Comments on community poems by Cassie58
- bad love (Jim56)
Some endure the agony. Can’t help feeling that when it sinks and stays...
March 2nd, 2024 08:32 - Hope Took a Vacation (Thomas W Case)
Hope flew south for the winter
a powerful poem, the repetition works ...
March 1st, 2024 11:52 - I Thought So (Dev Parth)
You pen a beautiful poem here out of a simple phrase. When the doubts are...
March 1st, 2024 11:46 - Arc (Neville)
Won’t cost you a dime but can be priceless. A little gem here Neville ....
March 1st, 2024 11:21 - On Meeting the Poet Laureate (Tom Dylan)
Some people do not live up to expectation Tom. Plenty more poets in the...
March 1st, 2024 11:10 - Pretty, pretty stars (Reynaldo Casison)
Plenty of romance here, the eyes tell me so. Real sparklers in the night...
March 1st, 2024 10:56 - Wisdom Ways (Orchidee)
I’m all for bliss Orchi but have yet to find the wisdom to achieve it....
March 1st, 2024 10:52 - From Florence With Love (Teddy.15)
A passionate write dear Teddy. Rich with description and metaphor. I...
March 1st, 2024 10:46 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
the shining winter is where my heart fluttered
it flew and the streams...
March 1st, 2024 09:16 - A Thundering Whisper (M.E.M.)
Pleased you fell into serenity rather than falling into the water. This is...
February 29th, 2024 17:06 - Time To Text. (Goldfinch60)
You made me smile. I think many of us have now been drawn in to texting....
February 29th, 2024 02:18 - A Memory So Deep (Accidental Poet)
Your school building, very similar to my old grammar school. I have very...
February 29th, 2024 01:56 - Fleeced (Neville)
This feels like a black shadow lurking in the background. Makes me think...
February 29th, 2024 01:48 - Love Longings (Orchidee)
This post reminded me of love divine all love excelling, a favourite hymn....
February 29th, 2024 01:20 - Love\'s Quiet Call (Cloie)
A treat to read Cloie. So softly spoken. A love kept close in your heart,...
February 29th, 2024 00:58 - Daffodil (Royce Earnest Rasmussen)
Beautiful to look at but that’s where it ends. What a pity she isn’t...
February 29th, 2024 00:52 - Lost at Sea (Thomas W Case)
Reflections on a former love. My mind drifted I wanted to know more. What...
February 29th, 2024 00:48 - Mademoiselle luna (Reynaldo Casison)
I saw her in my minds eye in that cafe buttering her toast and day...
February 29th, 2024 00:41 - Trees (Weeping Willow) (Hugh)
I have an affinity with both rivers and trees, this poem was a treat to...
February 29th, 2024 00:35 - Change (Accidental Poet)
Never go back because it can be so disappointing. We did, my brother and I...
February 28th, 2024 15:01 - I LOVE YOU. (Goldfinch60)
That’s fate for you. It was meant to be Andy. So wonderful that you have...
February 28th, 2024 11:42 - dogs are your best friend (Jim56)
Dogs are incredibly loyal. Wouldn’t be without mine, A poem that will...
February 28th, 2024 11:37 - Little black heart (Kitty the naughty poet)
Ten years of contentment I found in this poem. Ten years of togetherness....
February 28th, 2024 11:34 - My existence (Meera Mere)
Powerfully expressed with good choice of language. Well done Meera....
February 27th, 2024 18:40 - Things I Wish I’d Said (Cassie58)
Many thank you’s Dave. I haven’t been at MPS long, but I am delighted...
February 27th, 2024 18:36 - A Cat Named Poe (Thomas W Case)
A fun read Thomas. Cats always rule the household and their owners. A...
February 27th, 2024 18:31 - Bravery and Slavery. (David Wakeling)
Sadly we live in violent times. You have mentioned so much here which...
February 27th, 2024 18:25 - Hook Him Up to the Machine (Thomas W Case)
I don’t wanna be him! Does sound like a bad trip turning into a disaster...
February 27th, 2024 11:03 - Glimmers in the Dark (Cloie)
I have never been afraid of the dark, so well done for overcoming it. I...
February 27th, 2024 10:57 - Unity and discord (PurpleGlasses)
Where there is discord , let there be unity. So important in the current...
February 27th, 2024 10:50 - closed door (Vividvoid14)
The upsets in life do make us stronger, though at the time that can be...
February 27th, 2024 10:43 - spring gallery (Jim56)
Spring the season of renewal and rebirth. My favourite season Jim. The...
February 27th, 2024 10:36 - Present Unwrapped (Kurt Philip Behm)
Four fine poems, containing much wisdom. Present unwrapped is my...
February 27th, 2024 10:32 - Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
A new word for me Teddy. Such fun to invent your own vocabulary. As for...
February 27th, 2024 10:28 - Oneday,someday soon (TrueNorth)
A poignant write. Devastating to lose our parents, but with the passing of...
February 27th, 2024 10:23 - For All Those Once Beautiful (Neville)
Youth thankfully does not define beauty. There is beauty everywhere for...
February 27th, 2024 10:18 - Invasion.. (John Prophet)
A terrifying prospect John, which is entirely possible with the speed...
February 27th, 2024 10:01 - Je Reviens (Cassie58)
Thank you for such a wonderfully positive review. Delighted you enjoyed...
February 27th, 2024 04:16 - ask a flight attendant (Carpe4diem)
There is so much positive in your lines stemming from sadness. Having a...
February 27th, 2024 03:58 - Majesty (Sorenbarrett)
Three stanzas of penned delight. You never fail to please with the beauty...
February 27th, 2024 03:55 - It\'s Okay (Serene)
Your words are full of wisdom. Breakups are painful. They have to be...
February 27th, 2024 03:49 - Seed (Introverted Sage)
If you can float on the waves it is a positive. Drowning is the unsavoury...
February 27th, 2024 03:44 - If You Believe (Accidental Poet)
A beautiful spiritual posting AP. I listened to your choice of music too....
February 27th, 2024 03:38 - Ignorance Rules Relentlessly (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You know you are getting older when you can’t embrace all the new tech....
February 27th, 2024 03:34 - Blue rain (Reynaldo Casison)
Your lines read to me like lyrics. What a beautiful love song they make...
February 27th, 2024 03:28 - For The First Time In A While (13LaurenD)
Life’s journey can certainly be a roller coaster of ups and downs. Lots...
February 26th, 2024 09:44 - Keep trying (Neilton)
Keep trying. Persevere. Never give up working your way through the...
February 26th, 2024 08:57 - Cigar (Alan R)
Ah love, now is there a magic formula Alan? I don’t think so. Trial and...
February 26th, 2024 07:05 - They (my parents) (Lil)
Your lines, full of anger and hurt. I can only imagine those high charged...
February 26th, 2024 06:52 - It\'s Not Cool. It\'s Rude. (Tom Dylan)
Mustn’t grumble, mustn’t grumble, but you are and so would I, it is...
February 26th, 2024 06:43 - Wild Thing (Hugh)
A slice of life and so very nicely conveyed. Made me smile with the...
February 26th, 2024 06:37 - sunshine (Jim56)
You have brought me a little sunshine on a rainy Monday morning with your...
February 26th, 2024 06:32 - The Look on His Face That Said Everything (Neville)
Now you’ve gone and done it! Started the water works off in the company...
February 26th, 2024 06:29 - Je Reviens (Cassie58)
Many thanks Thomas for stopping by.
February 25th, 2024 17:21 - Paper Planes (Rhmn_7)
Your emotion is conveyed well here in this sad situation. Separations can...
February 25th, 2024 14:25 - back to the start (Neilton)
Conflict with a loved one. Your lines express how difficult you are...
February 25th, 2024 14:21 - lifes way (Jim56)
We never know what is in store for us on our journey through life....
February 25th, 2024 07:31 - It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun (Teddy.15)
Dear Teddy, now this is a sonnet to top all sonnets. I know how difficult...
February 25th, 2024 07:28 - 575 (Neville)
A perfect 5/7/5 Neville. So few words, yet so much pain contained in them...
February 25th, 2024 06:58 - Pondering the Unknown (Cloie)
Restless nights. Beautifully composed, subtle rhyme. I don’t have...
February 25th, 2024 06:39 - Je Reviens (Cassie58)
Sadly my inefficiency at navigating this site on my phone has managed to...
February 25th, 2024 03:32 - The Friday Boys. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing like the company of good friends enjoying a shared interest. Have...
February 25th, 2024 02:20 - Happy Birthday George Harrison (Accidental Poet)
A fabulous tribute AP to my favourite Beatle who shares the same birth...
February 25th, 2024 01:42 - i miss you my dear friend (Vividvoid14)
Your pain was truly felt by this reader. I hope you are able to salvage...
February 25th, 2024 00:17 - Expansive (FallingAwake2)
That’s a great place to be. I enjoyed my visit here. Your lines are...
February 25th, 2024 00:03 - God is an Artist (Thomas W Case)
We are indeed pale in comparison to nature’s gems. What a gift they are...
February 24th, 2024 23:59 - Touched (Introverted Sage)
Rich in metaphor. I enjoyed reading your stanzas. I think many experience...
February 24th, 2024 23:51 - Casting Off The Bow Line (Kurt Philip Behm)
Each one of these three poems is a little gem. I enjoyed reading them all....
February 24th, 2024 23:46 - SECLUSION (David Wakeling)
Beautiful use of language and poetic expression in your stanzas. A...
February 24th, 2024 23:39 - IF (Lil)
So many what ifs. Good to talk it through in your own mind. Teenage years...
February 24th, 2024 23:33 - Horny, Broke, and Needing a Drink (A Philosophy) (Thomas W Case)
Addictions to anything can be mighty powerful. Can be hell to break. A...
February 24th, 2024 23:27 - What do I wish for Thee? (Adventuressmalik)
A love poem for someone who has captured the author!s heart. Nicely penned...
February 24th, 2024 16:53 - JAMES, MY FRIEND (@merci)
An endearing tribute to a much admired friend. I like the cuteness of this...
February 24th, 2024 16:47 - Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply (Neville)
Who needs central heating on a cold February evening when you can have...
February 24th, 2024 16:37 - Girl On the Park Bench (Accidental Poet)
A compassionate write. Responding to a soul in distress. Such a caring...
February 24th, 2024 16:30 - Saturday Morning, Half Dreaming (Kieron)
Such a struggle for survival going on here. The vastness of the ocean is...
February 24th, 2024 15:45 - No title (MissD)
A beautiful piece of brevity. I hope your lips softens with the passing...
February 24th, 2024 15:40 - Three Summers (Neville)
I am reminded of that old saying Neville, it’s better to have loved and...
February 24th, 2024 15:37 - Love Letter (Hugh)
The ending of this poem was unexpected. It sent a little shiver through my...
February 24th, 2024 15:25 - Moon pie (Reynaldo Casison)
A conversation with a lunar beauty. Visually illuminating. A lovely nature...
February 24th, 2024 15:23 - Father And Son. (Goldfinch60)
A fine poem of the love you have for your son. It’s not easy being a...
February 24th, 2024 15:17 - I love you, my children (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla)
I am so sorry for your losses. We live in a cruel world and the loss of...
February 24th, 2024 15:12 - The Question (John Prophet)
Are we alone? That’s the million dollar question:). I do love a good...
February 24th, 2024 15:06 - Party Animal (Teddy.15)
A fun poem Teddy which brought back some memories of times gone by. Happy...
February 24th, 2024 14:57 - Sorry (Neville)
The hardest word for some and yet when said with conviction, the most...
February 7th, 2024 02:25 - Hate (Accidental Poet)
Sadly it is a word used far too often. I agree with Teddy, it is an ugly...
January 31st, 2024 16:58 - Collision (John Prophet)
The future looks far from bright. All change ahead. I have to say I find...
January 31st, 2024 16:45 - dog comfort (Jim56)
They just know don’t they Jim? So good at picking up moods of their...
January 31st, 2024 13:55 - Never Really Gone (Teddy.15)
Beautiful sentiment here Teddy. So very nicely conveyed. The loss of a...
January 31st, 2024 13:51 - Sorry (Neville)
The hardest word for some and yet when said with conviction, the most...
January 31st, 2024 05:53 - Just a Few Odd Diary Notes (Neville)
Two out of three ain’t bad. That’s Meat Loaf. See her and run like...
January 31st, 2024 05:46 - STAY WITH ME (Dev Parth)
Three beautiful stanzas with a plea. The repetition works so well here....
January 27th, 2024 17:36 - On the Scent of Pine (Cassie58)
Dear Teddy, thank you for a beautiful review. I expect your mum will be on...
January 27th, 2024 04:55 - What Is Real? (Bella Shepard)
Dear Bella, a justified rant. We have the same problems with our...
January 27th, 2024 03:58 - So Let the Music Play (Teddy.15)
When the saxaphone plays I am transported. A step nearer to heaven....
January 27th, 2024 03:51 - Whispers of doubt (Sophenia)
Beautiful poem. Those whispers can certainly impact. Good to hear that the...
January 27th, 2024 03:45 - A Romance Along the Riverside (Petrichor of Love)
You can certainly pen a beautiful poem. This love poem with its numerous...
January 27th, 2024 03:40 - Ex-lover of mine. (Debbie)
Partings are painful, especially for the one who has been left. I relate...
January 27th, 2024 03:34 - Emergence2 (John Prophet)
Well our species have well and truly mucked our planet up, so maybe a...
January 27th, 2024 03:31 - Now look.... woof! (Orchidee)
A ghostly tale or a ghastly tale? The point here is, did KP enjoy having...
January 27th, 2024 03:22
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