satin and Blushing, Will You? (Cheeky Missy) Such beautiful words and images of nature and how well written. But of...
  February 27th, 2025 14:19
• heroine (Yazdan000) I get the feeling of a love poem in this and one that develops and grows...
  February 27th, 2025 14:15
• Autumn’s Scents (Ajon4wheels) We are all a part of nature and it a part of us as well stated in this...
  February 27th, 2025 14:12
• la tilma (Lorenz) Historical roots to this poem of reckoning for past injustices and their...
  February 27th, 2025 13:12
• Dear depression (Pineapple_pizza018) Raw emotion expressed in this poem that questions the validity of going on...
  February 27th, 2025 13:09
• Calling The Future (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) As always you are able to encompass so much in so few words. Lovely
  February 27th, 2025 11:56
• Pop Tarts at Night (Whats write for me) Many poems are songs and lyrics are part of the emotion music does the...
  February 27th, 2025 09:27
• Arguing And Animosity (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A questioning poem that is thought provoking. Very nicely written
  February 27th, 2025 08:48
• Worth (Tkatie118) Unconventional in its wording it like a southpaw delivers a knockout...
  February 27th, 2025 08:47
• sitting at the café (Tristan Robert Lange) Such a senryu I always love when I read something that touches me and I...
  February 27th, 2025 08:44
• You (Tony36) A beautiful write about one that is so important in your life. We all have...
  February 27th, 2025 08:42
• Goodbye Gene Hackman (Randyjohnson71) A tribute deserved and he will be missed. We all must pass but each time...
  February 27th, 2025 08:39
• Staying home (Maplespal) Ghosts have a way of haunting our memories. A most lovely write
  February 27th, 2025 06:53
• spring morn (Jim56) The sounds, colors of spring so welcome after a long winter night. A type...
  February 27th, 2025 06:52
• I Wish (Melancholic~Onion) More common than what people think. The desire to be nothing. Well put in...
  February 27th, 2025 06:50
• The Heart of the Innocent (Gray0328) A most interesting write and truth in its simplicity reveals the face of a...
  February 27th, 2025 05:10
• NIGHTMARE (Nephilim56) This seems to me a commentary on nightmares itself. Metaphor and more....
  February 27th, 2025 04:42
• Cobra Chemistry (Mutley Ravishes) I suppose with infrared vision more heat more detectable. A fun read with...
  February 27th, 2025 04:40
• In the future to come???????? (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Question after question all with no answer because the future can not be...
  February 27th, 2025 04:38
• If i Were Made Off Glass (Poetic Licence) Crystal clear this poem. A lovely thought to puzzle over. Many a time I...
  February 27th, 2025 04:37
• when echo lost its shadow (Arqios) Loved the use of nouns and adjectives as entities. A most poetic use of...
  February 27th, 2025 04:35
• Sadness (Sheta) Courageous, faithful, stalwart in an unrequited love. A lovely write
  February 27th, 2025 04:27
• Anochecer (Josef) Most beautiful a love poem with great imagery from the orange blossom...
  February 27th, 2025 04:25
• The Bar (MDStone) There are those friendly bars and then there are those that are not so...
  February 27th, 2025 04:22
• Junk (James Michael) Short and sweet it makes its point. How often is trash pick up?
  February 27th, 2025 04:19
• Luminous Love (Reynaldo Casison) Bejeweled metaphor in this piece that sparkles and gleams. Nicely done
  February 27th, 2025 04:18
• The New Jacques Loussier. (Goldfinch60) Mozart would have been proud. Improvisation of jazz with the formal...
  February 27th, 2025 04:14
• As the days go by (Hey!) A poem of sadness and suffering feeling isolated and put down by others...
  February 26th, 2025 21:27
• Sir Nigel Crisp (Kevin Hulme) This was a pure fun poem that put a smile on my face and for that I give...
  February 26th, 2025 21:22
• \"Meadow Melancholia\" (Peanut) Every thing has its place and as a plant it may grow amongst the other...
  February 26th, 2025 19:44
• Red Waves (Mutley Ravishes) A poem full of metaphor and well written as well.
  February 26th, 2025 18:20
• not anymore (Sheta) Relationships can be complicated. Time schedules do not always align and...
  February 26th, 2025 18:18
• Am I lost? Or is this a dream (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) This write has a surreal feel to it like coming out of a dream still not...
  February 26th, 2025 18:12
• 06.16.2022 5:31am (Kylie Haynes) A recognition of how we get to places we never intend to in this life and...
  February 26th, 2025 18:09
• Sweet Succubus (Lambsacrificed) Here I hear a metaphor of men and women alike that tell themselves that...
  February 26th, 2025 18:05
• Ukulele Smile (Distant View) Music is powerful and can change a mood. Very nicely stated in words that...
  February 26th, 2025 16:15
• the feeling noone feels (Xqw) A lovely use of space, nothingness to create an atmosphere and that hush...
  February 26th, 2025 16:14
• A List of Do’s and Don’t’s (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A most important message that all need to hear. Well stated loving your...
  February 26th, 2025 16:11
• Mississippi (Pineapple_pizza018) We are all a product of our past and where and how we were raised. More we...
  February 26th, 2025 16:05
• Distance (Caring dove) Loneliness the theme for this poem. There is a feeling of isolation and...
  February 26th, 2025 15:16
• Happiness & Joy (𓆩Mase𓆪) A great point said poetically and in such a nice way. Loved it
  February 26th, 2025 14:29
• Footnotes (Kurt Philip Behm) So true indeed history has a faulty memory and it can be selective at...
  February 26th, 2025 14:27