Comments on community poems by orchidee

• My Very Dearest of Coincidences (Neville) Yes, I did a similar poem for KP. It began: \'Can you explain dearest,...
  May 6th, 2024 02:19
• Back from the Dead (Thomas W Case) I never knew you\'d been away, let alone resurrected. When was ya dead?...
  May 5th, 2024 13:56
• Giving (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB.
  May 5th, 2024 09:38
• Your Ways (Hey!) I never knew I was your sun in your darkest days. Noooo, you don\'t mean...
  May 5th, 2024 09:37
• Le Plagiaire (Neville) The dreaded plagiarism? Sounds like \'plague\'. A guy pinched another...
  May 5th, 2024 02:46
• My Side (Kylie the 8th grade female poet) I never knew I caused you so much trouble. Noooo, you don\'t mean me!
  May 5th, 2024 02:07
• Health In Life. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold. Love surely wins through in the end, whether sooner or...
  May 5th, 2024 02:04
• Chess (2781) Are we mice or men? Pawns or prawns?! lol.
  May 5th, 2024 02:01
• The Collapse Of Society (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) There was a TV trailer saying \'New comedy coming soon\'. I replied...
  May 5th, 2024 02:00
• A Myriad of Seen and Unseen Things (Gary Edward Geraci) Good write Gary.
  May 4th, 2024 12:57
• Rats (Sorenbarrett) Yes, I remember our wedding night -KP slept in the cat basket, and the cat...
  May 4th, 2024 08:32
• Shadowboxing In Hell (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Ahh, so you met my mother-in-law - in the pic! If I was married, that is....
  May 4th, 2024 08:30
• Creation Considerations (Orchidee) The 18+ has cleared now. Maybe Fido was doing spot-checks?!
  May 4th, 2024 08:28
• My oh my (BlessedbyGod) All those years (so far) you checked the time on your watch! You knows....
  May 4th, 2024 02:13
• And It Rained! (Goldfinch60) And then when you didn\'t play - it didn\'t rain?! Doh!
  May 4th, 2024 01:59
• What Makes Us Broken (Neville) If I admit to KP that I\'m broken, she will only say \'Well, patch it up...
  May 4th, 2024 01:58
• I\'m All Out Of Ideas For The Next Twenty-Three Days Until I Turn Thirty-Six (ForeverJesus7) See ya in 23 days!
  May 3rd, 2024 09:28
• Hush Now Little Wren (Neville) But - great write N. I was distracted by that comment of the day being...
  May 3rd, 2024 04:48
• Calia’s Thoughts 💭 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) What\'s next? I know - she tries botox, like KP! Do shut up Orchi, says...
  May 3rd, 2024 02:42
• Lord Please (BlessedbyGod) Good write B. He will watch (argghhh!) over us. lol.
  May 3rd, 2024 02:41
• Respighi\'s Rome Part 1. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold.
  May 3rd, 2024 02:40
• Hush Now Little Wren (Neville) A fine write N. I thought the days were longer just now - not short?...
  May 3rd, 2024 02:39
• Defile My Soul (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) How\'d ya get out of those black holes?! lol. You got a foal now in your...
  May 3rd, 2024 02:38
• Places I call home (Sorenbarrett) Not many grizzly bears, bald eagles, rocky mountain elks, etc here in...
  May 3rd, 2024 02:35
• Footprints on trails cast (Sorenbarrett) I was hiding under the covers last night - lightning, though not much...
  May 2nd, 2024 09:08
• robin song (Jim56) A fine write Jim.
  May 2nd, 2024 09:08
• Retribution (Neville) Good write N.
  May 2nd, 2024 09:07
• Inner City Poetry (Tom Dylan) You sleeping better now?
  May 2nd, 2024 02:22
• Ominous (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Let\'s vote for The Cabbage Party today (my imaginary party). A country...
  May 2nd, 2024 02:12
• Sibling Rivalry. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold.
  May 2nd, 2024 02:11
• Inner City Poetry (Tom Dylan) Good write T.
  May 1st, 2024 11:39
• A Simple Life (ForeverJesus7) Good write 7.
  May 1st, 2024 09:11
• Standing On The Corner (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) You waiting on that corner for the No.11 bus?! lol.
  May 1st, 2024 09:03
• Cycles (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB.
  May 1st, 2024 05:15
• Standing On The Corner (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Good write S. I\'m standing on a soap box. is that the same as standing...
  May 1st, 2024 05:14
• The reason (BlessedbyGod) Good write B. I\'m afraid KP\'s life is: Wake, botox, eat, botox, sleep,...
  May 1st, 2024 02:50
• Into Summertime. (Goldfinch60) \'Like\' button is not working for me - on anyone\'s poems.
  May 1st, 2024 02:47
• Smiling Depressives (Neville) I \'like\' this but it won\'t let me \'like\' it. a blip on the like...
  May 1st, 2024 02:44
• Smiling Depressives (Neville) Talking to ourselves is not really a sign of madness, as some say! We can...
  May 1st, 2024 02:43
• Plagiarism (2781) You - and I - in our \'spiritual\' poems, don\'t copy words verbatim. We...
  May 1st, 2024 02:42
• Into Summertime. (Goldfinch60) You got that Maypole out?! Did we meet the original Morris Men in person,...
  May 1st, 2024 02:40
• It\'s Easier To Look Down (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Erm, notice my good acting there too?! Good innit?! lol.
  April 30th, 2024 12:14
• But Sleep Won\'t Come (Tom Dylan) It can help if we tell ourselves when getting into bed \'There\'s nothing...
  April 30th, 2024 12:13
• It\'s Easier To Look Down (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I was The Birdman. I looked dooowwnnnnnn - me wings snapped! lol.
  April 30th, 2024 04:27
• When a lie dies (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB.
  April 30th, 2024 04:26
• Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called (Neville) Ahh, must be Cuckoo Land! lol.
  April 30th, 2024 02:15
• Phone Cook. (Goldfinch60) Yes, or sailed round the world 7,484 times while waiting! lol. That Bing...
  April 30th, 2024 02:13
• Let (2781) Let this be a good write - it is!
  April 30th, 2024 02:13
• moonlight night (Jim56) A fine write Jim.
  April 29th, 2024 12:48
• Heroin (Thomas W Case) I\'ve not been there either, but I\'ve been to the Co-op. That\'s elating...
  April 29th, 2024 12:47
• Familiar Faces (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Good write GS. Unfortunately, this can\'t be said for KP and me -...
  April 29th, 2024 12:46
• Forsaken (Neville) But I am half human, half guinea pig. Thats\'s them in my pic. They\'re...
  April 29th, 2024 07:53
• People (Sorenbarrett) A fine write SB. Ahh, an idea of what I can cook for KP\'s dinner - a...
  April 29th, 2024 07:51
• A Day In The Life Of A Clown (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I thought this was gonna be a poem about - a certain MP?! lol.
  April 29th, 2024 02:59
• For Eternity And Beyond. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold.
  April 29th, 2024 02:58
• Forsaken (Neville) I moved like a guinea pig. Is that the same?! (first line of your poem)....
  April 29th, 2024 02:58
• Is it (2781) I put me shopping into a bag with holes. By the time I got home it had all...
  April 28th, 2024 09:46
• Jesus is the Lord (Dr JK 777) Good write 777.
  April 28th, 2024 09:45
• Ramanujan of music (Sorenbarrett) I never knew there was so much in music. Well, I know now! lol.
  April 28th, 2024 04:38
• Everything just like you (Iyeah) Good write I.
  April 28th, 2024 02:59
• The Cruelest of All Bed Partners (Neville) Good write N. It\'s surprising what some poets on here know about...
  April 28th, 2024 02:47
• Fever (Thomas W Case) Ahh a bad hair day, erm, night there T?!
  April 28th, 2024 02:45
• Music Conquers All. (Goldfinch60) Did we meet Mozart in person?! lol.
  April 28th, 2024 02:44
• Random Outbursts And Microaggressions (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Good write SB. First line - I learnt a lesson in geography. Is that...
  April 28th, 2024 02:43
• We cut roses (Sorenbarrett) Tricky to tell if she\'s stuffed or not these days (taxidermy). She won\'t...
  April 27th, 2024 09:47
• Time to Call Time (Neville) How was it when ya felt a piggy paw of mine across your tightly closed...
  April 27th, 2024 09:45
• We cut roses (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB. You know KP well - last verse, first line! lol. She says...
  April 27th, 2024 09:42
• Locket (Cassie58) Good write Cassie. Why, yes, you\'re the reason why I choose to live, of...
  April 27th, 2024 09:39
• Narrow Road (Gary Edward Geraci) Good write Gary. I went in the wide gate on a country land and fell in a...
  April 27th, 2024 09:37
• TRIOLET #4 (Amy Michelle Mosier) Good write Amy.
  April 27th, 2024 02:15
• Wanting (A Sonnet) (Thomas W Case) Good writ T. Me own sanity flew away years ago - probably! lol
  April 27th, 2024 02:01
• What\'s it like (2781) Good write 2. Does the No.7 bus go to the New Jerusalem? heehee.
  April 27th, 2024 01:59
• My Saving Grace. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. I had to turn back again. Parts of a nearby river were...
  April 27th, 2024 01:59
• The sound of nothing (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB.
  April 26th, 2024 10:50
• Love of my puppy (BlessedbyGod) Ahh yes, lovely, and our two comforting cats too, along with people - our...
  April 26th, 2024 10:46
• Antitechnology (2781) Some people won\'t even have e-mail. Their partners call them dinosaurs!...
  April 26th, 2024 02:36
• TikTok And Kids (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I don\'t know much of these things. Is TikTok some kind of clock?!...
  April 26th, 2024 02:35
• It\'s So Unusual. (Goldfinch60) Good write Tom, erm, Gold. lol.
  April 26th, 2024 02:34
• Wild Garlic (Neville) Gives me a sort of hot flush - maybe swoon - if I have too much of it! KP...
  April 26th, 2024 02:33
• Raising water (Sorenbarrett) Good write SB. Ahh, sooooo - Verse 1, line 2 - you know my current state...
  April 25th, 2024 11:45
• Sixty Poems (Tom Dylan) A good sixty Tom.
  April 25th, 2024 11:43
• A Color Poem (Hey!) My favourite colour was black until I fell down the stairs one night (in...
  April 25th, 2024 02:41
• Life In 2024 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Which celeb? None! It only gives them more ego trip if we support them....
  April 25th, 2024 02:38
• Peace, Love And Joy. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold.
  April 25th, 2024 02:37
• My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters (Neville) I been travelling far and wide with many adventures too - to the Co-op in...
  April 25th, 2024 02:36
• Off the Beach (Tom Dylan) Good write Tom. I\'m extremely old, so I probably have a mammoth\'s tooth...
  April 24th, 2024 09:22
• Turn back time (BlessedbyGod) Good write B. Did the WATCH inspire you to write this? heehee.
  April 24th, 2024 03:02
• Since When (Nicholas Browning) Good write N. There\'s a joke:\' Since when was [insert name of comedian]...
  April 24th, 2024 02:52
• Oh Yes, It Can Get Worse (Thomas W Case) I got a pet dodo in me back yard. No one knows! lol.
  April 24th, 2024 02:51
• The Happiness Of Life. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold.
  April 24th, 2024 02:50
• First Day Back Syndrome (Tom Dylan) Will \'42\' help you through this?! lol. Dunno quite how. Yes, it can be...
  April 23rd, 2024 10:26
• Fallout (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I don\'t know it! All I know I fell out of bed! lol.
  April 23rd, 2024 10:23
• Safe inside (Sorenbarrett) Ahh, so you know how KP will look in 40 years time. No make it 4 years,...
  April 23rd, 2024 10:22
• Chasing Saturn (A.D. Small) The No.7 bus goes there - eh?! lol.
  April 23rd, 2024 10:20
• At Seventeen or Thereabouts (Neville) KP rolls some decent roll-ups fags. I could call her Fag Ash Lil! lol.
  April 23rd, 2024 02:15
• A Short Putt (Thomas W Case) Yes, what is the point of algebra?! lol.
  April 23rd, 2024 02:03
• Struck Down. (Goldfinch60) Ooh lol.
  April 23rd, 2024 02:01
• Little lamb (2781) A fine write 2.
  April 22nd, 2024 12:25
• special dogs (Jim56) Yes, wonderful!
  April 22nd, 2024 12:21
• Wounds of the dead (Sorenbarrett) Ahh good, how did you know this is my daily life with KP?! lol.
  April 22nd, 2024 05:15