Comments on community poems by WriteBeLight

• White Christmas (Reivax Camlost) I re-read, and I feel the same, really. Although, alone on a bench, he is...
  December 23rd, 2016 05:40
• Not Silly (Izzi Lynn) Could apply to a lot of things in life. So sorry about your favorite...
  December 22nd, 2016 19:01
• White Christmas (Reivax Camlost) Very sweet Christmas message!
  December 22nd, 2016 18:59
• Wind And Tide (SabreLi) I feel frustration in this. I would want to help them, but know that I...
  December 22nd, 2016 18:53
• Stored small caverns (Elsiewarrenswords) I think it is because of texting...haha. I like the idea behind your poem....
  December 22nd, 2016 16:53
• Short Stories (Shahla Latifi) Great story about closure and new beginnings!
  December 22nd, 2016 15:03
• Afraid (Christina K) Great expression of a lack of confidence. But, this poem is full of talent...
  December 22nd, 2016 14:58
• #46- She Deserves Better (Mads) He sounds like the, \"I\'m sorry you made me beat you,\" type....
  December 22nd, 2016 13:02
• Heavens To Own (Kurt Philip Behm) Beautiful! Merry Christmas!
  December 22nd, 2016 12:17
• Family (Willyweed) Wonderful, comforting and so important. The world needs those words spoken...
  December 22nd, 2016 11:38
• Christmas time (Tony36) Sounds a lot like Christmas to me! Wonderful work!
  December 22nd, 2016 11:32
• Hysteria (Augustus) FEAR is false evidence appearing real. I couldn\'t agree more Augustus!...
  December 22nd, 2016 10:25
• Merry Christmas from Me to You (Moontigerntn) Beautiful Christmas message! I wish the same to you!
  December 22nd, 2016 05:06
• Stay (WildMoonChild) Last line says it all. Very touching poem. Wonderful job.
  December 22nd, 2016 05:01
• Memories of last night (Daniel) I can relate to this poem. I try to improve myself everyday, because I...
  December 22nd, 2016 04:59
• Yourself ???? (P.H.Rose) Very important questions to ask ourselves. Nice work.
  December 22nd, 2016 04:58
• Grains of Sand. (Zwitterion) Beautiful poem.
  December 22nd, 2016 04:56
• multi levels of writing (Avigail) We all edit. I always like to leave and come back in an hour or a day or a...
  December 21st, 2016 20:05
• She Still Finds A Way (Brooklyn6timesplus) You are such a positive force! Hope you have the best of all Holidays and...
  December 21st, 2016 20:00
• Mama (Gelyn) I cut and pasted it to translate into English and discovered such a sweet...
  December 21st, 2016 14:43
• Grief (Myinnervoice) I can feel, in your writing, the despair of the loss. Very well done!
  December 21st, 2016 14:40
• Sister (Tony36) I could see the character you imagined shaking his fist as I read this!...
  December 21st, 2016 13:42
• cold water flat (Willyweed) You kept me on the edge of my seat! I very much enjoyed the funny lines...
  December 21st, 2016 11:56
• My friend... (P.H.Rose) So charming and sweet!
  December 21st, 2016 06:51
• Pickle parade (Elsiewarrenswords) Put it down on paper! Like the idea of your poem...:)
  December 21st, 2016 06:50
• The Impulse. (Myinnervoice) I feel like I am watching an artist create something amazing!
  December 20th, 2016 16:06
• Cry (Tony36) I agree with all above Tony!
  December 20th, 2016 16:04
• My Utopia !!!!! (P.H.Rose) Where ghosts go shopping, in their rags and in their rot - I love that!!...
  December 20th, 2016 10:28
• Addams family Christmas (Willyweed) Very, very witty! \"You rang\" the bell on this one! One of my must-watch...
  December 20th, 2016 10:26
• Bitter love (Elsiewarrenswords) Very descriptive and I am sorry that the person in the poem was treated...
  December 20th, 2016 05:33
• life\'s big question mark (Ronin_kiaran) Love all the questions you ask. Genius style!
  December 20th, 2016 05:31
• Wake up (Quemis) I know people like that....:) Sounds like a very big EGO. That is what I...
  December 20th, 2016 05:28
• This picture you propose (Daniel) Funny. I have experienced, recently, a similar situation regarding someone...
  December 20th, 2016 05:19
• La Pérdida del Hijo / The Loss of a Child (Augustus) Parents should never, ever have to experience the loss of a child.....:(...
  December 19th, 2016 19:12
• Branded (LIGHT WARRIOR) Good that you are cutting ties. Remember the saying, doing the same thing...
  December 19th, 2016 19:03
• The Collection (Willy Beeman) A message of manipulation very bluntly put. Good writing, although I just...
  December 19th, 2016 12:39
• Progression of Time. (Myinnervoice) I like the messages of being grateful, remembering memories, and pushing...
  December 19th, 2016 12:35
• TICKLE (The big red chair) The answer lies within. Good job.
  December 19th, 2016 11:26
• Fallen (SabreLi) Excellent job expressing the yearning this person has for peace of mind.
  December 19th, 2016 11:25
• Heavenly Father (Tony36) Very timely Tony! Great message.
  December 19th, 2016 09:01
• Schizophrenia (SabreLi) Love the I wish I could see you fly stanza very much. You are so...
  December 19th, 2016 09:00
• Weak (Gelyn) I feel a message of a person who wants to improve the quality of their...
  December 19th, 2016 06:28
• Driven (Quemis) I feel the inner turmoil and I think, for myself, I can relate to the...
  December 19th, 2016 06:26
• Mirror mirror on the wall (Daniel) That reminds me of the picture of the kitten who sees a lion in the...
  December 19th, 2016 06:14
• First new day... (P.H.Rose) Happy ending well written.
  December 19th, 2016 06:13
• Merry Christmas (Augustus) I love the word bombastic! You covered everything, but the kitchen...
  December 18th, 2016 11:36
• The lady in the trees (Daniel) A story of a mysterious rescue! And, the guardian angel is an excellent...
  December 18th, 2016 08:50
• Awake sucks... (P.H.Rose) Under the covers is a great place after a bad day! Great poem.
  December 18th, 2016 08:47
• My wife... (P.H.Rose) So sweetly put!
  December 18th, 2016 08:46
• The Doctor (Willy Beeman) Love and forgiveness well put!
  December 18th, 2016 08:45
• The serpent (DezD) It makes me think of the anxiety when things are going great, dread comes...
  December 17th, 2016 05:24
• W e a k. (MisKylie) Great point in your poem. I like the last 4 lines.
  December 17th, 2016 05:22
• No Pennies For My Tale (XxRaavenSairasxX) I have met people like this. They are never happy and always like to stir...
  December 17th, 2016 05:19
• Do You Right (Willy Beeman) Honesty is the best policy in any relationship. Very nice!
  December 17th, 2016 05:17
• Sitting in the waiting room (Isituorme) Ha..Ha! Perfect poem depicting how badly patients are treated in the...
  December 17th, 2016 05:15
• The farmer or the farm (Daniel) The poem made me feel powerless over and fearful of Mother Nature....
  December 17th, 2016 04:57
• Open eyes (Juan C.) Wow! Very interesting way to discuss a fearful state of mind.
  December 17th, 2016 04:52
• Courting Agony (Myinnervoice) It is kind of like fear-based procrastination. Some people do so because...
  December 17th, 2016 04:44
• Acid Rain (SabreLi) A painfully excellent expression of the pain, SabreLi. You really do know...
  December 16th, 2016 16:26
• Love Gets Under Your Skin (Notapoet) Great job showing how a person can come alive again when finding love.
  December 16th, 2016 13:20
• Hate (Augustus) Comments taken out of context, and twisted facts reported as truth,...
  December 16th, 2016 13:16
• IF WISHES WERE HORSES (Gelyn) Lot of interesting wishes put very well.
  December 16th, 2016 13:07
• Smile (Christina8) A smile makes all the difference! Very beautiful feeling from this!
  December 16th, 2016 09:31
• Enjoy Life\'s Journey (Tony36) Beautiful thought Tony.
  December 16th, 2016 09:31
• The Ghost and the Dissolute Engineer (Quemis) I especially love the first part about the city\'s pyre. Very inventive...
  December 16th, 2016 06:43
• No angels here (Daniel) Excellent. Sometimes there just are no words to say appropriate enough to...
  December 16th, 2016 06:35
• Power to change... (P.H.Rose) Very precious thoughts in your poem. Like it very much.
  December 16th, 2016 06:31
• #165- Like A Movie (To victims of rape) (Mads) Encouraging words coming straight from the heart. Excellent.
  December 15th, 2016 13:06
• Cheater (Tony36) A cheater never wins in the end!
  December 15th, 2016 13:05
• Looking forward to Christmas (Christina8) Got mine done last week. But, I agree. The weather makes a huge...
  December 14th, 2016 12:09
• my wife\'s shopping day... (P.H.Rose) I understand your impatience in this piece. We have all been there! HA HA
  December 14th, 2016 06:53
• Where I Belong (SabreLi) Excellent, (way I interpret) how the poem expresses how one has realized...
  December 14th, 2016 06:51
• To be, just be (SharonMoemise) I have said this before and you have written an excellent way of...
  December 13th, 2016 16:44
• Fever Steams (Quemis) You certainly have a way with the words you used to illustrate the...
  December 13th, 2016 16:41
• There is no money in poetry (Aa Harvey) You are a wonderful poet. There are ways to self-publish, at minimal...
  December 13th, 2016 12:20
• Tempest Of Temptation (SabreLi) It is a temporary fix that leaves permanent damages. Excellent job.
  December 13th, 2016 10:36
• #168- All Inside My Head (Mads) Great job!
  December 13th, 2016 10:35
• Monkey (Tony36) I smiled too!
  December 13th, 2016 10:34
• Poignant \'P\' (feat. Unexpected Gay Erotica) (Kyran) Very nice work. No \"P\" here, except for great Poem....:)
  December 13th, 2016 06:19
• Window Panes (Markctaylor96) Excellent poem about a temporary escape.
  December 13th, 2016 06:11
• My Son (Daniel) It is a beautiful message from a Dad who is forever impacted by the birth...
  December 13th, 2016 06:08
• My charmer (WildMoonChild) I wish you the very best. Very nice poem. He is lucky!
  December 13th, 2016 05:59
• The first 17 years on the 13th...... (P.H.Rose) Unbelievable! Bummer! Great poem, though...:)
  December 13th, 2016 05:58
• Christmas surprise (Christina8) Got my fingers crossed for a nice bonus! Very cheery message Christina!
  December 13th, 2016 05:56
• Jekyll And Hyde (SabreLi) Interesting approach to a love story. You have mentioned some twisted...
  December 12th, 2016 14:54
• Love and Sweet (Gelyn) Very nice feeling to this!
  December 12th, 2016 09:51
• Change (Tony36) Nice!
  December 12th, 2016 09:50
• Far beyond our grasp (Daniel) Makes me feel like that saying the definition of crazy is repeating the...
  December 12th, 2016 06:34
• Depression (P.H.Rose) Great job and to the point. Some days, like today for me, I would just...
  December 12th, 2016 06:30
• Springtime Interlude (Notapoet) Beautiful and very sophisticated. Classy, too!
  December 11th, 2016 11:48
• A glimpse of God (SharonMoemise) Beautiful thoughts SharonMoemise! Very timely for the season.
  December 11th, 2016 11:42
• Four Horsemen (SabreLi) Another masterpiece!
  December 11th, 2016 11:40
• Christ Came (Tony36) Great point!
  December 11th, 2016 11:36
• Winter (Daniel) Nice timing and good points!
  December 11th, 2016 08:24
• Getting old (P.H.Rose) Very cute and great point! Wish we could stop the progression of age, but...
  December 11th, 2016 08:19
• Read me. (Voicesecho88) Very nice message. Thanks for thinking of this and posting it.
  December 10th, 2016 09:02
• Empty voice (Aa Harvey) I feel the frustration of being blocked in your poem. Excellent job.
  December 10th, 2016 08:21
• Prisoner In Death\'s Jaws (SabreLi) Excellent job of portraying a deep dark place for a mind to be trapped...
  December 10th, 2016 08:18
• Townsfolk (Augustus) One more point. I had a person read your poem and he got your point...
  December 10th, 2016 07:49
• Vicissitude (Quemis) This is an excellent piece. Makes me think of the Peter Principal in a...
  December 10th, 2016 07:24