Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- We Must Fight To Dream (Ajon4wheels)
Warnings given in this poem and to be heeded. Wisdom imparted. Nicely...
March 4th, 2025 11:25 - Bed Dread (Tristan Robert Lange)
So true peace only comes when one is dead but remember there are many...
March 4th, 2025 11:20 - My love, My Pulse (RSM0812)
The unity of all is encompassed in this poem, interrelationships,...
March 4th, 2025 09:25 - Modern Haiku (Naina Pandey)
A most interesting personification of the sun and a fun metaphor at the...
March 4th, 2025 09:22 - My notebook knows (Bird In Red)
Existential and emotional this poem speaks to the reader and most of us at...
March 4th, 2025 09:21 - Conscience (Tkatie118)
A poem of recognition and promise it speaks out its message. Very nice
March 4th, 2025 09:19 - Shoot The Messenger (Hanible)
Wow! you have captured the moment in this poem that grabs you like a hand...
March 4th, 2025 09:16 - Kite (Cassie58)
A picture, snapshot, video of a beautiful creation of nature captured in...
March 4th, 2025 09:15 - Artistic Imagination (Salvia.S)
A very beautiful image you have given Salvia. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 09:12 - Poetry is my way to express myself (Tony36)
A wonderful way to reach out to others about how you feel. It is a way to...
March 4th, 2025 09:11 - Trying To Stay Sane In An Insane World (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A strong message set in rhyme. Nicely done
March 4th, 2025 08:16 - TMP-tober Poems(5 poems) (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt)
Here you have created a myth a legend in epic lyrical form. Very nice this...
March 4th, 2025 08:14 - Contronym (Thoughtless)
Irony at its best. A fun and informative read. A George would say what do...
March 4th, 2025 06:54 - Watching a smirk (Maplespal)
Sad nostalgia and well written in this poem of loss and having to be in...
March 4th, 2025 06:52 - Goodbye Gene Hackman - Part 2 (Randyjohnson71)
A wonderful tribute to a great actor and will be remembered. Very nicely...
March 4th, 2025 06:49 - The Problem Within (Hey!)
A poem of remorse and pain for what is seen as unpardonable flaws and...
March 4th, 2025 06:09 - Sunflower (Teddy.15)
A great message Teddy. When we can not bear to see what is outside us of...
March 4th, 2025 06:02 - Beauty of the Book (Whats write for me)
The rainbow has two ends one the forgiveness of God of men for their deeds...
March 4th, 2025 06:00 - spring flowers (Jim56)
Rainbows of color in floral display. A lovely poem Jim. The title threw me...
March 4th, 2025 05:57 - TOWN (Nephilim56)
Literally a description of urban decay and metaphorically this might be a...
March 4th, 2025 04:50 - Mid Point (Paul Gerard Reed)
A poem about the midpoint so rare. This one so well balanced. Nicely done.
March 4th, 2025 04:26 - ill fight (Sheta)
Strong statements of determination and pride. Well said
March 4th, 2025 04:24 - Reasons to leave Mexico (Poetic Licence)
A powerful write in brutal clarity the point is made. Where there is...
March 4th, 2025 04:23 - Buddhism Burning. (David Wakeling)
I remember well that act. It has become iconic and stands as an image of...
March 4th, 2025 04:18 - minuet of the reeds (Arqios)
Botanical fireworks set to music in this poem in a metaphoric work of...
March 4th, 2025 04:13 - “Fiction in Fantasy” (Peanut)
When we feel particularly vulnerable and depressed we are subject to...
March 4th, 2025 04:08 - Missing Person (MDStone)
So well written. This poem takes a person on a walk through the disease....
March 4th, 2025 04:04 - All Praise! (Orchidee)
Praise him with the electric guitar and synthesizer? Why not! lol Another...
March 4th, 2025 03:59 - The Rules Of Cricket. (Goldfinch60)
If ever there were British instructions these are they lol Andy this one...
March 4th, 2025 03:53 - Is this our plan of attack? (EvenwheniLie)
A fun read with many rhymes inside this piece
March 3rd, 2025 20:27 - this (Jon Nakapalau)
Short and to the point. Very nice it seems you have it your way.
March 3rd, 2025 18:30 - Updates (John Prophet)
A very nice style for this type of message. Step wise it moves like an...
March 3rd, 2025 18:29 - There is the rain in our city after E. Yevtushenko (Ksey_Gan)
A very good description of one aspect of love. Nicely done
March 3rd, 2025 18:27 - Keeping My Tip Up (ForeverJesus7)
A call to others to persist and a motivational poem it is. Nice
March 3rd, 2025 16:32 - Father will be there (Poetaldo)
A poem of comfort and peace. Lovely
March 3rd, 2025 16:31 - Grain of faith (Funmiwrites)
The mind is powerful and belief is the key element in success. A lovely...
March 3rd, 2025 16:29 - A Heart Torn in Two (Hey!)
Choices are what this life is made of and no matter which it is it is a...
March 3rd, 2025 16:28 - Did They Call THIS Having Fun? (Cheeky Missy)
Once again the seasons and birds come in to play a great poem for any day....
March 3rd, 2025 16:24 - Time Passes (NinjaGirl)
A poem that begins with despair shows hope then returns to darkness only...
March 3rd, 2025 14:44 - eyes (Newt)
Philosophical in nature this poem speaks of another means of perception
March 3rd, 2025 11:22 - She\'s a wonderer (Hzugman)
What an interesting description tied together with rhyme. Short but sweet.
March 3rd, 2025 11:20 - 19 years (Pineapple_pizza018)
Such timing and counting is almost obsessive. Obsessions and compulsions...
March 3rd, 2025 11:19 - the moth I\'ll never become (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt)
We all are who we are some metamorphosize into one type of butterfly and...
March 3rd, 2025 11:14 - Pulling Me Onward (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
To have nonjudgmental acceptance is such a strength both to give and as a...
March 3rd, 2025 10:07 - Tree and bluebell (Caring dove)
A wonderful metaphor and well cast to realize that we don\'t see the whole...
March 3rd, 2025 10:05 - Silently (BlessedbyGod)
Very nicely rhymed and written with great organization this poem flows...
March 3rd, 2025 10:02 - Hard To Love? (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
For your wordsmithing in this poem it deserves a fave. Lovely work with...
March 3rd, 2025 10:00 - This is Where Spring Begins – Haru Ga Hajimaru (Neville)
Once again Neville you invoke your mastery of symbolism and metaphor to...
March 3rd, 2025 09:56 - Cri de coeur courtesy thirty something English earl cry baby (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Such are the troubles of the rich and noble class and though hard to...
March 3rd, 2025 09:50 - Your Voice (Tony36)
Being brave to stand up for what one believes and for those who can\'t is...
March 3rd, 2025 09:45 - Hold Your Heart (Tkatie118)
Such a nice pledge of love set in a dare where the author is willing to...
March 3rd, 2025 09:43 - My inner landscapes (Lorenz)
As the poem speaks it reveals the inner landscapes of the author, some...
March 3rd, 2025 09:41 - Swinger\'s Springtime Surprise (Tristan Robert Lange)
This unique style worked so well for this poem that I could not help but...
March 3rd, 2025 09:36 - The Painting Called Mystery (Hanible)
Waiting is half the journey in art. Whether the right shadow in painting,...
March 3rd, 2025 05:59 - The Day I Learned to Ride (Gray0328)
Funny how I also remember that day. A great write so descriptive and well...
March 3rd, 2025 05:56 - Looking Glass (MrNobody40)
A poem with so many familiar feelings in it. It evokes a sense of life...
March 3rd, 2025 05:53 - a robin came along (Jim56)
Have heard the robin\'s song many times and it reminded me of spring and...
March 3rd, 2025 05:51 - Replay (Maplespal)
This poem is haunting and sad. Past memories can be sad but they can also...
March 3rd, 2025 05:47 - Photograph (Paul Gerard Reed)
This poem struck me personally and whether the poem or the topic it evoked...
March 3rd, 2025 05:40 - DEPARTURE (Nephilim56)
It may be an individual but it is also a metaphor for all the veterans...
March 3rd, 2025 05:37 - When You Stand on Verge of Understanding... (Cellinic)
A poem that is spiritually bound and wrapped in a ribbon of faith. Well...
March 3rd, 2025 05:34 - you (Sheta)
A great paradox in that you have mentioned feelings expressed in action...
March 3rd, 2025 05:32 - Maybe if... (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
A poem well engineered as to rhyme, meter and format. Each nicely worked....
March 3rd, 2025 05:29 - Yoked to the Choke (Mutley Ravishes)
Each year\'s layer making memory mor opaque and in the process burying...
March 3rd, 2025 05:26 - Eccentricities (Orchidee)
Always liked being balmy it helps with the bitterness of life a bit like...
March 3rd, 2025 05:23 - Alphabetical Alchemy (Salvia.S)
Always short, light hearted, upbeat a joy to read. Lovely
March 3rd, 2025 05:13 - Seasons In a Year. (Poetic Licence)
Tobani you completed the cycle well. In this poem the cycle of nature in...
March 3rd, 2025 05:12 - Rose Williams and the fragile heart. (David Wakeling)
Well done unlike a bull in a china shop it seems that there was no glass...
March 3rd, 2025 05:08 - “My Solar System” (Peanut)
This poem comments on the complex relationship of where blame lies and how...
March 3rd, 2025 04:56 - The Night Sky (MrNobody40)
The personification of space always brings one closer to nature. A lovely...
March 3rd, 2025 04:54 - Gbye. (Pie)
Reunions are not always forever nor is what one thinks to be love yet in...
March 3rd, 2025 04:48 - ‘bear pottery’ (Arqios)
It does make one wonder. The picture fits the occasion and after all what...
March 3rd, 2025 04:46 - Fighting For Peace! (Goldfinch60)
Strong words make for a powerful poem and about a subject that you feel...
March 3rd, 2025 04:39 - forever fighting (NafisaSB)
This poem reads well with rhyme. Now that there is some distance in time...
March 3rd, 2025 04:35 - Dear Monster (Sunshine777)
A good read that portrays the situation as a monster. The metaphor fits...
March 2nd, 2025 18:36 - Arsonist??? (Pineapple_pizza018)
Such a metaphor. It works well and fits the message. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 18:34 - Flesh and bones for the fire (EvenwheniLie)
This poem has an ominous feel to it. It shows anger and resentment. There...
March 2nd, 2025 15:10 - Father I feel so good to be loved by you (Poetaldo)
A poem of gratitude to one\'s father. A most lovely write.
March 2nd, 2025 15:08 - Lost in a haze (Neckymonky)
March 2nd, 2025 15:07 - Lost in a haze (Neckymonky)
Parting words that sound somewhat dark. Well rhymed and written this piece...
March 2nd, 2025 15:07 - Farewell Winter (RSM0812)
A beautiful painting of aged winter personified and spring as well a...
March 2nd, 2025 15:05 - There\'s Nothing Quite Like Sundays, Y\'Know? (Cheeky Missy)
The passage of time and seasons noted in these poems nicely stated with...
March 2nd, 2025 15:03 - An Amazing Fact About Us Humans (Teddy.15)
Although I doubt it I have been wrong in the past. Lets hope so this time...
March 2nd, 2025 15:01 - A love for stone (NDOU ROLIVHUWA)
It is most difficult living with a fantasy that is never confirmed and all...
March 2nd, 2025 14:59 - Kitchen Demon (Gray0328)
Creative and great in its neologism well done.
March 2nd, 2025 11:22 - Free At Last (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
A challenge to many the idea that the university or formal education is...
March 2nd, 2025 11:20 - Pavlov house (Lorenz)
A poem of comradery and how this goes on beyond beyond death. Well
March 2nd, 2025 11:18 - Question (Bird In Red)
The feeling that true love never dies even though we go different ways. A...
March 2nd, 2025 10:41 - Undressed (Cassie58)
How sensuous in every way. This poem drips with beautiful imagery and...
March 2nd, 2025 10:39 - Old Man Winter now flagging, and slip sliding along... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Lots of creative images and metaphors here. All nicely woven into one...
March 2nd, 2025 10:36 - So Pathetic (Hanible)
Clever with good word choice to send its message. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 09:21 - The Light in Me (Whats write for me)
Light often used as a symbol for truth and knowledge shines through here....
March 2nd, 2025 09:19 - Blood Caps (Timothy Hilary Musa)
Covered under layers of metaphor is political commentary. A poem replete...
March 2nd, 2025 09:15 - anvil clouds and phantom corridors (Tristan Robert Lange)
Gothic indeed and dark. A good choice of images to present the story. Well...
March 2nd, 2025 09:10 - Pleasure & Pain (Mutley Ravishes)
There is depth in this short piece. Memories are what we want them to be...
March 2nd, 2025 06:30 - march is here (Jim56)
Once again Jim you paint a beautiful picture of sunny days and beautiful...
March 2nd, 2025 06:29 - I write & The situation (Maplespal)
Your first poem seen as an oblation and accepted with gratitude, A lovely...
March 2nd, 2025 06:27 - The UK Government Want All Ya eBay Money (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
It doesn\'t matter which country they all want their share of the pie and...
March 2nd, 2025 05:08 - To understand you is an understatement (Vishakha)
This to me is a poem of friendship and is written in such a caring way....
March 2nd, 2025 05:06 - Listen Loud Just One More Time (Neville)
The subtlety in this piece nearly slipped past me. If he needs to shout...
March 2nd, 2025 05:04
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