Comments on community poems by orchidee
- The Man From The Pru. (Goldfinch60)
Seen one - a milkman! In a 1970\'s comedy show.
My question is - When...
October 22nd, 2020 02:11 - The Man From The Pru. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
I was a sort of Milkman\'s Assistant, even before my...
October 22nd, 2020 02:09 - Hold Hard. (Fay Slimm.)
We\'ll have to get up an hour early to see more daylight then - lighter...
October 21st, 2020 07:52 - R E S P O N S I B I L I T Y ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.We can only do so much - the ridiculous and impossible:...
October 21st, 2020 01:43 - Lost Pictures. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
October 21st, 2020 01:40 - UNSAME 1 - 3 (Michael Edwards)
Good writes and pic M. Hum-Berle Pie. Miss B make it?
October 21st, 2020 01:39 - Joker44’s Side – For Others (Nafis Light)
Good write J.
October 20th, 2020 10:51 - The Way, The Truth, and The Life -- Triplet of Haikus on John 14:6 (BlueHeron77)
A fine write Blue.
October 20th, 2020 10:51 - Nebulous (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
October 20th, 2020 07:05 - Los Echoes (Neville)
Someone having fun? Glad someone is, cos Fido won\'t let me! lol.
October 20th, 2020 07:01 - Redemption Song (ForeverJesus7)
Good write Dion.
October 20th, 2020 07:00 - \"Oh no - not your operation!\" (Doggerel Dave)
Some say \'Oohh, tell me more. Gimme a blow-by-blow account! Some...
October 20th, 2020 01:58 - Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
October 20th, 2020 01:54 - A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
I\'ve never liked the look of curries, let alone taste...
October 19th, 2020 10:29 - caring church minister. (Goldfinch60)
Oh dear, yes, you told us about this before in a similar poem.
I heard a...
October 19th, 2020 10:26 - Regret (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
October 19th, 2020 10:24 - History Has a Way of Living Twice (Steve Unruh)
A fine historical write Steve.Yes, rather like the Wheat and Weeds Bible...
October 19th, 2020 02:09 - Redemption Rejoicings - Isaiah Series (9) (Orchidee)
Keep marching on, but don\'t go round in circles!
October 19th, 2020 02:03 - NIGELLA (Michael Edwards)
Oh lol. fine write and pic M.
Some quirky lines get into comedy shows,...
October 19th, 2020 01:51 - go then (Dusk arising)
A good write Dusk.
October 19th, 2020 01:48 - CHESS (FineB)
Good write Fine.
October 18th, 2020 12:55 - bored through overkill (Dusk arising)
Yes, it can get boring. Then we may become common-place, forgetting simple...
October 18th, 2020 10:25 - Unity (Gary Edward Geraci)
Waht can one with such a dodgy barnet promise you there in the USA? You...
October 18th, 2020 09:26 - Blondie - A tribute to Debbie Harry (FineB)
Good write Fine.
October 18th, 2020 02:25 - Into Your Future. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
It would have been really old to psot Max Bygraves...
October 18th, 2020 02:20 - PEACE IN ADVERSITY ~ ANGELA 💛 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write B&A.
I dunno what the fuss is all about. It keeps the...
October 18th, 2020 02:19 - Waxing Poetic (Gary Edward Geraci)
Erm, you\'ve lost me, with this USA poem. lol.
I will do a UK one maybe -...
October 17th, 2020 10:55 - A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Yes, best wishes to you both :)
Well, I got a new door. It would have...
October 17th, 2020 02:32 - Idiomatic Incisiveness (Orchidee)
I will aim to explain more, if I can, if you are completely befuddled by...
October 17th, 2020 02:25 - The Kingdom (Crowns4Christ)
A true write blue.
This is true, apart from the entanglements of man has...
October 17th, 2020 02:11 - Driving Into Daylight. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
October 17th, 2020 02:07 - in fields of green (Dusk arising)
Good write Dusk.
October 17th, 2020 02:06 - Very,Very Fast Food. (Goldfinch60)
Oh lol, good write Gold.
October 16th, 2020 13:12 - Waving at Dolphins (Neville)
A fine write N.
October 16th, 2020 08:39 - a lass named michelle (Crowns4Christ)
It\'s cos I called Melissa \'Michelle\'. lol.
Yes. I\'m married to Katie...
October 16th, 2020 02:28 - Revitalize. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
I tried this on a literal walk. I didn\'t quite get the...
October 16th, 2020 02:24 - Quarantine Senryu (Lorna)
Yes, not many more things more important that getting the pizzas in!...
October 16th, 2020 02:22 - Through The Storm (ForeverJesus7)
A fine write Dion.
October 16th, 2020 02:21 - of november fallen (Dusk arising)
A fine write Dusk.
October 16th, 2020 02:20 - WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF WASPS ? ~ AN AFFIRMATIVE PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
I can\'t have figs. It\'s TMI (Too Much Info) to say...
October 16th, 2020 02:19 - Joker44’s Side – Life (Nafis Light)
Good write J.
October 15th, 2020 10:16 - Staying Alive (Lorna)
A fine write Lorna.
I shouldn\'t be alive. I tried holding my breath for...
October 15th, 2020 08:59 - Refreshing Renewal - Isaiah Series (7) (Orchidee)
This series goes on a bit! I\'ve not stopped at EVERY chapter in Isaiah...
October 15th, 2020 02:46 - Scarecrow Ode (Dove)
Good write RB.
I\'m going nuts! I felt sorry for a scarecrow out in a...
October 15th, 2020 02:35 - Left Behind. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, some summer nights it hardly seemed to get dark at all. Good write...
October 15th, 2020 02:31 - Death Missed. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
I did a similar poem, including \'the last trump\'....
October 15th, 2020 02:30 - I was made for you (Crowns4Christ)
Good write Michelle.
October 14th, 2020 10:43 - The Sheets and Time (Lorna)
Good write Lorna.
Yes, \'Carpe Diem\', Seize The Day, as they say. But,...
October 14th, 2020 05:47 - Wasps (Neville)
Yes, I wouldn\'t swat a bee.
October 14th, 2020 04:06 - LIVERPOOL ~ SILENCED BY COVID 19 ~ AN ACROSTIC EULOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
October 14th, 2020 04:06 - Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
I think we was both there too at Traflgar in 1805 (Oct 21st). Was it our...
October 14th, 2020 02:17 - Raptoring. (Fay Slimm.)
A fien write Fay. I\'m still waiting for the No.7 bus. Someone just passed...
October 14th, 2020 02:05 - Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s that day of madness again!
Note to other poets: It\'s all true you...
October 14th, 2020 02:03 - ode to a pizza (Crowns4Christ)
A tasty write Melissa. A hint of garlic too? But hardly any - or none at...
October 13th, 2020 14:17 - The Arrows of Time (Lorna)
Oh lol, the title. You know, do you, that Goldfinch and I were at The...
October 13th, 2020 07:36 - Bring us More Liquor (Neville)
Well, there\'s the line, not that I subscribe to it....... He got rid of...
October 13th, 2020 07:28 - Awayness (Fay Slimm.)
Where ya going?! Good write Fay.
October 13th, 2020 07:23 - The Four Letter Word (Lorna)
A four letter word - SING. OK, I will - for EVER. Another four letter word...
October 13th, 2020 02:06 - Sometime Life Happens. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
Yes, like literal paths or tracks through life. On...
October 13th, 2020 01:56 - EFFECT OF COVID 19 ~ A 6 3 5 LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
That\'s more than can be said about MY singing Lorna! heehee. Me sell-by...
October 12th, 2020 12:56 - EFFECT OF COVID 19 ~ A 6 3 5 LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks B&A.
Why the disappointment? I couldn\'t turn up to sing at...
October 12th, 2020 09:03 - The Four Letter Word (Lorna)
A fine write Lorna, on a slightly drizzly mane here. We had \'proper...
October 12th, 2020 09:00 - Tracks. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
October 12th, 2020 05:07 - Where do Dreams Go (Neville)
Yes, I should get out more, I really should, cos it\'s all dreams to me...
October 12th, 2020 05:06 - Peoples Praises (Orchidee)
Them \'11\' lines can be a bit tricky. Just need the inspiration! This was...
October 12th, 2020 02:06 - Another One of Those Times. (Goldfinch60)
A poignant write Gold.
Now why didn\'t I sing in 1066? It would have...
October 12th, 2020 02:05 - thanking you (Crowns4Christ)
It\'s wonderful to hear. It\'s not the same as, say, hearing one is clear...
October 12th, 2020 01:50 - Taste of Temptation (Dove)
Oohh, will too much \'ecstasy\' be good for me? Will it be too much for...
October 11th, 2020 14:09 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
October 11th, 2020 04:45 - Prayer Warrior (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary. Yes, it\'s more than little old ladies/men (or younger...
October 11th, 2020 02:18 - Sunshine (Dove)
A fine sunshiney write RB.
October 11th, 2020 02:16 - WE ARE SURROUNDED BY LOVE ~ A BLANK VERSE 6 8 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write B&A.
Don\'t you be taking in \'loose women\' - them young...
October 11th, 2020 02:15 - Missed With a Smile. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, why are they called Minutes, if the waffle goes on for hours?!
We...
October 11th, 2020 02:09 - Yellow Umbrella\'s (Neville)
Hope those umbrellas don\'t talk, yellow or whatever colour, placed in the...
October 11th, 2020 02:08 - LIMERICK No 69 (Michael Edwards)
You using them commas, or sparing them?!
October 10th, 2020 09:42 - Spit it Out (Neville)
Oohh, who can forgive me for singing? Is it possible?! (lol).
October 10th, 2020 09:41 - Never Forget (Fay Slimm.)
A poignant write Fay.
October 10th, 2020 09:39 - The Things They Do (Lorna)
Good write Lorna.
October 10th, 2020 09:38 - judge not (Crowns4Christ)
Yes, and in pratical things - not judging if someone does not wear a mask,...
October 10th, 2020 02:19 - Heaven on Earth? (Saxon Crow)
Yes, words of truth. Good write SC.
October 10th, 2020 02:18 - Under the same Sun (Gavin)
Good write Gavin.
October 10th, 2020 02:17 - LIMERICK No 69 (Michael Edwards)
Oh lol, good write M.
How do some of these large lasses manage to stay...
October 10th, 2020 02:16 - a lie became noble (Dusk arising)
Yes, even late teenage years and 20\'s are comparatively \'young\'....
October 10th, 2020 02:14 - Laughter Wins. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold. Have I insecurites?
Can I risk it, that a smile may be...
October 10th, 2020 02:12 - Mile High (Neville)
Yes, I got the wrong plane once. I got on the Mile High trip - and...
October 9th, 2020 09:42 - ...AND... (Michael Edwards)
And.... isn\'t it annoying, those folk who start sentences with \'and\'...
October 9th, 2020 05:27 - Autumn Rain (Lorna)
A fine write Lorna. How\'s your Fall compared to our UK Autumn?
October 9th, 2020 05:24 - So Met. (Fay Slimm.)
I so met this poem (i.e. read it) and say, Good write Fay!
October 9th, 2020 05:22 - BE OPTIMISTIC ~ THE BEST CHOICE ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I\'m an eternal optimist - a great believer in \'When one door opens,...
October 9th, 2020 05:18 - ...AND... (Michael Edwards)
A cryptic write M.
I was gonna do \'The church cat crept into the crypt...
October 9th, 2020 05:16 - Faith (Saxon Crow)
Good write Crow.
I thought I was singing.... but they said it was two...
October 9th, 2020 02:00 - I hate titles (Arazimus)
Yes, titles and honours of Sir, Lord, etc. The arrogance of some saying...
October 9th, 2020 01:46 - “i learned today God’s the uncaused cause and i’m an ivf baby” (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary.
October 9th, 2020 01:43 - A return to romance (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Good write Ron.
October 9th, 2020 01:41 - pray for my mom (Crowns4Christ)
Thinking of you all, and prayers. :)
October 9th, 2020 01:40 - Happy Trad. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold. You stopping and starting, foot-tapping on the...
October 9th, 2020 01:38 - Woollen Stockings (Neville)
A fine write N. Could I meet her?!
October 8th, 2020 06:28 - Trenched. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
October 8th, 2020 06:26 - OCTOBER ~ HAIKU (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write B&A.
October 8th, 2020 06:25 - There you are (Saxon Crow)
Coooeee! I\'m still here too! lol.
October 8th, 2020 01:53
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