Comments on community poems by Thoughtless
- Baby (Sorenbarrett)
Reminds me of my first newborn. Then they grow up.
February 21st, 2026 12:03 - The Perfect Marriage (Teddy.15)
Humorous. Mrs. Wally seems a bit unfair. But that\'s the point.
February 20th, 2026 16:48 - Freedom (Thoughtless)
Well said.
October 24th, 2025 11:05 - Lost paper thoughts (Sorenbarrett)
September 14th, 2025 07:37 - Lost paper thoughts (Sorenbarrett)
Sad but true.
September 14th, 2025 07:37 - Little Prince (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice)
Quite parental, unless I misunderstand. Nice!
September 14th, 2025 07:33 - I don\'t wanna die (Poetic_Carm)
I\'m old and I don\'t want to die either. Good write.
May 9th, 2025 17:08 - Child innocence (Sorenbarrett)
A complaint about every new technology. However, social media may be a...
April 25th, 2025 07:43 - Mind’s Great Ocean (Teddy.15)
I don\'t understand such people. I\'m in my eighties, and believe the...
April 23rd, 2025 15:53 - Flat line (HollyGolightly)
A hell of a message.
April 22nd, 2025 08:23 - April\'s Senryu (Teddy.15)
And after the rain?
April 3rd, 2025 15:39 - *Sigh* I\'m Either Impossibly Stubborn, Or....? (Cheeky Missy)
Ah yes, so it is. Spring seems to be spirited away, but winter will melt...
February 12th, 2025 16:44 - Unjust (Teddy.15)
How sad and true. I can relate. It does seem unjust, but unfortunately...
February 3rd, 2025 12:04 - Moments (Cassie58)
A sad world we live in. The little ones everywhere helpless because of...
January 30th, 2025 09:03 - The Burns in Me (Teddy.15)
I often quoted Robert Burns to my wife when first we met. She was...
January 26th, 2025 17:18 - Aliens are coming! (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
LOL!
January 16th, 2025 12:21 - CARICATURE (Lily May Emerald)
A disappointing holiday celebration. I get it. Thanks for your writing.
January 13th, 2025 10:31 - THE DICHOTOMY OF DECEMBER (@merci)
Did you know that Jingle Bells was actually written for a holiday we...
January 13th, 2025 09:50 - FORBIDDEN TEMPTATION (@merci)
I know the feeling, the temporary ecstasy of release, then the fading...
January 13th, 2025 09:44 - WHY WOULDN\'T I ? (Lyra Silvertongue)
This would be a good song. It has more than one interpretation of love.
January 13th, 2025 09:35 - Baby giggles (Tony36)
Uplifting.
January 11th, 2025 10:18 - History (Teddy.15)
Touching.
December 28th, 2024 23:05 - Yes, \"...Figgy Pudding! We Won\'t Go--\" (Cheeky Missy)
But myths express a deeper truth. Santa may be more real than we realize....
December 25th, 2024 20:12 - I, I Guess I\'ll Hafta Look VERY Sheepish (Cheeky Missy)
Methinks a little cheesecake is in order, Milady. Nice one.
December 8th, 2024 15:38 - A Losing Game (Cassie58)
I do not drink alcohol but have suffered the effects of family members who...
November 19th, 2024 09:43 - Yes, Dear? (Cheeky Missy)
Perhaps adopting a magnificent obsession could serve to clarify matters....
November 2nd, 2024 12:43 - He Quipped \"Do You EVER Go Home?\" with I Guess I\'m Drowning, Likeas Wont, and then What Can I Say? (Cheeky Missy)
A way to wake up early in the morning. My first batches were usually...
September 26th, 2024 06:29 - If you miss me (Domilla)
It sounds like being in love with love.
Nice write.
September 6th, 2024 14:56 - Devotion ≠ Exclusivity (Vicecream)
A nice thought about love and its levels.
September 6th, 2024 14:54 - And So It Is (Cassie58)
Some change is like a hammer blow by being unexpected. When an individual...
September 6th, 2024 14:51 - A Whale of a Time (senryu) (Teddy.15)
A serenity prayer of sorts. Well done.
September 5th, 2024 07:41 - Morning verses (Arial)
What if? The largest phrase in the language.
September 1st, 2024 23:46 - Unknown (Eryn Saunders)
Nice about being misunderstood. Perhaps a hint that the writer may not be...
August 31st, 2024 17:27 - The knight (Tony36)
Nice narrative.
August 31st, 2024 11:13 - You Left Me So Soon (Sara Salve)
I understand that grief is difficult and different for everyone. It...
August 31st, 2024 11:12 - REVENGE BEST SERVED HOT (Kwrites)
Filled with vitriol and revenge unrequited. Good write kwrites.
August 29th, 2024 14:29 - Right Person, Wrong Time (13LaurenD)
Repeating the same process is called insanity. I think.
A good example...
August 29th, 2024 14:27 - upset (NinjaGirl)
So, there. Nice one.
August 29th, 2024 14:24 - Alone (Tony36)
A sad situation well described.
August 29th, 2024 08:16 - Dee Bestie (Angela)
There is always that one friend who is always a friend.
August 28th, 2024 14:00 - A moment of quiver (Justina)
How nice. It was pleasant for you. Good write.
August 28th, 2024 13:58 - Faded love (Fanita530)
So, you were ghosted. Is this fiction or experience? Based on reality but...
August 27th, 2024 10:38 - Lessons Learned (_jyotsna27)
Stumbling blocks overcome. Great metaphor.
August 25th, 2024 09:15 - drips for the grip on reality (NinjaGirl)
Doing your thing as usual, girl.
Interesting.
August 24th, 2024 15:00 - WATER WOMAN (Magzzbaby)
The power of frustration.
August 23rd, 2024 15:30 - My Flyover State (Thoughtless)
Yes. That\'s true.
August 23rd, 2024 09:43 - Children of the Night (Helena Yonatan)
Explain to this ignorant one. Thank you.
August 23rd, 2024 08:10 - MY BLOODY FOOTPRINTS. (Kwrites)
Most abusers are someone who is known by the victim.
August 22nd, 2024 12:24 - Your Poisonous Love (Veronica Achlys writes)
A good description of a toxic relationship. Well done. Real or fictional...
August 22nd, 2024 12:20 - The Portal (Tony36)
A portal would probably be safer than teleportation if held stable....
August 22nd, 2024 07:36 - write it down (Jim56)
True that.
August 22nd, 2024 06:51 - what if i die ????? (Sheta)
Unfortunately, even when someone is with you, from my experience, dying is...
August 21st, 2024 22:24 - Water (NafisaSB)
Here in the United States, we seem to always be in a perpetual state of...
August 21st, 2024 22:20 - God Revived (Helena Yonatan)
Did you major in philosophy?? Just wondering.
August 21st, 2024 21:26 - God Revived (Helena Yonatan)
Nihilism question mark.
Sharp projection.
Thanks for sharing.
August 21st, 2024 16:28 - Burn The Bridge (13LaurenD)
Good narrative. I too know about giving away parts of myself which were...
August 21st, 2024 16:26 - Lurking in the Shadows (M.E.M.)
Things unseen. They can be so real.
August 21st, 2024 15:14 - Inside Out (Teddy.15)
Good advice. Timely message. When we are young, we either think we are...
August 21st, 2024 10:52 - NEVER ENDING (Magzzbaby)
A hard road of unrequited love and a toxic partner. Liked the imagery....
August 21st, 2024 10:50 - BROKEN CHRYSALIS (Lily May Emerald)
You got that right. But sometimes it is what it i is acceptance of what...
August 21st, 2024 08:42 - \'found\' (Athora13)
\"T\'is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved all.\"...
August 20th, 2024 23:50 - Loved you more than I loved myself. (Niki Oz)
The Greeks thought love a form of temporary insanity. The Romans thought...
August 20th, 2024 22:53 - Eternal Happiness (Pita)
Yes. Love transcends death. But what is death but a door into another...
August 20th, 2024 22:42 - The gentle kill (Arial)
Every silver lining has dark cloud.
Nice way to turn things upside down.
August 20th, 2024 14:03 - Corporate (Bella Shepard)
Because of greed. Capitalists have used the concept of minimal regulation...
August 20th, 2024 13:58 - *poof* HELLO MOTHERFVCKER! (NinjaGirl)
Nothing like toxic people to NOT make your day. Well written.
August 20th, 2024 12:19 - A Co-Write With Shakespeare (Teddy.15)
What I consider my original home is not where I was born but understand...
August 20th, 2024 07:00 - Apology (Thoughtless)
Thank you.
August 20th, 2024 06:36 - Torpedoes (Maplespal)
\"Friendly fire.\"
Not good.
Well written.
August 20th, 2024 06:02 - Why can\'t you love me? (Juliette72)
Harsh. No one should be called a loser.
A lesson here. Nicely written.
August 19th, 2024 21:37 - Commit to yourself (Emvd)
Relaxation is for being refreshed.
Excellent
August 19th, 2024 20:56 - living memory (Serialseductress)
Wow! Dark and deep.
August 19th, 2024 20:17 - This is Rhetorical (M.E.M.)
Sometimes change is hard, Nice write,
August 19th, 2024 16:34 - I am drowning, my dear, in seas of fire.... (Katdream)
To be cast aside is to burn. I hope I understood this theme as unrequited....
August 19th, 2024 15:34 - The Scalpel Saga... (Kwrites)
It ain\'t Scrubs either. Nothing is expected. Nice expression of your...
August 19th, 2024 15:04 - Echo (Arial)
Wishing for anyone, a plaintiff cry of the lonely. Perhaps tabula rasa is...
August 19th, 2024 15:00 - Learn (Bella Shepard)
Sage advice.
August 19th, 2024 14:58 - Go For It (13LaurenD)
Keep your eyes on the prize.
Nice!
August 19th, 2024 06:27 - Flames (Beatrixx89)
So, let it be done. Well written.
August 18th, 2024 16:45 - Convenience (Sassy Lou)
Nicely worded.
August 18th, 2024 16:41 - strange world that waits and watches (Serialseductress)
It sounds like the last throws of alcoholism, which can be one of the...
August 18th, 2024 16:39 - contemplation of a broken heart (Anna_x_life)
A nice write on teen angst. Well done. Don\'t wish on others what you...
August 18th, 2024 12:38 - An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15)
There is nothing like a Sunday with a sundae at the local dessert parlor....
August 18th, 2024 08:10 - a short poem (Xqw)
Time to meditate. Nice.
August 18th, 2024 08:07 - Again? (13LaurenD)
Unless you are prepared to receive what you go after, it will not come to...
August 18th, 2024 08:06 - I miss you (SonamThago)
When you miss someone, you cannot help but miss the us.
August 18th, 2024 08:04 - The soul that exists (Justina)
Striving for balance and harmony.
Longing for peace, spirituality and...
August 17th, 2024 22:25 - Rage reclaimed (Natalie Heisey)
Nicely done!
August 17th, 2024 22:20 - Summer of 24 (Jasmine Swift)
Against all odds! Yes. Well written.
August 17th, 2024 22:19 - Absence (Blossompayal)
Strange how something as love, which can be wonderful, can be so heart...
August 17th, 2024 11:37 - Pretty Little Whore (Elphaba993)
Men are whores too. But no one ever says it.
August 17th, 2024 11:34 - Alone (Tony36)
A tale told out of time. People subtly change without adjusting....
August 17th, 2024 08:15 - There\'s Coffee... (Cheeky Missy)
I can almost smell the coffee. I need to wake up. ☕
August 16th, 2024 08:38 - Closed and Clothed (Mya)
It\'s called the Spotlight Effect. Most people aren\'t even looking. They...
August 16th, 2024 07:59 - First Time I Touched His Body (Alana6789)
Good for you.
August 16th, 2024 07:38 - Sleeping Fantasy (Alana6789)
You are good. Like it.
August 16th, 2024 07:37 - Hello? (Beatrixx89)
You move on. I said I\'m sorry to others. You do what you can do.
August 15th, 2024 19:04 - Home life (Beatrixx89)
Only when you see who you are for yourself are you able to move forward.
August 15th, 2024 19:02 - Lost Soul. (Debbie)
Depression can be a long tunnel into night.
August 15th, 2024 15:52 - Ex-lover of mine. (Debbie)
It happens to all of us.
August 15th, 2024 15:50
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