Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- The Great Marriage (Gray0328)
Beautiful words written in metaphor with meaning deeper than what may...
July 22nd, 2024 06:07 - Lonesome Neon Nights (Thomas W Case)
Full of brilliant images this one draws pity from distant points. Nicely...
July 22nd, 2024 06:01 - A Prostitutes Heart (Dan Williams)
Powerful words ended with a very powerful last line. Wonderfully written.
July 22nd, 2024 05:58 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
And a powerful weapon it is. Nicely said Andy
July 22nd, 2024 05:56 - Witness Of The Word (Orchidee)
Another fine write Orchi.
July 22nd, 2024 05:54 - A Life Lesson In Tapestry (Teddy.15)
A most mournful poem that strikes to the heart. Have felt this way and...
July 22nd, 2024 05:49 - Living Like Ghosts (Neville)
Ah this metaphor could be applied to many different things. How many poets...
July 22nd, 2024 05:24 - Awkward (and queer) (Weep little lion girl)
This touches close to home because many including me remember in our teen...
July 22nd, 2024 05:13 - CrowdStrike (Doggerel Dave)
Dave this goes hard. For a man that has problems with metaphors this one...
July 21st, 2024 13:17 - Do I (2781)
So true it is all about you. A great message. Loved it.
July 21st, 2024 13:11 - Scatterbrained (Jerry Reynolds)
Truth in print a rare occasion. Well done
July 21st, 2024 13:08 - Lost In Thoughts (Satishverma)
This poem had a personal feel to it as if being spoken directly too. Very...
July 21st, 2024 07:45 - A Sudden Touch Of Wood (ADarkerMind)
Beautiful and intriguing images presented with most interesting and...
July 21st, 2024 07:40 - Last Minuteness (Zhangyuyouyu)
One minute at a time things come and go. So all things must pass and so...
July 21st, 2024 07:35 - Sunshine Splendour (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I hear you a believer in nature and the natural way. Nicely said.
July 21st, 2024 07:29 - THE APPLE TREE (Qurrat Al Ain)
A wonderful parable sad but true and in fact too true. Here the pairing of...
July 21st, 2024 06:51 - Glory Be! (Orchidee)
Glory be he\'s not picked me, I\'m pretty weak in most everything My wife...
July 21st, 2024 06:44 - The Age Of Innocence. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful image, profound message in wonderful words. If only.
July 21st, 2024 06:36 - I Will Rise (Thomas W Case)
A great metaphor for an important message stated with wonderful imagery....
July 21st, 2024 06:33 - Summoning of a Gentle Spirit (Teddy.15)
A great use of diametrically opposed to create a unified message. A...
July 20th, 2024 11:35 - The Emptiness (Young Fella)
Sad and a sense of loss in this piece. There seems to be a sense of...
July 20th, 2024 11:14 - MIDNIGHT DARKNESS (Qurrat Al Ain)
Very poetic imagery here with a nice tinge of rhyme mixed it. Lovely
July 20th, 2024 11:12 - Polite Enquiry: (Doggerel Dave)
Now Dave here is one from you close to cryptic and symbolism but short....
July 20th, 2024 11:10 - ()
This poem runs so smoothly off the tongue and has a classic flavor to it...
July 20th, 2024 11:07 - NIGERIA 🇳🇬 (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Well written and moving this is a powerful piece.
July 20th, 2024 11:03 - A time lapse (Falcon_mn)
This tells a story that somehow seems familiar as if I had been there. The...
July 20th, 2024 11:01 - Fall (Tony36)
A picture of fall that I used to know before moving to a warmer clime. It...
July 20th, 2024 10:57 - How? Without You? (Maplespal)
There is a deep sense of loss in this poem with a strong desire for...
July 20th, 2024 10:54 - Who To Call (Mehrangaiz)
We all had no choice of being who we are. Parents had the coice to bring...
July 20th, 2024 10:45 - Demons Lie (Jerry Reynolds)
A most unique rhyming scheme that works well with this short piece. It...
July 20th, 2024 10:39 - My Main Mission (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
That\'s a rap. Or should I say that\'s a wrap. I can feel the disdain and...
July 20th, 2024 10:37 - `*` On This Starry Night `*` (Thad Wilk)
July 20th, 2024 10:35 - `*` On This Starry Night `*` (Thad Wilk)
A proclamation of love to someone special with images of nature and a...
July 20th, 2024 10:35 - Whatever You Want. (Goldfinch60)
A beat through time it seems that some groups remain in our memories and...
July 20th, 2024 06:33 - Stones (Cassie58)
How interesting the symbolism of this poem the metaphor seems to apply to...
July 20th, 2024 06:29 - I React (Bella Shepard)
A wonderful message that applies to all but more than anything applies to...
July 20th, 2024 06:23 - Train tracks (Tony36)
This reminds me of my youth when we used to hop on box cars. Nostalgic...
July 20th, 2024 06:19 - Drying Up? (Orchidee)
Good write My friend hope the weather stays the way you like it. Have a...
July 20th, 2024 06:17 - So Tired of It (Dan Williams)
Some great lines here “stun with bones of Now feudal hopes““” Now...
July 20th, 2024 06:13 - So I Can Finally Become Me (Teddy.15)
A beautiful message to both a potential love and the love for oneself set...
July 20th, 2024 06:06 - The Great Moon and The Baubab (Teddy.15)
The fragrance of this poem hangs in the air like perfume. The essence of...
July 19th, 2024 05:48 - If Your Face Doesn’t Fit (Cassie58)
A wonderful flow to this poem of the darkness of the human situation. So...
July 19th, 2024 05:44 - Finite (Shetonya Latryce)
A self image well stated in unequivocal terms. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:42 - baby bat (Bloodbat_Workshop)
There is a metaphor here and rhyme as well. Not too much darkness though....
July 19th, 2024 05:41 - Smoking Guns (Satishverma)
Enigmatic in its metaphor it shines with depth as two mirrors juxtaposed....
July 19th, 2024 05:37 - UNSAID (Qurrat Al Ain)
Loved the analogies and the varying images were well done. A poem far...
July 19th, 2024 05:35 - Fragile (Jal)
This poem has a inner beauty to it that shines through and can be felt by...
July 19th, 2024 05:33 - Dad (JuneM)
Powerful, sad and dark words that need new direction. A heartfelt write.
July 19th, 2024 05:32 - Trump for president (EvenwheniLie)
These two choices, is this the best that America has. We are in trouble.
July 19th, 2024 05:28 - On a Wet Journey (AlmosTheOneWhoDreams)
A snapshot of life and in a sense a metaphor as well. Nicely written
July 19th, 2024 05:26 - Limitation (Mutley Ravishes)
This was a fun read with a surprise ending. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:23 - Dear Miss. Jennifer Jones (Neville)
I loved the flow and format of this poem Neville. A great write that came...
July 19th, 2024 05:22 - Heavenly Help (Orchidee)
We are always in need of a helping hand and the belief that there is a...
July 19th, 2024 05:19 - Neck Kisses (Mark The Phenomenon)
July 19th, 2024 05:17 - Neck Kisses (Mark The Phenomenon)
Sensual, seductive, sexual all in a flowing rhyme. Nicely done.
July 19th, 2024 05:17 - Is anybody out there? (2781)
A fun write merging todays politics with religious belief. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:15 - ADDICTION (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
An addiction can be to anything and even what we think of as noble can...
July 19th, 2024 05:12 - As I\'m Life (Bibekanand \'Agyat\')
Great wording and a philosophical presentation that is deep. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:10 - country living (Jim56)
A great message with rhyme and one that I echo. Great imagery.
July 19th, 2024 05:08 - So I Can Finally Become Me (Teddy.15)
A longing we all have until we find one or someone we think is one until...
July 19th, 2024 04:56 - Sitting Ducks. (Goldfinch60)
This reminded me of the other day when I saw a bunch of vultures sitting...
July 19th, 2024 04:53 - I wish my Fears would Migrate (Thomas W Case)
\"Fear is like the shadow of a bat, larger than life\" what a great line....
July 19th, 2024 04:49 - The gospel according to Paul (2781)
Loved the story in this. Yes I\'m a softy for ballads or stories. A most...
July 18th, 2024 05:51 - Three Poppies (Neville)
Great metaphor Neville. The poem by John McCrae and Flanders Fields comes...
July 18th, 2024 05:43 - 68,000 or thereabouts (Orchidee)
A badge of pride indeed. Someone out their is stealing your hymns for...
July 18th, 2024 05:37 - Eternal Flame (Dev Parth)
A continual rhyme falls like waves in this poem of romance, passion and...
July 18th, 2024 05:33 - THE BRIDE\'S DILEMMA (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
It appears that it is an issue of honesty. Honesty is the basis of...
July 18th, 2024 05:30 - Quien viene a mi sueño? (Falcon_mn)
My Spanish only passable I still get the message from this poem well...
July 18th, 2024 05:26 - We Sit in Jail (Maplespal)
Wow! A type of ballad in verse. The story was good as was the rhyme. The...
July 18th, 2024 05:22 - Void Space Of Unfilled Cracks. (EmaHarlan)
The emotion come through in this poem. The repetitive refrain \"We can...
July 18th, 2024 05:19 - rhytthm of the rain (Jim56)
Always loved the rain but like tears enough is enough whether joy or...
July 18th, 2024 05:14 - Interlude (Cassie58)
I love this poem it takes me back to the edge of the sea. The place of the...
July 18th, 2024 04:33 - Turing. (Goldfinch60)
A great question and one that occurs regularly. Many people surprise me as...
July 18th, 2024 04:27 - My Two Cents Worth (Accidental Poet)
July 18th, 2024 04:22 - My Two Cents Worth (Accidental Poet)
Opinions, money, or power its what happens in a capitalistic system where...
July 18th, 2024 04:22 - Declaration (Thomas W Case)
July 17th, 2024 20:30 - Declaration (Thomas W Case)
Live in the moment for the moment and be the moment. A great message and...
July 17th, 2024 20:30 - For Some Reason, But I\'ll Take It (ForeverJesus7)
We love who we love regardless of appearance and where love goes no one...
July 17th, 2024 10:51 - Welcome to Miami (Neville)
Mistakes sometimes work out. A great story that leads to this ending....
July 17th, 2024 10:48 - 21 (Anahiii)
Cheers and best wishes to one who is looking for something more.
July 17th, 2024 10:44 - Didn’t It Used to Be? (Accidental Poet)
I think that my view of past politicians was seen through a child\'s eyes...
July 17th, 2024 10:41 - LUST (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Lust, passion different than love have been the ruin of many and the...
July 17th, 2024 10:32 - A Storm Passed (Maplespal)
A story that could be a metaphor as well. Great imagery in this write.
July 17th, 2024 10:30 - Snippets of Love (Niyati Nandan)
A fun and great write about love and who knows what it is indeed. Some say...
July 17th, 2024 10:28 - natures view (Jim56)
Always am intrigued by nature and her beauty. This uses a good deal of...
July 17th, 2024 10:23 - Wink and Grin (DesertWords)
Great use of rhyme to convey a rhythm to this piece. It sends a most...
July 17th, 2024 10:20 - Eternal Love (Tony36)
True love never dies unfortunately passion does. The older we grow the...
July 17th, 2024 10:18 - Branded (Markashley1961)
Graphic in its imagery it broadcasts such a message. Nicely written.
July 17th, 2024 10:15 - Wandering Mind (Mark The Phenomenon)
Graphically written this speaks to me. \"and the emptiness grows like a...
July 17th, 2024 10:13 - This is what I like (Hzugman)
It is this type of wish that promotes health for the person that holds it...
July 17th, 2024 10:10 - ~> Tiny Todd My Diddle Wad (children\'s story) (Thad Wilk)
Cute and so childlike it brings the child out and puts a child\'s smile on
July 17th, 2024 10:07 - Silver Searching (Orchidee)
Silver or sheep, prodigal son returned it is by repetition that we learn....
July 17th, 2024 09:48 - My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest (Teddy.15)
Somewhere over the rainbow we will all find rest in a colored land where...
July 17th, 2024 06:56 - The Right People. (Goldfinch60)
So right Gold a good message and the best way to measure. Nicely said.
July 17th, 2024 05:12 - Godspeed Came in Last (Dan Williams)
Ah the paradoxes of life. Yes memory can be a blessing and a curse. Loved...
July 17th, 2024 05:07 - Proverb Pieces 5 (Orchidee)
yes indeed pride goes before the fall. I\'ve heard this many times from my...
July 16th, 2024 18:17 - Infinite (Bella Shepard)
How true Bella. We do think we know so much and in fact we do no nothing....
July 16th, 2024 18:10 - Hope (2781)
If you had been born long ago you would be writing proverbs for the old...
July 16th, 2024 08:58 - If I was A Mirror (Teddy.15)
Beneath all there is the beauty that one has. Some need to look deep while...
July 16th, 2024 08:53 - ()
After reading this poem, that I thank you for sharing, I too know...
July 16th, 2024 05:27
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