Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• the (Jon Nakapalau) A great message in this one word per line poem. Loved it.
  July 26th, 2024 20:46
• Never laugh in your face (Anabasova) Clear and to the point a statement of taking your back. Well done
  July 26th, 2024 20:45
• SOMEONE\'S WORDS (Mompu) This contains the essence of what I call poetry. If it evokes feeling it...
  July 26th, 2024 20:43
• To the Bride and Groom (Teddy.15) A Haiku well done.
  July 26th, 2024 20:37
• neither cleanliness nor godliness do I abide (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Many such comic remembered now lost in the dust of the past. Thanks for...
  July 26th, 2024 20:36
• Meister (Introverted Sage) Entertaining read
  July 26th, 2024 20:33
• At the Bottom (Thoughtless) seductively sensuous.
  July 26th, 2024 20:31
• God my saviour (Sifiso ngoma) Very nice
  July 26th, 2024 20:30
• Where are you my love (Gloria Denise) This poem leaves me with feelings of abandonment which is always...
  July 26th, 2024 12:58
• Meadows (MendedFences27) This poem brought on feelings of the past and the cycle of life as it goes...
  July 26th, 2024 12:55
• Beauty in the Sky (Annemarie) Nicely said. Love clouds and the images they make as well as their...
  July 26th, 2024 12:51
• The squirrel (Michael William Reid) Well described I have been amongst many of these wily creatures....
  July 26th, 2024 12:49
• Salubrious Retreat (Gray0328) Loved the imagery and especially the line \"where shadows sleep\" very...
  July 26th, 2024 12:46
• The Road Not Taken! (Antra.sharma_) Hope there is not too much Frost on that road. It makes for slippery...
  July 26th, 2024 12:43
• My Friend Dale (Thomas W Case) I think I know him he sounds just like a guy I know. I don\'t like him...
  July 26th, 2024 12:40
• Full Circle (Kurt Philip Behm) Vague enough to keep the mind working, vivid enough to understand, in...
  July 26th, 2024 12:36
• ~> Fuckitol\'s The Real Deal (Thad Wilk) Have tried that pill sometimes it works and sometimes not its all a matter...
  July 26th, 2024 12:33
• The righteous side (Saleh Ben Saleh) Been there done that. This touches deeper than a ice pic to the heart and...
  July 26th, 2024 12:31
• falling (Sixthwrites) There you created an image of the soft serve ice cream tipping and falling...
  July 26th, 2024 12:29
• inspired by a painting. (Maplespal) A painting in words about a painting in paint. Meta I say. Nicely done.
  July 26th, 2024 12:27
• Parent\'s Fighting (Tony36) Sad but too common to say it is not normal. This one strikes close to the...
  July 26th, 2024 12:25
• The Little Girl (The Night Owl) Time teaches many lessons although not all of them are pleasant. Very nice
  July 26th, 2024 12:23
• Poem for Bharat (Desdichado) Every country has its problems. The US full of laziness, arrogance, and...
  July 26th, 2024 12:21
• Tin Cups And Shacks (Garth Rakumakoe) Well put I have tried all and would have to agree. The tin cup with a...
  July 26th, 2024 12:05
• A Tinnitus Ear (Saleh Ben Saleh) A most interesting image here or should I say hear. Well written
  July 26th, 2024 06:10
• Day One (Yourz Truly 2.0) A collage of images as the mind makes its way along past and familiar...
  July 26th, 2024 06:08
• Shadows (MendedFences27) A questioning of one\'s mental state is always a good sign. Those that...
  July 26th, 2024 06:06
• A Mother\'s Devotion (NDOU ROLIVHUWA) A most beautiful tribute to a mother. No purer love that that of a mother.
  July 26th, 2024 06:03
• Portrait (MA-Q) Duality in all things. Very oriental I loved this perspective and have...
  July 26th, 2024 06:01
• to know (DeadRose) A statement of position and status a definition and stance. Well done
  July 26th, 2024 05:58
• …. my darling (Gloria Denise)
  July 26th, 2024 05:56
• …. my darling (Gloria Denise) A pledge of love that seems most likely romantic but could be to a child...
  July 26th, 2024 05:56
• The Deep Dark Hole (The Struggler) A wonderful metaphor and a powerful write. Nicely done
  July 26th, 2024 05:54
• Soul Wars (John Prophet) A most interesting choice of format one word at a time as if machinegun...
  July 26th, 2024 05:52
• I am An Eagle (Mark The Phenomenon) Beware of poachers looking for feathers. Great write and positive
  July 26th, 2024 05:50
• Stuck On Repeat (Jojojoking) Yes even that repeating message on hold keeps going on and on. They say...
  July 26th, 2024 05:48
• Sky Dream (Rrodriguez) A beautiful thought and image. Nicely done.
  July 26th, 2024 05:46
• Meaning of Life (James Michael) Close to a record for the shortest poem but with meaning as well. You are...
  July 26th, 2024 05:44
• Family Secrets (Garth Rakumakoe) Those \"taboo fingers\" are always tucked away in \"cold stone\" not to be...
  July 26th, 2024 05:43
• A Beautiful Day (Bibekanand \'Agyat\') A beautiful attitude and message all in one set with a marvelous image. It...
  July 26th, 2024 05:41
• Lanterns (Framed Mirror) A not only beautifully imaged write but metaphorically deep in meaning....
  July 26th, 2024 05:39
• DIAMOND (Qurrathul Ain) A gem of a poem. It sparkles and shines as a metaphor. Beautifully mined...
  July 26th, 2024 05:35
• The Death Of Coolio (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Remember him and it seems by this tribute you do as well. Well written.
  July 26th, 2024 05:33
• Laphroaig. (Goldfinch60) Sounds so inviting I think I\'ll make a stop by just to say hello. Lovely...
  July 26th, 2024 05:31
• Love Delivered (Cocamedo) A most beautiful lullaby poem. Well done
  July 26th, 2024 05:27
• In Our Hours (Orchidee) Nicely written and a nice hope for those with religious belief. Well done...
  July 26th, 2024 05:26
• SWEET SIN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) In symbols clear a picture is painted here. Sexual liberation has happened...
  July 26th, 2024 05:23
• Dancing Flames (Dev Parth) A wonderful use of imagery to paint a picture in words and metaphor. Fire...
  July 26th, 2024 05:19
• Happy Birthday To You (Mya) Sweet, cute and endearing are terms that come to mind with the feel of...
  July 26th, 2024 05:10
• By Invitation Only (Neville) Anthropomorphism at its best. A most picturesque ride through a scenic...
  July 26th, 2024 05:08
• bird of prey (Jim56) This paints a familiar picture from younger days and feels very peaceful....
  July 26th, 2024 05:04
• But What Of Love? (Teddy.15) When it comes to love I feel that all are lost. In its pendulum swing love...
  July 26th, 2024 04:44
• my day today (Maplespal) Poems come and go through one\'s head and here is represented the day\'s...
  July 25th, 2024 06:28
• If You Are A Human Being (Satishverma) Here religious belief is a metaphor for love and relationships. Many great...
  July 25th, 2024 06:26
• Blissful Reverie (Rrodriguez) Beautiful images painted in words of praise. Well done
  July 25th, 2024 06:24
• For you (Gloria Denise) We all want to be special to someone we want to be valued, cared for,...
  July 25th, 2024 06:22
• The Truth And The False (Bibekanand \'Agyat\') Duality defined and a wonderful piece put into such few words. Brilliant
  July 25th, 2024 06:20
• The Lutenist (MendedFences27) Magnificent, set in a classical form it carries on with the last lines...
  July 25th, 2024 06:19
• gone fishin\' (Queer-with-a-pen) Here the vivid imagery melts into the metaphor and becomes one as past...
  July 25th, 2024 06:12
• Price of life (Dan Williams) A tangle of words covering shining truth. Loved the line \"the price of...
  July 25th, 2024 06:08
• Kindness. (Doggerel Dave) A gym can do that to you. Used to work out all the time but too many moves...
  July 25th, 2024 06:05
• Unoriginal (2781) A most fun read with a great punch line or hook. Well done
  July 25th, 2024 05:59
• Fighting With My Writing (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) We all fight with our writing from time to time. Hopefully it will help us...
  July 25th, 2024 05:58
• We Are Not Surprised (User) Wow what a downer. Everyone has to excel at something even if it is the...
  July 25th, 2024 05:56
• Riopy Is Here. (Goldfinch60) Thank you friend for introducing me to yet another new musician. Good...
  July 25th, 2024 05:52
• Way Of The Word (Orchidee) Another good write Orchi
  July 25th, 2024 05:50
• The Light Within (Elikel96) In the beginning was the word. The word is powerful and the creator of all...
  July 25th, 2024 05:48
• Thanks for Coming But .. (Neville) Well written and it pretty much says it all. \"Parting is such sweet...
  July 25th, 2024 05:44
• ALL MY LIFE (Qurrathul Ain) Here\'s to you finding it and keeping it. Good write.
  July 25th, 2024 05:40
• We\'re Over That\'s It We\'re Done (Santajah Douglass) I guess that pretty much says it. I guess it\'s final then? Good write...
  July 25th, 2024 05:39
• No More (Dev Parth) I love the message left in the last few lines that ending can be the...
  July 25th, 2024 05:36
• The Seat by the Fire (Tom Dylan) We all need our own space and even though a bar may be packed you can...
  July 25th, 2024 05:33
• we all need someone (Jim56) Indeed we all do being social animals some of us more than others. Nicely...
  July 25th, 2024 05:31
• EMOTION AT WAR (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Seductively sensual with vivid imagery well done
  July 25th, 2024 05:30
• Writer\'s Right (Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet) Love plays on words. For a while I thought you were going to establish a...
  July 25th, 2024 05:28
• The Pirate (Thomas W Case) A great story with wonderful imagery and some very good lines. Always...
  July 25th, 2024 05:19
• Summer Rain (Markashley1961) Whether just poetic description with stunning imagery or metaphoric of the...
  July 24th, 2024 07:35
• The Truck Bed and Summer (Thoughtless) A nostalgic memory of youth gone by and images of a fond past remembrance...
  July 24th, 2024 07:11
• Friend (Tony36) Friendly, caring and what everyone needs to hear considerate. Nicely done
  July 24th, 2024 07:09
• a breath of rain (NinjaGirl) Images and more images, metaphoric blended with vivid description make for...
  July 24th, 2024 07:07
• Whispers of Learning (Gray0328) Beautiful words in tribute to a holy place, the library of wisdom. Lovely
  July 24th, 2024 07:05
• One Quarter Of A Half (ADarkerMind) Each line provocative and enigmatic I think I could spend a quarter to a...
  July 24th, 2024 07:03
• ~> The Game Of Love ( Shakespearean Sonnet ) (Thad Wilk) A good write in a format that I have difficulty with. Never had much luck...
  July 24th, 2024 06:57
• to be loved (Sophiaaa) A clever presentation of yourself through year by year markers of things...
  July 24th, 2024 06:54
• surrealist realism (Yassin Tamam) A sense of loss, existential and societal all at once in this piece.
  July 24th, 2024 06:51
• Equality (Satishverma) The depth of this poem is beyond my vision but its beauty shines in...
  July 24th, 2024 06:48
• Generational (2781) Grist for the mill. Good write
  July 24th, 2024 06:46
• *Friendly with the enemy* (Weep little lion girl) This could be metaphoric and if so a deep poem indeed. If not metaphoric...
  July 24th, 2024 06:42
• Storm (Bindeshkumarjha) A most interesting metaphor put in poetic form. I hope that the storm has...
  July 24th, 2024 06:40
• Brick by boring brick (Gloria Denise) Tragic and sad but a lesson to be taught. Well expressed where I hear the...
  July 24th, 2024 06:38
• IT\'S YOUR LIFE (BHAVASRI) A good write with rhyme about a good message.
  July 24th, 2024 06:34
• Something Unnamed (Dan Williams) Deep thought in this observation as it seems that images are constantly...
  July 24th, 2024 06:33
• Light Bites (Neville) Oh what a tangled web we weave.... Reminded me of my grandfather that...
  July 24th, 2024 06:30
• Another Day Arrives. (Goldfinch60) The little things are what matter. And yes I\'m sure that tomorrow will be...
  July 24th, 2024 06:26
• Proverb Pieces 6 (Orchidee) A wonderful write and good counsel as well.
  July 24th, 2024 06:21
• CHIMAMANDA\'S DAUGHTER (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A great tribute put into words.
  July 24th, 2024 06:19
• There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge (Teddy.15) I am slow to come to realizations but it became apparent in this poem that...
  July 24th, 2024 06:18
• Just Forever (Mya) Deep thought put into clever words. Well done
  July 24th, 2024 06:12
• SUDDENLY WE SEE (Bobby O) A vote for Pamela Harris? Women have their advantages XX is the primary...
  July 24th, 2024 06:10
• washing day (Jim56) Been there done that. There needs to be another line about it starting to...
  July 24th, 2024 06:06