Comments on community poems by orchidee
- in the quiet tide (Arqios)
And now from me \'An Unspoken Poem\'. What\'s in it, they ask. Dunno,...
September 18th, 2025 11:38 - Forgiveness (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB.
September 18th, 2025 11:37 - To Soak in Reality (Tristan Robert Lange)
I not got any poems from 1996. I will post a blank page! lol. I never even...
September 18th, 2025 11:36 - Seeking Truth In A Worldwide Web Full Of Lies (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Not now Crowley, not today, thank you! lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:35 - Orchi\'s Own (Tristan Robert Lange)
Oh lol, thank you T. Oh no, now I will have to do yet another poem,...
September 18th, 2025 11:32 - Who I am (2781)
Erm, who are ya? You can tell I didn\'t read the poem properly. lol.
September 18th, 2025 02:07 - Robert Redford Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold, and not a wooden actor.
September 18th, 2025 02:06 - homestead knights (Arqios)
Good write A.
September 16th, 2025 06:02 - Suicide an twa (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB. A dark joke - Suicide? Ooh no, it\'ll be bad for me...
September 16th, 2025 05:59 - Jesus Christ is Lord (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Good write GS.
Erm, KP\'s changed my life too - for the worse! heehee.
September 16th, 2025 05:57 - Flutterby Mind. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s a whole lot to do. How did you find time to go to work?!
September 16th, 2025 02:10 - Making My Own Lemonade (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
September 16th, 2025 02:09 - Making My Own Lemonade (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Good write SM.
September 16th, 2025 02:09 - Fallen honor (Sorenbarrett)
As long as the pidgins don\'t s**t on us! Erm, it\'s a theme in some poets...
September 15th, 2025 07:32 - Maxim (James Michael)
Good write JM. Doh! My maxim, or experience, was somewhat different - When...
September 15th, 2025 02:24 - Home Again. (Goldfinch60)
It seems you only just got there - time flies?! lol.
September 15th, 2025 02:23 - Hard And Bitter (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You in that pub - bitter - and drinking hard?! Oops! lol.
September 15th, 2025 02:22 - I Believe In God (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A fine write GS.
Who (or in this case, what) else do I believe in? I...
September 14th, 2025 02:07 - Gone too soon (BlessedbyGod)
A poignant write B.
September 14th, 2025 02:05 - The Games Some People Play… (Doggerel Dave)
Oohh yes, lack of rational thought applies to me too. Well, I only got 3...
September 14th, 2025 02:04 - Hate\'s Finality (Tristan Robert Lange)
All that\'s needed is if a certain person changed that dodgy - wig, or rug...
September 14th, 2025 02:02 - The Language Of Emotion Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
September 14th, 2025 02:00 - Read (Sorenbarrett)
Doh! Me poetic brook ran dry. I dived into it and bumped me head. All...
September 13th, 2025 10:41 - MISSING PHOTOS (Michael Edwards)
That you there? Or is it me? Or Mr Berles? lol.
September 13th, 2025 10:39 - Break-Fast (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I wish celebrities would use their brains. Not much chance of it though!...
September 13th, 2025 10:38 - of resonances (Arqios)
Good write A.
September 13th, 2025 10:37 - Exsanguination Nation (Tristan Robert Lange)
Ohh, Popeye will cheer us up. He\'ll show us.... I can\'t finish that!
September 13th, 2025 10:36 - Too Much Pie (ForeverJesus7)
Pork Pies for me. \'Pork Pies Rule, OK!\' lol.
September 13th, 2025 01:55 - Moulding Life. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold. \'If it ain\'t broke, don\'t fix it!\' I say to KP. It...
September 13th, 2025 01:54 - Comershells (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You had a gin or three? Comershell / commercial. And who\'s got time for...
September 12th, 2025 05:57 - foment in the firmament (Arqios)
I can\'t shay that title after a ginsh or threesh. Hic! lol. Notice the...
September 12th, 2025 05:55 - Truth (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Good write GS.
Meanwhile - of course, I always speak the truth to KP. I...
September 12th, 2025 05:52 - Waves against a lighthouse (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB.
September 12th, 2025 05:47 - Looking Out To Sea. (Goldfinch60)
You won\'t see that escaped prisoner rowing to shore, as he got early...
September 12th, 2025 02:31 - Prayers👑 (Keyara S Trotman)
Good write K.
September 11th, 2025 11:06 - Mud on the floor (Sorenbarrett)
Godo write SB. My own version of line 3 is \'A woman in dust held together...
September 11th, 2025 11:05 - Nine Eleven (Doggerel Dave)
Good write D.
Meanwhile, in my NS moments - I thought you was telling me...
September 11th, 2025 11:03 - New Age Rage (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Hocus pocus! One said that The New Age is now The Old Age, cos it\'s been...
September 11th, 2025 11:00 - between shelves (Arqios)
In between my shelves....are layers of dust! lol.
September 11th, 2025 10:59 - In This Land (Tristan Robert Lange)
In this land... lives Obi & Co. Well, Popeye had enough mentions. What do...
September 11th, 2025 10:58 - Nature\'s Canvas. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
September 11th, 2025 02:44 - Repaired Day. (Goldfinch60)
Ohh, today is the day you worried about... Oh, I never remember it. lol.
September 10th, 2025 02:23 - To spill one\'s guts (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB. Bowels? I\'m just having me dinner. lol
September 9th, 2025 10:57 - the old home (Arqios)
Good write A.
September 9th, 2025 10:55 - Walking My Own Path (Tom Dylan)
September 9th, 2025 10:54 - Walking My Own Path (Tom Dylan)
Ooh, I\'ll get ya pair of boots or shoes! heehee.
September 9th, 2025 10:54 - Under the Corn Moon Spell (Tristan Robert Lange)
I thought this was gonna be about my corn - corny - jokes! lol.
September 9th, 2025 10:53 - Valiant Thor (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
When we see E.T. again we can ask him about Chris. lol.
September 9th, 2025 10:52 - Original Sin (Tristan Robert Lange)
Oops! Sent empty message by mistake. So I didn\'t answer that! lol.
September 9th, 2025 10:47 - No worries (Sorenbarrett)
Dunno why I complain then - verse 1 - I married KP! lol.
September 8th, 2025 07:38 - The Usurper\'s Call (Tristan Robert Lange)
Popeye\'s not usurped anything. He\'s had it from the start. Had what?...
September 8th, 2025 07:37 - Original Sin (Tristan Robert Lange)
September 8th, 2025 02:33 - Original Sin (Tristan Robert Lange)
I\'ve not looked into this poem too deeply. You can tell I haven\'t, with...
September 8th, 2025 02:33 - God Was There (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Good write GS. He was gonna be there for KP too, but He didn\'t recognise...
September 8th, 2025 02:30 - Dawns Moon. (Goldfinch60)
Doh! I missed the eclipse of the moon last night - well 7.30pm, not quite...
September 8th, 2025 02:27 - Breathe (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice)
Good write FE. Now my problem is that I need to breathe, as I held my...
September 8th, 2025 02:24 - And…. (Doggerel Dave)
Is this a metaphorical poem, or a literal one? (If \'literal\' and...
September 7th, 2025 02:11 - Fear of Word Blindness (Neville)
Good write N. KP never craves obscurity. lol.
September 7th, 2025 02:09 - Painting Music (Goldfinch60)
An artistic write Gold.
September 7th, 2025 02:08 - an ill-fitting halo (Arqios)
It gone rusty?! lol.
September 6th, 2025 14:42 - Scarred but Not Broken (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Good write GS. KP\'s been \'scarred\' for years, looking trout-like!...
September 6th, 2025 14:41 - Why? (Sorenbarrett)
Oh no! Sounds like that guy I knew once. Only wanted to know him once - he...
September 6th, 2025 14:39 - The Sparsity of Sand (Tristan Robert Lange)
Ain\'t any sparsity with Popeye. No sparsity of what? Don\'t answer that!...
September 6th, 2025 14:38 - Styles (Sorenbarrett)
I am not feeling well after that last line. KP read the poem and assumed...
September 5th, 2025 07:47 - Whiting a poem without the lette r (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I are liking this, but I are being gramatically incorrect. Quite a lot of...
September 5th, 2025 07:45 - If Money Didn\'t Exist (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
i saw a slow-worm thingy, not exactly a snake. lol.
September 5th, 2025 07:41 - Cleaver of Devil’s Kitchen (Arqios)
Funny place to chop up meat, or whatever he\'s chopping up - on a cliff...
September 5th, 2025 07:40 - Metaphor Master (Doggerel Dave)
I\'m struggling with understanding some metaphors, and also iambic...
September 5th, 2025 02:40 - My Old Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold. KP can\'t see herself in the mirror - she\'s a vampire....
September 5th, 2025 02:39 - September (Jerry Reynolds)
Good write J.
September 3rd, 2025 12:00 - we met again, mid-sentence (Arqios)
Yep - human - we must all be human on here, or else we\'d never get past...
September 3rd, 2025 11:51 - Read till your eyes bleed (Sorenbarrett)
But I don\'t want my eyes to bleed - heehee. Good write SB.
But KP goes...
September 3rd, 2025 11:49 - Bird\'s Eye View (Tristan Robert Lange)
Good write T. Popeye\'s sneaked in again, but - not now, Popeye, we don\'t...
September 3rd, 2025 11:47 - Sovereign Citizen (Doggerel Dave)
How\'s that winter going? About the same as March in the UK. One of us is...
September 3rd, 2025 02:25 - On This Special Day (Tom Dylan)
A fine write Tom.
Erm, unlike an aggressive guy I met (did I?). I said to...
September 3rd, 2025 02:24 - My Beautiful Lady Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. I can\'t say the same for KP! lol.
September 3rd, 2025 02:23 - The Summer Blockbusters Of 2025 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Oh no, not Tom Cruise in that Mission Impossible film? Can\'t stand him....
September 3rd, 2025 02:22 - A Sinner’s Crossroad to Salvation (JPW)
A fine write J.
September 2nd, 2025 11:25 - Plastic legacy (Sorenbarrett)
Ohh, pass it all to me. I will give it to KP to eat! lol.
September 2nd, 2025 11:23 - Our Story (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A better story than the horror story entitled \'KP and my marriage\'...
September 2nd, 2025 11:22 - The Obscuration of Salvation (Tristan Robert Lange)
Nothing obscure about what Popeye & Co get up to, though of course we...
September 2nd, 2025 11:21 - War And Hate Gone Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold. I don\'t think it\'s the good old days nor the bad old...
September 2nd, 2025 02:43 - Heretic (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Did you lose it the moment Huge (Hugh?) appeared? A wooden actor?!...
September 2nd, 2025 02:41 - Driving Offence (Tom Dylan)
September 2nd, 2025 02:39 - Driving Offence (Tom Dylan)
A bad hair day?! heehee.
September 2nd, 2025 02:39 - When to Listen Lightly (Neville)
Good write N. Whip, heavy breathing,... swoon! it\'s too much for me in my...
September 1st, 2025 02:17 - And The Sun Rises. (Goldfinch60)
Godo write Gold. And now my poem entitled: \'And it rained again!\' lol.
September 1st, 2025 02:15 - I Feel Terrible For My Nan (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
It\'s horrible if someone is continually poorly, or \'never seems to be...
September 1st, 2025 02:14 - Woe Is Me (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
That you fishing there?! lol.
August 31st, 2025 12:35 - Little armor (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB.
August 31st, 2025 12:34 - rose cycle (haiku set) (Arqios)
Good write A.
August 31st, 2025 12:33 - What Actually Holds Sway (Tristan Robert Lange)
Good write T. Popeye holds sway in....... we can\'t say! lol.
August 31st, 2025 12:32 - Swarms Around Me. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
August 31st, 2025 01:42 - Be Present (Bella Shepard)
Good write B. Ohh, me simple mind - with only 3 brain cells! lol.
August 30th, 2025 14:11 - Embers (Sorenbarrett)
Doh! I probably got the cryptic bit wrong again - sounds like someone\'s...
August 30th, 2025 10:09 - Holy People\'s Town (Tristan Robert Lange)
I knew a group devoted to Popeye. What were they devoted to? Don\'t answer...
August 30th, 2025 10:07 - The Beauty Of Music Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
August 30th, 2025 02:29 - Some People (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
And now me next poem: Some people can just F, F, F, and F. Oohh, steady on...
August 30th, 2025 02:28 - Beauty and thorns (Sorenbarrett)
Good write SB. KP\'s like a rose. I help her to grow with plenty of...
August 29th, 2025 07:36 - And then it rained (Tom Dylan)
Why did it rain? Oops, I sound like that guy I knew, who replied to...
August 29th, 2025 02:43
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