Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- time\'s door (Arqios)
Time, rhythm or laws of order, interruptions masked in static of lack of...
July 4th, 2025 07:10 - Ouroboros (Erendis)
A masterful write of the opposites that give birth and death to all things...
July 4th, 2025 06:58 - The suns warmth (Maplespal)
A lovely write of dwelling on the past as opposed to living in the...
July 4th, 2025 06:55 - mood change (Jim56)
A fun read Jim where moods are variable depending on situations and...
July 4th, 2025 05:08 - The Warrior’s Light (Mottakeenur Rehman)
A bold poem calling for self reliance and the strength to trust oneself....
July 4th, 2025 05:03 - THE GIRL WITH THE UMBRELLA (Nocturnal Soul)
A wistful love poem that seems a daydream and rambling thoughts that go...
July 4th, 2025 05:00 - Flight 19: Lost in the Triangle\'s Veil (Brian Otucho)
A ghostly write of an unexplained loss in the Bermuda triangle. This poem...
July 4th, 2025 04:57 - DESCENT INTO SANITY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Powerful and full of anger this poem screams out in defiance against...
July 4th, 2025 04:54 - its been a year.. (Mikaylakcoates)
You did well to convey the emotion of a dark situation that is not yours...
July 4th, 2025 04:52 - Good For God (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A nicely rhymed poem making a statement of belief. Nicely done
July 4th, 2025 04:44 - Mantra (Gewar)
Well written this poem conveys its message in a direct and clear way with...
July 4th, 2025 04:43 - I will write to heavens your story (iv) (Funmiwrites)
Very dark this poem takes one through the departure phase of life from the...
July 4th, 2025 04:33 - Trusted Adult (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
This poem leaves the reader to fill in the gaps between thoughts and form...
July 4th, 2025 04:20 - Choices (Twistedlogicx)
Paradoxical it gives knowledge that due to gaps in our knowledge like the...
July 4th, 2025 04:16 - And The Choir Sang. (Goldfinch60)
Very nice Andy singing always brings out emotions.
July 4th, 2025 04:09 - The song about the Battle of the Caucasus. by Vladimir Visotski (Ksey_Gan)
A poem or song it paints the cold and mountain terrain and the...
July 4th, 2025 03:58 - Relic (Fränz Müller)
This is a powerful poem and in its simplicity and metaphor it takes the...
July 3rd, 2025 20:28 - Curious Hank (Kevin Hulme)
I need some of that. A most fun read.
July 3rd, 2025 20:26 - sometimes (Jon Nakapalau)
A most interesting form as well as a metaphor well written
July 3rd, 2025 18:54 - Bruised by fools. (Mikaylakcoates)
Hard to read, raw and dark. A sad read but masterfully crafted, true...
July 3rd, 2025 18:53 - One Golden Day (JD Boye)
Romantic and beautiful this poem is most well written
July 3rd, 2025 17:43 - Redux - Child Care 14/5/25 (Doggerel Dave)
A sad outcome of a capitalistic society where greed and need do not always...
July 3rd, 2025 17:41 - Twilight\'s breath (Amethyste)
I take it Polly is a woman and a romantic one at that. Very seductive and...
July 3rd, 2025 17:37 - Phoenix (BlessedbyGod)
A poem of resilience and strength. Nicely written with mythological...
July 3rd, 2025 17:35 - Like Summer (Vanna)
Beautifully expressed pent up feelings released and a lighter feeling...
July 3rd, 2025 16:09 - The Ironing Board (Gray0328)
My mother had the same board as did my wife and those smells and memories...
July 3rd, 2025 16:06 - Just Memories (Ezekiel Olayemi)
Change is intimidating especially as we age. A lovely writ about such...
July 3rd, 2025 13:26 - Life, Borrowed Time (Mercy Robert)
A poem that dwells on possibilities and in the element of time. Things are...
July 3rd, 2025 13:24 - \"China\" (Damaso)
Filled with diametrically opposed elements that unite in one way or...
July 3rd, 2025 13:20 - Should I open the door ? (Adiii)
Filled with blood and flesh this poem speaks of fear of an unknown...
July 3rd, 2025 13:15 - Kisses, Tea, and Why Granny Lost Her Balls-- (Cheeky Missy)
Now the idea of balls of yarn is different than yarns about balls. A fun...
July 3rd, 2025 13:10 - Your Faithful Friend (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Mind altering a muse that always helps the poet. Nicely written
July 3rd, 2025 13:06 - Veil (Kaz)
A most interesting haiku that I continue to try to link together. A...
July 3rd, 2025 13:00 - I Stand (Tony36)
A good write on standing up for what one sees as right, for the weak, for...
July 3rd, 2025 09:39 - The Cycle of a Dark Seed (Tristan Robert Lange)
The anger of youth in this poem as well as violence. Even in metaphor it...
July 3rd, 2025 08:45 - Get One Over (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
What was once cooperation now a rivalry. Change happens and recognition of...
July 3rd, 2025 08:42 - Conflicted (NAZIA ZAHRA)
Clever play on words reversing the meaning in various places nicely done
July 3rd, 2025 08:40 - Too many yesterdays not enough tomorrows (Jane Walker)
A great tribute to a player who\'s tragic death ended a career and the joy...
July 3rd, 2025 07:26 - I don’t like me (Georgia Watson)
A poem of an inner search for value and the questioning of why others see...
July 3rd, 2025 07:20 - The Boiled Black Sea (RSM0812)
A world where might makes right, survival of the fittest is natures way...
July 3rd, 2025 06:15 - Summer Scene (Mya)
An idyllic picture painted by this poem makes the reader want to fall into...
July 3rd, 2025 06:07 - just a little sunshine (Jim56)
Literal or metaphorical it is true. A little brightness helps. Nicely said...
July 3rd, 2025 06:05 - Can we (Maplespal)
Great questions that seem to have a right answer but the reality is far...
July 3rd, 2025 06:03 - Wretched Contentment (Erendis)
This has an uncanny fit to today\'s world and politics it makes one...
July 3rd, 2025 06:01 - WHEN KINGS WERE SLAIN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The old replaced by the new not always for the better and a destroyer of...
July 3rd, 2025 05:58 - THE REMINDERS OF WHAT I USED TO BE (Nocturnal Soul)
Sacrifice the price, suffering is the human burden says the Buda and...
July 3rd, 2025 05:55 - For My Mary. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful declaration of love Andy nicely done.
July 3rd, 2025 05:51 - Earth Shaking (Mutley Ravishes)
I feel that tremor Mutley a battle between intellectual and emotional and...
July 3rd, 2025 05:49 - I will write to heavens your story (Funmiwrites)
Such a great representation of a shift in attention and the memory of a...
July 3rd, 2025 05:46 - Christmas 🎄 (Timothy Hilary Musa)
This poem does sparkle with the feel of Christmas and so early in the year...
July 3rd, 2025 05:43 - Memory\'s Black Hole (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt this philosophical enigma merits a fave. Very cleverly written in...
July 3rd, 2025 05:40 - Two To Share (ForeverJesus7)
A love poem that looks to the future with care and tenderness. Very nice
July 3rd, 2025 05:36 - Too Sensitive (Positive Girl)
Always good to question one\'s sensitivity but sometimes there is a need...
July 3rd, 2025 05:34 - A spontaneous piece of light (EvenwheniLie)
A most thought provoking write that equates God with light which is an old...
July 3rd, 2025 05:30 - closed windows (Arqios)
And as you read these words spanning seas and vast tracts of land know...
July 3rd, 2025 05:28 - Struggle is the Alchemy of Life (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Mottakeenur you have done it again. A magnificent poem of wisdom set in...
July 3rd, 2025 05:15 - I am glad you want me ally (Poetaldo)
A poem of friends in our old age we all need them. Heart warming. Nicely...
July 2nd, 2025 20:24 - Coco (Yael Garcia)
Sounds like you are hungry with all the eat lines. A fun read. Enjoyed it.
July 2nd, 2025 19:16 - Draconian measures promise to hobble future SEPTA transit riders (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Another poem of life for the senior citizen. Nicely done
July 2nd, 2025 17:52 - The Song About Hares by Leonid Derbenev (Ksey_Gan)
A fanciful song and magical in its flow
July 2nd, 2025 17:50 - I Didn’t Cry for You (Vanna)
A sad poem of loss not of another but of oneself and who one was. Well
July 2nd, 2025 13:40 - Twilight (Amethyste)
An ethereal poem that speaks from the soul
July 2nd, 2025 13:38 - dark matter (Gray0328)
Deep questions about the unknown, unseen, not heard, touched, tasted or...
July 2nd, 2025 13:37 - Not a poem (Starlight)
Advice from experience words from a mind in motion. Nicely written
July 2nd, 2025 13:28 - Sacred Melody (Kurt Philip Behm)
Music comes from deep inside and is written on lines of emotion that...
July 2nd, 2025 13:26 - Wasted TeyeME doesn’t heal (Bragee)
Loss such a painful feeling and here it is echoed in words of regret and...
July 2nd, 2025 13:25 - You Find Me (Wordbyrdwriting)
Reinforced with small and faint print like a small voice from a void it...
July 2nd, 2025 13:23 - Poverty, A Prison (Mercy Robert)
A wonderful metaphor and left with the feeling of hope. Well written
July 2nd, 2025 13:20 - Twenty-Sixth Ward Bank (Fränz Müller)
On first reading I though of the city but then came to mind the holocaust...
July 2nd, 2025 13:11 - Meow and Don\'t Follow The Pink Trend (Cheeky Missy)
Cats I had when I did follow the pink trend. People would say you are...
July 2nd, 2025 13:08 - We were the Aluminum Cowboys (Thomas W Case)
Congratulations Thomas on the book signing. As for the poem it took me...
July 2nd, 2025 13:01 - Where Are They Now? (Tristan Robert Lange)
They are long gone and the majesty of mighty Babylon lies buried soon to...
July 2nd, 2025 12:57 - Benue (Timothy Hilary Musa)
War and peace a novel by Tolstoy and a plea not only from this poem but...
July 2nd, 2025 12:53 - Late Night Dust (Framed Mirror)
A poem that appeals to the heart and calls for understanding of that, that...
July 2nd, 2025 07:37 - dog friendship (Jim56)
Another lovely poem about man\'s best friend. A wonderful write Jim
July 2nd, 2025 07:33 - I cry (Tony36)
Emotional and heart felt this poem cries out to all of us to take our...
July 2nd, 2025 07:31 - baker’s gift (Arqios)
The message of the poem alone merits the fave. Nicely written it flows...
July 2nd, 2025 07:27 - “Bent, Not Broken” (Job Welime)
Raw and from the heart this poem asks for honest communication to rebuild...
July 2nd, 2025 07:23 - How a Good Man Loves (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Truth the basis of trust that is the foundation of a relationship. Love...
July 2nd, 2025 07:20 - My Zarathustra (Erendis)
A beautiful write that in symbols and metaphor speaks out for freedom of...
July 2nd, 2025 05:00 - Let\'s start a war (Maplespal)
So many wrathful gods of war. Why then when God preached peace do his...
July 2nd, 2025 04:57 - A nuisent (2781)
Clever and with the help of numerology it works. If followed it goes much...
July 2nd, 2025 04:53 - THE VOTE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Always a battle between man\'s greed and that of compassion in an...
July 2nd, 2025 04:51 - Capitalist Crusts (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
With the chorus it feels song like. A poem that deplores capitalism as an...
July 2nd, 2025 04:46 - Holding your hand while chasing clouds (Gewar)
A poem of shame, guilt and forgiveness. So nicely imaged and constructed
July 2nd, 2025 04:41 - Stars In The Morning Sky (JaxolotlPoems)
A poem of love, infatuation and fixation. Where focus goes beyond that of...
July 2nd, 2025 04:38 - I am nobody\'s Funmi (Funmiwrites)
Nicely written this topic is close to heart. No one belongs to anyone...
July 2nd, 2025 04:36 - Preface by Microsoft Copilot to my book \"Poetic Visions\" volume 18 (Soman Ragavan)
Beautiful words about an ambitious project. Nicely organized and presented...
July 2nd, 2025 04:31 - Henry Duran (MKS)
I very much liked this poem in its rhyme, meter, subject and meaning. It...
July 2nd, 2025 04:21 - When The Bluebird Finally Sings (Teddy.15)
Good advice cleverly woven in lines of twisted time where gentle cuteness...
July 2nd, 2025 04:16 - The Complete Collection. (Goldfinch60)
So seldom lightning strikes and one sees it but all hear its thunder. So...
July 2nd, 2025 04:10 - I will write to heavens your story (ii) (Funmiwrites)
A sad farewell and well written with good rhyme and flow. Nicely done in...
July 2nd, 2025 03:55 - I Give You : The Wasp (Kevin Hulme)
A fun read that gave me a smile. I have had my run ins in the past, been...
July 1st, 2025 19:43 - What Has Your Reality Shown You? (Lyricalremedy)
The poem\'s metaphor is a good one. By their fruits ye shall know them....
July 1st, 2025 17:56 - I’m Going Through The Wide Moscow Street by Gena Shpalikoff (Ksey_Gan)
A nice poem of reminders of what one calls home or place of origin....
July 1st, 2025 16:31 - Yesteryear, Blame Games and FUN (Cheeky Missy)
Another series of sonnets that enchant. I know what it is to work the...
July 1st, 2025 16:29 - Lost (BlessedbyGod)
Lovely and consistent rhyme in this poem with good flow it reads very...
July 1st, 2025 16:25 - Music (Amethyste)
A euphoric state of love spoken of in this poem. Nicely said in so few...
July 1st, 2025 16:23 - Maze (Vanna)
A maze is confusing and meant to deceive. Here I hear the indecision of...
July 1st, 2025 16:21 - Revelation (Fränz Müller)
A poem of desire and a plea for closeness. Nicely worded and well...
July 1st, 2025 16:19
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