Comments on community poems by orchidee
- BARCELONA ~ WE WEEP WITH YOU TODAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sensitive write Brian.
August 18th, 2017 08:26 - A MERRY LUNCH (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic, at one minute into the UK day!
August 18th, 2017 01:57 - Reaching Nirvana. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold. I travelled some paths less - got lost in woods, and...
August 18th, 2017 01:55 - Haiku #2 (Simple-Man87)
Oh, not a failure. I\'m just stunned by words used that are, say, 4...
August 17th, 2017 11:26 - Haiku #2 (Simple-Man87)
A fine Haiku S-M. That\'s all the 5 syllables of the first line used up in...
August 17th, 2017 09:26 - Dancing with Shadows. (Goldfinch60)
I wrote a poem like this too. It started: \"I lay in a darkened room /...
August 17th, 2017 08:47 - Ill (Nicholas Browning)
You better now?! (heehee). I seem to get longer! doh! Well, I should not...
August 17th, 2017 08:42 - Illusions Of Pain (Accidental Poet)
A fine write AP.
August 17th, 2017 08:26 - IT BREAKS MY HEART (Louis Gibbs)
Sounds like me on a sherry day?! Does it?! heehee.
August 17th, 2017 08:25 - I AM A MIDDLEMAN ! A Rhyming 662 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oohh, you knowing Confucius too?! heehee.
August 17th, 2017 08:23 - I AM A MIDDLEMAN ! A Rhyming 662 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian. Middleman \'Sherry Steve\' here! Just as long as...
August 17th, 2017 08:23 - Tinnitus (FredPeyer)
It\'s not really voices in the head, is it? That\'s something else....
August 17th, 2017 01:47 - Ill (Nicholas Browning)
Hope it don\'t mean you\'re questioning every line of poetry that you...
August 17th, 2017 01:43 - Dancing with Shadows. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
August 17th, 2017 01:42 - LIMERICK No 41 (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. lol.
August 17th, 2017 01:41 - CARIBBEAN MAMMY ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine ol\' poem, Brian!
August 16th, 2017 10:07 - Sheep Shepherding (Orchidee)
Thanks for comment N. I\'m not seeking to paraphrase the Bible. I have to...
August 16th, 2017 08:52 - Finally, Less Stress (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Good write.
August 16th, 2017 08:49 - Nithing (Nicholas Browning)
Well, I feel it does take skill, courage, and whatever else, to write...
August 16th, 2017 08:47 - Farting Around (WriteBeLight)
Oh lol, swoon! Will it affect the greenhouse effect, or whatever it is?!
August 16th, 2017 08:32 - Hiding In The Rain (Accidental Poet)
A fine write AP. Ya got an umbrella there?! heehee.
August 16th, 2017 08:27 - DEAFENING SILENCE (Louis Gibbs)
Good write L. Sometimes, or often, just \'being there\' helps. But...
August 16th, 2017 08:25 - THE OLD MAN (Lasergraph)
A fine write L.
August 16th, 2017 08:22 - Little Drummer Boy (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Ohh, I swooned! I read those Pah-Rumpah\'s as \'Rumpy Pumpy!\' And what...
August 16th, 2017 02:03 - THE DESTITUTE (Michael Edwards)
I hardly use commas myself, except where necessary. In this case: A, fine,...
August 16th, 2017 02:01 - Quiet City. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
August 16th, 2017 01:58 - ()
To make things complicated (!) I believe that the mind is part of the...
August 15th, 2017 13:53 - Itinerary (WriteBeLight)
A fine write WBL.
August 15th, 2017 10:37 - \"Nowhere Locomotive\" (Nicholas Browning)
I got as far as: Something \'persists\' (verse 1). It will take me about 3...
August 15th, 2017 10:36 - THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY (Louis Gibbs)
I was about to post a poem including \'a time for everything\'. It...
August 15th, 2017 08:39 - THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY (Louis Gibbs)
Good write. Let\'s hope and pray it will be frustrated. In the past it\'s...
August 15th, 2017 08:37 - Ten Feet From The Ledge (Accidental Poet)
Good write. I was 10 feet from the ledge. But I was on the ground floor! I...
August 15th, 2017 08:35 - ANARCHY IN VIRGINIA ~ A Wordless Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I did a wordless poem too - it\'s got 3,647 verses - or something like...
August 15th, 2017 08:30 - ANARCHY IN VIRGINIA ~ A Wordless Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian.
August 15th, 2017 08:28 - ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M - here at zero minutes into the UK day!
August 15th, 2017 01:45 - Do You Take Sugar? (Goldfinch60)
Thinking of you both. Yes, those words from a programme - radio I think:...
August 15th, 2017 01:44 - SUMMER IDYL (Michael Edwards)
A fine eloquent write, \'13 minutes into the UK day\' poet! heehee.
August 14th, 2017 09:01 - Time to Leave (FredPeyer)
It\'s the alcohol that does it - affects the mind. Causes people to act...
August 14th, 2017 08:56 - I\'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You had some sherry too, as well as me?! heehee.
August 14th, 2017 08:53 - CRAYON ON THE WALL (Lasergraph)
A fine write L.
August 14th, 2017 08:51 - Clocks and Calendars (WriteBeLight)
A fine write WBL. Ya can have endless hours of me singing - it\'s no...
August 14th, 2017 08:34 - Test of Faith? (Goldfinch60)
Ohh heehee, a good fun write G/F.
August 14th, 2017 01:35 - Simplicity Sentiments (Orchidee)
Thanks Cat.
August 13th, 2017 10:41 - Redefining. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
August 13th, 2017 10:40 - cory (ACS)
A fine write ACS.
August 13th, 2017 10:06 - My poetic Side (Accidental Poet)
A fine write AP. Pity I came along and started to SING my poems!...
August 13th, 2017 07:02 - Check Yourself Out (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Oops, I do use them. Saves times if there are queues. But I see what you...
August 13th, 2017 07:00 - decrucify (Draculazy)
Ooh I say, what\'s going on there?! Swoon! Hee hee. And on your birthday...
August 13th, 2017 06:58 - PRAISE THE LORD ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great write Brian. Those \'praise-y\' Psalms section, around 95 - 100!...
August 13th, 2017 06:57 - counting by even numbers (Queer-with-a-pen)
Well, it\'s ironic maybe, that 40 is an EVEN number, if even numbers are...
August 13th, 2017 02:19 - Dandelion Seeds (FredPeyer)
A fine write Fred. Dandelion leaves for our pet piggies! The ones in my...
August 13th, 2017 01:52 - Gone, Not Forgotten (ACS)
Good write ACS. Gone? Where ya going? But you has only just got here!...
August 13th, 2017 01:50 - ()
I got to the end of this ,then swooned, in me sheltered life! heehee. I...
August 13th, 2017 01:47 - CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards)
A fine poem and pic about the END of the day, being the first UK poet at...
August 13th, 2017 01:45 - New Generations. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write G/F. This sherry\'s stunting my growth! heehee.
August 13th, 2017 01:43 - Living (FredPeyer)
A fine write Fred. But I don\'t go along with Erich\'s quote myself. yet...
August 12th, 2017 14:55 - Resurrection Raptures (Orchidee)
I\'ve adjusted it slightly, hopefully to be a bit easier, and added a few...
August 12th, 2017 11:13 - Resurrection Raptures (Orchidee)
Thanks Santita. Yes, it\'s based on a passage by St Paul. He gets very...
August 12th, 2017 11:09 - Let Go Your Ego (WriteBeLight)
Ahh, so this is someone with bags packed, sitting on the fence, nose in...
August 12th, 2017 10:09 - ()
You tried Haikus? 5,7,5 syllables.
August 12th, 2017 10:07 - ()
Ahh, I see - 1,2,3,4,1 syllable layout for Lanturnes *looked it up*. Fine...
August 12th, 2017 10:06 - Just A Tick In Time (Accidental Poet)
A fine write AP. Or - endeavour, even, in English spelling. U knows we...
August 12th, 2017 10:03 - CARIBBEAN GIRL ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian.
August 12th, 2017 04:11 - LANTURNE 2 (Michael Edwards)
Cccoooeeee one-minute into the day UK poet!
August 12th, 2017 02:10 - LANTURNE 2 (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. But would we want a roll in THAT pongy hay?! lol.
August 12th, 2017 02:10 - Loose Stools (Rew4er2nail)
Erm, I had a feeling you weren\'t gonna talk about chairs in this poem,...
August 12th, 2017 02:06 - Music - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write, and good FIBS G/F. meanwhile I\'m bothering about metres, if...
August 12th, 2017 02:03 - A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee)
The terrifying thing about this, is that the \'P.S.\' bit is true! Yes?!
August 12th, 2017 02:01 - A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee)
The terrifying thing about this, is that the \'P.S.\' bit is true! Yes?!
August 12th, 2017 02:01 - IMAGINE (Louis Gibbs)
A fine write Louis.
August 11th, 2017 10:24 - Interference. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine fishy write Fay.
August 11th, 2017 10:23 - A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee)
Hi Outback. This probably took no thinking at all! lol.
August 11th, 2017 10:21 - Crispy Wing Things (WriteBeLight)
A fine write and pic WBL. lol.
August 11th, 2017 10:05 - A day in the Snow (Lizzy Renee)
A fine write Lizzie. You come back for birthday greetings in a few days...
August 11th, 2017 09:13 - CITY GIRLS ~ SIX SIZZLING SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian.
August 11th, 2017 09:11 - Rioja - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write. I\'m a wine-waterer too. heehee. Call me the elusive Scarlet...
August 11th, 2017 02:10 - Hope (FredPeyer)
A fine write F. yet I too think there is always hope, that is not just...
August 11th, 2017 02:03 - A LANTURNE (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. Hi, second poet of the day. 23 minutes - gosh,...
August 11th, 2017 01:59 - That Ghoulish Man (RickyMcG)
A fine write RWM. Hey, how did you know I just looked in the mirror, and...
August 10th, 2017 12:03 - LSD (Shaun55)
Good write. The only LSD I knew, was the old UK money of £.S.D. Pounds,...
August 10th, 2017 08:42 - Creative State (Azura Nightsong)
A fine write. Erm, I didn\'t get far looking in the mirror. It cracked...
August 10th, 2017 08:35 - The Voice of Heaven (Accidental Poet)
Erm, well I hope my poems don\'t make ya all go back to bed then! heehee....
August 10th, 2017 08:29 - Passion For Peace (Orchidee)
This peace is \'like\' so many things, as the hymn-clip says!
August 10th, 2017 08:27 - Life (Edward Charles McDevitt)
A fine write E. In my UK \'11th grade\' I was in the intricacies of The...
August 10th, 2017 08:13 - Waning Will (WriteBeLight)
A fine write WBL. have a pork pie and a sherry (or three) and you won\'t...
August 10th, 2017 08:06 - EMERGING (Michael Edwards)
It\'s the end of the world - well almost! Was you 3 minutes late?! hehehe.
August 10th, 2017 08:02 - To no Avail (Nicholas Browning)
Erm, Hi N. I didn\'t mean your poem hardly gets \'off the ground\'! I...
August 10th, 2017 08:01 - To no Avail (Nicholas Browning)
A fine write N. A bit like: Why won\'t my telly work? Erm, try plugging it...
August 10th, 2017 01:56 - How i feel (Wisty Goodall)
Sometimes it may depend on whether we\'re enjoying ourselves or not, as...
August 10th, 2017 01:51 - EMERGING (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic there, first poet of the day!
August 10th, 2017 01:50 - My Time. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write again G/F. Me sherry and pork pies time returns each day too!
August 10th, 2017 01:48 - SOPA MINESTRONE ~ PER FAVORE ~ ITALIAN SONNET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A tasty write Brian. I can\'t have anything that\'s too spicy.
August 10th, 2017 01:46 - HER VOICE FELL SOFT (Michael Edwards)
Why did I return to this? Just to say my voice did not fall soft. It...
August 9th, 2017 09:17 - Rest In Peace Glen Travis Campbell (Accidental Poet)
A fine write and tribute that we in UK share with you.
August 9th, 2017 09:13 - Melancholy. (Goldfinch60)
I was only trying to help! They may have been too inebriated to win the...
August 9th, 2017 09:10 - IN SPITE OF (Louis Gibbs)
A fine write L.
August 9th, 2017 09:07 - Undiluted. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write again Fay.
August 9th, 2017 08:45 - Dream Lunch (WriteBeLight)
A fine write WBL.
August 9th, 2017 08:44 - GUARDIAN ANGELS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian.
August 9th, 2017 04:06 - Train to Heaven (BLACKGOLDKING)
A certain department store has \'toodle-pip\' on a notice at present, as...
August 9th, 2017 02:32
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