Comments on community poems by WriteBeLight
- THE REMOTE! (Daniel)
I relate to this and all technology! Nice description of the dilemma.
December 10th, 2016 07:19 - Thank you (Gelyn)
Thank you for writing this. Nice work!
December 10th, 2016 07:17 - Henry Smithfield. The fisherman (P.H.Rose)
I agree. I could see the horizon meet the water and his leathery face....
December 10th, 2016 07:16 - Whiskey and wine (Tony36)
I will toast to that! Great poem.
December 10th, 2016 07:13 - Townsfolk (Augustus)
I have mixed feelings about the concept of graves. I really believe that...
December 9th, 2016 13:26 - Babygirl (Berdnt_victoria)
Very encouraging poem!
December 9th, 2016 12:36 - A letter to heaven (Christina8)
I lost my Dad in April of 2013 and my sister in January 2010. I do believe...
December 9th, 2016 12:34 - Old man in a modern world (Daniel)
That is a great poem Daniel. I remember when cell phones came in a bag and...
December 9th, 2016 11:06 - Goldschlager (Quemis)
That is really wonderful. I really like it very much. Very creative and...
December 9th, 2016 10:58 - Consuming Fire (Tony36)
Beautiful Tony!
December 9th, 2016 09:50 - Cupid Stupid (Gelyn)
I love that description of the arrow, the potion and the rest! Excellent.
December 9th, 2016 06:41 - A Lost soul..... (P.H.Rose)
Very descriptive, as always! Very well done!
December 9th, 2016 06:38 - The Evil Within (SabreLi)
You are a poet prodigy! So, sorry you felt that way. I am glad, and it is...
December 8th, 2016 12:20 - B Flat (Augustus)
That is music to my ears! Cool man....:)
December 8th, 2016 11:19 - Fire (Tony36)
That\'s nice Tony!
December 8th, 2016 11:17 - Thanks For Not Sharing (WriteBeLight)
She is really a lost cause I\'m afraid. Thanks so much for the...
December 8th, 2016 07:05 - I Hate The Thought Of Losing You (Gelyn)
Very touching and beautiful.
December 8th, 2016 06:34 - Mr Wong\'s kitchen (P.H.Rose)
An order of Egg Rolls, please! Nice job.
December 8th, 2016 06:33 - karma and negative gossip (Avigail)
I believe in the Law of Attraction. Good advice.
December 7th, 2016 16:40 - LIVING IN SIN (Notapoet)
I agree with your point of view on hypocrites. Good job!!
December 7th, 2016 12:23 - Goodbye (Berdnt_victoria)
Wow, not pretty. But, your poem was on point and smooth.
December 7th, 2016 12:20 - Lazy (Augustus)
Ha Ha. That would drive me crazy. Love the pix you added, too.
December 7th, 2016 12:18 - pearson park (P.H.Rose)
Sounds beautiful, like your poem.
December 7th, 2016 07:10 - Girl, When We Fall Off Of Course (Brooklyn6timesplus)
That is the best advice and so well rhymed!
December 6th, 2016 16:47 - Dreams (Mountainman999)
I love that and would like to comment more but you made me very...
December 6th, 2016 16:45 - Be Yourself (Tony36)
Kick ass Tony!
December 6th, 2016 16:43 - gap in the known (Avigail)
We all can have wild imaginations and anxiety. Thanks for the words of...
December 6th, 2016 12:59 - Till Death Do Us Part (Notapoet)
We all have our addictions to good and bad elements. Excellent rhyme and...
December 6th, 2016 12:57 - Woodwind of Joy (Augustus)
You are so versatile and I am so jealous! A real renaissance man in our...
December 6th, 2016 12:55 - A cautionary tale (Daniel)
Very humorous and excellent advice!
December 6th, 2016 10:37 - My first home... (P.H.Rose)
Wow. Great writing! I could picture every line.
December 6th, 2016 06:50 - Christmas Joy (Tony36)
Very, very nice Tony!
December 5th, 2016 20:02 - Spine Crime (WriteBeLight)
Thanks so much! I was just watching an American\'s Funniest Home Videos...
December 5th, 2016 20:00 - Winter is here to stay (Christina8)
First substantial snowfall here. People forget how to drive. Took twice...
December 5th, 2016 11:20 - Silver Lining (SabreLi)
Perfect!
December 5th, 2016 06:56 - A cats perspective (Mumma T)
Cats are extremely smart .... like your poem!
December 5th, 2016 06:30 - No lie just a metaphor (Nicolerobinson)
Time does fly by quickly! Very cute!
December 5th, 2016 06:29 - Opening doors (Daniel)
Warm sunny day off😀
December 4th, 2016 20:26 - South of Heaven (SabreLi)
So much risk to one\'s peace of mind when loss occurs. Heartbreaking....
December 4th, 2016 17:50 - I am the Phoenix (Elegant_Style)
Very vivid poetry. I love the graphic as well!
December 4th, 2016 17:43 - A day shopping...or DIY (P.H.Rose)
Shopping can really suck, sometimes😊😉 Another great one!
December 4th, 2016 11:55 - Healing (Christina8)
Great, positive poem. I can see you are happy in your words. Like that...
December 3rd, 2016 11:20 - The Stone Face (Tony36)
Nice one Tony!
December 3rd, 2016 10:07 - A Voyage To Nowhere (Notapoet)
I love this poem, especially the last four lines. Well put!
December 3rd, 2016 10:01 - The days of men (P.H.Rose)
I feel your angst in your words. I agree that all of this bloodshed must...
December 3rd, 2016 10:00 - Scorn (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Wow! I never want to make you mad. I hope you feel much better sharing...
December 3rd, 2016 09:56 - Bricks and sand..... (P.H.Rose)
Very nicely done to show how kids from the same family can be so
December 2nd, 2016 06:24 - Salute the sweet tooth? (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
That was a very sweet poem! You just about covered everything! Nice...
December 2nd, 2016 06:19 - The Unwanted (Tony36)
A sad but good reminder, Tony especially this time of year!
December 1st, 2016 12:34 - Servitude (Daniel)
Some direction is good and others I can do without. I like it!
December 1st, 2016 09:57 - When Words Are Left Unspoken (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Sad but so true. Good job.
December 1st, 2016 09:56 - mysterious brown mail..... (P.H.Rose)
It is exactly the same here in the United States. We get plenty of junk...
December 1st, 2016 09:55 - Lightning From The Heavens (LIGHT WARRIOR)
There has been so much about the influence of the Illuminatti. I find that...
December 1st, 2016 06:33 - lay me down,by your side (Ron parrish aka wordman)
I agree that this is a beautiful tribute. I love the addition of Willie...
November 30th, 2016 14:59 - THE PREACHER (Tony36)
Very comforting Tony. Thanks.
November 30th, 2016 14:58 - Nothing More Natural (Liam Lawless)
Ha ha great ending to a very serious subject. I taught my kids to enjoy...
November 30th, 2016 12:14 - Because I want you To Be Happy (Gelyn)
Very real situation for people and different approach to a relationship...
November 30th, 2016 12:12 - the gift (Willyweed)
Makes me think of when my kids were once so tiny. Thanks for this!
November 30th, 2016 09:48 - My Sorrows (Christina8)
This reads like a prayer of reassurance, positivity and support! Love it.
November 30th, 2016 09:47 - This is Bobby. (Shernandez_96)
That is a very peaceful thought! Snug as a bug in a rug. I liked it.
November 29th, 2016 22:46 - just because i am shy (Kitkat231997)
I was very shy and did not want people to bother me, because it made me...
November 29th, 2016 22:08 - intuition (Willyweed)
Your poem makes me think, it seems that we are here for a lot of...
November 29th, 2016 22:01 - Once Upon a Stolen Life (Elegant_Style)
True love hitting all of the senses. Beautiful.
November 29th, 2016 21:58 - School. (TyKy)
You are not weird. Your poem comes from your wonderful talent. Full of...
November 29th, 2016 19:53 - Ice Water Mosquito (Kimrhody)
She is one of those people who looks in the mirror and thinks, \"I\'m in...
November 29th, 2016 19:47 - Angels and Bagpipes (Francesco)
I am trying to enjoy all of the seasons, but I agree, I miss the 70 degree...
November 29th, 2016 19:42 - DEAR, TIRED WOMAN (UnbreakableTam)
I see a woman who has a great deal of energy expressing her frustration....
November 29th, 2016 19:38 - Command (Liam Lawless)
I agree and I have had my fill this go around. Great poem!
November 29th, 2016 16:51 - Walking Through The Woods (Tony36)
Got a lot of chills from that Tony. That is a wonderful and sad poem. I am...
November 29th, 2016 14:16 - Vitality (Augustus)
Wow Augustus. I love how you touched upon those things you mention in your...
November 29th, 2016 14:14 - Nurses--An Acrostic (Christina8)
I have had surgeries in my life and I always have very much appreciated...
November 29th, 2016 12:24 - Nylon Necklace (AnxiousMane)
Please do not make any more attempts. Focus instead on your writing. You...
November 29th, 2016 06:30 - Jack And Jill (SabreLi)
I am sure I do not have to tell you that this is really great work. Thanks...
November 28th, 2016 15:53 - Alone (Christina K)
Excellent! What I take from this is we are all our own worst enemy...
November 28th, 2016 14:43 - Berry Harvest (PoetBoy)
I like how you picked your choice of words.☺️
November 28th, 2016 14:40 - It Is Quite Sad (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Well put. Addiction is equally as difficult for family and friends.
November 28th, 2016 12:56 - Christmas Love (Marie Braden)
Great if you could keep that tree up all year😊👍
November 28th, 2016 12:54 - At the beginning of her last month (William Siemering)
I like the effen jackal line. Guy deserved it and worse. Sad but well...
November 28th, 2016 12:46 - Dream (Simple-Man87)
Very classy. Liked the twist at the end.
November 28th, 2016 11:37 - Come into the jungle (Tony36)
There is nothing like a walk or hike. I liked this one. Makes me want to...
November 28th, 2016 11:35 - This Room Tonight (UncleShrew)
I have no negatives, just positives. Very good!
November 28th, 2016 08:51 - lost in a forest (Kitkat231997)
This could apply to any situation. So, everyone can relate in their own...
November 28th, 2016 08:46 - Just you (Nicolerobinson)
Good advice that is written well.
November 28th, 2016 08:44 - Girl with the black cloud (Aa Harvey)
Mind blowing! Well written, very clear this person is smitten.
November 28th, 2016 08:41 - hello to me (Kitkat231997)
Yes. Feel like a weight has been lifted.
November 27th, 2016 13:58 - Heart Within The Stone (SabreLi)
Very Poignant.😔So sorry for your loss.
November 27th, 2016 13:56 - Reminiscing ..... (P.H.Rose)
Very well expressed about being homesick 🙂
November 27th, 2016 09:33 - My Light (Gelyn)
So beautiful. Lovely prayer☺️😇
November 27th, 2016 09:30 - Chasing Cows (Tony36)
Ha ha cute🙂
November 27th, 2016 09:29 - eden on earth (Avigail)
The fresher the better. I wish everybody loved fruits and vegetables. They...
November 26th, 2016 09:47 - The Shopping Carts and the Zodiac (WriteBeLight)
Thanks again. I think those zodiac placemats are a riot and great...
November 26th, 2016 08:54 - E N C O U R A G E M E N T ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I pat YOU on the back, Brian. I agree. There are no bad poems. And, we can...
November 26th, 2016 07:16 - Happy Thanksgiving (DamilareBizBoss)
I agree and love your point made here. Be thankful for what you do have...
November 25th, 2016 14:22 - The Quills in your hand (Abu Aeesh)
Grammar is very important. I like the use of color to express the point.
November 25th, 2016 14:19 - The Potent Mentor (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Another good one!
November 25th, 2016 12:14 - Christmas (Christina8)
I cannot believe the end to another year is coming. It is dark and dank...
November 25th, 2016 12:13 - Anxiety and PTSD – don’t let them get you crazy (Avigail)
I hope so much that your poem helps. I worry about all people with those...
November 25th, 2016 10:23 - Open curtains (Daniel)
Wow👍
November 25th, 2016 09:24 - Phoenix aged 2 and a half (P.H.Rose)
I wish I had all the energy your Grandcild has. Very nice👌
November 25th, 2016 09:23 - writing poems (Tony36)
So true👍
November 25th, 2016 09:22
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