Comments on community poems by JaydeVictoria
- Battle. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write and so descriptive, I really enjoyed this!
January 8th, 2020 06:55
- The lies of Love. (Tayama)
I really enjoyed this write.
July 20th, 2019 17:31
- Tell Your Lady That She Is Beautiful (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Aw this is a lovely reminder to let those we love know we care..good write
April 2nd, 2019 12:58
- he loves me, he loves me not (Elmina)
Really nice write..that I am sure alot of people can relate too. Thanks...
March 11th, 2019 03:56
- WHY DONT PLASTICS DECOMPOSE? BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A very informative write! I\'ve not attempted a blank verse dodecet before...
March 11th, 2019 03:54
- LIMERICK 59 (Michael Edwards)
Haha enjoyed this one as much as the last Michael. Well done!
March 11th, 2019 03:51
- A Monster Of The Worst Variety (Amherrera1190)
Very powerful write. The ending was superbly done, saved to read again x
March 11th, 2019 03:50
- Clickety Click. (Goldfinch60)
Nice write Goldfinch and a very true one at that :)
March 11th, 2019 03:47
- AHEAD. (Fay Slimm.)
This is a beautiful poem, I especially liked \'Hope melts the quicker, on...
March 11th, 2019 03:45
- To Become Old (Jeffrey Roy)
A sad but true fact of life but very well described and written. x
March 10th, 2019 16:51
- An Ode To..... (Suresh)
Beautiful and loving tribute, really enjoyed
March 10th, 2019 16:48
- I Died That Night (Angela1711)
Wow, this is a very descriptive dark write. It \'s good to go out of our...
March 10th, 2019 15:56
- We Are All Equal (Tiffany_Arnold)
What a lovely and very true message, the world would be a much better...
March 10th, 2019 15:53
- A Stint In Jail (W c)
Something different for people to reflect on. Nice write wc
March 10th, 2019 14:59
- Bare (Brie)
A pure message and beautifully written.
March 10th, 2019 14:56
- Leaving our marks (Poetic Dan)
Exactly mirrors my thoughts about poetry and the site, wonderful read...
March 10th, 2019 06:08
- Glass (Mason)
What an amazing write...the metaphor is spot on.
Faved!
March 10th, 2019 04:39
- Penny Lost, Machine Overloaded (EliDagger)
I feel a lot when reading your poetry Eli, and I really enjoyed this poem...
March 10th, 2019 04:38
- LIMERICK 58 (Michael Edwards)
I really enjoy limericks although I am no good at writing them!
Very...
March 10th, 2019 04:36
- YOU\'RE MY BEST FRIEND : ANGELA : SONNET FOR BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love this! What a lovely tribute :)
March 10th, 2019 04:34
- Time (Kurt Philip Behm)
So true...sad but true.
March 9th, 2019 16:03
- When You\'re Sick (for kids) (Pldabbs)
Never a truer word! Thoroughly enjoyed and nice rhyming style also
March 9th, 2019 16:02
- Girl, What Is It That We Are Doing? (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Very sad and a lot of people will understand these feelings, nice write
March 9th, 2019 15:59
- MARCH 1st 2019 (Michael Edwards)
The flow and format of this poem is breathtaking. I really enjoyed it and...
March 9th, 2019 07:37
- Light Leading (Orchidee)
Thoroughly enjoyed! I have never heard of the original song but I did give...
March 9th, 2019 07:37
- I AM . ( Part One of a Series) (Fay Slimm.)
This is incredible, I am rapidly becoming a huge fan of your work Faye,...
March 9th, 2019 07:34
- Not Just Any Words (Neville)
A very motivational write, it reminds of this...
Poetry is an echo asking...
March 9th, 2019 07:31
- Don\'t be forgotten (Poetic Dan)
Exactly why I write true words!
March 8th, 2019 04:56
- Therapy (JaydeVictoria)
March 7th, 2019 07:34
- ARDOUR. (Fay Slimm.)
Very seductive and captivating!
Really enjoyed this Faye
x
March 7th, 2019 07:28
- Last Breath (AnxiousMane)
Powerful write
Really enjoyed
x
March 7th, 2019 07:27
- The Eyes (Mason)
Wow, the ending is really good to this poem, really good!
March 7th, 2019 07:26
- Prolet (Neville)
A wonderful write as always, thoroughly enjoyed Neville
March 7th, 2019 07:25
- In a stride to forget (Poetic Dan)
This really hit home for me, I got from this the hope but the darkness...
March 7th, 2019 07:24
- Editits (Dusk arising)
This is funny. I liked it loved the style too!
March 6th, 2019 18:42
- Dear Best Friend (EliDagger)
Wow. I\'m so sorry for your loss. I was also close to my Nana.
You\'ve...
March 6th, 2019 14:39
- The Waves of Withdrawal (EliDagger)
AHHHH it\'s like your in my head!
Your blockade keeps me at arm\'s...
March 6th, 2019 14:16
- Black, White or Shades of Grey. (EliDagger)
Yes I thought so I love her and it\'s such a good lyric! I don\'t know if...
March 6th, 2019 12:54
- Black, White or Shades of Grey. (EliDagger)
Wow. I resonate with this so much...
It reminds me of arguments I\'ve had...
March 6th, 2019 12:32
- Hopeless (SharonMoemise)
This is such a sad poem but also shows strength and resilience..I love the...
March 6th, 2019 06:42
- RISING. (Fay Slimm.)
I love Spring! You\'ve captured the imagery perfectly :)
March 6th, 2019 06:12
- Locusts (Amherrera1190)
Wow really emotive and resonates with me. Thanks so much for sharing ...x
February 13th, 2019 14:02
- Lemon Rind (SerenWise)
Wow I absolutely love this.
Feels really raw and emotive.
I liked...
February 13th, 2019 10:05
- Word Search (FineB)
I really enjoyed this. I love word searches and word games. :)
February 13th, 2019 09:42
- Those Nights (Amherrera1190)
I really enjoyed this, reminded me of someone I know and the nights I used...
February 13th, 2019 09:03
- YESTERDAY, TODAY, TOMORROW. (Michael Edwards)
I really enjoyed this! Makes me remember how quickly time flies. I also...
February 13th, 2019 09:01
- Broken (Daydreaming)
Nice work, I enjoyed this, especially the \'I keep offending...
February 13th, 2019 08:58
- 21st Century Vampire (SerenWise)
I really like this...well done x
February 13th, 2019 08:30
- Self Harm (Neville)
I really like this. As someone who has gone through these issues...the...
February 12th, 2019 16:32