Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- ~ Anxious Poetics ~ (Pandy)
Full of gustatory, tactile and visual images laden with great analogies...
May 19th, 2025 04:08 - Boundaries (HollyGolightly)
I could hear the march in this poem\'s meter. A meaningful message...
May 19th, 2025 04:05 - No Love (DLewis88)
I hear a yearning and a hunger for love in this poem. If one is hungry one...
May 19th, 2025 04:01 - The Eternal Fountain (Rrodriguez)
I can only imagine it in Spanish for the original is generally even better...
May 19th, 2025 03:57 - Sven\'s Uninvited Guest (Arqios)
This poem carries with it a sense of an existential voyage beyond the...
May 19th, 2025 03:51 - Flowing Around Your Life. (Goldfinch60)
I have known many of their forms from breeze to gale and hurricane only...
May 19th, 2025 03:40 - Life Is A Puzzle (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Having faith in something is very important and it is heard in this poem....
May 18th, 2025 19:38 - Perspective (Keeter C)
Clever wording and rhyme spit truth if there is such a thing in this poem....
May 18th, 2025 18:42 - Miss Me (Ladywithaquill)
A longing for love and contact. Nicely written
May 18th, 2025 18:15 - Fake People (Santajah Douglass)
There is a good deal of anger and hatred in this poem. Deception despised.
May 18th, 2025 18:14 - Mother’s Secret (Sami Mulaj)
Embers burn under the disguise of ashes in life as well as fire. Very...
May 18th, 2025 18:11 - After party (Alan R)
A most interesting characterization of love. Very nicely written
May 18th, 2025 18:09 - Black jaguar (Kaz)
The world of the jaguar is dark and shadowy it is the blue eyes that stand...
May 18th, 2025 18:07 - Sophie (Amethyste)
In this piece it is shown that things are not always what they appear to...
May 18th, 2025 18:05 - A Troopship 1914 (Kevin Hulme)
Beautifully crafted with good rhyme and meter this poem is a tribute to...
May 18th, 2025 15:45 - Forever (Tayama)
Heart warming that melts the snow and ice all around. A most beautiful...
May 18th, 2025 15:43 - The cost of pain is change (NinjaGirl)
A plea for something more comes through in this piece. How to be happy...
May 18th, 2025 15:41 - In This Magic ...(+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Possessions mean little when life is at its end we all take nothing with...
May 18th, 2025 13:40 - perfect love drives out fear (Gray0328)
A very nice poem on love itself and its most supportive qualities that ask...
May 18th, 2025 13:37 - Ballad by Teffyy (Ksey_Gan)
The question is: whether this is a metaphor. A fun read.
May 18th, 2025 13:32 - salem (Hyerin)
I love the whole second stanza it is very powerful. Very nicely written.
May 18th, 2025 13:24 - DayBreak (in dreams i wake) (Muse of Calliope)
This is always an intriguing issue of whether we are dreaming or awake a...
May 18th, 2025 13:18 - Melancholy Colored Blue (Analogaddict)
Very nice worded well speaking of letting go when needed. One needs to...
May 18th, 2025 09:39 - Behold a Rose (RSM0812)
A most lovely romantic poem with great images and metaphor so well written
May 18th, 2025 09:10 - Retro (Lorenz)
Metaphor on top of metaphor it melts into surrealism and ends in enigma. A...
May 18th, 2025 09:07 - recursion (Eugene S.)
A most interesting poem of nature rain sky and earth. Thought provoking.
May 18th, 2025 08:14 - Underverse (John Prophet)
A poem typical to your style short lines. In this world we begin to wonder...
May 18th, 2025 08:11 - Acceptable & Holes (Maplespal)
A sense of something missing is the theme of this poem it leaves holes as...
May 18th, 2025 08:09 - Just a note (Tony36)
The best of wishes for a quick and successful operation and a most speedy...
May 18th, 2025 07:32 - Cathedral of Sky & Flame (Samuel)
A declaration of becoming a victory cry. A lovely piece
May 18th, 2025 07:31 - R (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Alliterations aligned along an analogous amplification of aliens. Loved it
May 18th, 2025 05:32 - Safari of Self (Libellule)
A great metaphor this poem likens the land and beasts to the inner parts...
May 18th, 2025 05:28 - Words unspoken, words unread… (The ScarletBard)
A tribute to veterans of wars ancient to present. Well rhymed and written...
May 18th, 2025 05:25 - Fading Like the Rain (Salvia.S)
A lovely quatrain Salvia the meaning comes through clearly.
May 18th, 2025 05:23 - Evening Fireflies Stars and Exotic flowers (Reynaldo Casison)
A beautiful picture painted in all its grandeur in this poem. It must be...
May 18th, 2025 05:20 - Silence (Mik this is mik)
All of life is vibrations that some are sensitive enough to hear while...
May 18th, 2025 05:17 - We don’t live long enough (EvenwheniLie)
A poem on the meaning of aging and indeed many have asked why they have to...
May 18th, 2025 05:14 - AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 33-The Jabeda--27April2025 (Soman Ragavan)
Your evaluations are always most through and complete. This one delves in...
May 18th, 2025 05:10 - Glory to Thee, O Dhuhibala! (A Symphonic Ode to the Land of Golden Progress) (Mottakeenur Rehman)
A beautiful tribute in image and rhyme well worded my friend.
May 18th, 2025 05:07 - Carnibalism (Cofhypieces)
Indeed we devour others thoughts, words, money, wives and even bodies. We...
May 18th, 2025 05:04 - Listen (Jeremy Leach)
Very well rhymed this poem of one sided communication with a person set in...
May 18th, 2025 05:00 - THE NAKED GODDESS (Nephilim56)
Deep thoughts the cycle of death and life seems to be portrayed here and...
May 18th, 2025 04:57 - Who is sending nukes? (Demar Desu)
Clever and amusing all at the same time. A fun read Demar
May 18th, 2025 04:55 - A Mystery of Mysteries (Teddy.15)
Very nice Teddy this poem completes the circle with the last stanza...
May 18th, 2025 04:54 - Wise Man Say (12) (Poetic Licence)
Been there on all of those another fun read Tobani look forward to my...
May 18th, 2025 04:49 - Starlit Night (Akshadha_Joshi1310)
In this poem there is appreciation of nature near and far as if space is...
May 18th, 2025 04:37 - a reckoning of voices (Arqios)
What is history but a memory. How valuable are mementos? To each his own....
May 18th, 2025 04:28 - Brighten The Way. (Goldfinch60)
Here here! If all would help each other we would do much more and it would...
May 18th, 2025 04:22 - Loving Me (Introverted Sage)
The poem speaks of change and the fear of change. Well done with rhyme as...
May 17th, 2025 20:56 - Twilight shore (Kaz)
Beautiful images given here. Loved it
May 17th, 2025 18:29 - Long game (Keeter C)
A trade of in positive and negative thoughts and beliefs. Well done
May 17th, 2025 18:27 - How do I know (BlessedbyGod)
A poem of faith and belief. Well written and with rhyme. Well done.
May 17th, 2025 18:25 - I live in the shadows of cities (Xqw)
We are all things a beautiful poem about how we are made up of everything...
May 17th, 2025 17:29 - His Palette Retorts (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another series of great poems Kurt. Well done.
May 17th, 2025 15:38 - The Greyeyed King by Anna Akhmatova (Ksey_Gan)
This poem setts a mood a solemn one and the grey eyes seem to be a common...
May 17th, 2025 15:21 - Night Funeral in My Barrio (Rrodriguez)
A poem that\'s social comment speaks for the poor. Very nicely written...
May 17th, 2025 15:19 - Diseased (Not_defined)
So interesting the words we use to describe things. Disease for pain is an...
May 17th, 2025 15:13 - The lost have been found (EvenwheniLie)
Questions I used to ask sound so familiar but well written. A poem of...
May 17th, 2025 13:11 - Teenaging (Meera Mere)
Difficult years, been there and done that. Each part of life has its...
May 17th, 2025 12:45 - Please Do NOT Try To Tell Me You-- (Cheeky Missy)
Such a vision you paint in the first misty and yet well defined. The...
May 17th, 2025 12:43 - Evolution (2781)
An interesting view and well worded. Nicely done
May 17th, 2025 11:38 - Peggy\'s cove (Poetaldo)
A day in the life and a wonderful poem
May 17th, 2025 10:20 - their blood bestowed (Mourgana of the Fey)
Loved the clever work with the words pain/t , garden of Etten different...
May 17th, 2025 10:17 - Fading Into Numbness (TheInnerLens)
Very nicely worded and loved the rhyme scheme. A poem with a message.
May 17th, 2025 08:59 - Joe Don Baker (Randyjohnson71)
Remember his face. A great tribute, nicely done
May 17th, 2025 08:56 - Fire in my heart (Tony36)
A most encouraging poem that invites the reader to come back to love. Very...
May 17th, 2025 08:54 - A Journey through Letters ([email protected])
Very nice AB rhyme scheme with great imagery. A most engaging poem
May 17th, 2025 08:53 - Wild Child (Mya)
Engaging, tender, animating it speaks to the heart and from the heart well...
May 17th, 2025 08:51 - The Rooms Still Whisper Her (Samuel)
The poem progresses from loss and its mourning through burial and the tomb...
May 17th, 2025 08:48 - I\'m busy (Maplespal)
Powerless to fight and give one\'s life for a fight one did not pick or a...
May 17th, 2025 06:42 - Recollection (Libellule)
This poem was well written with good word selection and rhyme in a good...
May 17th, 2025 06:39 - entwined hearts (Jim56)
Beautiful thoughts Jim put into poetic words
May 17th, 2025 05:15 - stirred by the breeze (Arqios)
Your poems always make me think. Besides the beautiful images created by...
May 17th, 2025 05:14 - Moksha Through Sanatana Dharma : The Way to Liberation (AiR - Atman in Ravi)
A poem so well rhymed that at the same time explains well the philosophy...
May 17th, 2025 04:39 - They Once Called A Conspiracy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A good read that leaves the reader wondering what is to be trusted and the...
May 17th, 2025 04:33 - Escape; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ)
Whether you believe this message or not the wording is so beautiful it...
May 17th, 2025 04:32 - I must pimp myself! (Demar Desu)
This one to true to laugh made me laugh just the same. A great thought and...
May 17th, 2025 04:30 - Give and take (Jeremy Leach)
A point poetically made but the point is not so much the benefit of the...
May 17th, 2025 04:28 - Fields of Woe….. (The ScarletBard)
Moving and with a sense of proudness and sadness of loss and gain....
May 17th, 2025 04:25 - UK 2025 (Nephilim56)
This super short sums up the message in so few words. The author\'s note...
May 17th, 2025 04:22 - Missed Calls (Salian)
Ghosted in more modern vernacular. In my old school talk unrequited love...
May 17th, 2025 04:20 - AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 32-DiegoGarcia (7)to(10)--27April2025 (Soman Ragavan)
The comprehensiveness of your reviews is amazing and here as in the...
May 17th, 2025 04:17 - By the Light of My Poetic Side (Mottakeenur Rehman)
I find this tribute to be so bitter sweet knowing some mentioned that are...
May 17th, 2025 04:14 - Moses-Thine Lord is Silent! (Abdullah123)
A metaphor for todays strife and people often do not realize how deep...
May 17th, 2025 04:02 - Secrets Within The Lake (Akshadha_Joshi1310)
It is of the unknown that we fear the most. A most intriguing and...
May 17th, 2025 04:00 - The Weight of Normal (Haleyalexis)
Sad and tragic the scars of abuse that remind us of the past. A dark write...
May 17th, 2025 03:58 - In The Name of a Rose (Teddy.15)
Teddy on first read and looking at the picture I took this to be a flower...
May 17th, 2025 03:38 - Marys Revenge On Harry. (Poetic Licence)
The difference between the sexes evidenced in this piece. Thanks for the...
May 17th, 2025 03:34 - Spring hymn (Reynaldo Casison)
Beautiful words to describe a beautiful cosmos used to describe a...
May 17th, 2025 03:30 - Nature To Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
There is this sense that nature is infinity and that to be one with it is...
May 17th, 2025 03:19 - Flamboyán: Pride of My Country (Rrodriguez)
Beautiful both the tree and the poem. A very well dome poem.
May 16th, 2025 19:48 - Yummy! (Hzugman)
This could be an advertisement for either Hawaiian Punch or Oscar Meyer a...
May 16th, 2025 19:45 - For (Him) (Twistedlogicx)
Regrets that we all have had. A most interesting write.
May 16th, 2025 17:39 - My Storm (Kman Pumpkin King28)
Faith and belief in a better day to come. Very nice with a great sense of...
May 16th, 2025 16:53 - Why do I see? (Keeter C)
Religious belief is strong in this poem and shines through to the end....
May 16th, 2025 15:01 - The Long Winter (Daisychain)
Dirge of winter and the first exposition of spring. A lovely write that...
May 16th, 2025 14:59 - Inkwells (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt this one is so close to the theme of the poem I posted it makes me...
May 16th, 2025 12:19 - What a Fucking Mess (Thomas W Case)
I love this metaphorical piece that crawls with the lice of life and...
May 16th, 2025 12:17 - 1 day left to live (Demar Desu)
Another Senryu that opens the mind and clears the air. Well done Demar
May 16th, 2025 12:14 - What the Trembling Knows (Samuel)
I love the way this poem left the ending open for interpretation and...
May 16th, 2025 12:13
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