Comments on community poems by WriteBeLight
- Him (Aa Harvey)
Oscar Wilde said, \"Be yourself. Everyone else is taken.\" I liked your...
November 25th, 2016 08:14 - GOOD LUCK OR GOD\'S PROVISION ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I believe in the power of prayer and believe we have guardian angels. I...
November 25th, 2016 08:12 - healthy salad (Avigail)
Ok, now I\'m hungry....:) Delicious poem.
November 25th, 2016 02:03 - Grace (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Good thing you broke down and had a chance to write this. I like it.
November 25th, 2016 02:01 - Adventure (Tony36)
And a brand new start😀
November 24th, 2016 12:45 - The Truth (Littlegoat23)
Thanks for posting your work. I think you have helped people with this....
November 24th, 2016 06:33 - LIVING A LIFE THAT MATTERS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I lost a relative recently. This is very appropriate. I can relate and was...
November 24th, 2016 06:23 - The Colors of the Sky (Christina K)
I was not thrown off at all. Liked fake waxy facade. applies to a lot of...
November 23rd, 2016 22:08 - Bird (SakuraSkye)
I get how you love the metaphor of birds. Very nice.
November 23rd, 2016 16:36 - Stone Shaped Heart (Notapoet)
I get how you are waiting to be given a chance. I like how you expressed...
November 23rd, 2016 16:34 - Sentence Long (Kurt Philip Behm)
No family credentials needed here to validate my comment. Very dramatic. I...
November 23rd, 2016 16:31 - A Rose 🌹 (MisKylie)
Forget about the grammatical critique. Your message was quite clear. Nice.
November 23rd, 2016 16:15 - Just Open Your Eyes (Brooklyn6timesplus)
You have a great speaking voice. I like your positive messages. Happy...
November 23rd, 2016 16:12 - Be a sun not a moon (Avigail)
CAGAK. Life is so much better with your suggestion. That is great! Happy...
November 23rd, 2016 16:08 - I\'m not a tramp.... (P.H.Rose)
Yes. I think a lot of people look at someone and think they may know a lot...
November 23rd, 2016 15:57 - Sweet Words (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Your poem made me feel what you are going through. Nice. Happy...
November 23rd, 2016 15:54 - T H A N K S G I V I N G D A Y ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very nice!
November 23rd, 2016 09:04 - Bottle Feeding (Tony36)
Cute one Tony! Happy Thanksgiving!
November 23rd, 2016 09:03 - Thankful (Christina8)
Call yourself Super Mom! It is normal to doubt yourself. All part of the...
November 23rd, 2016 07:01 - I Am Fine without You (Christina K)
You are fierce! Great timing. Like it.
November 22nd, 2016 12:19 - Inspiration lost...... (P.H.Rose)
I hate it when I cannot sleep. Try to do that three-deep breaths thing....
November 22nd, 2016 12:15 - Our children (Christina8)
Having children is the toughest job! I am sure you are great at it!...
November 22nd, 2016 11:08 - Pound Sterling? (Augustus)
Very very clever! You are right. Not everything turns out the way we...
November 22nd, 2016 09:33 - Dad....... (P.H.Rose)
I am sorry you did not have the experience of having him around....
November 21st, 2016 16:07 - BITCH (Tony36)
Let it rip Tony! Great work.
November 21st, 2016 16:05 - Precious (P.H.Rose)
Yes. You are correct and expressed this very well.
November 21st, 2016 10:20 - I LOVE TO DANCE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You were really kicking up a storm! Liked it!
November 21st, 2016 07:02 - Don\'t Do Drugs (Tony36)
Great message!
November 20th, 2016 10:26 - Pressure Gauge (Augustus)
Take the train is great. Wonderful.
November 20th, 2016 08:37 - The Wind (Christina8)
Brrrrrr. Good job!
November 20th, 2016 08:35 - mirror of the soul (Willyweed)
Great message and so well put!
November 20th, 2016 08:33 - The Perfect Chocolate Cake (Larosamarchitada)
Those men suck. Good job.
November 18th, 2016 19:04 - Bullies (Tony36)
You kick ass, Tony36!
November 18th, 2016 13:32 - Journey (Christina8)
He is very lucky. Nice poem.
November 18th, 2016 11:05 - Guilty charity (P.H.Rose)
Really sad situation. But, your message is perfect.
November 18th, 2016 11:04 - Winter Shirt (Augustus)
Hey Augustus! Like the shirt! I am guilty like your wife...sorry🙂
November 17th, 2016 19:26 - That Girl (Sofii)
I can relate. Nice work.
November 17th, 2016 12:39 - Lost at sea (P.H.Rose)
Wow, P.H. Rose, sad but beautiful. I could visualize Mrs. Bird.
November 17th, 2016 12:37 - hopes & dreams (Willyweed)
Another great one!
November 17th, 2016 11:43 - Sledding (Christina8)
Your poor husband! Ha Ha! I liked how you added that. And, something the...
November 16th, 2016 14:22 - Stone cottage (Willyweed)
Very nice. I feel so calm and relaxed. Thanks!
November 16th, 2016 11:32 - Country living memories (Tony36)
Agree!
November 16th, 2016 06:39 - \"In a dream\" (Willyweed)
That was great! You certainly have a way with words. Felt like last...
November 15th, 2016 12:53 - One Bark Away (Augustus)
Part of the family, that is for sure!
November 15th, 2016 12:50 - Lunatic (Augustus)
I guess we have one more time to see the Super Moon, which is today,...
November 15th, 2016 06:38 - Transition (Christina8)
Good poetry. I live where we get cold winters. I am fortunate that I can...
November 14th, 2016 13:51 - Shitty poetry (Omgoli)
I like the play on words between the title and the poem. Good work.
November 14th, 2016 13:49 - Drone (Kieran Garnett)
Powerfully written.
November 14th, 2016 12:31 - The Aborted Child (Tony36)
That is great writing, Tony36.
November 14th, 2016 12:29 - Writting (Tony36)
Agree!
November 13th, 2016 10:12 - The Blueberry and the Grasshopper (WriteBeLight)
Thanks! This is a true story. I remember it like it was yesterday....
November 12th, 2016 06:57 - Life\'s journey (Gaz2486)
Circle of life expressed very well.
November 11th, 2016 16:10 - Flowers (Tony36)
Agreed. Great one Tony36!
November 11th, 2016 16:07 - Veterans: Doughboys Past and Present (WriteBeLight)
Thank you! We have, in our town a Doughboy, who died at the age of 103. He...
November 11th, 2016 10:31 - To Whom You Pray (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonderful insight. Religion can sometimes impact people in a very contrary...
November 11th, 2016 09:51 - Accept (Tony36)
As I have said earlier, \"Dare to be Different!\" Excellent poem.
November 10th, 2016 12:41 - Friendship (Christina8)
Yes, being a stay-at-home Mom is a very tough and somethings thankless...
November 10th, 2016 12:13 - Color Master (Augustus)
Emotionally read, you handsome Devil in your Beret! I really loved what...
November 10th, 2016 10:45 - We shall be free (Tony36)
We do learn so much from each other. Good one Tony36!
November 8th, 2016 13:51 - Aloft (Augustus)
Loving and wonderful words from the heart. Bravo, Augustus!
November 8th, 2016 09:36 - His eyes (Christina8)
That is sweet.
November 8th, 2016 09:31 - Why Vote? (Augustus)
I feel as frustrated as you do in your questions. Thank you for writing...
November 6th, 2016 08:43 - Blacksmith Forge (Tony36)
Wonderful thought.
November 6th, 2016 08:42 - flower for peace (Tony36)
I love flowers. Good poem.
November 5th, 2016 08:17 - Voice of Sweet Reason (Augustus)
Dare to be different. Nice job.
November 4th, 2016 08:21 - Regret (BlueiBlondie)
You expressed your thoughts so well.
November 3rd, 2016 15:42 - How Do I Love You (Tony36)
I am loving all of it!
November 3rd, 2016 15:41 - 15 years (Christina8)
Very beautiful words!
November 3rd, 2016 07:51 - Like A Skunk (Tony36)
Your poem smells great!
November 2nd, 2016 17:47 - Female Teenagers (Nicolerobinson)
It is tough out there. Your poem reflects a strong individual. I like it.
November 2nd, 2016 05:38 - The Outcast (Tony36)
Great Job Tony36.
November 1st, 2016 15:37 - untitled (ShadedSorrow)
You will never truly be alone. Good job on the poem. Positive approach to...
November 1st, 2016 09:03 - Yatee Yata (Augustus)
You are right about investing. Very risky! Very educational poem.
October 31st, 2016 12:04 - Thoughts on love (Christina8)
Yes, I agree. Nice idea.
October 31st, 2016 10:13 - False Hope Again (Kurt Philip Behm)
He certainly has a way with words😇
October 30th, 2016 09:21 - Broken (A Haiku) (Christina8)
Get it✌
October 30th, 2016 09:18 - All Wonder Returned (Kurt Philip Behm)
That first line is great! Great poem.
October 29th, 2016 10:04 - woman (Tony36)
I love the last line, in particular. You are a good guy!
October 29th, 2016 10:03 - Fourteen Years (Augustus)
Once again goosebumps! Lovely...:)
October 29th, 2016 10:01 - Hope (Christina8)
Try to make the best of each day! Good message.
October 28th, 2016 11:37 - I Am Free (Tony36)
I am inspired!
October 28th, 2016 11:35 - Your Baby is Dead (Augustus)
Very poignant poem. Very well expressed.
October 28th, 2016 11:32 - Guilt (Christina8)
Cool!
October 28th, 2016 07:50 - Life On Hold (Jeff)
I agree. Sorry you had to go through that though. Once again, excellent...
October 28th, 2016 07:45 - To Friendship (Tony36)
I will toast to that!
October 27th, 2016 13:04 - Detention (Christina8)
Yes, I agree with all. But, I do like snow....:)
October 26th, 2016 13:58 - Don\'t Judge Me (Tony36)
I agree!
October 26th, 2016 11:17 - young slave2 (Tony36)
This poem relates to a lot of circumstances in life. Thanks for writing.
October 25th, 2016 09:55 - Links of Steel (Augustus)
I can feel and hear the pain in the words. Good job.
October 25th, 2016 09:52 - Satan Can\'t Hold Me (Tony36)
I like that!
October 24th, 2016 09:29 - My Son (Augustus)
I get goosebumps! My son is away as well. Miss and love him! Thanks for...
October 23rd, 2016 10:45 - \"a letter from Lucifer\" (Willyweed)
WillyWeed you are a poetic historian! Excellent.
October 22nd, 2016 16:06 - Listen To A Friend (Augustus)
That is really nice. I like that.
October 22nd, 2016 16:03 - October Nineteenth (Smilersam)
That is very touching.
October 20th, 2016 11:15 - Literate Quicksand (Kurt Philip Behm)
It is tough, at times, to use the words you really want to use. You have...
October 18th, 2016 11:40 - Sense Of Humor (Augustus)
I agree.
October 18th, 2016 11:33 - The Dead Man (Tony36)
Wow! Stay away from him! Great work!
October 18th, 2016 07:55 - Red, White, Blue (Tony36)
Nice work!
October 17th, 2016 12:09 - Drunk (Sickmind666)
I feel the struggle you face in your words. This poem relates to all with...
October 17th, 2016 06:19 - Him (Kash13)
Very visual👍
October 16th, 2016 09:42
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