Comments on community poems by orchidee
- MELE KALIKIMAKA! (Merry Christmas) (FredPeyer)
Mele Wotsit too Fred! lol.
December 10th, 2017 08:39 - YOU ARE A TREE ! A 7 7 Blank Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian. Echoes of Psalms and other verses in this. Couldn\'t...
December 10th, 2017 08:33 - Sound-Encounter. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
December 10th, 2017 06:46 - Poetry is.... (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold. I suspect a lot of your (and maybe many people) IS from...
December 10th, 2017 03:29 - LIMERICKS 35 & 36 (Michael Edwards)
Oh lol, good writes and pic Michael.
December 10th, 2017 03:03 - writing in the moon (Frank Prem)
Good write Frank.
December 10th, 2017 03:02 - Artificial Happiness (Syd)
A fine write Syd. I started with \'soap-land\' happiness, then saw...
December 9th, 2017 13:02 - Sometimes, Fuck Life... (Saint Sinner)
Isn\'t it two-sided maybe? Or sometimes? I mean, we partly choose to react...
December 9th, 2017 12:48 - Transformation (Rrodriguez)
Oh yes, we may moan as adults - oh no, it\'s raining, oh dear! Same as...
December 9th, 2017 12:36 - Imprisonment (Clarita)
A bit psychological this - and a long word there! lol.
Yes, we may not...
December 9th, 2017 12:35 - The devil\'s smile (Georgiarous101)
This is so, probably as one of his disguises. Easy to fall for it...
December 9th, 2017 12:31 - Little Bird (W c)
Ahh lovely write wc. Some \'little birds\' (even me!) can be awful...
December 9th, 2017 12:27 - Faithful Focus (Orchidee)
Here\'s my age. A comment on this clip says someone sang it in the 1960\'s...
December 9th, 2017 12:21 - TREASURE OF SNOW ~An Acrostic 8 2 4 Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A bit of Job 38:22 there Brian! I recall it as we had a film of the same...
December 9th, 2017 08:17 - The Beat of the Drum. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. Drums in worship services? It seems one either loves...
December 9th, 2017 02:56 - ANOTHER BUNCH OF ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
I\'ll say it in one line - good write and pic M.
December 9th, 2017 02:53 - Christmas With You (Christina8)
A fine write Christina.
December 9th, 2017 02:52 - for the coming of the wind (Frank Prem)
A fine write Frank.
December 9th, 2017 02:51 - Boisterous. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write again Fay.
December 8th, 2017 09:17 - The Man From The Seventies. (Goldfinch60)
Oh lol, a good write Gold.
December 8th, 2017 03:30 - nostalgia in the night (Frank Prem)
Good write Frank.
December 8th, 2017 03:28 - POETRY IS (Louis Gibbs)
A fine and true write Louis.
December 8th, 2017 03:27 - SIMPLISTIC COMPLEXITY (Michael Edwards)
Good write and pic Michael. But I\'m not good at understanding cryptic...
December 8th, 2017 03:26 - Little Angels (W c)
Good write wc.
December 7th, 2017 15:07 - Clowns (Tony36)
Yes, in times when clowns were innocent, not creepy and sinister. A fine...
December 7th, 2017 15:06 - MY HEART BURSTS IN PRAISE (Zizi)
A true write Zizi!
December 7th, 2017 15:04 - Seven (FredPeyer)
A fine write Fred.
December 7th, 2017 13:07 - C H R I S T M A S F A I R S ~ An Acrostic 9 5 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fun write and experience Brian.
December 7th, 2017 12:58 - Umbrella or Parasol. (Goldfinch60)
A fine wise write Gold.
Meanwhile it\'s only always ever dark - when I...
December 7th, 2017 03:12 - coffee café before late shift (Frank Prem)
You had more coffee Frank? Good write there!
December 7th, 2017 02:52 - NEW RESOLVE (Michael Edwards)
Good write and pic Michael. I\'ve resolved to get the dictionary out with...
December 7th, 2017 02:51 - Decisive. (Fay Slimm.)
Erm, ahh, perhaps, maybe,....now come on Orchi, be \'decisive\' and...
December 6th, 2017 11:11 - Peacock Watcher (W c)
Good write wc.
December 6th, 2017 11:09 - Amazed (Zizi)
And an amazing write Zizi. Amazing and not impossible!
December 6th, 2017 11:06 - AN ENGLISHMAN\'S \'OUSE ! A 6 6 2 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian.
December 6th, 2017 11:04 - The Poem We Did Not Understand. (Goldfinch60)
I didsh not get past the title even, with being on the sherry! You mean...
December 6th, 2017 04:06 - Unimaginable Power (FredPeyer)
A fine write and true Fred.
December 6th, 2017 03:15 - Morning Things (W c)
Eloquent and descriptive write wc. Then I came along and ruined it by...
December 6th, 2017 02:45 - ADVERSARY RHYMES (2 3 & 4) (Michael Edwards)
Oh lol, fine writes Michael. Stand clear of that sailor!
December 6th, 2017 02:43 - a cuppa at the end of october (Frank Prem)
You had that cuppa Frank? Good write.
December 6th, 2017 02:41 - PASSING STRANGERS (Louis Gibbs)
Do you mean like going shopping and meeting our self, who has just done...
December 6th, 2017 02:40 - Do You ? (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay! \'Blackbird has spoken\' as the hymn says. Well, I...
December 5th, 2017 10:09 - Dead-End Street (FredPeyer)
Good write Fred. You out of that street now?
December 5th, 2017 10:07 - Thinking of Nothing. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold. Get well soon! Not too much \'thinking\' there, if you...
December 5th, 2017 03:23 - who will leave you clean (Frank Prem)
Good write Frank.
December 5th, 2017 02:56 - Adversary Rhymes (1, 2 and 3) (Michael Edwards)
Ahh, this explains my swoons. I remember hearing nursery rhymes like this...
December 5th, 2017 02:55 - Folk Song (W c)
A fine write wc. You got that pipe? Don\'t light it up though. Smoking\'s...
December 5th, 2017 02:48 - Wrapped Up In Christmas (Christina8)
A fine write Christina.
December 4th, 2017 14:28 - Springtime\'s First. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh yes, we brought in some cuttings from the greenhouse. They are...
December 4th, 2017 14:27 - He Always Hears Me (ForeverJesus7)
Maybe it\'s oppression then?
December 4th, 2017 14:19 - the purpose (of the St Nemom machine) (Frank Prem)
Good write Frank. I don\'t even know this GB chap! Uncultured me?! lol.
December 4th, 2017 04:39 - Spirit Stream (Orchidee)
Thanks Fred. Also \'rude\' can also mean bare, stark, etc, as in \'At thy...
December 4th, 2017 04:32 - He Always Hears Me (ForeverJesus7)
I don\'t have seizures myself. I wish you well.
December 4th, 2017 03:32 - He Always Hears Me (ForeverJesus7)
I don\'t have seizures myself. I wish you well.
December 4th, 2017 03:32 - GUILT (Michael Edwards)
Waitrose might be too snobbish to notice guilt. Too busy charging us too...
December 4th, 2017 03:30 - Running (FredPeyer)
A fine write Fred. The repetition gives a meditative style, I feel. Seems...
December 4th, 2017 03:28 - THE PERPETUAL PRODUCTION (Louis Gibbs)
I see what you mean, yet I don\'t go along much with \'All the world\'s a...
December 4th, 2017 02:54 - He Always Hears Me (ForeverJesus7)
Good write - and as Goldfinch says.
Is this about you or someone else, or...
December 4th, 2017 02:51 - GUILT (Michael Edwards)
I wanted that pic for my KP wedding! Too late now! lol.
December 4th, 2017 02:48 - GUILT (Michael Edwards)
Yes, and is the guilt real, or not? Which is worse - true or imagined...
December 4th, 2017 02:47 - Supermoon. (Goldfinch60)
\'I, I who saw nothing\', to amend that song. I was in bed, and it was all...
December 4th, 2017 02:46 - Ramblings Of A Tortuous Madman (Saint Sinner)
I know your trouble. You heard me sing! It drove you to this! heehee.
December 4th, 2017 02:44 - The Glory of Mozart. (Goldfinch60)
A fine evening and write Gold.
December 3rd, 2017 03:47 - goodnight, my western sky (Frank Prem)
Lovely write Frank.
December 3rd, 2017 02:56 - A COUPLE OF COUPLETS TIMES TWO (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic Michael.
December 3rd, 2017 02:55 - Mountain Folk (W c)
Good write wc.
December 3rd, 2017 02:54 - the first lord’s song (Frank Prem)
Good write Frank.
December 2nd, 2017 03:06 - Count Rainbows. (Goldfinch60)
Good write and clip Gold. We can know it\'s not just wishful thinking or...
December 2nd, 2017 03:05 - THE CONFORMIST (Michael Edwards)
Yes - and how big is the box? And what is it made of - cardboard, wood? I...
December 2nd, 2017 03:03 - State of the World (LukeCoomer)
Ask a silly question maybe - have things got worse? Or was the past \'the...
December 2nd, 2017 02:59 - Life Feels Like A Great Black Pit Filled With Shit (Saint Sinner)
Woof, woof! I\'m a watchdog, sometimes checking poems are marked 18+ where...
December 1st, 2017 14:49 - Almighty Radiance (GeraldineTaylor)
Good write G.
December 1st, 2017 14:39 - Life Feels Like A Great Black Pit Filled With Shit (Saint Sinner)
Erm, don\'t fall in It then!
December 1st, 2017 14:36 - Wind (Tony36)
Good write Tony. An alternative version - lol -
\'As the wind blows...
December 1st, 2017 10:39 - Its My Birthday (Writings From The Unknown13)
Oohh yes, happy birthday there! Of course, people never get older than 21....
December 1st, 2017 10:33 - Magical. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. as if a woodland walk. Erm, I enjoyed some local woods,...
December 1st, 2017 10:31 - LUNAS D\'ESPANA ~ Por Santita y Christina (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oohh will this make me swoon? Should I meet her, the woman in the pic?!...
December 1st, 2017 03:13 - Leucistic Bird. (Goldfinch60)
A fine sight and write Gold.
December 1st, 2017 03:12 - a journey of raindrops (Frank Prem)
A fine write Frank.
December 1st, 2017 02:57 - THE CAVE (Louis Gibbs)
A fine write with the three of them Louis.
December 1st, 2017 02:56 - THEY WOULD NOT BLEED (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic Michael.
December 1st, 2017 02:55 - Message to all my Friends on MPS (FredPeyer)
Best wishes to you all! Yes, more things important than poetry. Me doing...
December 1st, 2017 02:52 - Fight or Flight (LukeCoomer)
Wish I would shut up waffling sometimes. I go on and on you see. I said,...
November 30th, 2017 15:29 - WINTER LUNES (5 3 5) ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian. I know naughty joke about snowman and a carrot. But I...
November 30th, 2017 14:54 - Preyed Upon (W c)
Erm, a sort of \"(bigger) dog eat (smaller) dog\" there wc!
November 30th, 2017 14:51 - Jazz Without Sparkle. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. It was me. I ruined it. I turned up and sang along....
November 30th, 2017 14:50 - Me, Myself, and I (FredPeyer)
Good write Fred. Erm, maybe thinking of ourselves as \'me, myself, and I\'...
November 30th, 2017 02:49 - A FEW LUNES (Michael Edwards)
Good writes Michael. The only lune I knew, was lunacy! heehee.
November 30th, 2017 02:47 - child (Frank Prem)
A fine write Frank.
November 30th, 2017 02:45 - While the Universe watches (FredPeyer)
Good write Fred.
November 30th, 2017 02:44 - Faith In Grace (W c)
Good write wc.
November 29th, 2017 14:52 - Of Wonders and Miracles (GeraldineTaylor)
Good write Geraldine.
November 29th, 2017 10:45 - Goodbye (Italy)
But you has only just got here, with your first poem, and you is saying...
November 29th, 2017 10:44 - Idle Time (Syd)
A fine 15-worder there Syd! The urge may make me swoon - if I knew what it...
November 29th, 2017 10:42 - Found Absent. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. I read some document from a place of employment of years...
November 29th, 2017 10:38 - CHRISTMAS QUICKIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write Brian.
I was saved from an awful fate, of kissing my last...
November 29th, 2017 04:15 - Fevered Sea. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. Hope poetry group goes well.
I went to a bi-monthly...
November 29th, 2017 04:12 - those hours (Frank Prem)
Good write Frank.
November 29th, 2017 03:05 - THE PRISONER (Louis Gibbs)
It seems to me some healing of the brain, or mind, is needed somehow. We...
November 29th, 2017 03:02 - THE PRISONER (Louis Gibbs)
A fine write Louis. I saw a programme, someone had Tourette\'s, a mental...
November 29th, 2017 03:00
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