Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Declaration (Thomas W Case)
  July 17th, 2024 20:30
• Declaration (Thomas W Case) Live in the moment for the moment and be the moment. A great message and...
  July 17th, 2024 20:30
• For Some Reason, But I\'ll Take It (ForeverJesus7) We love who we love regardless of appearance and where love goes no one...
  July 17th, 2024 10:51
• Welcome to Miami (Neville) Mistakes sometimes work out. A great story that leads to this ending....
  July 17th, 2024 10:48
• 21 (Anahiii) Cheers and best wishes to one who is looking for something more.
  July 17th, 2024 10:44
• LUST (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Lust, passion different than love have been the ruin of many and the...
  July 17th, 2024 10:32
• A Storm Passed (Maplespal) A story that could be a metaphor as well. Great imagery in this write.
  July 17th, 2024 10:30
• Snippets of Love (Niyati Nandan) A fun and great write about love and who knows what it is indeed. Some say...
  July 17th, 2024 10:28
• natures view (Jim56) Always am intrigued by nature and her beauty. This uses a good deal of...
  July 17th, 2024 10:23
• Wink and Grin (DesertWords) Great use of rhyme to convey a rhythm to this piece. It sends a most...
  July 17th, 2024 10:20
• Eternal Love (Tony36) True love never dies unfortunately passion does. The older we grow the...
  July 17th, 2024 10:18
• Branded (Markashley1961) Graphic in its imagery it broadcasts such a message. Nicely written.
  July 17th, 2024 10:15
• Wandering Mind (Mark The Phenomenon) Graphically written this speaks to me. \"and the emptiness grows like a...
  July 17th, 2024 10:13
• This is what I like (Hzugman) It is this type of wish that promotes health for the person that holds it...
  July 17th, 2024 10:10
• ~> Tiny Todd My Diddle Wad (children\'s story) (Thad Wilk) Cute and so childlike it brings the child out and puts a child\'s smile on
  July 17th, 2024 10:07
• Silver Searching (Orchidee) Silver or sheep, prodigal son returned it is by repetition that we learn....
  July 17th, 2024 09:48
• My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest (Teddy.15) Somewhere over the rainbow we will all find rest in a colored land where...
  July 17th, 2024 06:56
• The Right People. (Goldfinch60) So right Gold a good message and the best way to measure. Nicely said.
  July 17th, 2024 05:12
• Godspeed Came in Last (Dan Williams) Ah the paradoxes of life. Yes memory can be a blessing and a curse. Loved...
  July 17th, 2024 05:07
• Proverb Pieces 5 (Orchidee) yes indeed pride goes before the fall. I\'ve heard this many times from my...
  July 16th, 2024 18:17
• Infinite (Bella Shepard) How true Bella. We do think we know so much and in fact we do no nothing....
  July 16th, 2024 18:10
• Hope (2781) If you had been born long ago you would be writing proverbs for the old...
  July 16th, 2024 08:58
• If I was A Mirror (Teddy.15) Beneath all there is the beauty that one has. Some need to look deep while...
  July 16th, 2024 08:53
• () After reading this poem, that I thank you for sharing, I too know...
  July 16th, 2024 05:27
• () I hear the message and feel that it is already too late, there is no going...
  July 16th, 2024 05:23
• () A statement of assertion and defiance to proceed without fear and live...
  July 16th, 2024 05:21
• Train of Thought (Dan Williams) A great metaphor here the continues the reader\'s train of thought to the...
  July 16th, 2024 05:12
• O Aspiring Poet (Doggerel Dave) Dave don\'t know how I missed this one I thought I had read all of yours...
  July 15th, 2024 18:53
• Walking in Woodland (Cassie58) Stunning images of nature\'s beauty and the bonds we feel to it. This...
  July 15th, 2024 15:40
• Walking in Woodland (Cassie58) Stunning images of nature\'s beauty and the bonds we feel to it. This...
  July 15th, 2024 15:40
• A Gentleman’s Secret (Teddy.15) This poem says a lot about human nature. Who do we know, how much do we...
  July 15th, 2024 11:29
• Spain Won. (Goldfinch60) Now that\'s the way to do it Andy. Caught me by surprise on this one. And...
  July 15th, 2024 06:02
• Wicked (Christina8) Loved the rhyme to this one it flowed so nicely. So glad to hear from you...
  July 14th, 2024 20:47
• No Regrets (Teddy.15) A great message said so poetically. I think we would all be better off if...
  July 14th, 2024 13:48
• Emmaus Experience (Orchidee) I had forgotten this word and now you have revived that memory. A good...
  July 14th, 2024 13:41
• What\'s up doc (2781) Hitler or Mao is the choice both have such a charming voice Right or...
  July 14th, 2024 13:37
• Moonlight (Bella Shepard) I too like the night especially on a moonlit night. Great imagery and a...
  July 14th, 2024 13:32
• Though Lovely Is Her Memory (Cassie58) A most beautiful set of images in anthropomorphism and metaphor simply...
  July 14th, 2024 13:28
• a moment (Maplespal) In determinism events are set just as with rhyme the choices are limited...
  July 14th, 2024 06:59
• The Visitor (my Raven ) (Teddy.15) \"dreamer\'s quilt\" a beautiful image and the overall image of a raven as...
  July 14th, 2024 05:45
• Bag Lady. (Goldfinch60) I tried hard to see you but the image is small and I am left with the same...
  July 14th, 2024 05:38
• Promises Prophesied (Orchidee) Agrarian vegetarian always need more land. It did seem peaceful though...
  July 13th, 2024 13:34
• A Small Place Above His Left Ear (Thomas W Case) He ws right about the left ear in that that side controls the verbal and...
  July 13th, 2024 06:34
• Resolve (Cassie58) Spectacular imagery in metaphor and a poem with a message. Very nicely...
  July 13th, 2024 05:55
• Sheep Story (Orchidee) Always liked this parable but always felt that it was a poor decision and...
  July 13th, 2024 05:50
• On The Very Edge of Passion (Teddy.15) I think you captured this one with the title, picture and words. As is so...
  July 13th, 2024 05:44
• Prophetic (2781) Right on target talk about forced choice. Every time I think of the U.S....
  July 13th, 2024 05:40
• Come With Me. (Goldfinch60) A most wonderful world indeed. And from that road there are many that...
  July 12th, 2024 05:56
• I Fell in Love with a Dream (Thomas W Case) I think that this dream is more common than believed. Many of us have had...
  July 12th, 2024 05:53
• When Two Roads Diverge (Teddy.15) Choices, there is the illusion. Maybe it doesn\'t matter which road is...
  July 11th, 2024 13:12
• How Long? (Orchidee) Age is a relative thing and I have relatives that are older than me, but...
  July 11th, 2024 13:05
• Quartet For The End Of Time. (Goldfinch60) A most interesting choice Gold. My choices are often mood driven and are...
  July 11th, 2024 07:10
• The Remberer (Dan Williams) This is the message of today\'s era and this generation. Sadly it is a...
  July 11th, 2024 07:05
• My Love (Thomas W Case) So true Thomas I echo the feelings. Well done
  July 10th, 2024 20:10
• Rose Garden (Teddy.15) I can not only feel this but feel I have lived it. It is you last stanza...
  July 10th, 2024 12:34
• Pursuing Peace (Orchidee) Now there is a hymn I can go for. Yes peace is what I look for and if I...
  July 10th, 2024 12:29
• Tax time (2781) Are you talking about me? Most of this fits.
  July 10th, 2024 12:21
• My Love (Thomas W Case) True as well as nicely said with great images.
  July 10th, 2024 05:59
• Birth Blessings (Orchidee) Nature in all its beauty all creations and universal splendor well done...
  July 9th, 2024 10:31
• On sale (2781) This one rings with its depth in echoes of truth and lies. Lie\'s echoes...
  July 9th, 2024 09:07
• The Beauty Of Nature. (Goldfinch60) Yes it is true as attentive as one can be there are always new things to...
  July 9th, 2024 08:36
• Raw and Cold (Thomas W Case) Great images in this poem that cuts deep in its rawness.
  July 7th, 2024 17:04
• Broken Mirror (Teddy.15) A reflection? A splendid story told in such entrancing form. It seems to...
  July 7th, 2024 17:00
• UK OK? (Doggerel Dave) Politics like the weather changes constantly and is unpredictable full of...
  July 7th, 2024 16:53
• Seek First... (Orchidee) Well done Orchi first is always good.
  July 7th, 2024 15:21
• Leaves (Sorenbarrett) Thanks so much Orchi it\'s appreciated
  July 7th, 2024 15:18
• A Day Of Music. (Goldfinch60) The music of joy in this write Gold so glad that the universe is still...
  July 7th, 2024 11:38
• Forget Me Not (Teddy.15) The innocence of a child and the honesty to say what things are in their...
  July 7th, 2024 11:34
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) Well balanced and centered taking what is clean and pure gives strength...
  July 7th, 2024 11:29
• Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60) You have got it Andy but sometimes their hands move with a pen and lies...
  July 5th, 2024 09:14
• Leading Light (Orchidee) Here some gratitude is expressed even though it is with some expectation...
  July 5th, 2024 09:10
• Dark things (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Orchi.
  July 5th, 2024 09:08
• Full Disclosure (Parisab) Nihilists, anarchists, gang or inmate matters not. Good write
  July 5th, 2024 08:25
• Into the Dark (Thomas W Case) Well if sex and chocolate won\'t save you now there is no hope. Good write...
  July 4th, 2024 14:59
• The Backbone of a Poem (Teddy.15) I agree a poem is the emotion it evokes and whether it is sad or happy it...
  July 4th, 2024 14:52
• Scary! (Orchidee) Some people have just too much time on their hands. I once met a woman who...
  July 4th, 2024 08:52
• Stars In My Life. (Goldfinch60) So true Andy and those memories often grow with time becoming even...
  July 4th, 2024 07:24
• Mango Madness (Doggerel Dave) Loved this one Dave, it reminded me of a mango tree I have in the back...
  July 4th, 2024 07:20
• Thomas\' Tale (Orchidee) Now I said the same thing and am still waiting to see. It kind of helps...
  July 3rd, 2024 11:34
• Winter’s Meadow (Teddy.15) A most beautiful sentiment and sense of temporary loss which is hoped will...
  July 3rd, 2024 11:30
• Who’s Responsible? (Doggerel Dave) The biggest question is: Why do we let them? Good write Dave like all the...
  July 3rd, 2024 06:46
• Troll (Peto) A troll indeed from the description. Vivid images in this poem. It evokes...
  July 2nd, 2024 16:07
• Prosperous Prayer (Orchidee) Good write Orchi. Why is it that people only pray when they want...
  July 2nd, 2024 12:47
• The invisible prison (Neilton) Abuse of any type is abhorrent whether to people or animals. A good write...
  July 2nd, 2024 12:42
• How? (Thomas W Case) Most people are basically narcissistic, self centered, oblivious to what...
  July 2nd, 2024 07:05
• Missive For Mercy (Orchidee) Yea I have plenty of sins but already know them so don\'t need to be told...
  July 1st, 2024 12:04
• Give with one hand (2781) It\'s all a hustle and always has been. The winner is the one that dies...
  July 1st, 2024 08:14
• the cycle ride (NafisaSB) An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.
  July 1st, 2024 08:09
• 3rd Time Down (Thomas W Case) Do both Thomas. The idiot box tells me everything I should not write about...
  June 30th, 2024 16:26
• Teacher, Soldier, Athlete (Orchidee) I am no good at multi tasking. Good write Orchi
  June 30th, 2024 14:16
• Unrealistic Inclusion (Dan Williams) Love the contradictory wording that gives a sense of comedy to the...
  June 30th, 2024 12:54
• On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel (Teddy.15) At first given your last poem I thought of a humming bird then came the...
  June 30th, 2024 12:50
• Caged Hummingbird (Teddy.15) \"I wish for the day empathy opens my cage and lets me fly away?\" Ah...
  June 30th, 2024 12:44
• Guess the Fruit (Thomas W Case) What no forbidden fruit? At least Kumquats. Fun write Thomas
  June 30th, 2024 07:33
• Living forever (2781) I identify with this write. \"Enjoying life at a leisurely...
  June 29th, 2024 13:54
• The Summer of ‘49 (Cassie58) The image of snap shots plays out in the snap shot lines of this poem....
  June 29th, 2024 05:32
• Faith confronts the wayward (Orchidee) I need a lot of healing because I do a lot of erring. Good write Orchi
  June 28th, 2024 06:03
• Extraordinary Vision (Teddy.15) \"I could hear the birds having a bath in the sweetness of their own...
  June 28th, 2024 04:55
• Secrets of Slumberbash (Teddy.15) Dreams are most intriguing whether natural or metaphoric. Yes I emote in...
  June 27th, 2024 15:39
• Richness In Life. (Goldfinch60) So true indeed whether money, relationships or anything else. A thought to...
  June 27th, 2024 08:32