Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Final Song. (Goldfinch60) It is different when support is not close by and one is forced into self...
  March 7th, 2025 03:47
• Gettin’ Dirty (MDStone) Nice rhyme scheme that made this poem fun. Good write
  March 6th, 2025 19:28
• Call me Yacine (Young Fella) A call for romance and love. Nicely done
  March 6th, 2025 17:30
• My Stupid Heart (Santajah Douglass) Learning to protect oneself even from one\'s own heart is important....
  March 6th, 2025 17:26
• Hero (Thoughtless) Some people do the right thing despite it not being in their own personal...
  March 6th, 2025 17:21
• Who Are We (John Prophet) A poem that sets the boundaries straight regarding what influence we...
  March 6th, 2025 17:20
• 19 years of being me (Pineapple_pizza018) I could feel the count down but I must disagree with the 0 ways of making...
  March 6th, 2025 14:29
• The Gift of Your Voice (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Good advice with wisdom in these words. Nicely written
  March 6th, 2025 14:01
• Someone like me (Poetaldo) Accepting oneself for who one is may be the key issue
  March 6th, 2025 13:59
• marred by insults (Amy Michelle Mosier) Words of understanding and wisdom
  March 6th, 2025 13:58
• Him (Bird In Red) Cute and full of young romance
  March 6th, 2025 13:57
• Mindful Be (Steve Goldenfort) This nicely written poem carries a wonderful message of doing things for...
  March 6th, 2025 13:10
• like calls to like (Newt) A most interesting paradox. Nicely written this poem speaks to needs and...
  March 6th, 2025 13:08
• Thin rowan after Ivan Surikoff (Ksey_Gan) This poem could well be a song and it seems roots that are Scottish or...
  March 6th, 2025 10:39
• Unwavering (Cassie58) Hauntingly beautiful this poem a memory painted in siren images where...
  March 6th, 2025 10:36
• A wake-up call (Vishakha) Warm and bright this poem sets the mood feeling so home like. It takes me...
  March 6th, 2025 10:02
• winter of demar (Demar Desu) This sounds like a poem of the national past time. Fun read
  March 6th, 2025 09:16
• Four Fires (Tkatie118) Most interesting choices made in word selection. Metaphorical and cryptic....
  March 6th, 2025 09:15
• Lost in the ocean (Maplespal) This sounds lost, lonely and sad. Very nice
  March 6th, 2025 09:11
• I Love This Bar (Tony36) Another fun read about a bar this time. Fun Tony
  March 6th, 2025 09:09
• The pedestal (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt) We all have a pedestal we are on some higher than others. A good read
  March 6th, 2025 08:09
• Ash Wednesday (Audrey Cocker) A commemorative poem of Easter and its meaning. Well written
  March 6th, 2025 08:06
• Rest In Peace, Mom - Part VIII (Randyjohnson71) A raw poem of loss and sadness. Well written
  March 6th, 2025 08:03
• Cancer (Whats write for me) Never give up hope, rage against the light, never say die. A poem of...
  March 6th, 2025 06:35
• Prezence (Mutley Ravishes) Full of metaphor this poem seethes with feeling. Very powerfully done
  March 6th, 2025 06:33
• John ( The unexpected heartbreak) (Hey!) Anger can be heard in this poem and it runs in desire for revenge. Hot...
  March 6th, 2025 06:30
• space cat (Jim56) A fun poem of cat fantasy. I have wondered what dogs and cats dream of. A...
  March 6th, 2025 05:33
• Don\'t Leave (Hanible) \"Punching bags put into some body bags\" a brilliant and most poetic...
  March 6th, 2025 04:33
• HEAR MY CALL (Nephilim56) Sweet memories abound in this poem that speaks of a departure. Well...
  March 6th, 2025 04:30
• Show me the light💫 (Naina Pandey) Dark in its sentiments this poem gives a glimmer of hope in its hint of...
  March 6th, 2025 04:28
• In or out?? (AmIAPoet-QuestionMark) It sounds to me like you have already decided. Good logic too bad logic...
  March 6th, 2025 03:47
• Way Of The Word (Orchidee) A hymn of allegiance and fidelity well written my friend.
  March 6th, 2025 03:45
• Ink & Fire (Kathryn Amaka) We all have inspirations, those muses and heroes or heroines that give us...
  March 6th, 2025 03:43
• Dreamcatchers In Car Windows (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Superstition and fantasy how are they different than sci-fi? What was...
  March 6th, 2025 03:40
• that girl (Sheta) Some battles are more important than others and knowing the difference...
  March 6th, 2025 03:38
• What He Gave Me (Gray0328) It seems that only in our older age do we really appreciate what parents...
  March 6th, 2025 03:36
• From the start to the end (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) A poem of support saying that someone has your back. Very nicely written.
  March 6th, 2025 03:33
• The Success Of My Dreams. (Poetic Licence) Seen so many times on sports fields. Well written and in a style that...
  March 6th, 2025 03:31
• What Problems. (Goldfinch60) Here here Gold I\'m with you on this one. One has to be who they are or be...
  March 6th, 2025 03:28
• The JJJ. (David Wakeling) Sounds familiar but I just can\'t put my finger on it. I don\'t think...
  March 6th, 2025 03:26
• recuperation (Arqios) Been there many times mate. Although on this side they are called...
  March 6th, 2025 03:23
• Stand Clear: Political Commentary. (Doggerel Dave) I\'m too close to see the eventual outcome of all this. I feel like I\'m...
  March 6th, 2025 03:19
• tarot literacy (Noah Malice) Where are the lovers in this poem? A great write that brings in the occult...
  March 6th, 2025 03:13
• who are you (Sheta) This becomes a life long search that from time to time we think we have...
  March 6th, 2025 03:09
• Dry logs redden and snap; (Amy Michelle Mosier) Picturesque this final image of sparks becoming stars. Very nice imagery...
  March 6th, 2025 03:07
• i cant look (Newt) And it is for this that we live in the present for it is only there that...
  March 5th, 2025 20:07
• One must possess the patience of Job, (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A common tread is woven through these seemingly unrelated issues that of...
  March 5th, 2025 20:06
• The Gas Station Guy (Bird In Red) Passion\'s intrigue and the mind\'s fantasy blend reality with what could...
  March 5th, 2025 16:15
• Don\'t Ask Me Now, I\'m Somewhere Else (Cheeky Missy) It seems that you have been holding back. Another fun read of daily...
  March 5th, 2025 16:12
• A lifetime of sorrow (Nicole Pritchard) Regret precedes guilt. This poem well written and rhymed flows smoothly....
  March 5th, 2025 15:05
• Two Spirits Merging (Gray0328) A poem of union and of love well written and in good form
  March 5th, 2025 13:46
• In a Flash (Thomas W Case) Like youth itself short and to the point. A lovely poem Thomas
  March 5th, 2025 13:44
• Spell after Evgeny Yevtushenko (Ksey_Gan) A poem asking for remembrance and thought. This could be a song with its...
  March 5th, 2025 13:43
• Easy Come Easy Go (Adventuressmalik) Luck is always a good friend. A fun poem with good flow
  March 5th, 2025 13:40
• Clandestinus (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Another poem filled with more depth than meats the eye and beauty in the...
  March 5th, 2025 13:38
• Dandelion Clocks (Cassie58) Very nice Cassie. Not only visually and verbally pleasing but a tickler...
  March 5th, 2025 13:36
• An Effigy Of Laughter (ADarkerMind) Interesting images that create possible metaphors. A nice flow in this
  March 5th, 2025 13:34
• The In-Between (NinjaGirl) A poem of a place I\'ve been often. Great descriptive words. Lovely
  March 5th, 2025 13:30
• The Lonely Rose (RSM0812) Wow!! Brilliant! Every once in a while on this site I read something that...
  March 5th, 2025 11:41
• You\'re not alone ! (Lorenz) The setting created for this poem is well thought out. The darkness...
  March 5th, 2025 11:34
• Corporal B and Me (Neville) A great story in poem format Neville. As a child from 6 to 12 was bullied...
  March 5th, 2025 11:28
• I may say I\'m ok (Tony36) Saying Ok may be from not believing that anyone cares or wants to know, or...
  March 5th, 2025 08:28
• Cómo Foi? (Poetaldo) A lesson from the sun arise over blue sea and then to bed. Boungiorno
  March 5th, 2025 07:48
• THE FATE OF MAN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Powerful and sobering it calls out from the grave.
  March 5th, 2025 07:09
• Words Speaks For Itself (Hanible) One must have a full mind to have an open one. Listen, learn refine...
  March 5th, 2025 06:31
• A Dream of Despair (Whats write for me) Some call it faith, others belief but what ever a mind set can make all...
  March 5th, 2025 06:29
• My Crazy Cat, Zackary (Ajon4wheels) I can feel the joy in this poem and the tenderness of a playful cat....
  March 5th, 2025 06:27
• Christ Consciousness And Manifestation (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Polar thoughts that at the extreme are more alike than different like...
  March 5th, 2025 06:21
• Bread (Maplespal) There are all types of breads from sweet breads to sour dough. I love the...
  March 5th, 2025 06:19
• bluebird song (Jim56) Another of your charming nature poems that seems to predict the advent of...
  March 5th, 2025 06:17
• The sky holds up (Alan R) The sky will always be there. A deep message sent in this poem
  March 5th, 2025 06:15
• MISSION (Nephilim56) Maybe I have gone too far on this one but it seems a genesis, a beginning...
  March 5th, 2025 06:14
• Returning And Reviving (Orchidee) This Orchi is a beautiful hymn of devotion. Very nicely worded
  March 5th, 2025 06:04
• slipping away (Arqios) From one that frequently writes dark, no this is not too dark. It talks to...
  March 5th, 2025 06:02
• Love Is In The Air (Poetic Licence) Tobani don\'t shoot yourself in the foot before the race begins. This poem...
  March 5th, 2025 05:56
• And I will fight (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Whether mood, or concrete obstacles this poem speaks of determination and...
  March 5th, 2025 05:52
• Assumpchumps (Mutley Ravishes) Personification of concepts is great from the abstract to the concrete. A...
  March 5th, 2025 05:50
• “Insensitive Incentive” (Peanut) This poem is touching in that it exposes the personality of the victim who...
  March 5th, 2025 05:48
• Memories of a bully (EvenwheniLie) What some people do to get noticed. A fun read.
  March 5th, 2025 05:45
• Creative Expressions (DREEK0) The rhyme in this poem reinforced the beat of the meter. Nicely done
  March 5th, 2025 05:42
• A dance with the devil (Domilla) A plea of desperation for help. This poem cries out. Well written
  March 5th, 2025 05:40
• The Fierce Beauty (MDStone) A beautiful poem of nature and the human soul. Great images and the...
  March 5th, 2025 05:37
• More a Supper of Jam (Teddy.15) At first though you were speaking of a traffic jam, then how jammed up it...
  March 5th, 2025 05:12
• The Final Over. (Goldfinch60) What a beautiful memory Andy and well put to words. I understand little...
  March 5th, 2025 05:03
• The Black Cat that crossed my path. (David Wakeling) This sounds like a dark song that speaks of betrayal and loss. Sad and...
  March 5th, 2025 04:56
• Loneliness (Kevin Hulme) A compelling poem of loneliness with the good use of metaphor and how for...
  March 4th, 2025 20:36
• The Eternal Night (Ally) Emotional expressions well spoken in metaphor as well as images. A game of...
  March 4th, 2025 18:23
• Regret\'s dark embrace (Nicole Pritchard) Wonderful imagery paint this poem. Great metaphor as well. Very nice
  March 4th, 2025 17:47
• Normalyn (Lorenz) Mythical, sci-fi, magical, with great images and well written. Loved it.
  March 4th, 2025 17:44
• Scrolls (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Dead sea scrolls? Magic? mysterious and well done form as well as wording
  March 4th, 2025 17:41
• The ocean waves and the calm beach (Arial) This is a very good write with a weaving of words and rhyme as well as...
  March 4th, 2025 17:40
• 06.06.2024 2:38am (Kylie Haynes) I loved this one. It has all the elements of a great write. Great images...
  March 4th, 2025 17:38
• eyes (Newt) This was a great poem of settling for what one can get not what one wants....
  March 4th, 2025 17:30
• Founders Ink (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt your poems deserve more views. They are almost invariably superb and...
  March 4th, 2025 17:27
• Dear, Dear Hump Day, What Was That Again? (Cheeky Missy) Seasons and nature combine with food in this delectable treat of sonnets....
  March 4th, 2025 17:20
• the paid price (NinjaGirl) Now this is something different. So well worded and cleverly structured it...
  March 4th, 2025 17:14
• Purple (Caring dove) Ah to be something we are not and even more something we do not know. A...
  March 4th, 2025 11:34
• You, a Different Man! (Framed Mirror) Sensuous and erotic it evokes a sense of pleasure and anticipation....
  March 4th, 2025 11:31
• Stories in the Margins (Gray0328) A great analogy of each person a book. The metaphor works well in this...
  March 4th, 2025 11:29
• It is so hard to live without you My father (Poetaldo) Thankfulness one of the most neglected and most important elements of life...
  March 4th, 2025 11:27