Comments on community poems by Thoughtless
- Like River Grass (Cassie58)
I enjoyed the use of an extended metaphor, which is hard to do. Thank you...
March 9th, 2024 00:29 - Love hurts (Princesslove)
Unrequited love. This I understand.
Keep writing.
March 8th, 2024 13:24 - Hold Me (Nah Hannah)
Oh, to be nestled in the heart of another once more! To be lifted above...
March 8th, 2024 10:50 - Sure, you love me. (Lillian)
It happens too often.
March 7th, 2024 09:00 - Luck of Death (Courlieth_aeolis)
A close call.
March 7th, 2024 08:56 - The Waves, The Sand (Ashley25)
Nice. Write more.
March 5th, 2024 20:24 - Unbounded (Teddy.15)
Without a mast, you need a motor. Good set of metaphors. All ships have a...
March 3rd, 2024 17:33 - Untitled (DD.)
Pithy and pointed.
March 2nd, 2024 00:09 - Home (Miss_Dreamer)
A hard road to travel.
March 1st, 2024 17:14 - Everlasting Route (Anny Isany)
The negative adaptive response changed to a positive stimulus.
February 25th, 2024 19:06 - Party Animal (Teddy.15)
You might like the series Hazbin in Hell. Who knows? I know about burning...
February 24th, 2024 14:49 - In Quiet Wonder (Cloie)
Nice exposition.
February 22nd, 2024 21:35 - Love Button (Thomas W Case)
You can only hope. And there are dreams to warm the night. A++
February 20th, 2024 16:22 - I Lost my Sorrow (Morgana)
There is no joy without sorrow.
Lost sorrow might simply be hidden...
February 20th, 2024 16:10 - Hide and Seek (Nubianpoet)
It does happen that way.
February 20th, 2024 08:36
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