Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Always With Me (Orchidee)
Do you suffer from PTSD? Good write Orchi
June 27th, 2024 08:28 - I Want to be your Lumberjack (Thomas W Case)
A strong manly poem of wanting to return to nature. I feel you.
June 27th, 2024 05:19 - God\'s Power in Judgement (Orchidee)
I just think that when there is a tornado, hurricane, volcano, landslide,...
June 26th, 2024 08:43 - Aggh! the heat! (Orchidee)
Don\'t over heat on those over 18 poems Orchi keep cool. Good write Orchi
June 25th, 2024 11:08 - Rural life (NafisaSB)
The imagery is such that I feel that I am there. Peaceful and beautiful. I...
June 25th, 2024 09:04 - Most high (2781)
An enigma a paradox yes in many ways so. Hard for many to understand...
June 25th, 2024 08:05 - Time Is Like A River. (Goldfinch60)
You follow in the steps of Heraclitus my friend but I imagine following...
June 25th, 2024 05:50 - Empath (Bloomingcereus)
It is one who is near sighted as to emotions unable to see the close inner...
June 25th, 2024 05:45 - Humble Pie (BlessedbyGod)
A truly great message Orchi that I wish more would hear. A human write I...
June 24th, 2024 09:48 - Back from The Future (Teddy.15)
Old friendships revived such a joy a wonderful write friend showing...
June 24th, 2024 09:38 - Dreams Worth Gold (Teddy.15)
Dreams can be so kind. Such a feeling of loss and still a feeling of joy...
June 24th, 2024 09:35 - Reigns (2781)
Don\'t build on a flood plain unless you are building on high pilings....
June 24th, 2024 07:20 - Passover Psalmings (Orchidee)
Mercy, kindness, truth not a bad lot. Good write Orchi
June 23rd, 2024 21:24 - Pain, Like Pie (Thomas W Case)
Great write Thomas
June 23rd, 2024 21:18 - Belief (Doggerel Dave)
It\'s gotten to the point that I don\'t believe even half of what I see...
June 22nd, 2024 21:26 - Onwards with Omnipresence (Orchidee)
Good opening I can always use my heart being lifted. Good one Orchi
June 22nd, 2024 17:34 - Tasting As Good. (Goldfinch60)
My mother used to bake cookies and set them on brown paper to cool. My...
June 22nd, 2024 06:10 - Life for Living (Orchidee)
\"Bringing salvation to each one
Who believes in you through your...
June 21st, 2024 11:01 - Singing Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful picture painted here and the even more beautiful thought that...
June 21st, 2024 06:00 - Reflecting in The Shower (Teddy.15)
Love the positive and negative aspects of this reflection. And in the word...
June 21st, 2024 05:51 - From Farm To Table belated Juneteenth (MLHnow)
How hard to understand others even when we listen. It seems that to really...
June 21st, 2024 05:46 - Here Comes Lucky (Thomas W Case)
A fun read my friend hope you got a roof over head.
June 20th, 2024 13:37 - Pretension (2781)
If it doesn\'t ask for money it\'s your friend. Good write
June 20th, 2024 13:33 - Secure Steps (Orchidee)
The older I get the more secure need to be the steps. Good one Orchi
June 20th, 2024 13:31 - Mantis Chat (Mutley Ravishes)
Love praying mantis but then I am a bit larger than their normal prey. I...
June 20th, 2024 13:28 - Litha Acrostic 2. (Goldfinch60)
Ah a good pagan ritual that I can go along with. No increased traffic or...
June 20th, 2024 04:18 - Jingle Bells! (Orchidee)
The season man! the season! Are you trying to drive me nuts reminding me...
June 20th, 2024 04:13 - Gratitude (Cassie58)
A touching poem with a sense of tenderness. It is well penned in verse and...
June 20th, 2024 04:05 - Redemption call (2781)
Redemption to buy back. A ransom paid. The question being how was it lost,...
June 19th, 2024 06:02 - Hilary Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
Love limericks Andy and this was another good one,
June 19th, 2024 05:18 - Fear Wears Bowling Shirts (Thomas W Case)
Here here I say Thomas
June 18th, 2024 17:07 - Nice (Alan R)
I love the line that \"nice is a wrapper\" so true. There are those that...
June 18th, 2024 17:03 - Starlink (2781)
I feel the pain and can identify with promises made that sometimes come...
June 18th, 2024 08:10 - History it is Not (Part two) (Doggerel Dave)
Still going on and now Israel and Palestine. Time goes on but little...
June 18th, 2024 08:05 - Drying Up? (Orchidee)
1,001 nights wasn\'t that an Arabian hymn? You were right Orchi about the...
June 18th, 2024 05:36 - Tricky Ideas. (Goldfinch60)
I find that a fact when I get one I have to put down everything I\'m doing...
June 18th, 2024 04:46 - Better Life Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
This view and belief keeps one eternally young. Great senryu
June 18th, 2024 04:43 - Mind\'s Eye (Teddy.15)
Facing one\'s fears and past mistakes depends on seeing them accurately...
June 18th, 2024 04:39 - Briers and thorns (2781)
Some see briars and thorns other see butter and honey it depends on who...
June 18th, 2024 04:33 - Resilience (Cassie58)
Hope is the last thing to die. A most beautiful message and poem.
\"Let...
June 17th, 2024 12:06 - Good Night, Baby (Thomas W Case)
Dark and powerful words that carry an ominous tone. Unsure if it is a...
June 17th, 2024 12:01 - Following Faithfully (Orchidee)
In different beliefs this still applies and whether traditional biblical...
June 17th, 2024 06:51 - May the Sun Die (Thomas W Case)
Very nicely imaged Thomas. Beautiful
June 16th, 2024 14:05 - Help Hymnings (Orchidee)
Another nice hymn Orchi
June 16th, 2024 14:02 - Reality becomes you. (Doggerel Dave)
Indeed a truth spoken. I prefer directness to minced words but then I...
June 16th, 2024 06:59 - Swords and spears (2781)
\"Hear a little
Their a little
The little understand...\"
A great play...
June 16th, 2024 06:53 - Days Are Here. (Goldfinch60)
Agree, counting puts the emphasis on the number not the events and if one...
June 16th, 2024 04:39 - When the Laughter Dies (Thomas W Case)
Time takes all. In the downward slide of life entropy is the winner and...
June 16th, 2024 04:34 - Progression Pleadings (Orchidee)
Once again forgiveness appears several times which is just what I need....
June 15th, 2024 10:54 - Hmm (2781)
A write I could identify with since when I looked at my listing on the net...
June 15th, 2024 08:29 - The Talking Clock (Doggerel Dave)
I needed a good chuckle this morning and this one brought it out. Set in...
June 15th, 2024 08:25 - Another Small Tussle… (Doggerel Dave)
A poetic blow? I\'ll stand on the sidelines and watch. Hope it isn\'t pay...
June 15th, 2024 08:11 - Persevering Possibilities (Orchidee)
I hope that when I sleep they do not wake me up early in the morning but...
June 15th, 2024 08:02 - Computer Memories. (Goldfinch60)
I too remember those days. I was doing punch cards and you had to be very...
June 15th, 2024 04:49 - SOLDIERS BLEEDING (Bobby O)
Loved the internal rhyme in this piece Bobby. Powerful words of rage about...
June 14th, 2024 23:11 - River (2781)
Many biblical references here (the river, tree of life, fruit, God as...
June 14th, 2024 09:52 - And All Was Well. (Goldfinch60)
I love how you are able to take a difficult moment and turn it into...
June 14th, 2024 05:39 - Housing Crisis (Doggerel Dave)
There was a time when a baby booming crowd looked back on a limited number...
June 14th, 2024 05:36 - New World (Teddy.15)
Beyond all there is a message here in a hidden parable. The underlying...
June 14th, 2024 04:32 - A Rich Man (Thomas W Case)
Ageing takes its toll and Babylon isn\'t all that it was cracked up to be....
June 13th, 2024 16:41 - Love letter (Tony36)
A cute note short but sweet
June 13th, 2024 16:35 - If You Touch Me, I Will Move (ADarkerMind)
Full of vivid imagery this poem demands attention to the incongruous and...
June 13th, 2024 16:31 - The Glory Of Children. (Goldfinch60)
An act that destroys incense and at times a life. Many molesters were...
June 13th, 2024 05:44 - Crisis of Perception (Bella Shepard)
This is an amazing write in several different ways. First I loved the...
June 13th, 2024 05:27 - Raven Showed Me The Light (Teddy.15)
Again reminiscent of Poe but this time even more.
\"I asked him...
June 13th, 2024 04:54 - Places of Peace (Orchidee)
A hymn of protection and the peace that goes with the faith that one will...
June 13th, 2024 04:41 - Minion Lisa (Teddy.15)
The combination of the picture and lines made me smile. Thanks for the...
June 12th, 2024 04:34 - There Lingers Dignity (Cassie58)
A most beautiful metaphor and image. The reality of the picture so nicely...
June 12th, 2024 04:32 - Troll Time (satire) (Teddy.15)
A fun or maybe not so fun read if one has had experience with them. Flem a...
June 12th, 2024 04:27 - Goldberg Variations. (Goldfinch60)
I have always enjoyed the sound of the harp. It is so seldom used in...
June 12th, 2024 04:20 - Beneficent Barnabas (Orchidee)
Always confused his name with Barabbas which annoyed him greatly. He said...
June 11th, 2024 12:11 - Cloud Submarine. (Goldfinch60)
Memories are one thing that we carry with us as the rest around us...
June 11th, 2024 05:19 - waisy! (Maybel)
A poem of loss and the pain associated with it. There is some ambiguity in...
June 11th, 2024 05:13 - The Holiday (Teddy.15)
Looks like a nice place but February?
A poem that in its brevity still...
June 10th, 2024 12:37 - Prayer Prosperings (Orchidee)
A great form and meter here. Very well done Orchi
June 10th, 2024 10:10 - Sucker Punched (Neville)
One trial learning? Loved the unexpected ending.
June 9th, 2024 23:03 - Mellow Pretty lady (Reynaldo Casison)
Feminine beauty deified and painted in such beautiful images.
June 9th, 2024 09:01 - Flame of desire (NafisaSB)
Such a descriptive image of desire it is well displayed in this poem....
June 9th, 2024 08:59 - Change (Alan R)
Dehumanizing is the word that comes to mind. Most don\'t care and would...
June 9th, 2024 08:57 - I write (O. Ella)
Identifiable in that love is not reciprocal nor earned but given and often...
June 9th, 2024 08:49 - I\'d Rather Die (Pushback) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Well voiced and written and a hot topic that I find myself on your side.
June 9th, 2024 08:47 - A Day in the City (Gray0328)
This pulls at the heartstrings and is masterfully worded. Powerful and
June 9th, 2024 08:45 - Vows (Peto)
A poem that teeters on the edge of emotion the reference to the razor edge...
June 9th, 2024 08:42 - With my (Dharchika)
Raw and full of emotional power. The last line \"With my neck slitted with...
June 9th, 2024 08:37 - M.O.N.T.I.K.A. (Montika) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Qualities that make a desirable personality. Nicely done
June 9th, 2024 08:34 - Rest In Peace, Hazel - Part IV (Randyjohnson71)
Having lost dogs and other pets beloved I find it interesting how bonds...
June 9th, 2024 08:32 - A Night At The Opera. (Goldfinch60)
Most do not appreciate the years of training along with the talent that...
June 9th, 2024 04:52 - senryu to Gaza (Teddy.15)
One that I missed back when that still applies today and seems that it...
June 9th, 2024 04:47 - Seeking Sparks (Orchidee)
Once again a fine hymn. I felt like I was in church again.
June 9th, 2024 04:39 - Just Like Those Stains in The Sky (Neville)
I have spent thousands of hours with Rorschach cards but not nearly as...
June 9th, 2024 04:33 - Memories, Numbers and A Whole Heap of Love (Neville)
Memories are all we have to take along with us. All Sanyasis in life,...
June 8th, 2024 05:14 - Farcical Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
This poem Andy goes deeper than the skin. I felt the scene, the age,...
June 8th, 2024 05:10 - Ready For His Return (Orchidee)
This is a wonderful write Orchi loved it but I think somewhere some man...
June 7th, 2024 11:41 - Our River. (Goldfinch60)
A great metaphor here Andy a river like a path or trail is a guide to the...
June 7th, 2024 04:30 - My Tapestry (Teddy.15)
I took this a couple of ways but the one I like best is that all life is...
June 6th, 2024 18:48 - Security and Safety (Orchidee)
I can hear the music ring with this one Orchi. Another nice hymn
June 6th, 2024 10:04 - Matter of Mercy (Orchidee)
I think that one must have love to have mercy. A fine write Orchi and God...
June 6th, 2024 03:59 - Beegie Adair Acrostic, (Goldfinch60)
So many artists remain unknown to me and I seek out new ones every day....
June 6th, 2024 03:56 - Sheep in Uniform (Teddy.15)
Vivid and style true to a child writing it portrays a horrendous picture...
June 5th, 2024 17:22 - Covid in 2020 (NafisaSB)
Many facts are now leaking out about mismanagement, over reactions and...
June 4th, 2024 13:05
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