Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Door Mat (Hanible) A poem of being disposable and not valued except for what one can provide....
  March 23rd, 2025 16:23
• SECOND HOME🏠 (ChrisLyn🕊) It sounds like a dorm although it could be something else. A clever play...
  March 23rd, 2025 16:21
• . (Xqw) Lovely whether taken literally or as I did metaphorically it strikes deep...
  March 23rd, 2025 14:48
• The Serpent\'s Echo (TheInnerLens) A ghostly write that sets the scene with various images. Nicely written
  March 23rd, 2025 14:46
• i am just a poet (DeadRose) Wonderful wording and images used to convey the message. So nicely stated...
  March 23rd, 2025 14:43
• Overrun by stuffed subdued teddy bears... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A stew of different images. Vegetables and meats of different types thrown...
  March 23rd, 2025 14:40
• Echoes of you (Nicole Pritchard) Love lost pain the cost. A powerful poem of love that still remains....
  March 23rd, 2025 12:20
• Storm (RSM0812) Been there in that storm both literally in hurricanes and emotionally....
  March 23rd, 2025 11:55
• Pseudo Intellectual (Gray0328) Brilliant! Wonderful images and metaphors so appropriate to the title....
  March 23rd, 2025 11:23
• Paths XVI (Eugene S.) This carefully constructed collage of quotes conveys a mystic feeling to...
  March 23rd, 2025 11:18
• ...The Day Itself, and AFTER, Naturlich (Cheeky Missy) Celebration in each poem and food too. More fun than I know with what to...
  March 23rd, 2025 10:45
• Medieval Internal (KTay) Well worded and in a medieval setting this poem flows with good rhyme and...
  March 23rd, 2025 10:41
• The angry daughter (Peculiarly Lauren) A powerful poem that many can identify with. Carefully organized and...
  March 23rd, 2025 10:37
• Eye Of The Storm (Kurt Philip Behm) A puzzle again in words beautifully worded
  March 23rd, 2025 09:43
• Don\'t talk like that (Poetaldo) A poem of meaning. Respect should be given to all and most of all to those...
  March 23rd, 2025 07:51
• 4th of July (Tony36) Tony this is one of my most favorite of your poems. It is a soft spot. My...
  March 23rd, 2025 07:47
• Processing a thought (Maplespal) Ah the evolution of a poem. Many times this process occurs to me in the...
  March 23rd, 2025 06:44
• night beauty (Jim56) Another poem of beauty of nature and this time of the night. Lovely Jim
  March 23rd, 2025 06:33
• Timmy\'s Tush Takes the Stage (Matthew R. Callies) What money will do to convince one to bend over close one\'s eyes and...
  March 23rd, 2025 06:32
• The Winebag and the Death (Ksey_Gan) I like this poem and its metaphor within metaphor. Bitter fate is...
  March 23rd, 2025 06:27
• The Will (RSM0812) Here a great message is sent in most intriguing rhyme scheme a puzzle to...
  March 23rd, 2025 05:49
• Pity (Alan R) A lovely thought and so well expressed in poem. Pity robs the receiver of...
  March 23rd, 2025 05:47
• Off To My Nan\'s (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love the style of this poem it is off to the races with it but it stops...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:45
• My Crip, Spastic The Uromastyx (Ajon4wheels) The bonds we make with those we love and we do not choose whom we love our...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:43
• The Governor (Abdullah123) Here in this poem metaphor is king. A most thought provoking write with...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:37
• DAUGHTER ( TO EMMA ) (Nephilim56) Well worded and built this poem expresses how I feel about my daughters...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:34
• Sultry dove (Reynaldo Casison) A love poem that is sensual, tender, romantic and promising well said
  March 23rd, 2025 04:32
• where did all the Nazis come from? ......they didn\'t (MR.apocalypse) A powerful write about a touchy subject. Ideas well stated it speaks with...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:31
• See-saw (Simurgh) With its AAAA rhyme scheme it bounces like a bubble on the surface of the...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:27
• Mind Warp (John Prophet) Indeed life has changed with technology not always for the better but at...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:23
• We had so many days without the sun (Poetaldo) A humble and unassuming poem of acceptance of the weather and of following...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:20
• A Game of Chance (Meagan Adelle) So many definitions of love. Better to have loved and lost than to have...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:19
• Inspired rebel (Lorenz) A siren muse I can imagine So many metaphors in this piece that takes me...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:15
• Wise Man Say (7) Fun On a Spring Sunday. (Poetic Licence) Always enjoy your Sunday fun it brings a smile ant that is the best part...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:12
• The confession of Liam Whitacker. (David Wakeling) A rather severe penalty for a distant minor offence already paid for. And...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:09
• waterfront recital: reprise (Arqios) A lovely metaphor I like the idea of the past being the sand where...
  March 23rd, 2025 04:03
• Where Was Our Dinner! (Goldfinch60) Can feel for you Andy I have had a similar experience where after everyone...
  March 23rd, 2025 03:53
• NOT ALONE (Guy Gael Ingabire) So true even when you are alone you always have yourself. A great read of...
  March 22nd, 2025 19:00
• Buttered Frog. (Jan bach) A great story told well. Frog butter does not appeal to me either. Nicely...
  March 22nd, 2025 17:01
• Lost Without Love (Hanible) A poem that provokes thought. Powerful in its message. Nicely done
  March 22nd, 2025 16:46
• My \"American\" dream (Kering.karim) Wonderful wishes admirable motives and poem that exudes charity. Lovely
  March 22nd, 2025 16:45
• Echos of Yesterday (Whats write for me) Take not for granted what you have. Be content with what you are given....
  March 22nd, 2025 15:05
• Lady of the Wave (Tkatie118) A poem of transformation and growth a poem of being one with one\'s...
  March 22nd, 2025 13:47
• Wanting something you will probably never get back (Nicole Pritchard) Certain pains leave holes that take time to heal and more time for love to...
  March 22nd, 2025 12:56
• gym guy (Ace Bunting) A lot of darkness here but then what else would one expect from blindness?...
  March 22nd, 2025 12:53
• Thank you for everything (Definitelymayank)
  March 22nd, 2025 11:35
• Thank you for everything (Definitelymayank) Apologies and regrets are not commensurate with a sociopath. A great poem
  March 22nd, 2025 11:34
• GHOSTS (Bren Wrights) Reflections of a ghost with remorse and what could have been. Nice and a...
  March 22nd, 2025 11:30
• Shahnaz (Shahla Latifi) We all have our models that we strive to emulate furthermore this seems...
  March 22nd, 2025 11:27
• Judgment Abides (Kurt Philip Behm) Again another carefully worded poem that speaks in poetic form
  March 22nd, 2025 10:13
• That friend (Pineapple_pizza018) An acknowledgement of friendship. Nicely said
  March 22nd, 2025 10:11
• TEARFUL RAINDROPS🌤️ (ChrisLyn🕊) A poem that shows both sides that both laughter and tears can heal. A very...
  March 22nd, 2025 10:09
• Easter Child (Damaso) It is too bad that parents transmit their own fears to their children. A...
  March 22nd, 2025 09:59
• I will let spring in after Daria  Akyloca (Ksey_Gan) The coming of spring and the cleaning out and brightening with it. A...
  March 22nd, 2025 09:56
• Ghosts In The Mirror (TheInnerLens) So nicely worded with great images ( a crown of ash, a thrown of dust)...
  March 22nd, 2025 09:53
• Revival (Lorenz) Many great metaphors, the garden of Eden tree of life and knowledge on and...
  March 22nd, 2025 09:50
• Tilling or no tilling (Demar Desu) Thank you I do some and it is not an easy task. i believe most people...
  March 22nd, 2025 08:13
• I Wish (Tony36) A tender poem of desire formed in wishes that need fulfillment. Nicely...
  March 22nd, 2025 08:11
• Going Against the Grain (Mutley Ravishes) This poem poses the question of foreseeing the unseen. Only with unbiased...
  March 22nd, 2025 07:04
• A Moment (RSM0812) A poem of puzzle that like the inner psyche develops and breeds thoughts....
  March 22nd, 2025 06:44
• Lost time (Maplespal) What a marvelous reflection on things past and learned now neglected. A...
  March 22nd, 2025 06:39
• Easter verse (Jim56) Easter a time for new life and the return of the sun. A fun read Jim full...
  March 22nd, 2025 06:36
• The Elixir\'s Essence ([email protected]) A fave due to the quality of writing in this well rhymed and metered work....
  March 22nd, 2025 05:46
• Big Friendly Giant (BFG) (Real Rhyme) Reminds me of Shrek but could be Andre the Giant in The princess bride. A...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:44
• Old flame (Alan R) A most sensuous poem that grows stronger with each line. This passion...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:42
• All Mine (DREEK0) Here is the puzzle in this poem to identify the narrator. Memory, desire,...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:40
• The Life Of A Little Dog (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) You have incorporated several facts, word plays, and an amazing animal...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:37
• Rise For Gaza (Mohammad younus koul) Once again powerful words for a just cause
  March 22nd, 2025 05:34
• Fleeting Horizons (Serra) The pain is felt but the loss of one may result in greater love for...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:33
• The Great Boston Mooninite Panic (Matthew R. Callies) A fun, historical, hysterical, write well done in great rhyme and good...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:30
• Silent Footsteps (MKS) Only four lines to convey the falseness of social conventions and how...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:26
• Decaf (Gray0328) I get the sense of aging disillusion and crumbling youthful idealism in...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:23
• You Seen That U? (Orchidee) You sure it wasn\'t ewe fleas not yew trees. What of the grey or the gray...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:19
• Writers Doubt (Poetic Licence) What a splendid poem that rings with truth in every line. How many times I...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:13
• We are not men with loud voices. (David Wakeling) This poem speaks to me with various meanings I hear it first as pertaining...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:05
• “the internet does not lie” (Arqios) It matters not whether the data entry of faulty material is intentional or...
  March 22nd, 2025 04:59
• The Uncharted Self. (__INTROVERTME__) A motivational write that calls for independence and self reliance. Nicely...
  March 22nd, 2025 04:51
• Unobtrusive Unity (Philip Daniel Cook) We have lost touch with humanity it is all now automated socially...
  March 22nd, 2025 04:41
• Only Drive When Necessary (Goddess of the Mist) In this existential mist of change and development there are some...
  March 22nd, 2025 04:38
• Fifty Years Ago, Blimey. Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I can identify with this poem Andy. It rings true and seems that it all...
  March 22nd, 2025 04:32
• Deeper in the Abyss (Emperor) So much said in so few words. Nicely compacted in poetic form. Lovely
  March 21st, 2025 19:00
• The Lion (MKS) I have heard of a wolf in sheep\'s clothing but a sheep in lion\'s...
  March 21st, 2025 16:47
• Be the one (Juwaireeyah) Brilliant! We are all responsible for ourselves and we can\'t love others...
  March 21st, 2025 16:39
• Plague (Damaso) The literal take on this poem is tragic and sad, a child in poverty and...
  March 21st, 2025 15:07
• The Decision of Judas Iscariot. (Jan bach) A take on the Gospel of Judas. Nicely written from the other point of...
  March 21st, 2025 15:02
• The thought of you (Peculiarly Lauren) Cute, innocent, romantic, lovely and most intriguing poem well done
  March 21st, 2025 14:49
• Lost at Tesco (Tkatie118) I\'ve had that feeling when I\'ve been shopping in large malls and worse...
  March 21st, 2025 14:46
• When it Hurts (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Another good write Shamrocker. It reads well with internal rhyme and yet...
  March 21st, 2025 14:01
• Brother if I lose you some day (Poetaldo) A touching poem of fraternity between brothers and although separated by...
  March 21st, 2025 13:53
• God is Love (Gray0328) A beautiful poem Gray bright with an offering of hope to all. It speaks of...
  March 21st, 2025 13:50
• Sink Our Ship (Quemis) Dark and without the sense of hope this poem speaks of life as a sinking...
  March 21st, 2025 13:47
• Engine Dolmatovski The sing of spring (Ksey_Gan) Dualities expressed in this poem but it is the end that ties it together...
  March 21st, 2025 12:50
• The Fragile rivers of peace ([email protected]) A beautiful thought that does not happen enough in this world. War pays...
  March 21st, 2025 10:50
• Little League Swing (Matthew R. Callies) With the chorus it could be a song. It brings the excitement and comradery...
  March 21st, 2025 09:32
• VHS tapes (Pineapple_pizza018) How many of us wished we could return and relive time. A very nice poem...
  March 21st, 2025 09:04
• Thundering Cloud (Kurt Philip Behm) Most deaf to the coming of danger do not heed its signs. A wonderful write...
  March 21st, 2025 09:02
• Leave Little Room (Tristan Robert Lange) We look at others with no vision and shake our heads in disbelief and I...
  March 21st, 2025 07:43
• Poetry together (Tony36) A poem dedicated to poetry and poets where ever they may be. Nicely said...
  March 21st, 2025 07:40
• Strategic Narrative (KTay) Anger pervades this poem as does disgust for organized religion. It speaks...
  March 21st, 2025 06:48
• My Rose (RSM0812) This poem speaks of one enamored and of passion that lies in new love. A...
  March 21st, 2025 06:44