Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Forgotten and lost (Maplespal) Some memories need a trigger to detonate others duds lay buried beneath...
  April 5th, 2025 07:13
• What Love Is (Raye) A deeply philosophical poem that in its brevity speaks volumes. Very...
  April 5th, 2025 07:10
• Serpentine Seduction (Tristan Robert Lange) A masterpiece of alliteration that like the snake unnoticed until it is...
  April 5th, 2025 07:09
• Your Beauty (Reynaldo Casison) Beautiful images penned
  April 5th, 2025 05:52
• O Cut Me O Bruise Me (Anthony Hanible) Incredibly powerful in its darkness it paints the picture of abuse in...
  April 5th, 2025 05:52
• billie badger (Jim56) A poem stretching nature into fantasy and making a poem child friendly....
  April 5th, 2025 05:48
• Passion Play (Cassiopeiaxneptune) A beautiful poetic invitation in this poem. Nicely penned it calls out.
  April 5th, 2025 05:46
• THE RIVER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) So many metaphors flow through this poem that it is easy to miss one....
  April 5th, 2025 05:44
• The Road (Abdullah123) A social commentary in this entrancing poem. Very nicely penned it has...
  April 5th, 2025 05:43
• $200 (Spencer Wilhelm) This poem is far deeper than what it appears upon initial reading. I have...
  April 5th, 2025 05:40
• What I pray for (Joseph M Marion) A highly religious piece it speaks to the heart of the believer. Nicely...
  April 5th, 2025 05:39
• Fall Fades To Winter (Alison) A great metaphor for the seasons of life and phases we go through. Nicely...
  April 5th, 2025 05:36
• When Faith fades (Ezekiel Olayemi) A story as old as time lust takes down even the strongest kings. Well...
  April 5th, 2025 05:33
• True Beauty Lies Within (Saleh Ben Saleh) Clever wording and good rhyme make this poem a joy to read. It contains a...
  April 5th, 2025 05:30
• The Mystical (MDStone) Well defined before mentioned this poem paints a picture. Nicely done
  April 5th, 2025 05:28
• Fate decreed sexting/texting while married abominable (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) The question is where does one draw the line? if one takes it to the limit...
  April 5th, 2025 05:26
• loved (Lunarchloedip) Well described the feelings that go with initial passion and engagement of...
  April 5th, 2025 05:14
• First Time at the Track (Gray0328) A snapshot picture in poetic words leaves not only visual but olfactory...
  April 5th, 2025 05:12
• Through Eyes of Light (Teddy.15) I here the challenge here, meet your greatest difficulties face to face...
  April 5th, 2025 05:09
• heartbeat (Arqios) I could hear the beat in this poem and it carried me onward to the end. A...
  April 5th, 2025 05:05
• One Day At A Time. (Goldfinch60) What we have control over use to create beauty, peace and love for...
  April 5th, 2025 05:00
• Sin? (Shadowbones) In its abstraction its images provoke exploration by a mind bound by...
  April 5th, 2025 04:52
• The Beauty of Nothing (Dyslexic.gun) A great poem of measures of love. When you have nothing you have nothing...
  April 4th, 2025 17:39
• The uneven strokes (Arial) Opposites and unexpected in each line. Nicely written
  April 4th, 2025 17:36
• Waking Up From Winter (Courtnie McKern) A poem of spring and its blooming. Nicely painted and well written.
  April 4th, 2025 17:33
• Just Another Ant (Andrew Isaiah Castillo) Whether military or society it is the same we are all ants. We follow...
  April 4th, 2025 17:32
• The river flows (Falcon_mn) A wonderful poem in nature images. More than this it is a great metaphor...
  April 4th, 2025 17:26
• the fade haircut (Demar Desu) Again nicely done.
  April 4th, 2025 15:46
• in bloom (Alex TheHueman) Biblical and metaphorical this poem speaks of similarities and lack of...
  April 4th, 2025 15:45
• Spring\'s Wish (Teddy.15) There is a sense in this poem of being overwhelmed by colors and...
  April 4th, 2025 15:42
• The Hibiscus! (Rrodriguez) Living in Florida I have had several different Hibiscus types and colors...
  April 4th, 2025 15:39
• El cielo (Falcon_mn) We all want the sky is true and expect the sky even though we are offered...
  April 4th, 2025 14:57
• Love is a Special Thing (Ksey_Gan) Conflicts occur constantly as to whether we have what it takes to do what...
  April 4th, 2025 14:55
• We Need A Miracle (Charlie Nine) Questions that many have as to why a good god would allow things that...
  April 4th, 2025 14:33
• The Clock\'s quiet Song ([email protected]) Poetically told the story and truth of time. Nicely constructed and
  April 4th, 2025 12:57
• The House Left Unguarded (TheInnerLens) Great metaphors here. A nicely written piece
  April 4th, 2025 11:35
• Prevaricator (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) That\'s pretty direct and puts it on the line. Nicely said
  April 4th, 2025 11:29
• She Visits on the Cold Wind (Thomas W Case) Funny how flashes or triggers set off thoughts, memories, emotions that...
  April 4th, 2025 11:28
• Poetry Is (Tony36) Bravo Tony! This is one of my favorite of your poems. It speaks to me.
  April 4th, 2025 11:26
• Jesus, the Icon (Gray0328) The wording of this poem captured me and I give it a fave
  April 4th, 2025 11:25
• Because I am the Eldest (Isabella Morgan) I too am the eldest child and think I kind of understand. The advantage...
  April 4th, 2025 11:22
• Insignificant (Kat Da Poet) True empathy such a hard thing to have. We all say we understand when we...
  April 4th, 2025 11:15
• Under The Bus (Anthony Hanible) A great metaphor. We all feel we have been thrown under that proverbial...
  April 4th, 2025 11:11
• Untittled (RSM0812) Rhyme after rhyme in a poem of metaphor. Nicely written
  April 4th, 2025 11:07
• Viscosity (Tristan Robert Lange) Loved the metaphor, the wording, and the meter. This has a strong topic...
  April 4th, 2025 08:21
• Cognitive Dissonance (Bragee) A wonderful expression whether poetic, romantic, friendship, or universal....
  April 4th, 2025 08:17
• Ego (F.B.R) A read of social relationships gone sour over time. Now stale it is time...
  April 4th, 2025 08:08
• The Girl that would not stay (Malcolm) A most beautiful write that takes a rather ethereal view that the reader...
  April 4th, 2025 08:06
• The angers burn (Maplespal) Lies burn both the sender and receiver like a hot iron grabbed by two...
  April 4th, 2025 05:56
• More Than Words (Cassiopeiaxneptune) A beautiful acknowledgement and recognition that is expressed in gratitude...
  April 4th, 2025 05:53
• Sterling and Saoirse part 2 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Again you show poetry in your writing throwing in rhyme to the story that...
  April 4th, 2025 05:50
• animal barbecue (Jim56) This reminds me of Winnie the Pooh and his friends. A lovely child\'s...
  April 4th, 2025 05:46
• The Day We First Met (Paul Gerard Reed) An ode to a love. Nicely written and well worded. Very nice
  April 4th, 2025 04:27
• ANGELIC (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Nicely written with good meter it flows like honey and with nice rhyme
  April 4th, 2025 04:25
• Prophecy (Midnight Lasagna) Very well worded this piece speaks poetically. A fave
  April 4th, 2025 04:24
• A Dark Starless Sky (Somoine) Powerful, gritty and with great images that are used as metaphors. Nicely...
  April 4th, 2025 04:22
• Terminator Seeds (Mutley Ravishes) I love conversations of the absurd they are a wonderful diversion from the...
  April 4th, 2025 04:19
• Stumbling On (Dan Williams) A metaphoric wasteland is pictured here with little hope and full of...
  April 4th, 2025 04:17
• It\'s hurt (Junes) When we want something too much we guarantee its absence. A poem of...
  April 4th, 2025 04:12
• When Time Held Its Breath for Me (Charlie Nine) Many poetic lines in this poem. It shows great poetic images as well and...
  April 4th, 2025 04:07
• i was the one that invited pain in (Juwaireeyah) The push and pull of relationships that are either too close and threaten...
  April 4th, 2025 04:02
• Just a Waste of F------ Time (Poetic Licence) The irony of what people say and do never ceases to amaze me. Being a...
  April 4th, 2025 03:58
• ever onward (Arqios) The journey of life and existence. I particularly love the second stanza....
  April 4th, 2025 03:53
• Shining Love. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful picture painted Gold in words of gold. Very nice
  April 4th, 2025 03:47
• Delusions (Spilleronsheet) With a theme of being oneself this poem uses rhyme to take the reader on a...
  April 4th, 2025 03:40
• Nighttime Rager (Yael Olalde-Garcia) Rage against the light. That is the light on my pipe. A fun read
  April 3rd, 2025 19:06
• Forever Entwined (Ezekiel Olayemi) A poem of unity and timeless togetherness. Nicely written
  April 3rd, 2025 18:35
• frustration (Thoughtless) Clever write. Love the implication.
  April 3rd, 2025 17:11
• Betrayal (guilty as charged)... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A poem of several disjointed thoughts as they would race through my mind...
  April 3rd, 2025 16:06
• Invisible hands (Spilleronsheet) Creative and most metaphoric. Anxiety and Adam Smith bring up the idea of...
  April 3rd, 2025 16:00
• The Lantern Keep (TheInnerLens) Brilliantly written with great metaphor and imagery. Lovely
  April 3rd, 2025 13:50
• Venom (Jonathan Merida) So much anger in this poem that overflows with emotion. Well worded it...
  April 3rd, 2025 13:49
• My Dream Walking (Sunshine777) We all search for what some call a soul mate others true love. A match...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:51
• The flight of love (Kaz) A great poem with a very creative form. Nicely done
  April 3rd, 2025 12:49
• Sterling and Saoirse (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I can tell that your heart and talent lies in story telling. When I first...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:12
• Justice In Judgement (Orchidee) Now there is a good hymn one of just retribution to get the juices...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:05
• The Twins Contrite (Gray0328) Different feelings, different reactions to the same situation but love...
  April 3rd, 2025 10:46
• The Cost of Creation ([email protected]) If honesty existed one would pay the value one felt for each piece of art...
  April 3rd, 2025 10:06
• Now Is Forever (Kurt Philip Behm) Careful reading of the words reveals deep philosophical meaning that...
  April 3rd, 2025 09:43
• All I See Is Darkness (Tristan Robert Lange) An existential hole where we may stumble and fall in youth and even later....
  April 3rd, 2025 09:34
• Hope (Heledd) Love the line (Hope is such a futile and vague word that can be changed...
  April 3rd, 2025 08:47
• Violence vs Non-Violence (Demar Desu) What a great senryu this is most lovely
  April 3rd, 2025 08:21
• Raindrop (RSM0812) Some great images here, I saw the line (umbrella, rainbow, waters flow)...
  April 3rd, 2025 08:19
• Blinded (Maplespal) Nicely penned this poem speaks of darkness and the spark of truth can...
  April 3rd, 2025 07:20
• Rockets of life (Tony36) A wonderful analogy well worked out my only hope is that the colorful...
  April 3rd, 2025 07:17
• Cool, Crazy And Calm (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
  April 3rd, 2025 06:46
• Cool, Crazy And Calm (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Clever, relatable, nicely rhymed, short and to the point. Well done
  April 3rd, 2025 06:46
• charity teddy bear (Jim56) Innocently cute a poem about children and for children or at least that...
  April 3rd, 2025 06:44
• Western Skies (Cassiopeiaxneptune) Very well written and thought provoking requiring careful reading that...
  April 3rd, 2025 06:43
• Paralysis (Midnight Lasagna) Haunting this poem set to the meter of a common child\'s prayer is highly...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:27
• VIELLE RUELLES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Lingering memories lit the aftertaste of coffee are part of this poem....
  April 3rd, 2025 03:24
• NO LONGER (Athora13) Although it is apparent that this is an individual call to arms it also...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:22
• The Lost Key (Arqios) Cryptic this poem tells its story in metaphor through a child\'s story...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:15
• Secrets of the Great Fig (Teddy.15) Love your images in this poem. The metaphor is also splendid and I can...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:11
• Jimmy The Bully Man (Poetic Licence) Standing up to a bully is more important than winning but winning helps. A...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:07
• Storms In Life. (Goldfinch60) Everything turns out for the best if one only has the patience to wait. A...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:05
• Russian veteran of the war with Hitler after Aleksandr Megiroff (Ksey_Gan) A sense of mystery in this poem that may be more metaphoric than its...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:04
• I prayed (Joseph M Marion) A poem of prayer, one of good wishes and faith. Nicely written
  April 3rd, 2025 03:01
• The Color of Pain (MDStone) Nicely written in rhyme this poem explores the issue of pain and how it is...
  April 3rd, 2025 02:59
• Against All Odds (Ezekiel Olayemi) Such a positive feel to this poem and good advice as well. Nicely done
  April 2nd, 2025 18:55