Comments on community poems by Cassie58
- OUR LOVE SONG (My Boy Ryngkhlem)
Beautifully penned. The sadness filtered through to this poet’s heart....
December 28th, 2023 13:52 - Bacon versus Bacon (GillyFitz)
There is nothing like a bacon sammich
to make the start of my day better,...
December 28th, 2023 13:48 - Lost for Words (Tom Dylan)
I wish you well. Takes courage to do open mic. Words mean everything to us...
December 28th, 2023 13:44 - I should have (Gregoria)
I do believe your words will be relatable to many.
I should have...
December 28th, 2023 13:39 - Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap (Neville)
I’m not an admirer of fake anything. I would rather have a print of the...
December 28th, 2023 09:14 - Mirrors Don’t Care Do They Darling (Neville)
I don’t look in mirrors. They tell lies :)
December 27th, 2023 08:54 - Where do you see yourself? (Constant0123456789)
Not everyone maps their life out, stage by stage. Many drift through...
December 26th, 2023 17:23 - To Do... (Thomas W Case)
There is always something that tries its hardest to get in the way of...
December 26th, 2023 05:29 - Can See! (Mizgeen Berzinari)
Poetry can certainly help raise us above the negatives of life. Can be a...
December 26th, 2023 05:26 - Blue Diamond (Accross_world_with_u)
A visual and uplifting write. You created wonderful imagery in my mind....
December 26th, 2023 05:20 - Flow (Introverted Sage)
Beautiful imagery here. That open field in moonlight, a great way to feel...
December 26th, 2023 05:17 - Our Boxing Day. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful love poem. May your love grow from strength to strength. .
December 26th, 2023 05:14 - What He Really Wants for Christmas (Neville)
Your Christmas list was a HUGE ask. I hope though that Santa was kind to...
December 26th, 2023 05:12 - A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas (Neville)
All you wish for. Much joy to you and yours dear Neville 💜
December 24th, 2023 06:07 - A Christmas Kiss (James Alexander)
Oh the disappointment on waking. Such sad brevity.
December 23rd, 2023 17:35 - A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas (Neville)
Of course it was love Neville. My other half smoked Cafe Creme, those...
December 23rd, 2023 17:32 - Goodbye (PaperFlowerFields)
Change isn’t always easy. It takes courage to go in a new direction. The...
December 23rd, 2023 01:08 - Happy Christmas (Positive Girl)
Some very meaningful words there which would certainly make a very happy...
December 23rd, 2023 00:59 - Evening waterfalls (Reynaldo Casison)
Beautiful poetic description in this brevity. Lovely.
December 23rd, 2023 00:56 - Clean Breaks (Neville)
Delivered with a punch. Sharp and without feeling. She undoubtedly had...
December 22nd, 2023 04:36 - Ruling and Reigning (Orchidee)
Beautiful hymn. A favourite. As to the He here in your fine poem, he...
December 22nd, 2023 03:40 - Understanding Silence. (Goldfinch60)
When we stop speaking and listen, we grow. I listened to the sounds of...
December 22nd, 2023 02:10 - Dead and Gone (FallingAwake2)
A nice piece of brevity. Those whispers can haunt can’t they?
December 22nd, 2023 02:02 - An Audience of None (Creatistically Inclined)
I should have said the words I meant
I wonder how many have pondered...
December 22nd, 2023 01:56 - In the (2781)
When the world is topsy turvey, having a strong faith must be helpful. I...
December 22nd, 2023 01:53 - Dear Sweetheart (Chiki1601)
A love poem to the muse. That’s how I read your stanzas. Beautifully...
December 22nd, 2023 01:42 - Moonlight flow (Reynaldo Casison)
Moonlight certainly gifts some beautiful imagery. I have been a gazer for...
December 22nd, 2023 01:39 - The Bus Stop on Grace Avenue. (David Wakeling)
A touching poem to read. The story line conveyed well and the message is...
December 21st, 2023 17:08 - ~Happily Ever After~ (NinjaGirl)
A tragic piece of brevity. Sadly this is the reality for some.
December 21st, 2023 17:01 - The Weight We Carry (Gray0328)
A põem iof great compassion. Sadly we can’t help the whole world. We...
December 21st, 2023 05:29 - UK TODAY (Nephilim56)
Sadly this has now become all too common and is nothing short of a...
December 21st, 2023 05:20 - Going Against the Flow (Neville)
Ice cold stares, going against the flow, and bridges,
When I first...
December 21st, 2023 05:06 - [lonely pine tree] (Summersounds68)
Gives this reader wonderful imagery of a lone pine tree standing tall and...
December 20th, 2023 12:53 - Unwanted (Markziff)
Emotion conveyed well here. Partings are sorrowful, but to part wishing...
December 20th, 2023 12:49 - THE SEAMANS MISSION (Nephilim56)
Filled with pathos. Reminds me of when my brother!s local was shut down....
December 20th, 2023 07:26 - Rank Order (Neville)
The title by the way is a brilliant play on words.
December 20th, 2023 07:20 - Put Pride Aside (Astro Ride) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I like the shape presentation as well as the message. Yes, be happy to be...
December 20th, 2023 06:30 - High for eternity (Jazzy.Special)
I wish this wasn’t the way ….this poem comes across as looking for...
December 20th, 2023 06:26 - High for eternity (Jazzy.Special)
I wish this wasn’t the way ….this poem comes across as looking for...
December 20th, 2023 06:26 - Rank Order (Neville)
Perfection in the way this has been executed. The last couplet goes for...
December 20th, 2023 06:22 - Rejoice evermore (Dr JK 777)
Certainly a poem of rejoicing. Uplifting words here Dr JK. Thanks for...
December 20th, 2023 03:10 - The War Children (Duggantherhymer)
Your stanzas describe so well the loss of innocent children in warfare. So...
December 20th, 2023 03:05 - Tomorrow Is My Heart\'s Being (Mtrotter1)
Broken love is painful and reconciliation for some can be out of the...
December 20th, 2023 02:56 - I Will (Athora13)
There is deep hurt in this poem. Some wounds don’t heal and that can...
December 20th, 2023 02:50 - Bleed a Song for me, Dear (Creatistically Inclined)
When creature comforts don’t work, turn to torture. You do it so well...
December 20th, 2023 02:42 - The Best Medicine (Thomas W Case)
Your mushrooms here, surely beat the ones I buy from my supermarket:) Now...
December 20th, 2023 02:37 - Mary (Gray0328)
You honour the mother of Christ in your stanzas here. Nicely penned and so...
December 20th, 2023 02:29 - Each New Day Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Each new day an opportunity. Such a positive way of thinking. An uplifting...
December 20th, 2023 02:25 - Happy Place (John Lee)
We all need a place in our mind to escape to when the going gets tough....
December 20th, 2023 02:22 - Summer butterfly (Reynaldo Casison)
Lovely imagery and uplifting in the drear of winter. Roll on summer.
December 20th, 2023 02:15 - So much (2781)
Strengthen me again
take away the blue
A prayer and a plea for a...
December 20th, 2023 02:13 - Don\'t Touch My Wounds (Zeraprinc)
Deep loss conveyed in this poem. The repetition works well. The pain is...
December 19th, 2023 12:32 - The Binding (Keeter C)
The mysteries of the natural environment. Mountains, rivers and oceans. A...
December 19th, 2023 12:10 - A time to say Hello (Chiki1601)
A lovely new year poem. A hope for a fresh start. A chance to improve on...
December 19th, 2023 12:06 - Glow (Neville)
That glow and the drawn curtains makes me think of a working gal. A lady...
December 19th, 2023 12:03 - Tea for Two (Ryanhimself)
Well I am a tea drinker and very partial to Earl Grey, so this little...
December 19th, 2023 11:43 - “Red” (Nicole H.)
You creste some wonderful imagery with so few words Nicole. Hot chocolate ...
December 18th, 2023 15:51 - After you (Zeraprinc)
Broken relationships cause grief. Not easy to get over. It takes time....
December 18th, 2023 15:43 - After you (Zeraprinc)
Broken relationships cause grief. Not easy to get over. It takes time....
December 18th, 2023 15:43 - Teenage love (Kate.povetina)
Some teenage love might not last , that doesn’t make it fake. My parents...
December 18th, 2023 15:37 - From Big Things Small (Neville)
Maybe some people just have too much to say? There are times when a bit...
December 18th, 2023 15:01 - The Curse Of Grandma Lonnie (Mtrotter1)
So painful to read, this poem of great hurt. I feel your anguish, as s...
December 18th, 2023 14:50 - How his \"viewing habits\" can break your heart (Caz84)
It matters to you and that is all that counts. Powerfully conveyed. Well...
December 18th, 2023 14:44 - I Loved My Friend (Daye Writes)
A little poem of loss. How hurtful it can be when friendships end, however...
December 18th, 2023 14:42 - On The River (Jerry Reynolds)
Visually enticing. I am a girl of the river in all seasons. Love those...
December 18th, 2023 14:38 - Falling (Keeter C)
I have controlled a dream where I am telling myself not to be afraid, it...
December 18th, 2023 14:36 - Summer rain (Reynaldo Casison)
Soft, warm rainfall, pitter patter, gently on the window pane. This...
December 17th, 2023 15:28 - Mother (Moco)
I felt your grief here. I am sorry for your loss. I know how hard it is,...
December 17th, 2023 15:22 - Shadowbright (Neville)
Anyone who can turn darkness into light by words or otherwise is worth...
December 17th, 2023 15:18 - Radiance (Ryanhimself)
You describe radiance so well here. When it walks in and out of the room,...
December 17th, 2023 01:13 - Jealousy (Jessi)
Jealousy can wreck relationships, but I know those feelings and how they...
December 17th, 2023 01:07 - Impossible to prepare (Anabasova)
There is a strong message in your poem. Nothing gained, nothing ventured....
December 17th, 2023 01:02 - Rain (Mtrotter1)
It’s all about balance. Too much sun and you would become parched. We...
December 17th, 2023 01:00 - Pizza and Pine Trees (Red017)
Dreams can be cruel. Christmas time can be cruel for the lonely too. Your...
December 17th, 2023 00:47 - A Cat Named Poe (Thomas W Case)
Such a fun read, but truthful too. You gave me some great imagery of your...
December 17th, 2023 00:41 - actions speak louder than words (Ace_)
So very true. Show not tell and that is also how to make good poetry....
December 17th, 2023 00:32 - From a Little Book of Sins (Neville)
Wonderful. I saw the sharp angles of the pyramid, or triangle if you...
December 17th, 2023 00:28 - Nocturnal beauty (Reynaldo Casison)
Beautifully expressed brevity. Lovely little piece. Enjoyed.
December 16th, 2023 02:48 - Unheard And Unsaid (Kriti2006)
I felt a heavy burden here of someone, a young person who is afraid of...
December 16th, 2023 02:23 - Spinning Since The Beginning (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A short poem which allows the mind to wander. We all share something in...
December 16th, 2023 02:15 - Window on the void (Lorenz)
Fire and fall sounds like hell. Freedom is so liberating. Imagine having...
December 16th, 2023 02:07 - Freedom (MessyHead)
Living the moment. Can’t get better than that. Visually uplifting....
December 16th, 2023 01:55 - Suburban Sunflower (Neville)
Your surburban sunflower stimulates the senses. She must have been the...
December 16th, 2023 01:51 - When my Heart Sings a Song (Adventuressmalik)
The repetition works well here, as do the references to the natural...
December 16th, 2023 01:45 - A Collective Healing (Destined Perspectives)
I felt the mist lift here to reveal positive. A good place to be. Thank...
December 16th, 2023 01:42 - Dream Bigger (Angelia Lamar)
This poem has sass. There is strength and conviction in its words. I...
December 16th, 2023 01:38 - Random Thoughts (Jerry Reynolds)
Brevity allows the mind to travel. I did here. Thank you.
December 16th, 2023 01:34 - EXITING (Bobby O)
Calling it a day. Life is too short to waste it on those who do not...
December 13th, 2023 23:30 - I Need To Visit France (Thomas W Case)
A frustrating dream. Especially the phone number and address of that...
December 13th, 2023 23:27 - Meet Our Future. (Goldfinch60)
A positive outlook on living . Better than dwelling in the past. Nicely...
December 13th, 2023 23:19 - So Live (T. Pitts)
No one escapes death. No one knows how long they have on this plane....
December 6th, 2023 02:25 - Rivers of the mind (Natalie Heisey)
The river courses through my veins. It is my life blood. I appreciate the...
December 6th, 2023 02:25 - Christmas (2781)
A personal poem is a nice touch. That would be a wonderful gift to...
December 4th, 2023 02:36 - Merry Christmas, Mom - Part XI (Randyjohnson)
Heartfelt lines here. So hard when we lose our parents. We miss them so...
December 4th, 2023 02:32 - Out Of Place (Blue pen)
Trying to fit in to new surroundings takes time, but where there is a will...
December 4th, 2023 02:28 - Gifts (Bishop M.)
Partings are never easy. An appreciation of a relationship here, where the...
December 4th, 2023 02:23 - Healing rain (ILuminous)
Beautiful work of reflection. Nicely rhymed stanzas. Enjoyed the read.
December 4th, 2023 02:17 - Until the end of time (Soumya Singh)
Beautifully romantic with its content. Lovely poetry.
December 3rd, 2023 05:21 - So Live (T. Pitts)
No one escapes death. No one knows how long they have on this plane....
December 2nd, 2023 22:55 - Facade (Miss_Dreamer)
When all is raging inside your head, looking for calm in my opinion, is...
December 2nd, 2023 22:51
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