Comments on community poems by Thoughtless
- Love, Valentine? (Cheeky Missy)
He may think of plucking flowers and the \"darling buds of May.\"
August 15th, 2024 15:22 - My only desire (Paullyna)
Walking toward the end filled with light?
August 15th, 2024 15:18 - Rising In Love (FallingAwake2)
Almost a mind meld. Lovely.
August 15th, 2024 13:56 - Fun Guy (FallingAwake2)
A fun write. Nice one. The title points one in the right direction.
August 15th, 2024 13:55 - Misunderstood (Cassie58)
How often a child\'s innocence is lost because of foolish adults. So often...
August 15th, 2024 11:00 - The Anonymous Daughter (Serene)
I hope your writing serves some purpose in changing things. I felt the...
August 15th, 2024 10:54 - What I Want (13LaurenD)
It\'s a matter of self-assertion and not aggression. If one does not...
August 15th, 2024 07:25 - Politics over nature (EvenwheniLie)
In overall consumption and pollution, the United States with 4.25% of the...
August 14th, 2024 22:00 - Not Fair (NinjaGirl)
It\'s always hard to heal. Good write.
August 14th, 2024 21:50 - mis understood (NinjaGirl)
I get the hint of being bullied. Am I correct or not?...
August 14th, 2024 21:49 - A moment (Xqw)
If a picture is worth a thousand words, a good poem is worth more than a...
August 14th, 2024 13:20 - I Don\'t Know What To Do (13LaurenD)
You do what you must.
August 14th, 2024 13:16 - Temporary love (Natalie Heisey)
Then it wasn\'t love at all.
August 14th, 2024 13:11 - tell your family i said hi (Carpe4diem)
That is sad. Good expression.
August 14th, 2024 08:48 - Floating (JoyJoy)
Perhaps it will. One can always hope. Nice write.
August 14th, 2024 08:43 - LIFE OF LIE (Kwrites)
It can be difficult. Keep on writing.
August 13th, 2024 21:51 - My Dad (Angela)
Grief is always with us. Each of us handles it differently. A personal and...
August 13th, 2024 20:14 - Eye Contact (Wh)
How hard to face one\'s crush. That thumping of the heart, the reddening...
August 13th, 2024 14:58 - Frigid or Lost? (Wh)
How sad. Loneliness and alienation.
Well expressed.
August 13th, 2024 14:55 - A 19\'s Poem (Wh)
Nicely done.
August 13th, 2024 14:53 - Lonely Little Vagina (Thomas W Case)
Ah, memory lane. It\'s an interesting place. Loved it.
August 13th, 2024 14:09 - A Special Breed (Tom Dylan)
Dogs are family. Nice writing.
August 13th, 2024 14:05 - pain (Sheta)
According to neuroscientists, our brains recreate what we hear, feel, say,...
August 13th, 2024 13:53 - At the Beach (Tony36)
Relaxing. Nice.
August 13th, 2024 07:57 - Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire (Mutley Ravishes)
It is what it is.
August 13th, 2024 07:54 - Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15)
Aww. How nice.
August 13th, 2024 07:50 - I write (Tony36)
It happens. You write what you can until you can write what you want...
August 12th, 2024 17:09 - Point of view (Sorenbarrett)
Nice write about povs.
August 11th, 2024 10:07 - Evening Stroll (Tony36)
A woman once asked me who my fantasy was. I told her that I once held my...
August 11th, 2024 10:05 - She (2781)
We never know who we\'ll find will be our strength.
August 11th, 2024 10:01 - House on fire (I am Danea)
Toxic is toxic. I had some of this in my life as well. Writing is...
August 11th, 2024 08:43 - Hmm. (I am Danea)
We all die alone. Remembrance is for those who live. However, it is sad...
August 11th, 2024 08:41 - Swan\'s Lake (Teddy.15)
Keep on dancing, Teddy.15. Poetry may be ballet expressed in words.
August 10th, 2024 11:41 - Sky (Annemarie)
Nicely written this flight of yours into the \"ether.\"
August 10th, 2024 11:34 - I AM A WOMAN (Kwrites)
The struggle to realize your own worth. Bravo. You know what to do.
August 7th, 2024 13:16 - The Truth (Sheryffat)
God does not want His servants to suffer. He wants them to be happy....
August 7th, 2024 13:11 - Kisah Kita Waktu (Nadila Riskandi)
Sad but true.
August 6th, 2024 21:25 - dandelion seeds. (DeadRose)
A delightful piece.
August 6th, 2024 15:59 - Beauty (Angela)
Nicely written.
August 6th, 2024 14:56 - Sadness (Angela)
A job that needs to be done for people who do not understand. Have you...
August 6th, 2024 14:53 - Little Red Riding Hood (Tony36)
Nice write and recap.
August 6th, 2024 08:16 - A Very Sweet Dream of Home (Teddy.15)
It\'s the contrast between what is and is not. One can have two homes...
August 6th, 2024 06:43 - Hot Water (Anabella151)
About abuse, yes. I hope it\'s not based on experience. Good write.
August 5th, 2024 17:33 - ()
What a positive attitude. I like it!
August 5th, 2024 13:18 - Heart speaks (Natalie Heisey)
A true Phoenix. Enjoyed your composition.
August 5th, 2024 11:39 - not so empty thoughts (Emptythoughts)
Who knows?
August 4th, 2024 20:46 - If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill (Teddy.15)
Finding joy in the total outcome by accepting the good and bad. Knowing...
August 4th, 2024 08:08 - A Pin Drop Moment (Teddy.15)
I enjoyed your poem. It inspired me to write my own poor version on the...
August 2nd, 2024 21:43 - Lake of Tears (Anabella151)
Not to be acknowledged by the object of one\'s passion is the definition...
August 2nd, 2024 21:33 - ()
To not be acknowledged when desired by the object of one\'s passion is the...
August 2nd, 2024 21:19 - (I can stay here) For a while. (Salem)
There is nothing more soothing than getting lost in a bath. One can get...
August 2nd, 2024 09:59 - Vampire of blame (Sorenbarrett)
We so often dig our own graves.
August 1st, 2024 23:19 - Losing Me ... (Diana .)
You haven\'t written anything for a while. Looking forward to more.
August 1st, 2024 17:21 - A Battle With Irony (Teddy.15)
Hey. You give their lives meaning. What more can one do? They should thank...
July 31st, 2024 13:37 - these thoughts (Sheta)
Not all cat ladies are crazy. Toxic people are though.
July 30th, 2024 11:24 - To the Bride and Groom (Teddy.15)
Nice sentiment.
July 28th, 2024 20:33 - ()
Nice sentiment
July 28th, 2024 20:31 - Fugitives (Thoughtless)
Not good, I know. I enjoyed writing it.
July 27th, 2024 13:15 - NIGHT SKY (Qurrathul Ain)
The stunning difference between subjective and objective reality. And...
July 27th, 2024 12:59 - Where are you my love (Gloria Denise)
Abandonment is truly painful, especially by one who leads another on as a...
July 26th, 2024 14:32 - ()
LOL! Such is vanity.
July 26th, 2024 14:05 - ()
An oddly some of the places we never want to be can turn into the exact...
July 25th, 2024 20:18 - Run away (Tony36)
I sympathize. May you find peace.
July 25th, 2024 16:33 - ()
There is no shame in being assaulted. The shame is the perpetrator who...
July 25th, 2024 16:31 - to know (DeadRose)
Ah, the perennial scholar and philosopher. \"Kant\" you see it?
July 25th, 2024 16:29 - Sex well done (Sorenbarrett)
I understand your sentiment. However, I am religious and have no problem...
July 24th, 2024 07:43 - There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge (Teddy.15)
Grief is so personal and experienced so differently by each individual. It...
July 24th, 2024 06:45 - Precious Thursday (Bella Shepard)
Moving.
July 21st, 2024 17:08 - The Unfaded Petals (Ananya Bakshi)
Sweet!
May 28th, 2024 12:45 - Fishing (Teddy.15)
Not what we mean by fishing here. It\'s a different metaphor. Good one,...
May 15th, 2024 10:48 - Cold (𓆩Mase𓆪)
I was away too long. I liked the poem.
April 22nd, 2024 10:16 - A Perfect Madness (Teddy.15)
It\'s that way sometimes.
April 1st, 2024 14:14 - Walking In The Rain (Eileen M. Clark)
Nice. A golden time.
March 26th, 2024 13:34 - Птица без крилја ([email protected])
Мне понравилось
March 25th, 2024 18:58 - The Orange Kool-Aid (Thoughtless)
March 24th, 2024 14:04 - ALONE IN A CROWD (PassionatePoetess)
It\'s hard.
March 18th, 2024 14:45 - Why John why (Hey!)
So sad. Sorry to hear. Very heartbreaking.
March 17th, 2024 13:00 - Which Prevents Him. (Theroadnottaken)
Interesting. Is this from harsh experience or vicariously? I may be...
March 15th, 2024 15:00 - Art (Meg)
I know the feeling. Wow!
March 15th, 2024 14:33 - Clay (Miss_Dreamer)
A good example of fatalism.
March 12th, 2024 17:18 - A Dysfunctional Spider Web (Cheyenne Smith)
It is a hard road to hoe, as we say here in the States.
Once, a...
March 12th, 2024 17:00 - Hell or Heaven (Sunshine777)
Perfection can be a nightmare.
March 10th, 2024 15:39 - This Ain\'t Life (Sunshine777)
There may be a sequel with great and terrifying consequences.
March 10th, 2024 15:37 - Streets (A Succession of Haiku\'s) (Courlieth_aeolis)
Various views at different times. Nice.
March 10th, 2024 08:08 - Like River Grass (Cassie58)
I enjoyed the use of an extended metaphor, which is hard to do. Thank you...
March 9th, 2024 00:29 - Love hurts (Princesslove)
Unrequited love. This I understand.
Keep writing.
March 8th, 2024 13:24 - Hold Me (Nah Hannah)
Oh, to be nestled in the heart of another once more! To be lifted above...
March 8th, 2024 10:50 - Sure, you love me. (Lillian)
It happens too often.
March 7th, 2024 09:00 - Luck of Death (Courlieth_aeolis)
A close call.
March 7th, 2024 08:56 - The Waves, The Sand (Ashley25)
Nice. Write more.
March 5th, 2024 20:24 - Unbounded (Teddy.15)
Without a mast, you need a motor. Good set of metaphors. All ships have a...
March 3rd, 2024 17:33 - Untitled (DD.)
Pithy and pointed.
March 2nd, 2024 00:09 - Home (Miss_Dreamer)
A hard road to travel.
March 1st, 2024 17:14 - Everlasting Route (Anny Isany)
The negative adaptive response changed to a positive stimulus.
February 25th, 2024 19:06 - Party Animal (Teddy.15)
You might like the series Hazbin in Hell. Who knows? I know about burning...
February 24th, 2024 14:49 - In Quiet Wonder (Cloie)
Nice exposition.
February 22nd, 2024 21:35 - Love Button (Thomas W Case)
You can only hope. And there are dreams to warm the night. A++
February 20th, 2024 16:22 - I Lost my Sorrow (Morgana)
There is no joy without sorrow.
Lost sorrow might simply be hidden...
February 20th, 2024 16:10 - Lifeguard (Catluvr18)
Not bad. Remember, show, not tell.
February 19th, 2024 22:12 - Who am I? (Lillian)
The two wolves are within.
February 19th, 2024 14:12
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