Comments on community poems by WriteBeLight
- Gone........ (P.H.Rose)
You will always be remembered, I am very sure!
January 11th, 2017 13:06 - vive la difference (Daniel)
Excellent point and poem!
January 11th, 2017 13:05 - SWEET SNOWDROPS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Beautiful tribute to such a hearty and beautiful plant!
January 11th, 2017 13:04 - Be Yourself (Tony36)
Nice and breezy Tony! :)
January 11th, 2017 13:02 - My sweet girl (Christina8)
Yes, daughters are special. They can be trying at times, but special...
January 11th, 2017 12:58 - Fossil Fool (Yorke)
The fact that you write and realize this gives me hope that things could...
January 10th, 2017 21:42 - Healed Into The Cross And Bone Of Bad. (Kevin browne)
I like your poem very much, as well as its message, Kevin!
January 10th, 2017 19:39 - Minority. (MaxWritesPoems)
You speak so much truth in this poem. Well done.
January 10th, 2017 19:37 - Eyes (Liam Lawless)
Something that should not be taken for granted. Very nice tribute.
January 10th, 2017 19:35 - An Ode to the Unfamiliar (Quemis)
You are so great. I love the first 4 lines, and the next and the next, and...
January 10th, 2017 19:27 - Deserts\' Sccret (Hannahkatherine)
Very nice exchange.
January 10th, 2017 19:25 - Dream Catcher (Notapoet)
Very dreamy, comforting and soothing...:)
January 10th, 2017 19:23 - I Want Someone. (Zwitterion)
We are here for you! Great poem!
January 10th, 2017 14:14 - Land of Onch (Augustus)
Wishing brighter days ahead! Stay positive my dear poet buddy!
January 10th, 2017 14:10 - Winters Sunset (Willyweed)
Make sure they leave blank, the effective date on your sunset clause! You...
January 10th, 2017 14:08 - \"Families will always be\"? (KJ)
Yes. Family is wonderful, but it is not always perfect. Nice thought and...
January 10th, 2017 11:46 - A Mother\'s View (PotbellyPleb)
Ha Ha. I can relate! Great job.
January 10th, 2017 11:45 - Love--(Senryu) (Christina8)
Wonderful job Christina, and I know you love the subject matter!
January 10th, 2017 11:43 - Child (Tony36)
Lovely Tony!
January 10th, 2017 09:36 - A Devil called Chocolate .... (P.H.Rose)
Oh boy do I sympathize! Great delicious job!
January 10th, 2017 09:36 - Future Memories (Phoenix8523)
Excellent and very poignant!
January 10th, 2017 09:35 - Creativity Never Sleeps! (Dford1)
Very intuitive of you and very lovely words! Great job!
January 10th, 2017 09:34 - Life\'s miracle (Daniel)
Love the poem, in particular, the last four lines!
January 10th, 2017 06:27 - SHE WILL OVERCOME (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful words and work of art!
January 10th, 2017 06:25 - OFF WITH HIS HEAD ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A poem about a basket case....:) Very different!
January 10th, 2017 06:24 - The one I would truly adore... (KJ)
Very good advice and a great poem!
January 9th, 2017 22:41 - Twisted Ears (PotbellyPleb)
\"Sounds\" like a great poem, but not for the kid with the ears!..:)
January 9th, 2017 16:32 - Come (Tony36)
Very nice poem Tony!
January 9th, 2017 14:26 - Kind Words (Gerrylegister)
Excellent message and well written!
January 9th, 2017 12:53 - So Cupid Is A Fool. (Kevin browne)
Very endearing poem Kevin!
January 9th, 2017 12:51 - Bubbles (Augustus)
I\'ll toast to that! Very good, Augustus!
January 9th, 2017 12:49 - Chocolate (Christina8)
That is a chocolate success! Very, very good and I can relate!
January 9th, 2017 12:47 - I\'m fat (Catdeu)
Wonderful piece of work. I sympathize entirely! Yes, writing poems is a...
January 9th, 2017 12:46 - Ode to my granddaughter ...A smile from India rose.. (P.H.Rose)
Very, very sweet!
January 9th, 2017 11:25 - The Vault is Empty (Dford1)
Ah! Great message! Well written.
January 9th, 2017 11:24 - The demon in my dreams (Daniel)
Very good job Daniel.
January 9th, 2017 06:34 - Life (Rrodriguez)
Yes. Very nice story about the wonders of the outdoors.
January 9th, 2017 06:28 - FOREGONE (Michael Edwards)
Poignant poetry. The artwork is absolutely amazing, as well.
January 9th, 2017 06:27 - You\'re Perfect (HarveyDent)
Be yourself! Everyone else is taken! Words from a famous person, Oscar...
January 8th, 2017 17:02 - Why? (Eviebee03)
Look elsewhere for people who are supportive. Do not let anyone make you...
January 8th, 2017 16:57 - Stationed at a vibe. (CaitEva)
Oh! I feel what you are saying in your poem. My heart aches. Good job in...
January 8th, 2017 16:54 - Waiting For The Day (Notapoet)
I have always thought of this time in life when I may no longer have those...
January 8th, 2017 16:48 - Faking Sides (Augustus)
Like the poem Augustus. I feel like that a lot. I just wish that we all...
January 8th, 2017 16:39 - Blessed (Tony36)
Wonderful blessing Tony!
January 8th, 2017 11:24 - Pharmacy Blues (SunSearcher)
Very well written and excellent job rhyming with such technical words. The...
January 8th, 2017 07:49 - Courage (Augustus)
Great idea for a poem, Augustus. I have a friend who is going to try one...
January 8th, 2017 07:40 - Touch My Heart (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Very touching...:)
January 8th, 2017 07:33 - deep purple blues (Willyweed)
If at first you don\'t succeed in love, fly, fly again...:) Very sad but...
January 8th, 2017 07:32 - A RESTAURANT CRITIQUE (Michael Edwards)
It is terrible when you spend your hard-earned money on over-priced,...
January 8th, 2017 07:28 - Man Flu (Daniel)
Regular flu sucks too! Very good. Made me sick...only kidding. I have had...
January 8th, 2017 07:24 - GOD IS MY STRENGTH & SHIELD ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Say a prayer everyday!
January 8th, 2017 07:22 - Emotional Wreak (Liam Lawless)
Very emotional message...:) And, right on point.
January 8th, 2017 07:21 - I See the Mountains (Rrodriguez)
Beautiful story and use of metaphors!
January 8th, 2017 07:20 - When Time Comes to my Living Room (Rrodriguez)
Yes, Augustus does that to people. Makes them think and then they create a...
January 7th, 2017 08:04 - DAYBREAK (Michael Edwards)
Morning is my favorite time, especially in late summer! Beautiful work and...
January 7th, 2017 08:01 - the writing bug (Willyweed)
Great poem WW! Funny picture too! You are so correct about being bitten by...
January 7th, 2017 07:59 - The Rat and the Rabbit..An unusual friendship.... (P.H.Rose)
Yes, strange bedfellows. Very nice. Great idea for a Children\'s Book!
January 7th, 2017 07:55 - Reborn (Daniel)
Very nicely put.
January 7th, 2017 07:49 - SUNSET FIRE OPAL ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very nice and beautiful picture, as well.
January 7th, 2017 07:47 - Up side to Down’s (Notapoet)
Very, very sweet👌❤️
January 6th, 2017 19:27 - Absence of Lux (Phoenix8523)
I agree with the above comments and feel you did a supurb job in the...
January 6th, 2017 13:53 - LEMMINGS/I Stand Alone (Phoenix8523)
Very excellent ending and poem overall! Liked the style a lot!
January 6th, 2017 13:50 - Winter (SunSearcher)
Winter can be tough. And, like you, I worship the Sunny Weather, on the...
January 6th, 2017 12:35 - My Rock (Christina8)
And, you are his, as well. Very sad about the losses of both parents. That...
January 6th, 2017 12:30 - Regret (The b word)
I am not a Facebook fan. Very poignant poem, and great point made.
January 6th, 2017 12:28 - Chill in the Air (Augustus)
I can visualize the hypocrite sitting and enjoying the fire. Makes me...
January 6th, 2017 11:09 - You don\'t want to read this. (Aa Harvey)
I\'m glad I read it!
January 6th, 2017 09:01 - Accomplish (Tony36)
You got that right Tony!
January 6th, 2017 08:59 - All we all really need is love (Willyweed)
All I can say is...wait for it...I loved it!
January 6th, 2017 08:59 - Choices (Willy Beeman)
What if? is really the only question of those who question...)
January 6th, 2017 06:37 - THE TURNER PRIZE : A BRIEF SUMMATION (Michael Edwards)
That is so funny! And, I love the badger line. \"We don\'t need no...
January 6th, 2017 06:34 - THE EARTH ANGELS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yep. I\'ve seen them. Beautiful story and Acrostic. I bet they\'ve read...
January 6th, 2017 06:30 - Why me? (Nicolerobinson)
They woke the sleeping Lioness! Great message of survival...:)
January 6th, 2017 06:27 - Just look.... (P.H.Rose)
Sweet advice!
January 6th, 2017 06:25 - Love online (Daniel)
Ha Ha....:)
January 6th, 2017 06:23 - Hold That Thought... (Moontigerntn)
Ha Ha. That was a wonderful read. Very nice job!
January 5th, 2017 18:56 - Anxiety. (Quemis)
No, do not sleep forever...wake up and write some more! I can relate to...
January 5th, 2017 18:53 - Best...worse (P.H.Rose)
Just fine and very close to the hearts of many, I\'m sure. Sometimes, just...
January 5th, 2017 18:48 - the wind in the willow (Willyweed)
Just blown away!
January 5th, 2017 10:45 - Alone (Tony36)
That is probably because you are very handsome!
January 5th, 2017 10:44 - Two Shadorma Poems (Rrodriguez)
Beautifully done. Thanks for the additional explanation. I love to learn...
January 5th, 2017 10:40 - First (SunSearcher)
Smells, food, music and more can spark memories! Very scent-sative poem!...
January 5th, 2017 10:39 - WORSHIP THE CREATOR ~ NOT THE CREATION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I agree with all of the above!
January 5th, 2017 10:36 - I\'d rather be fishing! (Christina8)
Yes. You know how I feel about my son and I know your son is terrific, as...
January 5th, 2017 10:34 - A MONET HANGS ON MY BATHROOM WALL (Summersounds68)
Very nice work and I love the print! Takes one away to such a pleasant...
January 5th, 2017 03:26 - THE OLD OAK (Michael Edwards)
Very nice painting and poem.
January 5th, 2017 03:13 - Lost identity (Notapoet)
Yep, time marches on and it is marching all over my face, mood and...
January 4th, 2017 19:17 - Rag torn hobo (Tom13)
Sad subject, but well put. The person in the poem hits the nail on the...
January 4th, 2017 19:15 - SOCIAL MEDIA (Tom13)
Ha Ha. My head is spinning! The poem reflects so many people that I know...
January 4th, 2017 19:12 - The Rain (Rrodriguez)
Beautiful tribute to a relaxing sound!
January 4th, 2017 12:22 - ladies night (Willyweed)
We all know the best underwear stories are brief! Very funny...:)
January 4th, 2017 11:28 - Spiraling (Augustus)
Love the science and reality in your poem and HATE cancer!!
January 4th, 2017 10:40 - Mr Pain...The unwanted Guest.... (P.H.Rose)
I feel your pain!!! Back pain is horrible, as is all pain, especially in...
January 4th, 2017 10:39 - A Mothers Mind (SunSearcher)
Yes. You hit the nail on the head. They come back, though, and realize as...
January 4th, 2017 10:37 - Beth (Tony36)
Pretty name and nice poem Tony!
January 4th, 2017 10:34 - Boundless (Christina8)
That is great! Very bright!
January 4th, 2017 06:16 - Flat pack hell (Daniel)
Ha Ha. Been there. Great job!
January 4th, 2017 06:15 - PROCLITIC (Michael Edwards)
Ha Ha. Great!
January 4th, 2017 06:13 - Come Back Home. (Zwitterion)
Sad and true and an excellent job.
January 4th, 2017 06:13 - Life or Death (Prose Poem) (Notapoet)
A remarkable narrative of a person reflecting on their life and knowing...
January 3rd, 2017 18:45
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