Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Eternal Journey (Rebellion_in_sanity) You have captured in this poem manyof my feelings might I say beleifs and...
  October 11th, 2024 07:48
• In Love With The Party Flag (Rebellion_in_sanity) Too many follow the crowd. Too many look to be a hero without knowing what...
  October 11th, 2024 07:36
• be-lightedly (Arqios) Criptic this is a metaphor so applicable to many things from romance to...
  October 11th, 2024 07:29
• Music Creation Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) What I find most intriguing is how modern composers borrow, beg or steal...
  October 11th, 2024 05:46
• The Catch in A Love Song .. & Upon Turning the Other Cheek (Neville) Two for one what a bargain. The first hit me as so typical of...
  October 11th, 2024 05:41
• ~> Yosemite Sam I am! (Thad Wilk) Got to fave this one for memories of childhood and how fun it was to read....
  October 11th, 2024 05:29
• The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes. (David Wakeling) The pheonix baptized in fire ashes to ashes and dust to dust then...
  October 10th, 2024 20:25
• Roll Nonchalance Across Yer Tongue (Cheeky Missy) A fun read of several thoughts.
  October 10th, 2024 20:19
• the garbage man (Gray0328) Recycling now days is the word. One man\'s trash is another man\'s
  October 10th, 2024 20:07
• ~> Pick Your Painted Horse! (Thad Wilk) So right life is a circle in more ways than one and at times provides us...
  October 10th, 2024 20:04
• we all have to live (Jim56) Experience of live and there is nothing that teaches better than first...
  October 10th, 2024 20:01
• Fit For Purpose (Neville) The blues of a rainy day accompanied by blues is my choice. Drinking can...
  October 10th, 2024 19:59
• no longer spectral, Brontës shall remain (Arqios) Etched in stone can still be altered by someone else and memories can be...
  October 10th, 2024 19:52
• THUNDERING (Qurrathul Ain) Deep meaning in this poem that requires reflection to see the light that...
  October 10th, 2024 19:48
• This old barn (Tony36) A lovely poem reminding me of childhood in my grandfather\'s barn.
  October 10th, 2024 13:42
• Dream (MaxSmith) Seductive, errotic, sensuous you\'re going to arrouse the crowd. Nicely...
  October 10th, 2024 11:51
• Hello Again, It\'s Me (Cheeky Missy) Twill upset you but this reminds me of Lewis Carrol, one of my favorite...
  October 10th, 2024 07:35
• John and I (Teddy.15) Well happy birthday and no John had Yoko Ono to figure out the finance. A...
  October 10th, 2024 05:35
• No Such Light (Teddy.15) This raven has been haunting you for some time now. Ghosts wroght upon the...
  October 10th, 2024 05:32
• Earth\'s Birth Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) You accomplished your promise in several past responses and now you have...
  October 10th, 2024 05:23
• A Little Girl (Sunshine777) Sad story where the best steal is that that is tempered.
  October 10th, 2024 05:18
• LET GO (Qurrathul Ain) Never let go of dreams, that is where the road ends. Your poem speaks to...
  October 9th, 2024 20:10
• -x- Look up -x- (MaxSmith) Love the first line \"The absence of light blinding\" The essence of this...
  October 9th, 2024 15:49
• ~> Lord Hear My Plea! (Thad Wilk) From the words of Job to those of Jesus pleas to take away the cup but no,...
  October 9th, 2024 11:01
• The Rider (Peet) The flavor of the old west. Born and raised in the west it has appeal to...
  October 9th, 2024 10:51
• Another Rain (Blessing Awoniyi) I loved this poem full of rich tradition. Not so far from western beliefs...
  October 9th, 2024 10:46
• Afraid (John Prophet) I agree but this won\'t occur until we as a species value others more than...
  October 9th, 2024 08:58
• Poetry is (Tony36) I agree poetry is all those things. All that touches the heart is poetry
  October 9th, 2024 08:54
• robin beauty (Jim56) Love birds and am familiar with the robin since childhood. A pleasent poem...
  October 9th, 2024 08:53
• Time To Grieve (Orchidee) Glad you mentioned KP and Fido that\'s a good sign. You can\'t leave out...
  October 9th, 2024 05:28
• Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self (Neville) In our rush to get nowhere we miss the sensual pleasures of life. Taking...
  October 9th, 2024 05:15
• A Rare Edition (Arqios) A fun read and a great tribute to a great poet. Funny how as time passes...
  October 9th, 2024 05:05
• The Steps Of Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Love your sonnets Andy and this one is a good one reflective of a life...
  October 9th, 2024 04:46
• Things Fell Down (Dan Williams) The feeling that I get from this poem is that neglect contributes to decay...
  October 9th, 2024 04:43
• the invention of hell (Gray0328) A powerful message sent clearly. Well said
  October 8th, 2024 20:36
• In Service To ... (Kurt Philip Behm) Once again an great message written concisely and nicely
  October 8th, 2024 20:34
• ~> and the rain fell in torrents (free verse) (Thad Wilk) Great analogy and a good message as well. Nicely done Thad
  October 8th, 2024 20:32
• Writing (Tony36) That is one way to do it Tony. With me usually the dam breaks and after...
  October 8th, 2024 20:31
• A love letter to Palaiseau (Ladywithaquill) A lovely poem of attachment to a place now embedded in the heart. Use of...
  October 8th, 2024 16:01
• Star Gazing (MaxSmith) A romantic, sensuous poem written with great imagery and an enticing entry...
  October 8th, 2024 15:32
• Prayer And Peace (Orchidee)
  October 8th, 2024 15:16
• Prayer And Peace (Orchidee) Good write Orchi it is good not to be anxious
  October 8th, 2024 15:16
• ( TSA ) ribald viscosity (Arqios) Powerful words said with force. Lack of trust is hard to rebuild. The last...
  October 8th, 2024 10:14
• Dance Of Question (Dev Parth) Asking questions aids in understanding be it social, intellectual,...
  October 8th, 2024 06:33
• Spiderlace (Dan Williams) Some great images and lines here. Spiderweb of lace very impactful with...
  October 8th, 2024 06:30
• autumn art (Jim56) Well Jim you and I are on the same page (or should I say same leaf) today....
  October 8th, 2024 06:27
• Just As Sunsets (Neville) Very sensual as well as beautiful but melancholic with a sense of sadness...
  October 8th, 2024 06:25
• I Know You Didn\'t Ask, but Here You Go (Cheeky Missy) Brilliant!! I love the creative multiple possibilities of this read....
  October 8th, 2024 06:21
• My Alice (Thomas W Case) A great use of Alice through the looking glass images in this poem. Fun to...
  October 8th, 2024 06:18
• The Lucky (Peet) A rally call to all. Be as a child without prejudice and with energy and...
  October 8th, 2024 06:15
• Tomorrow Will Come. (Goldfinch60) Good advice my friend and if taken will lead to good days. Very nice Andy
  October 8th, 2024 06:11
• ~. SPRING - (double Acrostic) (Thad Wilk) Creative and inovative with good rhyme and consistent theme. Well done.
  October 7th, 2024 19:30
• I am just a shadow (Markashley1961) A poem of humility that there is far too little of now days. A poem of...
  October 7th, 2024 07:13
• The Colorful Blood of Fall (A.H. Browning) Brilliant! A most beautiful and heart felt write that takes the reader...
  October 7th, 2024 05:00
• Benign Bridges (Neville) Not a bad idea to throw them off the bridge. No wars are not worth...
  October 7th, 2024 04:53
• Each New Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A most positive attitude to start the day and with a pleasent flow and...
  October 7th, 2024 04:48
• Seeking Revenge (Dan Williams) I believe in forgiveness for the good of the forgiver but all things have...
  October 7th, 2024 04:45
• being an npc in their story (Arqios) Now here my friend you have tapped into multiple meanings from not...
  October 7th, 2024 04:40
• Mad Dog in America (Neville) A true portrayal of American history and its expantion then deterioration...
  October 6th, 2024 19:16
• Our Bitter End (Tristan Robert Lange) The seasons of life contained in this poem. Nicely worded
  October 6th, 2024 19:05
• unconditional love (Jim56) Mother\'s are the first that come to mind but father\'s too can have this...
  October 6th, 2024 18:54
• Forest (Tony36) I\'m with you. I love spending time in nature. Well written
  October 6th, 2024 18:52
• ~> Let\'s Fly Away (Thad Wilk) Nicely done as a pledge of love.
  October 6th, 2024 18:51
• by fiction of pen (Arqios) Beautiful words my friend so poetic in form and word.
  October 6th, 2024 18:40
• look out tomorrow (Arqios) A serious situation that I certainly hope works out well. My best wishes...
  October 6th, 2024 18:30
• Empathy, Sympathy and Compassion (David Wakeling) A parable with inset menings. Nicely written it keeps the reader engagued...
  October 6th, 2024 05:50
• Compassionate Concern (Orchidee) Belief is a powerful thing and can accomplish things unimaginable.Nicely...
  October 6th, 2024 05:46
• Oh Dear! (Doggerel Dave) What do you do when you\'ve got two friends fighting?
  October 6th, 2024 05:44
• verse on a hill (Arqios) Beautifully done Cryptic. Line after line building toward a meaningful...
  October 6th, 2024 05:41
• Back In The Day. (Goldfinch60) Why did beer seem to taste better then? Reminising things always take on a...
  October 6th, 2024 05:29
• In the U.S.A. (Dan Williams) Glad to hear that no sheep were harmed but I do love lamb chops. To lie is...
  October 6th, 2024 05:23
• Masquerade (Tristan Robert Lange) On death row they would say dead man walking and so are we all from the...
  October 5th, 2024 21:38
• Searching (2781) Turn the other cheek and forgive is the commandment. Love thy neighbor ...
  October 5th, 2024 11:38
• Gitanes (Neville) Errotic yet as ephemeral as that smoke from the cigarette while the noir...
  October 5th, 2024 06:17
• lifes changes (Jim56) Dizzying in its spin accepting what comes is esier than fighting the...
  October 5th, 2024 06:12
• The ghost that saves. (David Wakeling) Beautiful words!
  October 5th, 2024 06:10
• Wasted Moments (Kurt Philip Behm) Nicely said another piece of wisdom well said.
  October 5th, 2024 06:08
• Emily goes for a walk. (David Wakeling) As we take the walk through the maze of life we may loose our memory in...
  October 5th, 2024 06:06
• Gaea’s Garden    (Neville) Ingeniously put Uranus being born of Gaea earth from earth so to speak...
  October 5th, 2024 06:00
• Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60) A lovely write where gratitude is the cornerstone to happieness. Lovely...
  October 5th, 2024 05:46
• Night Watchman (Dan Williams) When young I worked both swing and graveyard shifts and relate to this...
  October 5th, 2024 05:42
• ~> I\'m Sailing Home, To You My Love - (Thad Wilk) A pledge of love offered in very smooth verse and good meter. A sonnet...
  October 5th, 2024 05:35
• The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying (Thomas W Case) Now Thomas you outdid yourself with this gem. I\'m going to start calling...
  October 4th, 2024 17:29
• Holding On; Being Held (Orchidee) A good message and very good write.
  October 4th, 2024 13:11
• Twain will meet.. (NafisaSB) Ambition and arrogance are a major human flaw that can lead to a...
  October 4th, 2024 05:14
• Walking By Our River Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Very nice Andy rivers hold a special place of beauty and serenity. moving...
  October 4th, 2024 05:10
• No Trick to This (Dan Williams) Another twist to the Irish blessing \"May the road rise up to meet you....
  October 4th, 2024 05:06
• Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling) This paints a beautiful picture in the mind and I picture dream in an...
  October 4th, 2024 04:59
• A Matter of Faith (Orchidee) Whether true or not this view is most helpful if taken. A positive outlook...
  October 3rd, 2024 04:45
• Keep Me from Sleep (Dan Williams) Several great lines in this poem but my favorite are the last two lines....
  October 3rd, 2024 04:42
• Yasmen takes her Hajib off. (David Wakeling) Powerful!! Many of us rebel against our past and its origins. A great...
  October 3rd, 2024 04:39
• Echoing across (Maplespal) Obcessive preoccupation that comes with seperation or loss. Touching
  October 3rd, 2024 04:35
• dream slices (Arqios) Beautiful words to accompany stunning images my friend
  October 3rd, 2024 04:33
• This Is Truly a Little Pickle... (Cheeky Missy) A fun read I always liked the writings of Lewis Carrol
  October 3rd, 2024 04:31
• Grandfather\'s Clock. (Goldfinch60) Classic reminding me of the old child\'s song \"My grandfather\'s clock\"...
  October 3rd, 2024 04:27
• what came first? (ADarkerMind) Duality and the questioning of where one ends and the other begins. A fun...
  October 2nd, 2024 05:01
• Fallen Giants Land (Dan Williams) Most metaphoric Dan it took two reads but I think I got it.
  October 2nd, 2024 04:48
• The Reason Why Colours Make Out (Neville) Beautifully crafted both the imagery and the subtle rhyme within. It began...
  October 2nd, 2024 04:41
• Covid Visit (Doggerel Dave) Dave this is the first poem I\'ve seen as notice of illness and well done...
  October 2nd, 2024 04:36
• Music In Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Indeed it is true Andy music of all types to cheer, energize, give hope....
  October 2nd, 2024 04:34