Comments on community poems by orchidee
- Born 2nd Jan. (Tom Dylan)
A fine write Tom.
January 2nd, 2024 06:06 - A Fresh Start (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Good write GS. Not hoping for writer\'s block!
January 2nd, 2024 03:19 - I think (2781)
I\'m in a cage. I\'m a wild beast - or just a pussy cat?! lol.
January 2nd, 2024 03:18 - Premise Of Justice (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
And how long will it be before I stop singing? An \'in-joke\' on here is...
January 2nd, 2024 03:16 - The Checkout. (Goldfinch60)
In some shops I take basket (with wheels on) right thorough the checkout,...
January 2nd, 2024 03:13 - Cruise Snobs (Neville)
KP always dashes to the uppermost deck. She has to, or the fishermen will...
January 2nd, 2024 03:08 - Not (2781)
Good write 2.
You missed out some words in the title? - in brackets here:...
January 1st, 2024 08:44 - Haiku 4 Having Me She Said (Neville)
KP said Haiku - she was sneezing in a foreign language! lol. (achoo!)
January 1st, 2024 08:41 - Time (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB.
I lost the hour hand on me clock. For me, it\'s always...
January 1st, 2024 08:40 - Looking Up To The Ceiling (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
They\'ll obliterate any plagiarisers - people that nick other people\'s...
January 1st, 2024 04:04 - The Great Record (Rocky Lagou)
Good write R.
My record\'s got stuck in the groove, I say, my records got...
January 1st, 2024 02:56 - Let Love Be The Way Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
Sometimes a bit like that tomorrow/yesterday/today...
January 1st, 2024 02:54 - Small Choices And Limited Voices (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I went to a former old prison, now partly an Arts Centre. A creepy...
December 31st, 2023 13:36 - The Warmth of His Embrace (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Maybe I should try some not over-long prose type pieces like these fine...
December 31st, 2023 13:34 - Hold on (Sorenbarrett)
A sensitive write SB.
December 31st, 2023 07:49 - To be (2781)
Good write 2.
A somewhat unoriginal joke from me now follows: \'Now, me...
December 31st, 2023 07:47 - Well Done (Neville)
With that title I thought this was gonna be about you congratulating me...
December 31st, 2023 07:45 - 2024 (Mtrotter1)
Good write M.
A terrible \'game to play is \'What if.....?\'
What if -...
December 31st, 2023 03:42 - Visit Verified (Orchidee)
Still Ch......ristmas Goldfinch?! May I say it? lol.
December 31st, 2023 03:38 - Forever My Darlings (Cassie58)
Good write C.
December 31st, 2023 03:25 - We Became Friends, My Snowman And Me (Eileen Clark)
Good write E.
Hope we don\'t see him in our area. Brrrr!
December 31st, 2023 03:24 - Me? A Rugby Nut! (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Gold.
Yes, and they all run indoors in a cricket match, at the...
December 31st, 2023 03:23 - Repair (2781)
Good write 2.
December 30th, 2023 08:46 - Banished (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB.
Ahh, a bad hair day?! lol.
December 30th, 2023 08:44 - It’s Not What it Used to Be (Neville)
Good write N.
Egg and chips?! mmm.
December 30th, 2023 08:44 - Don’t Take It Personally (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Good write GS.
December 30th, 2023 03:37 - Bliss (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB.
December 30th, 2023 03:36 - To Eternity And Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
A poignant write Gold.
A now elderly friend is carer to his wife, a bit...
December 30th, 2023 03:35 - Not Guilty as Charged (Neville)
You seen that Bavarian cuckoo clock you mentioned the other day?!
I\'m...
December 29th, 2023 10:48 - Laces (2781)
Good write 2.
You promoted to 2780 yet, if number 0001 is the top?! lol.
December 29th, 2023 10:47 - OCD (Gary Edward Geraci)
Good write G.
December 29th, 2023 10:45 - Not Changing My Beliefs For Anyone (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You changed? Nope?! heehee.
December 29th, 2023 05:59 - Not Guilty as Charged (Neville)
Someone was stalking KP. They found him insane and talking to real trouts!...
December 29th, 2023 05:59 - Generous Life. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
December 29th, 2023 02:51 - Be Kind (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A fine write GS.
December 28th, 2023 08:06 - Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap (Neville)
I thought KP looked fake. I said to her \'Take off that mask dear, you...
December 28th, 2023 08:05 - Awakening (Sorenbarrett)
A fine write SB.
December 28th, 2023 04:35 - Disintegrate The Devil (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I got lost on the 432Hz line.
Why not, oh I dunno, 874, 732, or 258 Hz?...
December 28th, 2023 03:05 - Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble (Parisab)
Feelings of darkness, yet He still remains the Light of the world, is my...
December 28th, 2023 03:03 - Breakfast Music. (Goldfinch60)
Cornflakes with Beethoven?!
Good write Gold.
December 28th, 2023 03:01 - Raise (2781)
Well, it fits to 9.6.6. 6.6.9. if I amended line 2 of stanza 1, which has...
December 28th, 2023 03:00 - Raise (2781)
This feels liek it could be set to a hymn-tune. Shall I, if one comes to...
December 28th, 2023 02:58 - Horns (2781)
Good write 2.
December 27th, 2023 12:53 - Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling (Neville)
I got no mirrors left. KP looked in each one, and they all broke! heehee....
December 27th, 2023 07:55 - My Calm (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
There\'s a sort of line of thought too, when we may suddenly think and say...
December 27th, 2023 07:52 - My Calm (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Yes, I fuss sometimes of folk enjoying themselves at church. But we (me...
December 27th, 2023 07:49 - Silence (Sorenbarrett)
Good write Judas, erm, SB. lol.
December 27th, 2023 05:18 - Realizing Reality (5nightsatcringe09)
I think each generation shares in the good and bad, which is in each...
December 27th, 2023 03:07 - A Praying Spirit (Angelia Lamar)
Yes, sometimes our \'prayer life\' can go up and down. Good write A.
December 27th, 2023 02:54 - My Cat Is High, and So Am I (Thomas W Case)
What you doing with one of our cats - or what am I doing with your cat?!...
December 27th, 2023 02:53 - I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR (Bobby O)
I\'m gonna do 22 stanzas of a poem, then sing them all, though no one can...
December 27th, 2023 02:51 - Dreaming On. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
December 27th, 2023 02:50 - Waiting (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Me. I\'m waiting for the No.7 bus. Doh! It don\'t run on Sundays! I been...
December 26th, 2023 11:39 - Get it (2781)
Them magic mushrooms?!
December 26th, 2023 11:38 - Don’t Suppose You Remember (Neville)
I of course remember!😁🙄
December 26th, 2023 11:37 - Love is (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB.
December 26th, 2023 05:04 - With Him I am safe (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Good write GS.
December 26th, 2023 03:05 - Climbing Christmas Trees (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I never seen a Kabbalah tree. Where can I buy the seeds for it? Is it...
December 26th, 2023 03:03 - The Breaking Point (BlessedbyGod)
A fine write M.
Meanwhile, in cuckoo land - Alas, me breaking point came...
December 26th, 2023 03:02 - To us he\'s been given (Cedrick)
Good write C.
December 26th, 2023 02:59 - Prophetic Courage (Gray0328)
A fine write G.
Yes, I saw someone so caught up in religion, that he was...
December 26th, 2023 02:59 - Our Boxing Day. (Goldfinch60)
And - aww, I only just got me toy train set out of the box. Now today I...
December 26th, 2023 02:57 - Our Boxing Day. (Goldfinch60)
Ahh, a lovely write Gold.
In me younger days - a few million years ago...
December 26th, 2023 02:56 - The buzzard and the pig (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB. lol.
December 25th, 2023 05:41 - You Don\'t Rub the Back of My Head Anymore (Thomas W Case)
The only creatures (if mankind can be called \'creation/creations too)...
December 25th, 2023 03:06 - Harmonious Life. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
December 25th, 2023 03:04 - To all (2781)
A fine write 2.
December 24th, 2023 09:37 - Age (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB.
Goldfinch and I on here are millions of years old, so we...
December 24th, 2023 05:42 - Windy Dreams (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
That\'ll be those brussels sprouts or baked beans! lol.
December 24th, 2023 05:41 - What He Really Wants for Christmas (Neville)
A Merry one to you too!
December 24th, 2023 05:40 - A Christmas Kiss (James Alexander)
Godo write J.
December 24th, 2023 03:29 - Guess the Fruit (Thomas W Case)
Glad some ones are having (or had) fun! lol.
December 24th, 2023 03:29 - Blessings To All. (Goldfinch60)
And - I hate Christmas morning. Me lounge is always full of soot that I...
December 24th, 2023 03:18 - Blessings To All. (Goldfinch60)
Godo wishes to you too Gold.
It\'s a \'orrible time for me though, with...
December 24th, 2023 03:15 - Na serra (Sorenbarrett)
A fine write SB - reaches for \'translate\' option. lol.
Bit of French...
December 23rd, 2023 12:54 - Law (2781)
That day(s) will only surely come in Heaven/Paradise! Laws are needed for...
December 23rd, 2023 09:46 - The Epstein List After Christmas (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Dirty washing! Doh!
December 23rd, 2023 03:19 - Happy Christmas (Positive Girl)
I never knew there was all these good things at Christmas - or did I?!...
December 23rd, 2023 03:18 - Happy Birthday Chet (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
An ex-Manager is 81 today. Sadly his first Christmas...
December 23rd, 2023 03:14 - A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas (Neville)
A faggy snog with them Marlboro\'s. Yuk! Though I\'d rather kiss a smoking...
December 23rd, 2023 03:12 - A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas (Neville)
Now my version is:
A snog (with KP) is never for Christmas, and never for...
December 23rd, 2023 03:11 - WINTER SOLSTICE (Michael Edwards)
Good write and pic M.
Boohoo, dark nights! I was gonna be positive, and...
December 23rd, 2023 03:09 - Clean Breaks (Neville)
I too am fallible, and a gentleman - am I? heehee Except to KP.
December 22nd, 2023 04:54 - Clean Breaks (Neville)
I wish KP would say this to me, but she clings to me our marriage like...
December 22nd, 2023 04:53 - To Do... (Thomas W Case)
Good write T.
December 22nd, 2023 03:08 - In the (2781)
Some titles for books of the Bible may seem unoriginal, taken from the...
December 22nd, 2023 03:06 - In the (2781)
Good write 2.
My next poem will be \'Not in the\'. lol.
December 22nd, 2023 03:04 - The Longest Night. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
How you gonna spend that extra minute or two of daylight...
December 22nd, 2023 03:03 - From Death to a Dog (Nicholas Browning)
A fine write N.
December 21st, 2023 10:53 - Giants (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
What\'s that funny smell?! heehee.
December 21st, 2023 10:52 - We Are Worthy (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Good write GS.
December 21st, 2023 08:54 - Christmas tree (Cofhypieces)
Good write C.
December 21st, 2023 03:12 - Many (2781)
Can ya guess the tile of my next poem, inspired by this one? It\'s ..........
December 21st, 2023 03:10 - Going Against the Flow (Neville)
This sounds suspiciously like another tale of KP and I. Did ya marry her...
December 21st, 2023 03:10 - The Weight We Carry (Gray0328)
Don\'t ya just love it when a car splashes you with a puddle on purpose?!...
December 21st, 2023 03:08 - Understanding Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
I wrote a 1,000 page silent book \'The joys of being...
December 21st, 2023 03:07 - Strive on (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB.
December 20th, 2023 08:42 - Rank Order (Neville)
What number was I on the list?! lol.
December 20th, 2023 07:54 - Put Pride Aside (Astro Ride) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Was that an Earthling inside that spacesuit in 1969? Some say even now...
December 20th, 2023 03:08 - The Best Medicine (Thomas W Case)
Oops, the magic mushrooms!
December 20th, 2023 03:06
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